Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



Memory Exhales
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Honored Laura, thanks!

April 5th, 2018 22:51

Memory Exhales
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
What an entrance!!
The first two lines pull like a magnet...
An Exquisite write! Dare I say that you and your Muse are very much in sync?! She hasn’t left you...that’s for certain!

~Laura~

April 5th, 2018 18:05

The Fire They Share
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
A fine truthful and realistic write! Have been tumbled and hurled a few times! Painful indeed!

~Laura~

April 5th, 2018 09:52

The Silence Was Death (+3)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
Great writes! Of the four, “Waiting For The Muse To Come” is my favorite!

“Her presence upon me
her breath an attack”

It seems her inspiration could not contain your “sword”! I’m really ecstatic about that! A brilliant piece! Loved it!

~Laura~


April 5th, 2018 09:43

True Genius
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

...and I DO appreciate...

~Laura~


April 4th, 2018 11:04

Solo Uno
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

“Solo Uno”...

oppure...

Uno Solo...
___________

~Laura~



March 31st, 2018 11:31

Voices That Call (+2)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
...and those voices do call!
You are the poet of veritas!
Brilliant!

~Laura~

March 30th, 2018 12:51

What They\'ll Never Escape (+1)
cloak said:

I love this

March 29th, 2018 12:25

What They\'ll Never Escape (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
Oh yes...
We can run,
We can hide, but..
We can’t escape!

Something I learned
a long time ago!

An illuminating write!

~Laura~


March 29th, 2018 11:49

False Time Belies (+3)
Laura🌻 said:

“A convenience of the past”...
...a great line, Kurt!
The past is past...
that’s a relief!
The present will be
the past...
Tomorrow will be
today...
Today will be yesterday...
THE PAST!
“All conflict over”...
~Laura~

March 28th, 2018 10:34

They Flow (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Two fine writes, Kurt!
Let’s see what tomorrow will bring...
once we’ve dealt with today!

~Laura~

March 28th, 2018 10:26

One Truth (+2)
Laura🌻 said:

...and I see many who wear such faces!

Thank you for your candid share, Kurt!

~Laura~

March 26th, 2018 13:17

Concrete Jungles
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
A metaphorically rich write which I enjoyed reading! It did make me think of that “rat race”!

You’re so spot on with your response to Lorna’s comment!

We are “most vulnerable when they overload the senses”! We do need to distance ourselves from that city’s wildness if we want to survive...intact!

~Laura~


March 25th, 2018 09:56

Beyond The Now
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
Intriguing to say the least!!
Very open ended!

~Laura~

March 25th, 2018 09:02

Concrete Jungles
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks so much Hood, I\'m glad it resonated. Thanks for
reading.

Kurt

March 25th, 2018 07:56

Concrete Jungles
Lorna said:

On a sunny day a City can be fun to visit - and then it closes in and becomes an overcrowded jail....... oh back to the country........

March 25th, 2018 05:21

Hunted By A Lie
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
Exact life? Not exactly!
...and almost all the
mirrors have been taken
down! Great last line!

~Laura~

March 24th, 2018 06:55

Hunted By A Lie
Lorna said:

Perfect Kurt...... Truth so simply put!

March 24th, 2018 04:45

Last Check To Cash (+4)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
“My Soul To Shine”

A very clever write...
I especially like the last line,
“My soul there to shine”
~~~
“Our New Beginning”

A beautiful write for your
grandchildren...
“As all wishes turn to song”...
Precious!
~~~
“Last Check To Cash”

“Stepping into eternity’s vault...
Powerful words!
~~~
“Till Our Wishes”

My absolute favorite
Very, very special...for me!
I’m reading a lot into this one!

~Laura~



March 22nd, 2018 17:21

Will I Ever (+2)
Laura🌻 said:

I see you’ve added a
second gem! Its last
stanza is absolutely
beautiful...
especially the words,
“New light from within
—here forever to shine”

March 21st, 2018 15:04

Will I Ever (+2)
Lorna said:

This is thoughtful love.. the kind that lasts!

March 21st, 2018 11:53

Will I Ever (+2)
Laura🌻 said:

Great questions, Kurt!
I’d imagine the answer
to the three would be...
yes, yes, and yes...
in my humble opinion!

~Laura~

March 21st, 2018 11:12

What Heaven Sent (+5)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
This particular title, WHAT HEAVEN SENT, befits all that I’m absorbing from your writings! I truly enjoy reading each and every one of them!

~Laura~

March 20th, 2018 16:18

What Heaven Sent (+5)
Lorna said:

So thoughtful and lovely Kurt. Beautifully written.......
\"I\'ve come face to face with
the only adversary I will ever fear\" - is that Death?

March 20th, 2018 04:28

Call To Heaven (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

I\'ll certainly continue to post as I work my way through this.
Volumes #1 and #2 (1700 pages) were published in 2012,
so this will be volumes 3, 4, and 5.

Thanks as always for reading.

Kurt

March 19th, 2018 11:56

Call To Heaven (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,
I enjoyed reading your write
in its entirety...especially the following words...
“The medicinal magic
that hides in each line “...
MAGICAL indeed!

~Laura~

March 19th, 2018 10:46

Embracing Your Fear (+3)
Laura🌻 said:

Great pieces, Kurt!
I enjoyed all...especially,
“Morning Flower “!
EXCELLENCE all throughout!

~Laura~

March 19th, 2018 04:02

Embracing Your Fear (+3)
Lorna said:

I love the beautiful simplicity of these Kurt.

March 19th, 2018 03:17

\'You Did Make Me Love You\'
Lorna said:

Your first poem was so compelling it overshadowed the second which was beautiful as well....... that first one just took me back to when we were so free to just follow our hearts with so little baggage.......

March 18th, 2018 04:36

\'You Did Make Me Love You\'
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i especially love the first poem .. the blue eyed girl who changed your life.. thats sweet, lovely piece of writing

March 18th, 2018 03:14



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