Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
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Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Iām enjoying this read; but, it is a puzzler.
Lauraš»
February 17th, 2022 18:43
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Iām enjoying this read; but, it is a puzzler.
Lauraš»
February 17th, 2022 18:43
The Leaves Turn
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āThe leaves turn
and my mind releasesā
Love those aha momentsā¦
those mental enlightenments.
Lauraš»
February 17th, 2022 18:27
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āThe leaves turn
and my mind releasesā
Love those aha momentsā¦
those mental enlightenments.
Lauraš»
February 17th, 2022 18:27
Hollow Grams
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āa lens that wonāt focus
āan image beguiledā
What will it take to focus that lens?!
A very interesting and intriguing poem. Had to read it a few times. It really made me thinkā¦and thatās a good think.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
February 17th, 2022 17:01
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āa lens that wonāt focus
āan image beguiledā
What will it take to focus that lens?!
A very interesting and intriguing poem. Had to read it a few times. It really made me thinkā¦and thatās a good think.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
February 17th, 2022 17:01
Through The Doorway I Was Shown
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
A great read of an awesome poem.
I believe you grabbed life by the hornsā¦
āBut a key was thrown out to me,
unlocking things Iāve yet to know
Of a still uncertain future,
through the doorway I was shownā
ā¦and
āWhatever you can do or dream you can, begin it. Boldness has genius, power, and magic in it.ā (Johann Wolfgang von Goethe)
I believe that you āNever let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.ā ( Babe Ruth)
Loved reading this great poem and challenged myself to delve into the wholeness/message of the poem.
Lauraš»
February 17th, 2022 10:24
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
A great read of an awesome poem.
I believe you grabbed life by the hornsā¦
āBut a key was thrown out to me,
unlocking things Iāve yet to know
Of a still uncertain future,
through the doorway I was shownā
ā¦and
āWhatever you can do or dream you can, begin it. Boldness has genius, power, and magic in it.ā (Johann Wolfgang von Goethe)
I believe that you āNever let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.ā ( Babe Ruth)
Loved reading this great poem and challenged myself to delve into the wholeness/message of the poem.
Lauraš»
February 17th, 2022 10:24
Aloneliness
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I love this writing for obvious reasons. You made me aware of your muse a while ago, but this is the first time I met her in a poem; therefore, I consider this the official introduction.
Many times I crave solitude. I crave that oneness with my thoughts to feel at peace.
āAloneliness,
most trusted friend
you that I count on
there till the endā
Iāll definitely be there till the end and hopefully vice versa.
Thank you šš» š¤
Lauraš»
February 16th, 2022 11:51
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I love this writing for obvious reasons. You made me aware of your muse a while ago, but this is the first time I met her in a poem; therefore, I consider this the official introduction.
Many times I crave solitude. I crave that oneness with my thoughts to feel at peace.
āAloneliness,
most trusted friend
you that I count on
there till the endā
Iāll definitely be there till the end and hopefully vice versa.
Thank you šš» š¤
Lauraš»
February 16th, 2022 11:51
Hollow Grams
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I love the play on words with the title and this poem is very weighty. The diction is cleverly collected and the meaning is so true. Bravo! š
February 16th, 2022 11:48
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I love the play on words with the title and this poem is very weighty. The diction is cleverly collected and the meaning is so true. Bravo! š
February 16th, 2022 11:48
New Memories Rehearse
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āWords mate in the fog
as the letters reverseā
āSleep only forgiven
as new memories rehearseā
What great couplets!
Youāre an amazing poet, my dear friend.
Lauraš»
February 16th, 2022 00:42
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āWords mate in the fog
as the letters reverseā
āSleep only forgiven
as new memories rehearseā
What great couplets!
Youāre an amazing poet, my dear friend.
Lauraš»
February 16th, 2022 00:42
Your Soul To Repast
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āBut truth has no time limit
No ticket to claim
One choice will release itā
So trueā¦
we have the power
and the choice.
Lauraš»
February 16th, 2022 00:35
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āBut truth has no time limit
No ticket to claim
One choice will release itā
So trueā¦
we have the power
and the choice.
Lauraš»
February 16th, 2022 00:35
Now Mine To Keep
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I love this one so much.
Your words are so meaningful, poignant, and beautifully express how I feel these days.
Thank you my friend.šš»
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 14:04
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I love this one so much.
Your words are so meaningful, poignant, and beautifully express how I feel these days.
Thank you my friend.šš»
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 14:04
In The Darkness And Alone
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āIs part of me still orphaned there,
āin darkness and aloneā
I have a suspicion it might be!
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 13:51
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āIs part of me still orphaned there,
āin darkness and aloneā
I have a suspicion it might be!
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 13:51
Dying Embers
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Hmmmā¦
this is flooding my mind.
āādying embers of the pastā.
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 13:45
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Hmmmā¦
this is flooding my mind.
āādying embers of the pastā.
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 13:45
No Words Left
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
The āfeelingā, the āmeaningāā¦
are all there.
(Of course, thatās only my humble opinion.)
Loved it.
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 13:33
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
The āfeelingā, the āmeaningāā¦
are all there.
(Of course, thatās only my humble opinion.)
Loved it.
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 13:33
If We Were Young Men
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Weāre not that old yet! Letās continue the fight till the light has been completely extinguished.
Iām glad Iāve come to visit your first postings on MPS. I really, really appreciate your response to the comments youāve made about your poetry. I like that very much.
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 13:15
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Weāre not that old yet! Letās continue the fight till the light has been completely extinguished.
Iām glad Iāve come to visit your first postings on MPS. I really, really appreciate your response to the comments youāve made about your poetry. I like that very much.
Lauraš»
February 15th, 2022 13:15
Set In Stone
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
One of my Dadās favorite proverbsā¦
āā¦il lupo perde il pelo ma non il vizioā¦ā
(the wolf loses its fur but not its vice)
ā The flyās in the ointment,
the die has been castā
Itās so difficult to change those feelings. I will forgive; but itās so hard to forgetā¦no matter how many years have gone by.
I love the way you wrote this, my dear prolific Poet.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
February 11th, 2022 14:38
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
One of my Dadās favorite proverbsā¦
āā¦il lupo perde il pelo ma non il vizioā¦ā
(the wolf loses its fur but not its vice)
ā The flyās in the ointment,
the die has been castā
Itās so difficult to change those feelings. I will forgive; but itās so hard to forgetā¦no matter how many years have gone by.
I love the way you wrote this, my dear prolific Poet.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
February 11th, 2022 14:38
The Keyhole (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Two awesome and relatable āDreamsleepā.
Love them both.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
February 11th, 2022 14:12
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Two awesome and relatable āDreamsleepā.
Love them both.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
February 11th, 2022 14:12
The Keyhole (+1)
Rocky Lagou said:
Great writing! I love the succinctness of this and its eloquence. \"new freedom endeared\" šOh sweet sweet liberty.
February 7th, 2022 13:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Great writing! I love the succinctness of this and its eloquence. \"new freedom endeared\" šOh sweet sweet liberty.
February 7th, 2022 13:31
F-Stop (+1)
Buzz Bray said:
Contrasts, contradictions, the oxymoron of life. Nicely Done!
February 4th, 2022 14:13
Buzz Bray said:
Contrasts, contradictions, the oxymoron of life. Nicely Done!
February 4th, 2022 14:13
Common Threads
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āTo wait in the memory
of whatās yet to come
released by the moment
āhumanity wonā
Wowā¦š¤©ā¦overtaken by emotion while reading your incredible poem.
You never cease to amaze me with your writings, my dear Poet.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Laura š»
February 4th, 2022 00:55
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āTo wait in the memory
of whatās yet to come
released by the moment
āhumanity wonā
Wowā¦š¤©ā¦overtaken by emotion while reading your incredible poem.
You never cease to amaze me with your writings, my dear Poet.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Laura š»
February 4th, 2022 00:55
27 Club (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Glad to see and read these three great golden nuggets.
ā¢ ā27 Clubā
Very interesting and intriguingā¦
āKissing each memory
that burnsā
ā¢ āInsomniaā
I see āMusing with Lauraā is keeping you awake. Is she misbehavingā¦again?!
ā¢ āAnswering The Callā
Beautiful words that speak to me.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
February 3rd, 2022 00:12
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Glad to see and read these three great golden nuggets.
ā¢ ā27 Clubā
Very interesting and intriguingā¦
āKissing each memory
that burnsā
ā¢ āInsomniaā
I see āMusing with Lauraā is keeping you awake. Is she misbehavingā¦again?!
ā¢ āAnswering The Callā
Beautiful words that speak to me.
Thank you for sharing, my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
February 3rd, 2022 00:12
Your Moveā¦
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
This is a good one. šIām pretty good at checkers but not as good at chess.š¤
Great metaphors.
Yes, āComplexity knightedā
I shall work on my āMoveā!
Thank you for sharing your location. Iāve been there a few times. The first time I went drove from San Francisco to Vegasās Mandalay Bay. Had a great time.
Lauraš»
January 28th, 2022 12:08
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
This is a good one. šIām pretty good at checkers but not as good at chess.š¤
Great metaphors.
Yes, āComplexity knightedā
I shall work on my āMoveā!
Thank you for sharing your location. Iāve been there a few times. The first time I went drove from San Francisco to Vegasās Mandalay Bay. Had a great time.
Lauraš»
January 28th, 2022 12:08
The Tragic Cost...
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, do check Harry out. He almost became
the 5th Beatle.
January 22nd, 2022 15:47
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, do check Harry out. He almost became
the 5th Beatle.
January 22nd, 2022 15:47
The Tragic Cost...
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Thank you for remembering some of the best in this memorable poem. I donāt know much about Harry Nilsson, but I will definitely do some research and educate myself. Your written work certainly lends itself to that.
Lauraš»
P.S.- Just learned the sad news about the passing of Meatloaf and Louie Anderson. I became a fan of Meatloaf a few years ago.
January 21st, 2022 16:22
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Thank you for remembering some of the best in this memorable poem. I donāt know much about Harry Nilsson, but I will definitely do some research and educate myself. Your written work certainly lends itself to that.
Lauraš»
P.S.- Just learned the sad news about the passing of Meatloaf and Louie Anderson. I became a fan of Meatloaf a few years ago.
January 21st, 2022 16:22
Full Circle (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āFull Circleā
ā¢ āCowboy Upā
ā¢ āMay December ā
Three great poems that I like very much. Each one deserves its own detailed comment which I will makeā¦soon.
Lauraš»
January 19th, 2022 17:07
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āFull Circleā
ā¢ āCowboy Upā
ā¢ āMay December ā
Three great poems that I like very much. Each one deserves its own detailed comment which I will makeā¦soon.
Lauraš»
January 19th, 2022 17:07
Going Home
Lauraš» said:
Kurt.
ā¢ āGoing Homeā is
hitting home.
Certainly not welcoming death at this time, but I do like these scripted words,
ābut befriending its shadow
whose blanket I wear
in this carrying windā
I can almost feel the warmth of that āblanketā.
Thank you for having masterfully scripted a poem thatās so relatable. Something that only a master of the art can do.
Lauraš»
January 19th, 2022 16:44
Lauraš» said:
Kurt.
ā¢ āGoing Homeā is
hitting home.
Certainly not welcoming death at this time, but I do like these scripted words,
ābut befriending its shadow
whose blanket I wear
in this carrying windā
I can almost feel the warmth of that āblanketā.
Thank you for having masterfully scripted a poem thatās so relatable. Something that only a master of the art can do.
Lauraš»
January 19th, 2022 16:44
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