Comments received on poems by Marius
Sweet Torture
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas...it is so bittersweet. You've excellently expressed the heart winning over the reasonable mind....and your title captures it nicely. Alas that it must be so....truly madly in love? Love keeps the heart from hardening in the reality of it, yet since it is in vain....if only someone who could be possessed would come along to fill the loving space....Delightfully executed nonetheless.
January 26th, 2011 22:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas...it is so bittersweet. You've excellently expressed the heart winning over the reasonable mind....and your title captures it nicely. Alas that it must be so....truly madly in love? Love keeps the heart from hardening in the reality of it, yet since it is in vain....if only someone who could be possessed would come along to fill the loving space....Delightfully executed nonetheless.
January 26th, 2011 22:43
Metamorphosis
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Makes me smile. Sarah is lucky. This is a very sweet story. I quite enjoyed it. Fascinating. Ah, yes, love will yet win the day and dark forever be put away. What a fun, kind uncle!
January 26th, 2011 20:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Makes me smile. Sarah is lucky. This is a very sweet story. I quite enjoyed it. Fascinating. Ah, yes, love will yet win the day and dark forever be put away. What a fun, kind uncle!
January 26th, 2011 20:45
Forgive Me
StormyDay said:
Are you sure you've only started writing recently? It's very good diction, rhyme scheme, flow ect. Beautiful and touching with a hint of sadness.
January 25th, 2011 11:52
StormyDay said:
Are you sure you've only started writing recently? It's very good diction, rhyme scheme, flow ect. Beautiful and touching with a hint of sadness.
January 25th, 2011 11:52
You Are
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is a delightfully sweet romantic love poem! And yet she is intriguingly a contradiction of all that is desirable and what makes you suffer....impossibly irresistible. Very fascinating! Your rhyming is pleasant and the rythm good too. I quite enjoyed this!
January 24th, 2011 12:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is a delightfully sweet romantic love poem! And yet she is intriguingly a contradiction of all that is desirable and what makes you suffer....impossibly irresistible. Very fascinating! Your rhyming is pleasant and the rythm good too. I quite enjoyed this!
January 24th, 2011 12:57
Forgive Me
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You write well! I love this! It's excellent and so beautiful! I should think if your untouchable desired could but read this, it should surely move her. I daresay she'd forgive you for loving her, but then again, I don't know her. Enticing, bold and sweet!...I really enjoyed this.
January 23rd, 2011 18:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You write well! I love this! It's excellent and so beautiful! I should think if your untouchable desired could but read this, it should surely move her. I daresay she'd forgive you for loving her, but then again, I don't know her. Enticing, bold and sweet!...I really enjoyed this.
January 23rd, 2011 18:11
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