Eyes
Dandylion said:

this is so sad...I can feel the loss...beautifully written.

July 25th, 2016 01:05

Eyes
thatsilentgirl said:

Lots of people describe me this way. Totally relate able. Good job!

July 24th, 2016 23:32

Eyes
Severus Alexander said:

I highly recommend that you read Edgar Allan Poe's short story, "Ligeia."

When I read it, I understood it-- and I have a feeling that you would, too.



July 24th, 2016 20:41

Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thinking of you ELPHA ~ hope you get through this phase ! This is my experience too so I can empathise. When everything is gone ONLY THE COLD REMAINS ! Thanks for sharing ~ Your friend BRIAN

July 23rd, 2016 04:35

Clean
Sam said:

That's dark dude, feeling this though straight from the heart.

July 21st, 2016 17:29

Clean
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 21st, 2016 07:07

Clean
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing ELPHA ~ Sad but succinct. Our life is in the blood and for many "blood letting" is both symbolic and very cathartic. Miraculously it does replenish itself but it takes 10 minutes for our metabolic system to synthesise one molecule of HAEMOGLOBIN inside our bone marrow. Your poem ends with a stark conclusion "After every drop is gone ~ Maybe then ~ You can finally be clean" and of course DEAD. We only have one life ELPHA ~ it is a unique gift from GOD to be cherished and not extinguished. Every blessing ~ BRIAN

July 21st, 2016 05:48

Coldness
rrodriguez said:

Coldness, why? If live was meant to be shared. Intriguing piece!

July 21st, 2016 00:06