Comments received on poems by elphaba993
Tonight\'s Poetry
Mads said:
I still do it... Could we talk through messages?
August 29th, 2016 17:32
Mads said:
I still do it... Could we talk through messages?
August 29th, 2016 17:32
Pretending
Mads said:
I wrote a poem just like this one. I think you should read it!
August 29th, 2016 17:28
Mads said:
I wrote a poem just like this one. I think you should read it!
August 29th, 2016 17:28
I Wonder
rrodriguez said:
Sad predicament. The poem delve into a dark soul struggling to be really loved.
August 9th, 2016 06:54
rrodriguez said:
Sad predicament. The poem delve into a dark soul struggling to be really loved.
August 9th, 2016 06:54
It\'s All Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh ELPHA ~ It can't ALL GO @ 22 ! You are only 25% through your life span. You are bright (judging from your poetry) beautiful (judging from your picture) and experiencing life. If you poem is experiential I can assure your that (from time to time) we all go through the "slough of despond" but with a little help from our friends ~ and a lot of help from GOD we survive and now I'm 33 (on third) through my life and in 2033 I'll be half way through. I find as i get older ~ I am better able to survive ~ OK. Thanks for sharing every blessing ~ Your Friend ~ BRIAN
August 8th, 2016 03:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh ELPHA ~ It can't ALL GO @ 22 ! You are only 25% through your life span. You are bright (judging from your poetry) beautiful (judging from your picture) and experiencing life. If you poem is experiential I can assure your that (from time to time) we all go through the "slough of despond" but with a little help from our friends ~ and a lot of help from GOD we survive and now I'm 33 (on third) through my life and in 2033 I'll be half way through. I find as i get older ~ I am better able to survive ~ OK. Thanks for sharing every blessing ~ Your Friend ~ BRIAN
August 8th, 2016 03:45
It\'s All Gone
shara_07 said:
This is very touching and heart breaking. I feel this explains my feeling right now. If you are going through anything... you will be okay. Or if you just wrote this on a creative whim I applause you.
August 8th, 2016 00:09
shara_07 said:
This is very touching and heart breaking. I feel this explains my feeling right now. If you are going through anything... you will be okay. Or if you just wrote this on a creative whim I applause you.
August 8th, 2016 00:09
Trouble
willyweed said:
wow glad your not mad at me.
another powerful piece good job! ww
August 5th, 2016 10:42
willyweed said:
wow glad your not mad at me.
another powerful piece good job! ww
August 5th, 2016 10:42
My Greatest Love Affair
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oh DEATH where is thy sting ~ Oh GRAVE where is thy victory. We must all die sometime ~ it is more positive to embrace it than to shun. Men have a "death wish" which is why we are attracted to extreme sports like "free rock climbing" motor cycle racing and boxing etc. I have never been afraid to die ~ but I also embrace life as well ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours in Life & Death ~ BRIAN
August 4th, 2016 14:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oh DEATH where is thy sting ~ Oh GRAVE where is thy victory. We must all die sometime ~ it is more positive to embrace it than to shun. Men have a "death wish" which is why we are attracted to extreme sports like "free rock climbing" motor cycle racing and boxing etc. I have never been afraid to die ~ but I also embrace life as well ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours in Life & Death ~ BRIAN
August 4th, 2016 14:16
My Greatest Love Affair
ZoeHale said:
Love the twist, it was a very nice read.
August 4th, 2016 08:54
ZoeHale said:
Love the twist, it was a very nice read.
August 4th, 2016 08:54
My Greatest Love Affair
shaunemc said:
Life rips you apart. I like that, You have gotten close to death but are not capable of reaching it.
August 4th, 2016 08:39
shaunemc said:
Life rips you apart. I like that, You have gotten close to death but are not capable of reaching it.
August 4th, 2016 08:39
Whole
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A POWERFUL POEM ELPHA ~ Freedom by blood letting ! Life happens "E" and sometimes the BLOODY BLADE is the only (and often final) answer. Thinking of you ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 2nd, 2016 00:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A POWERFUL POEM ELPHA ~ Freedom by blood letting ! Life happens "E" and sometimes the BLOODY BLADE is the only (and often final) answer. Thinking of you ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 2nd, 2016 00:53
Escape
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ELPHA ~ I'm sorry that such a well written poem relates such a sad sad story. "I'v got you under my skin" is the line of poem but so very true in experience. Another song says "I'm gonna wash that Man right outa my hair and send him on his way. But that is not true ~ they haven't inverted the Man / Girl remover shampoo yet ! Every blessing but never ever be tempted to us the GUN ~ Yours BRIAN
August 1st, 2016 03:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ELPHA ~ I'm sorry that such a well written poem relates such a sad sad story. "I'v got you under my skin" is the line of poem but so very true in experience. Another song says "I'm gonna wash that Man right outa my hair and send him on his way. But that is not true ~ they haven't inverted the Man / Girl remover shampoo yet ! Every blessing but never ever be tempted to us the GUN ~ Yours BRIAN
August 1st, 2016 03:58
Too Late
Tony36 said:
Great write, however I do find it sad that women feel they must do that to themselves just to feel attractive
July 31st, 2016 15:33
Tony36 said:
Great write, however I do find it sad that women feel they must do that to themselves just to feel attractive
July 31st, 2016 15:33
Rollercoaster
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ELPHA fro another beautiful poem. I would love to be a DAD ~ but only in wedlock ! I have enjoyed intimacy with my Lady Friends but none of them has ever conceived by my seed. However if they did ~ for me ~ it would be a miracle and a positive experience and I promise you the Rollercoaster would continue to Roll but at a gentler pace in respect of the BABY they are carrying. It takes Two to Tango and I would be a very responsible Dad for our Baby and a very loving Husband for you. I am a Gentleman ~ some very cowardly Men dissappear without trace ~ when they see the scan ! At 33 I'm almost mature enough to be a DADDY ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 02:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ELPHA fro another beautiful poem. I would love to be a DAD ~ but only in wedlock ! I have enjoyed intimacy with my Lady Friends but none of them has ever conceived by my seed. However if they did ~ for me ~ it would be a miracle and a positive experience and I promise you the Rollercoaster would continue to Roll but at a gentler pace in respect of the BABY they are carrying. It takes Two to Tango and I would be a very responsible Dad for our Baby and a very loving Husband for you. I am a Gentleman ~ some very cowardly Men dissappear without trace ~ when they see the scan ! At 33 I'm almost mature enough to be a DADDY ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 02:52
Waiting
mhpoet said:
wow...I love how you put some perspective on the idea of waiting
July 28th, 2016 01:00
mhpoet said:
wow...I love how you put some perspective on the idea of waiting
July 28th, 2016 01:00
Threats
willyweed said:
first comes manipulation and then intimidation next "run for your life!"
no one but no one has the power to control you but you! best of luck
July 27th, 2016 07:16
willyweed said:
first comes manipulation and then intimidation next "run for your life!"
no one but no one has the power to control you but you! best of luck
July 27th, 2016 07:16
Intimacy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing ELPHA ~ what you say is true. In a relationship we all acquire a "physical" sensual and superficial knowledge of our partner and soon learn how and where to pleasure them. BUT to really know a person emotionally takes a lifetime ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 13:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing ELPHA ~ what you say is true. In a relationship we all acquire a "physical" sensual and superficial knowledge of our partner and soon learn how and where to pleasure them. BUT to really know a person emotionally takes a lifetime ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 13:00
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