Comments received on poems by kevin browne
Those Dozen Red Roses.
WriteBeLight said:
Such a way with lovely words, Kevin. I really like the second to last line.
March 7th, 2017 04:21
WriteBeLight said:
Such a way with lovely words, Kevin. I really like the second to last line.
March 7th, 2017 04:21
Violins Played Midnight Til Morn.
willyweed said:
refusing to commit watching love pass em\' bye bye?
March 6th, 2017 16:53
willyweed said:
refusing to commit watching love pass em\' bye bye?
March 6th, 2017 16:53
This Abyss.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, hopefully one day you will rise from the abyss.
March 6th, 2017 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, hopefully one day you will rise from the abyss.
March 6th, 2017 01:33
This Abyss.
willyweed said:
I don\'t know why this reminds me of whales or porpoise I know they don\'t breath water, but
they may be smarter than us humans? and I guess I put you there...smarter than the average bear?
nice work here Kevin, WW
March 5th, 2017 15:42
willyweed said:
I don\'t know why this reminds me of whales or porpoise I know they don\'t breath water, but
they may be smarter than us humans? and I guess I put you there...smarter than the average bear?
nice work here Kevin, WW
March 5th, 2017 15:42
Made In Heaven.
willyweed said:
you have my vote a good poem need not rhyme but sometimes it don\'t hurt!
March 4th, 2017 15:17
willyweed said:
you have my vote a good poem need not rhyme but sometimes it don\'t hurt!
March 4th, 2017 15:17
Made In Heaven.
Augustus said:
And you said you did not have the gift of rhyme. Well done.
March 4th, 2017 13:01
Augustus said:
And you said you did not have the gift of rhyme. Well done.
March 4th, 2017 13:01
lay Down With Me On This Planet.
Augustus said:
In spite of all, it\'s damn worth it.
March 3rd, 2017 17:51
Augustus said:
In spite of all, it\'s damn worth it.
March 3rd, 2017 17:51
lay Down With Me On This Planet.
willyweed said:
life is a puzzle inside a riddle with lessons to be learned and prespectives to be gained we all blame GOD for the evil shit that happens but he does not conduct the band he just gives us free will and we do the evil deeds when we say no more then war will end the Dutch were Viking then in the old world bad ass dudes who just went out and took shit by force the just quit when the children cried and wives wept for the dead upon returning home from raiding they said this is not good not right and now they don\'t war at all no thank you we are neutral so it can be that we live in peace? and if God said which one of your kids should I take what could you say? no please take me and leave my kids alone? So I guess that is how God feels we are all his children and he wants to redeem us all the good the bad the ulgy. Well I don\'t know where all this shit came from but What was the question? shut up WW sorry kevin for the rant? later WW
March 3rd, 2017 17:49
willyweed said:
life is a puzzle inside a riddle with lessons to be learned and prespectives to be gained we all blame GOD for the evil shit that happens but he does not conduct the band he just gives us free will and we do the evil deeds when we say no more then war will end the Dutch were Viking then in the old world bad ass dudes who just went out and took shit by force the just quit when the children cried and wives wept for the dead upon returning home from raiding they said this is not good not right and now they don\'t war at all no thank you we are neutral so it can be that we live in peace? and if God said which one of your kids should I take what could you say? no please take me and leave my kids alone? So I guess that is how God feels we are all his children and he wants to redeem us all the good the bad the ulgy. Well I don\'t know where all this shit came from but What was the question? shut up WW sorry kevin for the rant? later WW
March 3rd, 2017 17:49
The Fibre In Our Souls.
WriteBeLight said:
Thirst of drinking poetry - all is great, but like that in particular.
March 2nd, 2017 12:09
WriteBeLight said:
Thirst of drinking poetry - all is great, but like that in particular.
March 2nd, 2017 12:09
The Fibre In Our Souls.
Augustus said:
Wonder if one day we will know the answers. Nicely done.
March 2nd, 2017 11:48
Augustus said:
Wonder if one day we will know the answers. Nicely done.
March 2nd, 2017 11:48
The Fibre In Our Souls.
kevin browne said:
thank you Mr willyweed and remember never to fall into those \'murky waters\'..!
March 2nd, 2017 06:35
kevin browne said:
thank you Mr willyweed and remember never to fall into those \'murky waters\'..!
March 2nd, 2017 06:35
The Fibre In Our Souls.
willyweed said:
yes life is the journey not the destination a wise man once said so it \'twas not I but we all view it from our own skud prospective nice one Kevin! deep dive into murky waters! ,,,,gurgle! WW
March 2nd, 2017 05:05
willyweed said:
yes life is the journey not the destination a wise man once said so it \'twas not I but we all view it from our own skud prospective nice one Kevin! deep dive into murky waters! ,,,,gurgle! WW
March 2nd, 2017 05:05
Good Turned Ugly And Bad,
Augustus said:
All I can see is a whole lot of stinging hurt and rotten environment with worried expectations back then of more to come. Yes we need to hold on to the good. Enjoyed
March 1st, 2017 20:00
Augustus said:
All I can see is a whole lot of stinging hurt and rotten environment with worried expectations back then of more to come. Yes we need to hold on to the good. Enjoyed
March 1st, 2017 20:00
Good Turned Ugly And Bad,
WriteBeLight said:
Sounds very dark Kevin. Well done at expressing this.
March 1st, 2017 17:53
WriteBeLight said:
Sounds very dark Kevin. Well done at expressing this.
March 1st, 2017 17:53
Good Turned Ugly And Bad,
willyweed said:
I sense that you are pissed at someone in your real world life of a person to person whom you tried to help and then was stabbed in the back by that same party you tried to give a helping hand to? or is this really more metaphoric than that ? am I even close or else I don\'t get this one at all? ww
March 1st, 2017 13:54
willyweed said:
I sense that you are pissed at someone in your real world life of a person to person whom you tried to help and then was stabbed in the back by that same party you tried to give a helping hand to? or is this really more metaphoric than that ? am I even close or else I don\'t get this one at all? ww
March 1st, 2017 13:54
Butterflies Flew To Me.
Augustus said:
Of butterflies and dragonflies and diamonds. These are a few of my favorite things. Kudos.
February 28th, 2017 17:42
Augustus said:
Of butterflies and dragonflies and diamonds. These are a few of my favorite things. Kudos.
February 28th, 2017 17:42
Butterflies Flew To Me.
willyweed said:
you are to me Kevin, I play I know but some things are real, even to the nutter\'s ? and you sir are the real not fake hero of your own mistakes a diamond in the rough a blessing I call a friend. ww
February 28th, 2017 05:53
willyweed said:
you are to me Kevin, I play I know but some things are real, even to the nutter\'s ? and you sir are the real not fake hero of your own mistakes a diamond in the rough a blessing I call a friend. ww
February 28th, 2017 05:53
Butterflies Flew To Me.
WriteBeLight said:
All is wonderful Kevin, in particular, the last several lines.
February 28th, 2017 05:02
WriteBeLight said:
All is wonderful Kevin, in particular, the last several lines.
February 28th, 2017 05:02
I Think I Dropped A Quid Up Ya Old Ladies Skirt Last Night.
willyweed said:
I just can not for the life of me understand how one drops a Quid up? anywhere skirt basketball net , uptown? one of the mysteries of life I suppose?
February 27th, 2017 20:42
willyweed said:
I just can not for the life of me understand how one drops a Quid up? anywhere skirt basketball net , uptown? one of the mysteries of life I suppose?
February 27th, 2017 20:42
Sometimes I Wonder.
willyweed said:
I sometimes wonder why you write such awesome poems, plus sometimes I wonder why you don\'t turn the light on, and I wonder if you want to go to Disney land with me...ummm my treat of course not! nice one yet again Kevin! WW sometimes I wonder why I picked that Nom de plume\'
February 27th, 2017 09:34
willyweed said:
I sometimes wonder why you write such awesome poems, plus sometimes I wonder why you don\'t turn the light on, and I wonder if you want to go to Disney land with me...ummm my treat of course not! nice one yet again Kevin! WW sometimes I wonder why I picked that Nom de plume\'
February 27th, 2017 09:34
Turn Normal People Blue.
WriteBeLight said:
Like the last line, as you have said it all, here Kevin.
February 27th, 2017 01:41
WriteBeLight said:
Like the last line, as you have said it all, here Kevin.
February 27th, 2017 01:41
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