Comments received on poems by Jauntypoet93
To the man that broke my heart
Paul Bell said:
I think everyone you meet can affect you in some way, it\'s how you then use that in your own life.
December 18th, 2021 06:52
Paul Bell said:
I think everyone you meet can affect you in some way, it\'s how you then use that in your own life.
December 18th, 2021 06:52
Side Piece Chronicle J.H. 2
dusk arising said:
Hmm good job i read the comment from the author otherwise..... I\'d be saying the anger ought to be at yerself for being such a pussy and not saying fk off mister.
But I did read it and realise you\'ve produced a provokative kick in the b*lls piece here. Nice one.
September 17th, 2021 15:02
dusk arising said:
Hmm good job i read the comment from the author otherwise..... I\'d be saying the anger ought to be at yerself for being such a pussy and not saying fk off mister.
But I did read it and realise you\'ve produced a provokative kick in the b*lls piece here. Nice one.
September 17th, 2021 15:02
I love you
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written exploration of your feelings here. So seldom seen this maturing evaluation of what love could be whilst accepting it wasn\'t there this time.
February 2nd, 2020 07:54
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written exploration of your feelings here. So seldom seen this maturing evaluation of what love could be whilst accepting it wasn\'t there this time.
February 2nd, 2020 07:54
A simple change
WriteBeLight said:
Sometimes it is better to hold your tongue, but it is tough to do so everytime. Great work!
April 18th, 2017 11:59
WriteBeLight said:
Sometimes it is better to hold your tongue, but it is tough to do so everytime. Great work!
April 18th, 2017 11:59
My Adonis
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nicely done..you can tell that you really care for this guy
March 30th, 2017 18:09
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nicely done..you can tell that you really care for this guy
March 30th, 2017 18:09
My Adonis
niallprideaux said:
I love this! I\'m sure your boyfriend would too :)
March 30th, 2017 13:21
niallprideaux said:
I love this! I\'m sure your boyfriend would too :)
March 30th, 2017 13:21
“Fuck you FAG”
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel your anger, your anguish, and your hurt in this piece. I, too, have been labeled and stereotyped, for different reasons, but the wounds are there. Wounds may heal, but the scars remain! We live in an extremely broken and messed up world. This poem is an expression of the pain and anger you have experienced. Strongly written. I pray that you don\'t allow yourself to be defined by the small-minded people of this world. Let their words and thoughts roll off of you like water on a duck! Thanks for sharing!
March 17th, 2017 12:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel your anger, your anguish, and your hurt in this piece. I, too, have been labeled and stereotyped, for different reasons, but the wounds are there. Wounds may heal, but the scars remain! We live in an extremely broken and messed up world. This poem is an expression of the pain and anger you have experienced. Strongly written. I pray that you don\'t allow yourself to be defined by the small-minded people of this world. Let their words and thoughts roll off of you like water on a duck! Thanks for sharing!
March 17th, 2017 12:21
“Fuck you FAG”
niallprideaux said:
We are human and we stand together with those who accept us.
March 17th, 2017 10:24
niallprideaux said:
We are human and we stand together with those who accept us.
March 17th, 2017 10:24
I CLOSE MY EYES TO OPENED EYES
Angel Smileyface said:
I liked the write it was good.
October 1st, 2016 20:14
Angel Smileyface said:
I liked the write it was good.
October 1st, 2016 20:14
Cup
Augustus said:
Sounds to me like the cup is filled with stuff we don't want--- greed, emptiness, no mercy, giving up, weeds. Jim is deciding to head in the opposite direction. Thanks for sharing.
September 27th, 2016 22:20
Augustus said:
Sounds to me like the cup is filled with stuff we don't want--- greed, emptiness, no mercy, giving up, weeds. Jim is deciding to head in the opposite direction. Thanks for sharing.
September 27th, 2016 22:20
Today:
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JIMMIE ~ Great poem ~ great message ! The GOOD BOOK says "It is only when we love and respect ourselves ~ that we can begin to love OTHERS" This is not a paradox it is the TRUTH. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
September 26th, 2016 09:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JIMMIE ~ Great poem ~ great message ! The GOOD BOOK says "It is only when we love and respect ourselves ~ that we can begin to love OTHERS" This is not a paradox it is the TRUTH. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
September 26th, 2016 09:01
Morning Thoughts
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JIMMIE ~ Thanks for a challenging FIRST POEM ~ especially for Monday Morning ! After reading your poem I'm up an' ready an' rarin' to go NOWHERE ! Thanks for sharin' please check my poem EAT WELL ~ STAY YOUNG ! NEW YORK is a great State to be in ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 26th, 2016 02:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JIMMIE ~ Thanks for a challenging FIRST POEM ~ especially for Monday Morning ! After reading your poem I'm up an' ready an' rarin' to go NOWHERE ! Thanks for sharin' please check my poem EAT WELL ~ STAY YOUNG ! NEW YORK is a great State to be in ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 26th, 2016 02:56
