Comments received on poems by daniel dawes
Single tree
Augustus said:
I wonder about stuff like that at times. Man lives for 50-100 years and gets to move around and think. Some trees live motionless for thousands of years--with or without thought.
September 22nd, 2016 15:29
Augustus said:
I wonder about stuff like that at times. Man lives for 50-100 years and gets to move around and think. Some trees live motionless for thousands of years--with or without thought.
September 22nd, 2016 15:29
Single tree
jemina said:
...and I thank you for this lesson :-D
seeing as I'm constantly in a whir, getting more and more unaware of myself everyday... I'm turning into a blur amidst the blur... :-D
interesting the way you've spun this poem nicely
September 22nd, 2016 14:30
jemina said:
...and I thank you for this lesson :-D
seeing as I'm constantly in a whir, getting more and more unaware of myself everyday... I'm turning into a blur amidst the blur... :-D
interesting the way you've spun this poem nicely
September 22nd, 2016 14:30
Dual nature
Augustus said:
Some never find themselves or their potential. Enjoyed.
September 21st, 2016 09:30
Augustus said:
Some never find themselves or their potential. Enjoyed.
September 21st, 2016 09:30
Simply being
Augustus said:
Sometimes it is hard to live in the moment and have no need to try to influence what is going on around you. A walk in nature has always been invigorating for me. Thanks.
September 19th, 2016 11:38
Augustus said:
Sometimes it is hard to live in the moment and have no need to try to influence what is going on around you. A walk in nature has always been invigorating for me. Thanks.
September 19th, 2016 11:38
Time once lost
Augustus said:
I see it as getting in touch with the inner child
September 14th, 2016 12:53
Augustus said:
I see it as getting in touch with the inner child
September 14th, 2016 12:53
Magical moments
Augustus said:
Finding peace in the moment. It is beautiful when it happens. Very nice.
September 12th, 2016 15:42
Augustus said:
Finding peace in the moment. It is beautiful when it happens. Very nice.
September 12th, 2016 15:42
Magical moments
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
"And I say to myself ~ What a wonderful World !". Daniel ~ thanks for sharing and awesome picture and an equally awesome tone poem which painted another perfect picture. Your BRIAN Please check my poems ~ B
September 12th, 2016 07:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
"And I say to myself ~ What a wonderful World !". Daniel ~ thanks for sharing and awesome picture and an equally awesome tone poem which painted another perfect picture. Your BRIAN Please check my poems ~ B
September 12th, 2016 07:51
Motion picture
dmr90 said:
Great writing, I recently got the courage to step up, and start writing again. Very inspirational. Hope to see more. Cheers
--DMR--
September 7th, 2016 04:53
dmr90 said:
Great writing, I recently got the courage to step up, and start writing again. Very inspirational. Hope to see more. Cheers
--DMR--
September 7th, 2016 04:53
Separation
lysistrata said:
Daniel "My Brother",
Don't ask me AGAIN my age.
Lila is NOT for your Old Teeth.
Even if these 👄Teeth belong to a self claiming Pacifist (❔❕)or a self hiding Narcissist (❕❔).
REST in PEACE....😇
August 28th, 2016 17:53
lysistrata said:
Daniel "My Brother",
Don't ask me AGAIN my age.
Lila is NOT for your Old Teeth.
Even if these 👄Teeth belong to a self claiming Pacifist (❔❕)or a self hiding Narcissist (❕❔).
REST in PEACE....😇
August 28th, 2016 17:53
Morning stars
lysistrata said:
Daniel,
I enjoyed reading this ONE, especially your detailed descriptions of the nature.🐛🐜🍂
Here is a different approach:
I am optimistic
When you rise at the right time
In the East.
I feel blessed
When you set at the right time
In the West.
I am not unhappy
When you shine at the wrong time
In the West.
I feel cursed
When you fall at the wrong time
In the East.
I feel like a World turned Upside Down.🌍🌏
Thanks for the Inspiration...
August 26th, 2016 16:47
lysistrata said:
Daniel,
I enjoyed reading this ONE, especially your detailed descriptions of the nature.🐛🐜🍂
Here is a different approach:
I am optimistic
When you rise at the right time
In the East.
I feel blessed
When you set at the right time
In the West.
I am not unhappy
When you shine at the wrong time
In the West.
I feel cursed
When you fall at the wrong time
In the East.
I feel like a World turned Upside Down.🌍🌏
Thanks for the Inspiration...
August 26th, 2016 16:47
Morning stars
Tony36 said:
Great write. My favorite part of living in the Country is seeing the early morning stars when I get up
August 26th, 2016 07:33
Tony36 said:
Great write. My favorite part of living in the Country is seeing the early morning stars when I get up
August 26th, 2016 07:33
Morning stars
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DAN ~ for a perfect poem ! For me Mornings are always special. Stars ~ fading Moon (love the visual !). Trees ~ bird ~ Sun and of course the ubiquitous spiders ! Nice poem to wake up to ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 26th, 2016 04:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DAN ~ for a perfect poem ! For me Mornings are always special. Stars ~ fading Moon (love the visual !). Trees ~ bird ~ Sun and of course the ubiquitous spiders ! Nice poem to wake up to ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 26th, 2016 04:38
Spiritual matters
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Balance and equilibrium ~ Yin & Yang ~ Good & Bad ~ Right & Wrong ~ Life & Death ~ this is what I strive for a BALANCED LIFE. I can cope with Bad because I have experienced Good and will again. The same is true of Right & Wrong. I know I am alive because I am writing a comment on your elegant poem. I know I will die but I consider that @ 33 I am only one third into my life and I would be happy to live (DV) until 2082 ! I am not afriad of the negatives because they balance the positives (c'est la vie) and I'm not afraid to die because my Faith (Christian) is very positive about Heaven. Thanks for sharing ~ I like to be balanced. Love the photo which defies gravity and maintains balance. BRIAN
August 25th, 2016 15:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Balance and equilibrium ~ Yin & Yang ~ Good & Bad ~ Right & Wrong ~ Life & Death ~ this is what I strive for a BALANCED LIFE. I can cope with Bad because I have experienced Good and will again. The same is true of Right & Wrong. I know I am alive because I am writing a comment on your elegant poem. I know I will die but I consider that @ 33 I am only one third into my life and I would be happy to live (DV) until 2082 ! I am not afriad of the negatives because they balance the positives (c'est la vie) and I'm not afraid to die because my Faith (Christian) is very positive about Heaven. Thanks for sharing ~ I like to be balanced. Love the photo which defies gravity and maintains balance. BRIAN
August 25th, 2016 15:58
Spiritual matters
lysistrata said:
"parnters":Typo?
You write about mind versus BODY.
If your Poetry is spiritual,
I,tried to represent 'The Body' And analyse you how it reacts to your Spiritual Approach.
It stays INDIFFERENT👎
That's ALL.
August 25th, 2016 15:38
lysistrata said:
"parnters":Typo?
You write about mind versus BODY.
If your Poetry is spiritual,
I,tried to represent 'The Body' And analyse you how it reacts to your Spiritual Approach.
It stays INDIFFERENT👎
That's ALL.
August 25th, 2016 15:38
Spiritual matters
lysistrata said:
Oh Daniel,
You make me say things that I'd rather NOT...
Have you spend 10 years of your precious life,writing this staff?😯
Let me put it differently;
Do you give 'The Same Performance" with every sexual partner?! Because if you DO,then not everyone has an Orgasm....😱
But I do like the photo very much....
August 25th, 2016 11:15
lysistrata said:
Oh Daniel,
You make me say things that I'd rather NOT...
Have you spend 10 years of your precious life,writing this staff?😯
Let me put it differently;
Do you give 'The Same Performance" with every sexual partner?! Because if you DO,then not everyone has an Orgasm....😱
But I do like the photo very much....
August 25th, 2016 11:15
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