Comments received on poems by elphaba993
Sobriety
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ELPHABA ! From a Young Lady as beautiful as you are this is very challenging. In times of stress we all (if we are honest resort to alcohol ~ drugs and even blood letting) but in my experience the release is only transient. I\'m more than ten years older than you and now I find my release in cathartic poetry (like the one you have written) communication with friends (real and in cyber space) and in prayer.. All these avenues of release are open to all of us. and I hope you find some good friends on MPS you can share with. Every BLESSIING ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 8th, 2016 07:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ELPHABA ! From a Young Lady as beautiful as you are this is very challenging. In times of stress we all (if we are honest resort to alcohol ~ drugs and even blood letting) but in my experience the release is only transient. I\'m more than ten years older than you and now I find my release in cathartic poetry (like the one you have written) communication with friends (real and in cyber space) and in prayer.. All these avenues of release are open to all of us. and I hope you find some good friends on MPS you can share with. Every BLESSIING ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 8th, 2016 07:08
I Miss You
BSmooth said:
Wow i just ran into you, you write very good poems, can\'t wait to read more. I read like ten or twelve of yours, you\'re truly blessed. Keep it up
November 2nd, 2016 07:18
BSmooth said:
Wow i just ran into you, you write very good poems, can\'t wait to read more. I read like ten or twelve of yours, you\'re truly blessed. Keep it up
November 2nd, 2016 07:18
Rock Bottom
nic said:
So much, in so few words ... your words are worth more than a thousand pictures ... keep releasing, I\'d be wrong to say it\'s beautiful, but how else to express the sentiment... well I appreciate it in a certain way I cannot describe... thank you.
November 1st, 2016 12:09
nic said:
So much, in so few words ... your words are worth more than a thousand pictures ... keep releasing, I\'d be wrong to say it\'s beautiful, but how else to express the sentiment... well I appreciate it in a certain way I cannot describe... thank you.
November 1st, 2016 12:09
Rock Bottom
Augustus said:
Hodgetiger said it best. The rawness. I am hoping this is not your real life but only poetic license. If indeed it is, find someone that you respect and ask if they will mentor you to find a way out. Hugs.
October 24th, 2016 11:24
Augustus said:
Hodgetiger said it best. The rawness. I am hoping this is not your real life but only poetic license. If indeed it is, find someone that you respect and ask if they will mentor you to find a way out. Hugs.
October 24th, 2016 11:24
Only Escape
Tony36 said:
Wonderful write. Poetry is a good outlet, I find it to be the best. All that other stuff I could never do, and don't see why others should, but whatever works I guess. again great write
September 27th, 2016 12:49
Tony36 said:
Wonderful write. Poetry is a good outlet, I find it to be the best. All that other stuff I could never do, and don't see why others should, but whatever works I guess. again great write
September 27th, 2016 12:49
Only Escape
Augustus said:
Hugs. Keep trying! Never underestimate yourself.
September 27th, 2016 08:04
Augustus said:
Hugs. Keep trying! Never underestimate yourself.
September 27th, 2016 08:04
Hunger
P.X. Vexxus said:
Very nice poem. I wrote a poem under the same subject, however, it will be a long time before it appears on this site.
September 1st, 2016 19:34
P.X. Vexxus said:
Very nice poem. I wrote a poem under the same subject, however, it will be a long time before it appears on this site.
September 1st, 2016 19:34
Hunger
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is redemption through he shedding of blood ! I know it gives you inner peace ELPHA. I love you but I am not with you to talk you through it. I'm a blood donor and I quickly recover when i donate one of my 8 pints for someone in need of a transfusion. It's not the loss of BLOOD that worries me ANGEL it is the likelihood of infection. If you died part of me would die too because you are a very very precious member of our lovely MPS Family. Please Please Please take care we all love you. Thanks for sharing ~ Love & hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my POEM HAPPINESS ~ OK
September 1st, 2016 08:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is redemption through he shedding of blood ! I know it gives you inner peace ELPHA. I love you but I am not with you to talk you through it. I'm a blood donor and I quickly recover when i donate one of my 8 pints for someone in need of a transfusion. It's not the loss of BLOOD that worries me ANGEL it is the likelihood of infection. If you died part of me would die too because you are a very very precious member of our lovely MPS Family. Please Please Please take care we all love you. Thanks for sharing ~ Love & hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my POEM HAPPINESS ~ OK
September 1st, 2016 08:19
Delirium
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ELPHA for another haunting and beautiful love poem. We all have memories of Love's Perfection and they do make us tingle ! Memory of LOVE is a great blessing. YOU ARE SPECIAL (please check my latest poem ~ Thanks) Lov and Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 03:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ELPHA for another haunting and beautiful love poem. We all have memories of Love's Perfection and they do make us tingle ! Memory of LOVE is a great blessing. YOU ARE SPECIAL (please check my latest poem ~ Thanks) Lov and Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 31st, 2016 03:11
Delirium
JohnThomas said:
Time and distance do strange things to us when we are missing that object of desire.
Great poem!
August 31st, 2016 00:14
JohnThomas said:
Time and distance do strange things to us when we are missing that object of desire.
Great poem!
August 31st, 2016 00:14
Messy
Tony36 said:
I shovel cows crap out of a barn. My life gets messy to. Great write
August 30th, 2016 14:27
Tony36 said:
I shovel cows crap out of a barn. My life gets messy to. Great write
August 30th, 2016 14:27
Messy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NO ELPHA ~ You know how much i love your potential ~ However messy your life ~ however cut your body ~ however scared your heart ~ I will always want you and I will always love you ~ YOU ARE PRECIOUS ~ Love BRIAN Please check my poem LIGHT A CANDLE (Thanks)
August 30th, 2016 13:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NO ELPHA ~ You know how much i love your potential ~ However messy your life ~ however cut your body ~ however scared your heart ~ I will always want you and I will always love you ~ YOU ARE PRECIOUS ~ Love BRIAN Please check my poem LIGHT A CANDLE (Thanks)
August 30th, 2016 13:20
Tonight\'s Poetry
Tony36 said:
I write poetry for emotional and psychological releash. I leave the cutting for Watermelon. Sad but good write
August 29th, 2016 18:33
Tony36 said:
I write poetry for emotional and psychological releash. I leave the cutting for Watermelon. Sad but good write
August 29th, 2016 18:33
Tonight\'s Poetry
Ternic73 said:
Very sad, but true. Cutting is a horrible thing to do to yourself. its a cry for help
August 29th, 2016 18:03
Ternic73 said:
Very sad, but true. Cutting is a horrible thing to do to yourself. its a cry for help
August 29th, 2016 18:03
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