Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Do Over
L. B. Mek said:
contemplative but with purpose, a meaningful write
suggestive nuances to the never ending opportunity to better our life
September 3rd, 2020 02:27
L. B. Mek said:
contemplative but with purpose, a meaningful write
suggestive nuances to the never ending opportunity to better our life
September 3rd, 2020 02:27
Do Over
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
After reading these two couplets, I shall be busy for quite a while.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Understanding
āthe how and the whyā
is worthy of a revisit.
Lauraš»
September 2nd, 2020 13:57
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
After reading these two couplets, I shall be busy for quite a while.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Understanding
āthe how and the whyā
is worthy of a revisit.
Lauraš»
September 2nd, 2020 13:57
One Last Drink (+3)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āOne Last Drinkā
That stranger who called you friend was a blessing in disguise. Glad he was there for you.šš»
ā¢ āOn My Sleeveā
This one resonates loud and clear.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
August 29th, 2020 11:47
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āOne Last Drinkā
That stranger who called you friend was a blessing in disguise. Glad he was there for you.šš»
ā¢ āOn My Sleeveā
This one resonates loud and clear.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
August 29th, 2020 11:47
Dark Consensus
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āDark Consensusā
A well penned truth.
A lot of singing āto the choirā is happening these days. š
Lauraš»
August 25th, 2020 09:41
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āDark Consensusā
A well penned truth.
A lot of singing āto the choirā is happening these days. š
Lauraš»
August 25th, 2020 09:41
Buried Alive (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Reading āFlotsam & Jetsamā has made me think of some eulogies Iāve heard and wondered how the deceased, if he/she were alive listening to their eulogy, would react.
I enjoyed reading your two gems.
Lauraš»
August 25th, 2020 09:30
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Reading āFlotsam & Jetsamā has made me think of some eulogies Iāve heard and wondered how the deceased, if he/she were alive listening to their eulogy, would react.
I enjoyed reading your two gems.
Lauraš»
August 25th, 2020 09:30
Buried Alive (+1)
Syd said:
Short, simple and excellent.
Very much enjoyed - Syd
August 23rd, 2020 11:10
Syd said:
Short, simple and excellent.
Very much enjoyed - Syd
August 23rd, 2020 11:10
The Abdicate (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant imagery and seamless flow,
well thought-out
August 20th, 2020 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant imagery and seamless flow,
well thought-out
August 20th, 2020 05:43
Chimeran Crossing (+2)
Seek said:
Just loved the idea of the two armies joining forces to disperse hate. Very cleverly done!
August 18th, 2020 01:47
Seek said:
Just loved the idea of the two armies joining forces to disperse hate. Very cleverly done!
August 18th, 2020 01:47
Going To The Sun Road (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āTo commit with our heartsā...
can be troublingā
but comforting.
Lauraš»
August 14th, 2020 10:44
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āTo commit with our heartsā...
can be troublingā
but comforting.
Lauraš»
August 14th, 2020 10:44
Ensnared
Goldfinch60 said:
This reminds me of a saying \"History was written by the winners - what if the losers were right.\"
Andy
August 9th, 2020 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
This reminds me of a saying \"History was written by the winners - what if the losers were right.\"
Andy
August 9th, 2020 00:48
A Hobo\'s Last Prayer
jarcher54 said:
Very rich imagery, a little elusive, yet clear. I had to go back to the title. I enjoy how the title enriches the poem. I found myself wondering if the speaker would catch that last ride \"home.\"
August 5th, 2020 23:53
jarcher54 said:
Very rich imagery, a little elusive, yet clear. I had to go back to the title. I enjoy how the title enriches the poem. I found myself wondering if the speaker would catch that last ride \"home.\"
August 5th, 2020 23:53
Fantasia
L. B. Mek said:
hindsight often has the luxury of relaxed perspectives, that the turmoil of existence in the now -between one hurdle and the next bite of sustenance we must hunt - doesn\'t allow,
so naturally we are flawed creatures but that undeniable truth, of yearning to be the best we can be, has merit in its own right I think
so we must accept and appreciate ourselves, before others can do the same for us
engaging writing, asking necessary questions
August 4th, 2020 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
hindsight often has the luxury of relaxed perspectives, that the turmoil of existence in the now -between one hurdle and the next bite of sustenance we must hunt - doesn\'t allow,
so naturally we are flawed creatures but that undeniable truth, of yearning to be the best we can be, has merit in its own right I think
so we must accept and appreciate ourselves, before others can do the same for us
engaging writing, asking necessary questions
August 4th, 2020 02:16
Fantasia
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well, be a false legacy but when my wife passed recently she became a bigger part of my memory.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 23:53
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well, be a false legacy but when my wife passed recently she became a bigger part of my memory.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 23:53
Memory Lane
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can be so powerful within us.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can be so powerful within us.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 00:05
The Quiet Roar
jarcher54 said:
Nicely done... you evoke many thoughts, emotions, sounds, and even possible plots-- who is down under, what do they cry, why is there thunder and that precise moment? In so few elegant words.
July 8th, 2020 02:03
jarcher54 said:
Nicely done... you evoke many thoughts, emotions, sounds, and even possible plots-- who is down under, what do they cry, why is there thunder and that precise moment? In so few elegant words.
July 8th, 2020 02:03
Gale Warning (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āGale Warningā
A very interesting poem;
chock-full of interpretations.
ā¢ āPast That Placeā
Music transcends all boundaries.
I did enjoyed these two poems. Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
July 2nd, 2020 17:44
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āGale Warningā
A very interesting poem;
chock-full of interpretations.
ā¢ āPast That Placeā
Music transcends all boundaries.
I did enjoyed these two poems. Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
July 2nd, 2020 17:44
Following Storm
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Wow...
This sounds a bit
dark to me.
Hope allās well.
Lauraš»
June 24th, 2020 22:26
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Wow...
This sounds a bit
dark to me.
Hope allās well.
Lauraš»
June 24th, 2020 22:26
Heat Blinds
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I do wonder about that flame!
Another gem for me
to ponder upon today.
Take care.
Lauraš»
June 21st, 2020 11:03
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I do wonder about that flame!
Another gem for me
to ponder upon today.
Take care.
Lauraš»
June 21st, 2020 11:03
The Veil
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āThe Veilā
Iāve read this a few times. Each time I read it,
I try to imagine a
ātruth wrapped in a lieā.
āthe truth wrapped in a lieā
ā six powerful words.
Lauraš»
June 20th, 2020 18:56
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āThe Veilā
Iāve read this a few times. Each time I read it,
I try to imagine a
ātruth wrapped in a lieā.
āthe truth wrapped in a lieā
ā six powerful words.
Lauraš»
June 20th, 2020 18:56
To Count On (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Three excellent poems filled with much to ponder upon.
Iām particularly attracted to āEach Choiceā .
Take care.
Lauraš»
June 20th, 2020 09:18
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Three excellent poems filled with much to ponder upon.
Iām particularly attracted to āEach Choiceā .
Take care.
Lauraš»
June 20th, 2020 09:18
Resonant Voices
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Laura, sometimes our own self-conscience gets the better of us and we\'re lost as to how to proceed. Very interesting analogy Kurt.
June 18th, 2020 17:01
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Laura, sometimes our own self-conscience gets the better of us and we\'re lost as to how to proceed. Very interesting analogy Kurt.
June 18th, 2020 17:01
Resonant Voices
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Yes, at times we are our own worst enemies! Must be aware of that inner villain and not let it get the best of us!
Glad to read your posting today!š
Laura š»
June 18th, 2020 14:02
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Yes, at times we are our own worst enemies! Must be aware of that inner villain and not let it get the best of us!
Glad to read your posting today!š
Laura š»
June 18th, 2020 14:02
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