Comments received on poems by kevin browne
This Thing That Life Exists.
Augustus said:
New ideas, worldly wisdom and love. Yea, that\'ll work.
November 10th, 2016 22:09
Augustus said:
New ideas, worldly wisdom and love. Yea, that\'ll work.
November 10th, 2016 22:09
Moments Created.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great muse with a moral and I like the mention of God. The metaphor employed is splendid too. Seems to be in fine freeverse style. Thumbs up.
Pls do review my latest poem too. Ive been writing elsewhere and readers loved it or got sth frm it so I wish to share here too
November 2nd, 2016 01:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great muse with a moral and I like the mention of God. The metaphor employed is splendid too. Seems to be in fine freeverse style. Thumbs up.
Pls do review my latest poem too. Ive been writing elsewhere and readers loved it or got sth frm it so I wish to share here too
November 2nd, 2016 01:34
Twice Is Never Shy.
Augustus said:
Some are unwilling/unable to learn from history. Wisdom is doomed in this armosphere of this attitude. Enjoyed reading.
October 23rd, 2016 17:56
Augustus said:
Some are unwilling/unable to learn from history. Wisdom is doomed in this armosphere of this attitude. Enjoyed reading.
October 23rd, 2016 17:56
Clowned About with You.
Augustus said:
This sound like the speaker has had it with someone highly educated and full of themselves. Or --- this could be looking in mirror and analyzing one\'s life.
October 17th, 2016 22:29
Augustus said:
This sound like the speaker has had it with someone highly educated and full of themselves. Or --- this could be looking in mirror and analyzing one\'s life.
October 17th, 2016 22:29
Moments.
Augustus said:
Wow. You made my day. Half of the poems I published were written in the 80\'s and lay in a file since then. Some I tweaked a little before publishing on this site. Most poems I write come from some emotional experience. I take an hour or 2 to write, then sit on them for 2-3 days before reading again. I try to trim unnecessary words unless they helpful to the rhythm.
October 14th, 2016 21:00
Augustus said:
Wow. You made my day. Half of the poems I published were written in the 80\'s and lay in a file since then. Some I tweaked a little before publishing on this site. Most poems I write come from some emotional experience. I take an hour or 2 to write, then sit on them for 2-3 days before reading again. I try to trim unnecessary words unless they helpful to the rhythm.
October 14th, 2016 21:00
Moments.
Augustus said:
\"Taste of no return\"--- when you see that on a lovers fave or hear it in their voice, your heart sinks.
October 14th, 2016 08:01
Augustus said:
\"Taste of no return\"--- when you see that on a lovers fave or hear it in their voice, your heart sinks.
October 14th, 2016 08:01
A Heart To You I Bring.
Augustus said:
The wonder of it all. Love is magical. Thanks for sharing.
October 8th, 2016 22:06
Augustus said:
The wonder of it all. Love is magical. Thanks for sharing.
October 8th, 2016 22:06
Honest Places.
Augustus said:
Kevin, It was not a biblical reference. Louisiana USA, Mississippi,Alabama and Florida all border on the Gulf of Mexico. Before "Tarmac and Hotels and restaurants" were built there a person could enjoy seeing the beach and the water on a long drive along the beautiful coast line. Now of that is destroyed. "Blasphemy"! was used simply as "Darn" or Dangit, being a bit anoyed with all of the construction.
October 8th, 2016 07:18
Augustus said:
Kevin, It was not a biblical reference. Louisiana USA, Mississippi,Alabama and Florida all border on the Gulf of Mexico. Before "Tarmac and Hotels and restaurants" were built there a person could enjoy seeing the beach and the water on a long drive along the beautiful coast line. Now of that is destroyed. "Blasphemy"! was used simply as "Darn" or Dangit, being a bit anoyed with all of the construction.
October 8th, 2016 07:18
Shadows On The Wall.
vanabba3 said:
I like the symbolism in your poem, and it goes back and forth with darkness and then somewhat of a ray of hope. When I read this, it made me think of "A Christmas Carol" by Dickens... The way Marley described to Scrooge how he has to wander around in existence to witness what he cannot share, but might have shared. Makes me wonder, is this what purgatory is all about? You captured this feeling in the poem quite well... Nice!
October 8th, 2016 00:03
vanabba3 said:
I like the symbolism in your poem, and it goes back and forth with darkness and then somewhat of a ray of hope. When I read this, it made me think of "A Christmas Carol" by Dickens... The way Marley described to Scrooge how he has to wander around in existence to witness what he cannot share, but might have shared. Makes me wonder, is this what purgatory is all about? You captured this feeling in the poem quite well... Nice!
October 8th, 2016 00:03
Honest Places.
Augustus said:
As a young man I could drive from New Orleans to Florida and be able to see the gulf waters the whole way. Now there are small patches here and there where I still can. Blasphemy! Thanks.
October 7th, 2016 21:17
Augustus said:
As a young man I could drive from New Orleans to Florida and be able to see the gulf waters the whole way. Now there are small patches here and there where I still can. Blasphemy! Thanks.
October 7th, 2016 21:17
Octopus.
Augustus said:
Fascinating creatures. They have inspired books and movies. Thanks.
October 5th, 2016 17:43
Augustus said:
Fascinating creatures. They have inspired books and movies. Thanks.
October 5th, 2016 17:43
The Chimpanzee.
Augustus said:
Lets hope they survive in the wild. Nicely done.
October 4th, 2016 18:14
Augustus said:
Lets hope they survive in the wild. Nicely done.
October 4th, 2016 18:14
You Got Me Thinking.
Augustus said:
I was thinking this could be said in front of a mirror as well to to the universe. Thanks.
October 3rd, 2016 13:36
Augustus said:
I was thinking this could be said in front of a mirror as well to to the universe. Thanks.
October 3rd, 2016 13:36
Shadows On The Wall.
Augustus said:
Glad that with all of the difficulties there was hope. Nicely done.
October 1st, 2016 18:51
Augustus said:
Glad that with all of the difficulties there was hope. Nicely done.
October 1st, 2016 18:51
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