Comments received on poems by John Snowdon



Her Eyes Have A Color
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving write.

Andy

August 11th, 2020 00:14

Hazy Went the Dark
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a compelling haunt of a read with `imagery to sigh for as the glimpse of new love saunters from dusk to turn haze into light and then changes to real back to dark chapters again - - top drawer writing is \"Hazy went the Dark\" - thanks for the taste of pathos wrapped in poetically potent skill - - a pleasure to read your posting John and look forward to viewing more of your work.

February 10th, 2020 14:49

I Have Lost You Now and Lost You Fairly (Revision)
Cwilder said:

Just a beautiful poem that has the poignancy of elegance and the sharp edges of rawness. These lines spoke to me deeply and will haunt me pleasantly as I contemplate them more.

\"I gave up my love to preserve its memory.\"
\"But these tired words won’t wake the dead,\"

I would enjoy writing with you!

January 23rd, 2020 19:42

She Is Greater Than My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, may that love be always there.

November 2nd, 2017 01:35

She Is Greater Than My Heart
Christina8 said:

Absolutely beautiful poem! A great tribute to your love.

November 1st, 2017 14:23

She Is Greater Than My Heart
SorrowfullyHappy said:

man this is deep Great write

November 1st, 2017 13:43


Daydream Lies
Fay Slimm. said:

I like the flow of this poignant verse so well inter-rhymed and full of lines built up to that last dark statement. Your pen touches sad times when lovers\' daydreams prove to have lied.

April 17th, 2017 16:26

Answers to Questions Seldom Asked
Fay Slimm. said:

Your questions are more than normally asked as terse line unfolds reasons why the final stanza asks \"are we blessed or cursed\" - food for thought indeed John. Good write.

April 17th, 2017 16:19

Answers to Questions Seldom Asked
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Do any of us know if we are better or worse?

April 7th, 2017 00:45

Answers to Questions Seldom Asked
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

April 6th, 2017 15:28

Answers to Questions Seldom Asked
orchidee said:

A fine write. Some say \'Good old days\'. Some say \'Bad old days\', etc. My question seldom, or often asked, is: Why is abbreviation such a long word?! Why not call it \'abb\'?! I will go back to sleep now. lol.

April 6th, 2017 13:15

I Have Lost You Now and Lost You Fairly
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 27th, 2017 15:22

The Morning Breaks
Augustus said:

A lot of work and thought went into this carefull penned piece.

February 28th, 2017 21:45

The Morning Breaks
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

February 28th, 2017 13:21

The Over
Augustus said:

This is nothing short of perfect. Sad but beautiful. Hugs.

February 24th, 2017 19:58

The Over
Fay Slimm. said:

Pathos runs through this well written poetic reason why \"love is not for the faint of heart\" - oh how true.

February 24th, 2017 17:16

The Over
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

February 24th, 2017 15:14

The Over
Christina8 said:

Love this poem. Perfect rhyme and rhythm. I must agree with goldfinch, love is forever. But I\'ve been married a long time. A masterpiece!

February 24th, 2017 14:25

The Over
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is forever, it is the coming together of two souls into the one. Good write.

February 24th, 2017 12:29

Lauren...Are You Waking?
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

February 16th, 2017 16:17

Lauren...Are You Waking?
Fay Slimm. said:

Enjoyed the build to a scene of love fulfilled - love the flow from the title onwards.

February 16th, 2017 14:21

The Beauty of the Night
MendedFences27 said:

Night and Day, the eternal struggle. People of both domains feel the pain and see the beauty. Nicely captured in. dare I say, romantic verse. Great write. - Phil A.

February 8th, 2017 14:07

Like Burning Suns
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 6th, 2017 15:09

Wake Me Gently
Christina8 said:

Your poem is beautiful and I love the rhyming and cadence with which it flows. The content is touching. Thanks for sharing.

January 17th, 2017 15:01

Wake Me Gently
clark_taylor said:

Really touching. I feel your words deeply.

January 17th, 2017 14:58

With Quaters on the Rail
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 9th, 2016 14:51

Wading Through Troubled Waters
Augustus said:

Nicely done. Clear story.

November 17th, 2016 18:41

Wading Through Troubled Waters
Christina8 said:

Absolutely beautiful poem!

November 17th, 2016 10:47

The Ash Tree
Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome write

November 11th, 2016 15:09

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