Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Branching Inward (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. No dash because the meaning IS the magic. They\'re not two
separate things. For brevity\'s sake I omitted the IS.
Appreciate the commenting.
Kurt
December 12th, 2021 22:38
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. No dash because the meaning IS the magic. They\'re not two
separate things. For brevity\'s sake I omitted the IS.
Appreciate the commenting.
Kurt
December 12th, 2021 22:38
\"My God\" (+1)
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s religion for you..........not going to elaborate after your second piece...... ☺️
December 11th, 2021 22:09
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s religion for you..........not going to elaborate after your second piece...... ☺️
December 11th, 2021 22:09
Creation\'s Tears (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I have 4, and I hate to brag, but Braden tests as genius. As a 7 year old, he’s hard to stay ahead of. He loves mechanical things and can do the most complex Lego arrangements that leave me wanting…
December 11th, 2021 16:29
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I have 4, and I hate to brag, but Braden tests as genius. As a 7 year old, he’s hard to stay ahead of. He loves mechanical things and can do the most complex Lego arrangements that leave me wanting…
December 11th, 2021 16:29
Creation\'s Tears (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
• “Braden’s Song”
I suppose one can win the game but not beat it.
A very astute grandson.
The apple doesn\'t fall far from the tree.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
December 11th, 2021 16:22
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
• “Braden’s Song”
I suppose one can win the game but not beat it.
A very astute grandson.
The apple doesn\'t fall far from the tree.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
December 11th, 2021 16:22
Creation\'s Tears (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
• “Creation’s Tears”
Before I read your masterfully scripted poem this morning, I heard the devastating news about the deadly massive tornadoes. It truly saddened me . Each time something like this happens, it makes me appreciate my life more…no matter the pain and the heartaches.
…and I believe God is still crying, IMHO; this also saddens me.
I DO appreciate your poetry more and more each day. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
December 11th, 2021 15:59
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
• “Creation’s Tears”
Before I read your masterfully scripted poem this morning, I heard the devastating news about the deadly massive tornadoes. It truly saddened me . Each time something like this happens, it makes me appreciate my life more…no matter the pain and the heartaches.
…and I believe God is still crying, IMHO; this also saddens me.
I DO appreciate your poetry more and more each day. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
December 11th, 2021 15:59
\"My God\" (+1)
woundedheart said:
It is true they were fought in the name of God but we know it was really fought for wealth power and land or in modern times oil and minerals. Great write though if only the wars could be decided more sensibly say on a chess board.
December 11th, 2021 13:14
woundedheart said:
It is true they were fought in the name of God but we know it was really fought for wealth power and land or in modern times oil and minerals. Great write though if only the wars could be decided more sensibly say on a chess board.
December 11th, 2021 13:14
Tone Death (+1)
C E Thomas said:
Beautiful. A poem that deserves such a great title. You\'ve made me feel so much, in not so many words; you should be proud of your work, and write many more.
December 9th, 2021 21:59
C E Thomas said:
Beautiful. A poem that deserves such a great title. You\'ve made me feel so much, in not so many words; you should be proud of your work, and write many more.
December 9th, 2021 21:59
Tone Death (+1)
woundedheart said:
The words still an orphan. .. Great line and a very well penned poem
December 9th, 2021 14:03
woundedheart said:
The words still an orphan. .. Great line and a very well penned poem
December 9th, 2021 14:03
Waiting For An Echo (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Waiting for an Echo
More Precious Than Gold:
The script of experience\'
these lines: aligned on a page
just stumped me - frozen-still
for a good minute!
seriously, such a privilege
to read your work, Kurt
\'I read and learn\' thank you!
December 7th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'Waiting for an Echo
More Precious Than Gold:
The script of experience\'
these lines: aligned on a page
just stumped me - frozen-still
for a good minute!
seriously, such a privilege
to read your work, Kurt
\'I read and learn\' thank you!
December 7th, 2021 04:30
Blessing\'s For Sale (+1)
Lorna said:
Especially loved the first one..... you got it!
December 5th, 2021 05:53
Lorna said:
Especially loved the first one..... you got it!
December 5th, 2021 05:53
Blessing\'s For Sale (+1)
Eugene S. said:
Your words are always so profound.
December 5th, 2021 05:47
Eugene S. said:
Your words are always so profound.
December 5th, 2021 05:47
Blessing\'s For Sale (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Two powerful and amazing writes. A contemplative read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
December 5th, 2021 00:20
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
Two powerful and amazing writes. A contemplative read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
December 5th, 2021 00:20
The Forest & The Trees (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Damn, Kurt.
That is a dead-center shot.
December 3rd, 2021 16:07
Jerry Reynolds said:
Damn, Kurt.
That is a dead-center shot.
December 3rd, 2021 16:07
The Forest & The Trees (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
•”The Forest & The Trees”
A befitting title for your
two couplets.
…without the trees, there’s no forest!
Laura🌻
December 3rd, 2021 11:37
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
•”The Forest & The Trees”
A befitting title for your
two couplets.
…without the trees, there’s no forest!
Laura🌻
December 3rd, 2021 11:37
No Kiss On The Mouth (+1)
Doggerel Dave said:
That first piece - it was the rhyme and construction....the rhyme and construction I tell Ya, which got to me.....
December 2nd, 2021 19:11
Doggerel Dave said:
That first piece - it was the rhyme and construction....the rhyme and construction I tell Ya, which got to me.....
December 2nd, 2021 19:11
No Kiss On The Mouth (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Kurt.
Especially meaningful to a catholic boy.
December 2nd, 2021 16:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Kurt.
Especially meaningful to a catholic boy.
December 2nd, 2021 16:53
Safe In Our Beds (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Indelibly Inked\'
deserves to be posted again and again, on its own
one the very best!
from your endless, list of great\'s
dear Masterful Poet, thank you!
November 30th, 2021 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Indelibly Inked\'
deserves to be posted again and again, on its own
one the very best!
from your endless, list of great\'s
dear Masterful Poet, thank you!
November 30th, 2021 05:56
Baited & Switched
L. B. Mek said:
and we\'ve allowed ourselves
to be caught-up in the nets
of life\'s unnecessary, distractions
since we were, but tadpoles
looking up, at those shorelines
to our evolutionary dreams..
(another thought provoking write Kurt, thanks for sharing)
November 30th, 2021 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
and we\'ve allowed ourselves
to be caught-up in the nets
of life\'s unnecessary, distractions
since we were, but tadpoles
looking up, at those shorelines
to our evolutionary dreams..
(another thought provoking write Kurt, thanks for sharing)
November 30th, 2021 05:52
No Mans Land
Lorna said:
Took us right there..... fear, possible death, resignation.......... brave or just numb.
November 30th, 2021 05:36
Lorna said:
Took us right there..... fear, possible death, resignation.......... brave or just numb.
November 30th, 2021 05:36
Safe In Our Beds (+1)
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
So true and spot on are your words…
‘—the soap of despair’.
Definitely cannot ‘wash away loneliness’.
You have beautifully expressed that feeling of loneliness. The best we can do is to carry on and do our best with whatever is upon the path we must travel.
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry. It’s such a pleasure to read whatever you ink. There’s so much to learn from you, my dear Poet.
Laura🌻
P.S.-I have so much admiration and respect for our soldiers. We cannot forget the sacrifices they make for us so that we can to be ‘Safe In Our Beds’.
November 28th, 2021 23:59
Laura🌻 said:
Kurt,
So true and spot on are your words…
‘—the soap of despair’.
Definitely cannot ‘wash away loneliness’.
You have beautifully expressed that feeling of loneliness. The best we can do is to carry on and do our best with whatever is upon the path we must travel.
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry. It’s such a pleasure to read whatever you ink. There’s so much to learn from you, my dear Poet.
Laura🌻
P.S.-I have so much admiration and respect for our soldiers. We cannot forget the sacrifices they make for us so that we can to be ‘Safe In Our Beds’.
November 28th, 2021 23:59
Blind Side
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I too have felt
a vacation\'s blindsided, curse..
she left, for a few weeks
relaxed in Canada
and I, barely got a few calls
for a quickly whispered, hello
upon her return
she delivered her loud and clear
farewell..
decades later, and I\'m no longer bitter
I just hope, she\'s doing well
(a write I could relate with easily, Kurt
thanks for sharing)
November 25th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I too have felt
a vacation\'s blindsided, curse..
she left, for a few weeks
relaxed in Canada
and I, barely got a few calls
for a quickly whispered, hello
upon her return
she delivered her loud and clear
farewell..
decades later, and I\'m no longer bitter
I just hope, she\'s doing well
(a write I could relate with easily, Kurt
thanks for sharing)
November 25th, 2021 05:09
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