Comments received on poems by kevin browne
When God Woke up One Day.
malubotelho said:
Great and profound thoughts. I got some of it like the searching for a new or true reality. Need to read more times as to get yo more understanding.
July 1st, 2017 20:05
malubotelho said:
Great and profound thoughts. I got some of it like the searching for a new or true reality. Need to read more times as to get yo more understanding.
July 1st, 2017 20:05
When God Woke up One Day.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, there is so much in your writing that speaks to me, but it would take me another day or so to comment on all of it. One that sticks out though is \"the things we see are never really there\". Sometimes I wonder what is more \"real\", what I see outside the window or what I \"see\" in my imagination.
I printed your poem since it will take a long time to just understand everything, or more likely to find out that I don\'t understand!
July 1st, 2017 13:31
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, there is so much in your writing that speaks to me, but it would take me another day or so to comment on all of it. One that sticks out though is \"the things we see are never really there\". Sometimes I wonder what is more \"real\", what I see outside the window or what I \"see\" in my imagination.
I printed your poem since it will take a long time to just understand everything, or more likely to find out that I don\'t understand!
July 1st, 2017 13:31
Another Important Note.
FredPeyer said:
After reading your incredible piece of penmanship I started thinking on how long it must have taken you. Thought of a carpenter who is building the perfect piece of furniture, with every joint perfectly done, and every surface sanded to a shine. Thank you!
June 29th, 2017 19:45
FredPeyer said:
After reading your incredible piece of penmanship I started thinking on how long it must have taken you. Thought of a carpenter who is building the perfect piece of furniture, with every joint perfectly done, and every surface sanded to a shine. Thank you!
June 29th, 2017 19:45
Another Important Note.
onepauly said:
you are among the best of all poets and writers I have read to date. how you do it, I am awe struck. and hoping to read more from you.
thanks for your post.
June 29th, 2017 18:21
onepauly said:
you are among the best of all poets and writers I have read to date. how you do it, I am awe struck. and hoping to read more from you.
thanks for your post.
June 29th, 2017 18:21
When His Pen Runs Out Of Ink.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice work KB. My favorite line: \"wisdom crawls in the sky with the gathering of children kneeling at Heaven\'s doors\" One celebrated gift of the Holy Spirit is Wisdom, Christ teaches us to become like children, and the kneeling position is a sign of reverence to God (another gift of the Holy Spirit). Peace and blessings my friend.
June 29th, 2017 06:47
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice work KB. My favorite line: \"wisdom crawls in the sky with the gathering of children kneeling at Heaven\'s doors\" One celebrated gift of the Holy Spirit is Wisdom, Christ teaches us to become like children, and the kneeling position is a sign of reverence to God (another gift of the Holy Spirit). Peace and blessings my friend.
June 29th, 2017 06:47
Another Important Note.
Augustus said:
Sit back with a cup of tea and a friend and so of relax in the magnitude of it all
June 29th, 2017 03:50
Augustus said:
Sit back with a cup of tea and a friend and so of relax in the magnitude of it all
June 29th, 2017 03:50
When I Am Dead.
onepauly said:
great poem king kev.
I understand most of it.
the line that meant more to me was,
depending on the future
June 28th, 2017 18:50
onepauly said:
great poem king kev.
I understand most of it.
the line that meant more to me was,
depending on the future
June 28th, 2017 18:50
When His Pen Runs Out Of Ink.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice work KB. My favorite line: \"wisdom crawls in the sky with the gathering of children kneeling at Heaven\'s doors\" One celebrated gift of the Holy Spirit is Wisdom, Christ teaches us to become like children, and the kneeling position is a sign of reverence to God (another gift of the Holy Spirit). Peace and blessings my friend.
June 27th, 2017 23:04
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice work KB. My favorite line: \"wisdom crawls in the sky with the gathering of children kneeling at Heaven\'s doors\" One celebrated gift of the Holy Spirit is Wisdom, Christ teaches us to become like children, and the kneeling position is a sign of reverence to God (another gift of the Holy Spirit). Peace and blessings my friend.
June 27th, 2017 23:04
When His Pen Runs Out Of Ink.
onepauly said:
hey king kev.
I have so much to learn from you.
I have no idea how you do it.
one line comes to mind. the one about the bags people carry. I like backpacks and freedom.
June 27th, 2017 20:37
onepauly said:
hey king kev.
I have so much to learn from you.
I have no idea how you do it.
one line comes to mind. the one about the bags people carry. I like backpacks and freedom.
June 27th, 2017 20:37
When His Pen Runs Out Of Ink.
Poetic Dan said:
So many great lines, I\'ll read a few times, will quote you if I speak them aloud.
\"The teardrops of each other\'s eyes looked deep into the matter that we all left behind\"
Love your work
June 27th, 2017 14:17
Poetic Dan said:
So many great lines, I\'ll read a few times, will quote you if I speak them aloud.
\"The teardrops of each other\'s eyes looked deep into the matter that we all left behind\"
Love your work
June 27th, 2017 14:17
See Your Face.
onepauly said:
you are a great writer. I have my own thoughts about what you wrote.
it keeps me going.
thanks
June 26th, 2017 19:56
onepauly said:
you are a great writer. I have my own thoughts about what you wrote.
it keeps me going.
thanks
June 26th, 2017 19:56
Those Moments Remember.
malubotelho said:
I like it very much. I\'m so happy to have found this forum. So much good stuff to read. Than you
June 25th, 2017 20:29
malubotelho said:
I like it very much. I\'m so happy to have found this forum. So much good stuff to read. Than you
June 25th, 2017 20:29
Those Moments Remember.
onepauly said:
great page! you could be a novelist.
and I think you know it. that is
something I never could be.
it would be to much pressure
for my head. ill always be
a lowly poet
June 25th, 2017 19:23
onepauly said:
great page! you could be a novelist.
and I think you know it. that is
something I never could be.
it would be to much pressure
for my head. ill always be
a lowly poet
June 25th, 2017 19:23
When Love Stands Still.
malubotelho said:
Loving is an unjust worldly love affair which holds all the attention
I agree when you say that. I love too much too. I sometimes think that this is the women curse. To love too much. I\'m learning to hold myself and learn to give space. No pressure. Lovely write. Intense.
June 22nd, 2017 21:25
malubotelho said:
Loving is an unjust worldly love affair which holds all the attention
I agree when you say that. I love too much too. I sometimes think that this is the women curse. To love too much. I\'m learning to hold myself and learn to give space. No pressure. Lovely write. Intense.
June 22nd, 2017 21:25
Stars And The Bright.
Poetic Dan said:
Dam for the first time
I don\'t have much rhyme
Or Maybe just a little
Your words have resonated with me
This is going to affect all in my reach
This flower that blooms
Will be watered by my tears
The roots nurtured unconditionally
I\'ll stop myself there, thank you for the time you take to write and share.
Opps did it again ;)
June 19th, 2017 07:31
Poetic Dan said:
Dam for the first time
I don\'t have much rhyme
Or Maybe just a little
Your words have resonated with me
This is going to affect all in my reach
This flower that blooms
Will be watered by my tears
The roots nurtured unconditionally
I\'ll stop myself there, thank you for the time you take to write and share.
Opps did it again ;)
June 19th, 2017 07:31
Stars And The Bright.
Augustus said:
\"If we can be happy without the things we have\" very nice.
June 18th, 2017 13:02
Augustus said:
\"If we can be happy without the things we have\" very nice.
June 18th, 2017 13:02
A Woven Interstellar Mistake.
Heather T said:
Sometimes our stars turn corners and bruise our heels...I love this a thousand times over. Perfection for our friend.
June 13th, 2017 19:37
Heather T said:
Sometimes our stars turn corners and bruise our heels...I love this a thousand times over. Perfection for our friend.
June 13th, 2017 19:37
As My Ink Wets The Paper.
swingline said:
I read \"The Wasteland\" the other day by T S Elliot the other day and as I read this it reminded me of snipits of it . Structure , form , and style .
June 5th, 2017 05:49
swingline said:
I read \"The Wasteland\" the other day by T S Elliot the other day and as I read this it reminded me of snipits of it . Structure , form , and style .
June 5th, 2017 05:49
As My Ink Wets The Paper.
Ethan said:
Incredible work. I love the absence of punctuation. It\'s a bit Joycean.
June 4th, 2017 18:37
Ethan said:
Incredible work. I love the absence of punctuation. It\'s a bit Joycean.
June 4th, 2017 18:37
Take Your Heart To The Grave.
swingline said:
Not me , I\'ll be dancing on my grave !
June 4th, 2017 08:35
swingline said:
Not me , I\'ll be dancing on my grave !
June 4th, 2017 08:35
Take Your Heart To The Grave.
Ethan said:
I love that you draw a connection between drinking and intoxication with the words \"drunk\" and \"concoction\".
June 3rd, 2017 23:11
Ethan said:
I love that you draw a connection between drinking and intoxication with the words \"drunk\" and \"concoction\".
June 3rd, 2017 23:11
Always Changing.
swingline said:
Words of wisdom . It seems I find the time for everything but what\'s important .
May 30th, 2017 22:08
swingline said:
Words of wisdom . It seems I find the time for everything but what\'s important .
May 30th, 2017 22:08
Always Changing.
Augustus said:
Sometimes we don\'t understand the wrong till it\'s too late. Enjoyed.
May 27th, 2017 15:21
Augustus said:
Sometimes we don\'t understand the wrong till it\'s too late. Enjoyed.
May 27th, 2017 15:21
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