Comments received on poems by elphaba993



Eyes
Dandylion said:

this is so sad...I can feel the loss...beautifully written.

July 25th, 2016 01:05

Numb
Dandylion said:

I can feel the scaring pain in this...so moving.

July 25th, 2016 01:03

Eyes
thatsilentgirl said:

Lots of people describe me this way. Totally relate able. Good job!

July 24th, 2016 23:32

Eyes
rrodriguez said:

Where can I find those eyes to look at them. Nicely written poem.

July 24th, 2016 22:15

Eyes
Severus Alexander said:

I highly recommend that you read Edgar Allan Poe's short story, "Ligeia."

When I read it, I understood it-- and I have a feeling that you would, too.



July 24th, 2016 20:41

Gone
Tony36 said:

Awesome, Awesome write

July 23rd, 2016 06:50

Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thinking of you ELPHA ~ hope you get through this phase ! This is my experience too so I can empathise. When everything is gone ONLY THE COLD REMAINS ! Thanks for sharing ~ Your friend BRIAN

July 23rd, 2016 04:35

Untouchable
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ELPHA ~ In my experience too ~ Love is like that. Only by being immobile will the yearning and longing disappear. Some loves never die ! Yours BRIAN

July 22nd, 2016 05:18

Clean
Sam said:

That's dark dude, feeling this though straight from the heart.

July 21st, 2016 17:29

Clean
elphaba993 said:

Thank you all for reading it and for your feedback!

July 21st, 2016 16:48

Clean
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 21st, 2016 07:07

Coldness
AlitaOpal said:

Love it 💐💐💐
And welcome 😊

July 21st, 2016 06:53

Clean
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing ELPHA ~ Sad but succinct. Our life is in the blood and for many "blood letting" is both symbolic and very cathartic. Miraculously it does replenish itself but it takes 10 minutes for our metabolic system to synthesise one molecule of HAEMOGLOBIN inside our bone marrow. Your poem ends with a stark conclusion "After every drop is gone ~ Maybe then ~ You can finally be clean" and of course DEAD. We only have one life ELPHA ~ it is a unique gift from GOD to be cherished and not extinguished. Every blessing ~ BRIAN

July 21st, 2016 05:48

Clean
rrodriguez said:

I'm between coldness and clean, heck I go for clean

July 21st, 2016 00:17

Coldness
rrodriguez said:

Coldness, why? If live was meant to be shared. Intriguing piece!

July 21st, 2016 00:06

Coldness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME ELPHA ~ Thanks for your first poem ! I can emp[athise ~ I've met a few Ladies just like you describe ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN

July 20th, 2016 14:29

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