Comments received on poems by sudarshan
TO MY TEACHER, WITH LOVE
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Sudarhsn, Being a teacher I love the poem.The images for the teacher are wonderful.
yoursJVL
March 2nd, 2011 08:40
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Sudarhsn, Being a teacher I love the poem.The images for the teacher are wonderful.
yoursJVL
March 2nd, 2011 08:40
NATURE'S GREATNESS
Cheeky Missy said:
A beautiful simple discussion on "nature"...which I agree and disagree with. When the Lord God created man, He gave man stewardship over the earth/aka your "nature". Man seems thenceforth responsible for how he treats it....this is something of a call for proper stewardship, with a tendency to overvalue it, but an sweet simplistic call.
March 1st, 2011 23:38
Cheeky Missy said:
A beautiful simple discussion on "nature"...which I agree and disagree with. When the Lord God created man, He gave man stewardship over the earth/aka your "nature". Man seems thenceforth responsible for how he treats it....this is something of a call for proper stewardship, with a tendency to overvalue it, but an sweet simplistic call.
March 1st, 2011 23:38
HEAT
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating little lesson on heat and it's conduction, with that amusing touch in the conclusion. I enjoyed it.
March 1st, 2011 23:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating little lesson on heat and it's conduction, with that amusing touch in the conclusion. I enjoyed it.
March 1st, 2011 23:07
THE PHOENIX-AN ANCIENT BIRD
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, great job...I think. I'm not acquainted with the Phoenix, but this sounds like what I think I've heard. Very good.
March 1st, 2011 00:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, great job...I think. I'm not acquainted with the Phoenix, but this sounds like what I think I've heard. Very good.
March 1st, 2011 00:03
TRUE FRIENDS
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! Great delineation of true friends, from start to finish....wonderful!!!
February 26th, 2011 23:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! Great delineation of true friends, from start to finish....wonderful!!!
February 26th, 2011 23:06
MY TEACHER
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely! This is very pleasant and well-written/expressed, honorable toward your instructor and delightful to read. I quite enjoyed it!
February 26th, 2011 22:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely! This is very pleasant and well-written/expressed, honorable toward your instructor and delightful to read. I quite enjoyed it!
February 26th, 2011 22:38
SAVE ME!!!!
Dolphine29 said:
I can hear trees too, we should pay attention and listen to them.
Best
D.
February 26th, 2011 16:10
Dolphine29 said:
I can hear trees too, we should pay attention and listen to them.
Best
D.
February 26th, 2011 16:10
THE TREE IN MY GARDEN
Dolphine29 said:
I love it, well I feel moved by this tree too.
I like the feeling it has, like a protector and a cherished friend or small brother.
Very beautiful
Best
Dolphine
February 26th, 2011 16:05
Dolphine29 said:
I love it, well I feel moved by this tree too.
I like the feeling it has, like a protector and a cherished friend or small brother.
Very beautiful
Best
Dolphine
February 26th, 2011 16:05
TRUE FRIENDS
Alexandre Landsley said:
I liked it, so many good advices......and the message of the poem is well received
February 26th, 2011 10:51
Alexandre Landsley said:
I liked it, so many good advices......and the message of the poem is well received
February 26th, 2011 10:51
MY AMBITION
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, I enjoyed hearing about all your hopeful ambitions. The altering of choices reminds me of when I was in school....I too wanted to be one thing and then another.
February 26th, 2011 00:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, I enjoyed hearing about all your hopeful ambitions. The altering of choices reminds me of when I was in school....I too wanted to be one thing and then another.
February 26th, 2011 00:31
THE FREE KICK
sudarshan said:
Thanks.
Kindly go through my following poems too:
1) The Election
2)Nature's Power
Please opine on this too. I think you have missed it.
February 24th, 2011 12:46
sudarshan said:
Thanks.
Kindly go through my following poems too:
1) The Election
2)Nature's Power
Please opine on this too. I think you have missed it.
February 24th, 2011 12:46
THE FREE KICK
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet! I quite enjoyed this! Delightful! Excellent.
February 24th, 2011 00:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet! I quite enjoyed this! Delightful! Excellent.
February 24th, 2011 00:04
THE SHATTERED DREAM
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! I love it! Delightfully depicted...building excitement to the excellent punch line...beautifully done!
February 23rd, 2011 23:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! I love it! Delightfully depicted...building excitement to the excellent punch line...beautifully done!
February 23rd, 2011 23:16
ACIDS AND BASES
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you very much for the lesson (again). I quite enjoyed it!!!! Delightfully presented, Professor Sudarshan!
February 22nd, 2011 00:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you very much for the lesson (again). I quite enjoyed it!!!! Delightfully presented, Professor Sudarshan!
February 22nd, 2011 00:19
The Dangerous Dino
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Fascinating....poor, stupid Sam.
February 20th, 2011 00:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Fascinating....poor, stupid Sam.
February 20th, 2011 00:10
In Search of A pen
Cheeky Missy said:
Very cute, curious story! Silly hen! But what is the significance in the last line about "buns"?
February 16th, 2011 19:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Very cute, curious story! Silly hen! But what is the significance in the last line about "buns"?
February 16th, 2011 19:46
NATURE'S GREATNESS
Cheeky Missy said:
I love the image you paired with this little discussion on "nature"...it is evocative of the love you encourage therein. While the inclination of many of us IS to fall in love with and adore "nature"...practically worshiping it, yet the Lord God gave man the responsibility to steward it wisely unto Him, and to worship and adore only Him. Thank you for this thoughtful tribute to "nature," misguided though it seems.
February 14th, 2011 23:41
Cheeky Missy said:
I love the image you paired with this little discussion on "nature"...it is evocative of the love you encourage therein. While the inclination of many of us IS to fall in love with and adore "nature"...practically worshiping it, yet the Lord God gave man the responsibility to steward it wisely unto Him, and to worship and adore only Him. Thank you for this thoughtful tribute to "nature," misguided though it seems.
February 14th, 2011 23:41
PLANTS
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you very much for this instructive lesson on plants and their functioning!
February 14th, 2011 23:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you very much for this instructive lesson on plants and their functioning!
February 14th, 2011 23:36
GETTTING UP LATE
Cheeky Missy said:
Great! I loved it! Made me think a moment and then laugh! Excellent! Your lines and stanzas effectively make your point, yet I miss your usual use of end-rhyming. Delightful and humorous...and instructive.....thanks for posting it!
February 12th, 2011 22:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Great! I loved it! Made me think a moment and then laugh! Excellent! Your lines and stanzas effectively make your point, yet I miss your usual use of end-rhyming. Delightful and humorous...and instructive.....thanks for posting it!
February 12th, 2011 22:44
ODE TO MY MOTHER
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent!!!! What a beautiful, tender, rather comprehensive and delightful tribute this ode to your very precious mother is! Your rhyming and rythm is good. I really enjoyed this!
February 12th, 2011 22:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent!!!! What a beautiful, tender, rather comprehensive and delightful tribute this ode to your very precious mother is! Your rhyming and rythm is good. I really enjoyed this!
February 12th, 2011 22:40
ODE TO MY FATHER
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! This ode is a delightful, beautiful tribute to your dear father! Your rhyming and rythm was good and the sentiment so lovely....I quite enjoyed it!
February 12th, 2011 22:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! This ode is a delightful, beautiful tribute to your dear father! Your rhyming and rythm was good and the sentiment so lovely....I quite enjoyed it!
February 12th, 2011 22:36
THE COMPETITION
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently and beautifully depicted! Your conclusion was perfect! I love how you portrayed it via the rose, lily and finally lotus(which last, unfortunately I am unacquainted).
February 12th, 2011 13:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently and beautifully depicted! Your conclusion was perfect! I love how you portrayed it via the rose, lily and finally lotus(which last, unfortunately I am unacquainted).
February 12th, 2011 13:00
HAPPINESS
Cheeky Missy said:
It's an interesting discussion of happiness, especially concluding as you do that "the world is fair", which seems directly contradicting reality. You very well depicted thoughts of a happy mind in all you mentioned...thus well describing that transient mental state.
February 12th, 2011 12:32
Cheeky Missy said:
It's an interesting discussion of happiness, especially concluding as you do that "the world is fair", which seems directly contradicting reality. You very well depicted thoughts of a happy mind in all you mentioned...thus well describing that transient mental state.
February 12th, 2011 12:32
THE WORLD OF TELEVISION THROUGH MY EYES
sudarshan said:
THANK YOU.
KINDLY GO THROUGH MY NEXT POEM.
February 8th, 2011 22:00
sudarshan said:
THANK YOU.
KINDLY GO THROUGH MY NEXT POEM.
February 8th, 2011 22:00
THE WORLD OF TELEVISION THROUGH MY EYES
Cheeky Missy said:
Fun....interesting, enjoyable expression of the television's significance. Quite comprehensive, and so perfectly descriptive of it. Your concluding lines are also only too fitting seeing the computer is too similar with a more interactive touch, as we see here. Excellent!!! I quite enjoyed it!
February 8th, 2011 15:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Fun....interesting, enjoyable expression of the television's significance. Quite comprehensive, and so perfectly descriptive of it. Your concluding lines are also only too fitting seeing the computer is too similar with a more interactive touch, as we see here. Excellent!!! I quite enjoyed it!
February 8th, 2011 15:05
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