Comments received on poems by elphaba993
Toy
Aryal Allen said:
Your poem is the shape of a doll, was that done on purpose? If so, may I know why?
November 3rd, 2020 08:16
Aryal Allen said:
Your poem is the shape of a doll, was that done on purpose? If so, may I know why?
November 3rd, 2020 08:16
Love
burning-embers said:
You\'re right but it\'s what you are pre - programmed to do. You can stop yourself and miss out on life, miss out on meeting the greatest love of your life as opposed to forever mourning the first. Personally i\'d opt for accepting that you are a human being who is strongly attracted to men and enjoy them. Life is something nice not something miserable.
July 17th, 2017 21:52
burning-embers said:
You\'re right but it\'s what you are pre - programmed to do. You can stop yourself and miss out on life, miss out on meeting the greatest love of your life as opposed to forever mourning the first. Personally i\'d opt for accepting that you are a human being who is strongly attracted to men and enjoy them. Life is something nice not something miserable.
July 17th, 2017 21:52
Girls Like Me
FredPeyer said:
You really captured the emotions, the longing and the sadness in your poem. So well written! Please keep on writing.
July 7th, 2017 20:31
FredPeyer said:
You really captured the emotions, the longing and the sadness in your poem. So well written! Please keep on writing.
July 7th, 2017 20:31
One Wish
MendedFences27 said:
From your heart - no doubt. All they need are your love and your time. If your poem reflects your inner heart she will be blessed. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 6th, 2017 12:51
MendedFences27 said:
From your heart - no doubt. All they need are your love and your time. If your poem reflects your inner heart she will be blessed. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 6th, 2017 12:51
One Wish
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN TO ALL THAT SISTER ~ To have a Daughter is your \"Gift from God\" ! To love her as only you can do is your \"Gift back to God !\". Thinkin\'\' of and Prayin\'for You and your Daughter ~ AMEN Hugs BRIAN
February 6th, 2017 11:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN TO ALL THAT SISTER ~ To have a Daughter is your \"Gift from God\" ! To love her as only you can do is your \"Gift back to God !\". Thinkin\'\' of and Prayin\'for You and your Daughter ~ AMEN Hugs BRIAN
February 6th, 2017 11:06
Should Have Known
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow...I LOVE THE STYLE OF IT ...It reminded me of many many bits and pieces of my own work..everyone knows me on this site as being brash and brazen..It cuts right to the chase...but, honey u are a beautiful girl and I GUARANTEE YOU everyone ISNOT AGAINST you...theyre proably many jealous little cunts out there because of who you are and how beautiful you are, but you will one day see how little they MATTER...trust me...anyway....I like it and now I will read more of your work...because just that short poem shows me you have balls and talent to write great poetry....take care and keep writing you little fire cracker!!lol
February 4th, 2017 01:30
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow...I LOVE THE STYLE OF IT ...It reminded me of many many bits and pieces of my own work..everyone knows me on this site as being brash and brazen..It cuts right to the chase...but, honey u are a beautiful girl and I GUARANTEE YOU everyone ISNOT AGAINST you...theyre proably many jealous little cunts out there because of who you are and how beautiful you are, but you will one day see how little they MATTER...trust me...anyway....I like it and now I will read more of your work...because just that short poem shows me you have balls and talent to write great poetry....take care and keep writing you little fire cracker!!lol
February 4th, 2017 01:30
One Thing
Aals said:
i feel you. Your beautiful. and remember this is your life. What happens is up to you. You decide who you want to be. The world can be yours. Even if that means saying no and watching gilmore girls eating ice cream for a night. You have talent. Take life by the neck and let em know you aint playin.
February 2nd, 2017 19:00
Aals said:
i feel you. Your beautiful. and remember this is your life. What happens is up to you. You decide who you want to be. The world can be yours. Even if that means saying no and watching gilmore girls eating ice cream for a night. You have talent. Take life by the neck and let em know you aint playin.
February 2nd, 2017 19:00
Failure
Terry dailey said:
Thats what im fucking talking about! A poet who uses her full set of writeing tools is BADASSERY . Very well written. And the greatest poetry of yesteryear would have changed witH FUCK offs in theyre bag of writeing tools... To invoke emotion from readers is indeed what poets do. You have done that my poetc friend. GOOD JOB.
January 19th, 2017 15:08
Terry dailey said:
Thats what im fucking talking about! A poet who uses her full set of writeing tools is BADASSERY . Very well written. And the greatest poetry of yesteryear would have changed witH FUCK offs in theyre bag of writeing tools... To invoke emotion from readers is indeed what poets do. You have done that my poetc friend. GOOD JOB.
January 19th, 2017 15:08
Failure
Clark said:
Really powerful. Just know I\'m hear for you if you ever want to talk, my inbox is always open. I understand how it feels to feel like every move you make goes in the wrong direction. Keep writing, it\'s a great way to express you really feel.
January 19th, 2017 14:34
Clark said:
Really powerful. Just know I\'m hear for you if you ever want to talk, my inbox is always open. I understand how it feels to feel like every move you make goes in the wrong direction. Keep writing, it\'s a great way to express you really feel.
January 19th, 2017 14:34
Walls
Augustus said:
As long as you are feeling vulnerable the walls need to be up. They say time heals all. But I would take a little peek in a crack before i went out again. Nicely done.
January 18th, 2017 23:52
Augustus said:
As long as you are feeling vulnerable the walls need to be up. They say time heals all. But I would take a little peek in a crack before i went out again. Nicely done.
January 18th, 2017 23:52
Walls
Clark said:
Very deep, I understand how you feel on many levels. Sometimes walls need to stay up, but sometimes they break for the best. Great writing!
January 18th, 2017 22:20
Clark said:
Very deep, I understand how you feel on many levels. Sometimes walls need to stay up, but sometimes they break for the best. Great writing!
January 18th, 2017 22:20
Happy
willyweed said:
very hot and well written sounds like love to me! nice write ww
December 28th, 2016 19:23
willyweed said:
very hot and well written sounds like love to me! nice write ww
December 28th, 2016 19:23
Once Upon A Time
Elegant_Style said:
wow, this is hauntingly beautiful but so very, very sad. Nice write, i have to say you literally almost made me cry. Keep writing, your amazing
December 13th, 2016 20:58
Elegant_Style said:
wow, this is hauntingly beautiful but so very, very sad. Nice write, i have to say you literally almost made me cry. Keep writing, your amazing
December 13th, 2016 20:58
Pretty Little Whore
notapoet said:
Wow what a powefully emotional and sad write, simply amazing! My favorite line is,,
The only time
Anyone wants to listen to me
Is when my clothes fall on the floor
Piled on my dignity.
Love your work... NAP
December 3rd, 2016 11:29
notapoet said:
Wow what a powefully emotional and sad write, simply amazing! My favorite line is,,
The only time
Anyone wants to listen to me
Is when my clothes fall on the floor
Piled on my dignity.
Love your work... NAP
December 3rd, 2016 11:29
Pretty Little Whore
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ELPHA ~ THANKS FOR SHARING A BEAUTIFULLY CRAFTED POEM BUT WITH A PLAINTIVE MESSAGE ~ SO SAD ! You are beautiful ~ a true Daughter of Eve and so so much more than just a P L W ! You are trapped in your own beautiful body and so many Men take advantage of that ~ because Men love sex and choose to ignore the needs and elegance of the PROVIDER ! I am a Gentleman ELPHA and if you were my GF I would fulfill all your desires and then and then only if you willingly offered yourself would I consummate our love ! That is True Love and that is what you crave and deserve ! Thanks for sharing ~ we all care ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 3rd, 2016 09:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ELPHA ~ THANKS FOR SHARING A BEAUTIFULLY CRAFTED POEM BUT WITH A PLAINTIVE MESSAGE ~ SO SAD ! You are beautiful ~ a true Daughter of Eve and so so much more than just a P L W ! You are trapped in your own beautiful body and so many Men take advantage of that ~ because Men love sex and choose to ignore the needs and elegance of the PROVIDER ! I am a Gentleman ELPHA and if you were my GF I would fulfill all your desires and then and then only if you willingly offered yourself would I consummate our love ! That is True Love and that is what you crave and deserve ! Thanks for sharing ~ we all care ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 3rd, 2016 09:07
Cut
berdnt_victoria said:
I\'m always here when you need someone to talk to.. Believe me I know what it feels like..
December 1st, 2016 12:13
berdnt_victoria said:
I\'m always here when you need someone to talk to.. Believe me I know what it feels like..
December 1st, 2016 12:13
Repeat
Augustus said:
the typical cutter often sends mixed signals and burns bridges behind them scaring folks away. You write a clear message of wanting help.
November 18th, 2016 16:02
Augustus said:
the typical cutter often sends mixed signals and burns bridges behind them scaring folks away. You write a clear message of wanting help.
November 18th, 2016 16:02
Repeat
Christina8 said:
Keep writing. It helps the readers too. You\'re doing a great job on your poetry.
November 18th, 2016 13:20
Christina8 said:
Keep writing. It helps the readers too. You\'re doing a great job on your poetry.
November 18th, 2016 13:20
Repeat
Tony36 said:
Nobody needs to cut or slice themselves. Great write though
November 18th, 2016 08:28
Tony36 said:
Nobody needs to cut or slice themselves. Great write though
November 18th, 2016 08:28
Cut
P.H.Rose said:
Very very good. I give it a \"Whoosh Bang\"...... it means bang on the nails head...
November 16th, 2016 04:54
P.H.Rose said:
Very very good. I give it a \"Whoosh Bang\"...... it means bang on the nails head...
November 16th, 2016 04:54
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