Comments received on poems by Whimsical_1
But At Least
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed
When we can live with the least life has to offer
We appreciate the good times more
Hang in there
The good times are in the post
October 6th, 2020 08:34
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed
When we can live with the least life has to offer
We appreciate the good times more
Hang in there
The good times are in the post
October 6th, 2020 08:34
The Sparkle
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that sparkle will be in you forever Whimsical.
Andy
October 2nd, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that sparkle will be in you forever Whimsical.
Andy
October 2nd, 2020 00:21
Long Days
Goldfinch60 said:
That frustration can get us in many ways but writing words on a page can ease the boredom. This time will pass and all will be well once more.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
That frustration can get us in many ways but writing words on a page can ease the boredom. This time will pass and all will be well once more.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 00:28
Long Days
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes long days of frustration indeed and thank you for versing the reasons why most of us are at this moment just trudging along -- but agreeing with Neville that time will pass and an end will come to this troublesome state of life. I look forward to reading more of your work.
September 29th, 2020 16:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes long days of frustration indeed and thank you for versing the reasons why most of us are at this moment just trudging along -- but agreeing with Neville that time will pass and an end will come to this troublesome state of life. I look forward to reading more of your work.
September 29th, 2020 16:17
Long Days
Neville said:
Ah but it will, just you wait and see... you are not the only one who feels frustrated by all that’s going on... I suspect most folk are eager for a return to a sense of increased normality... In the meantime I enjoyed my introduction to your writing... Stay safe n well,
Neville 👍
September 29th, 2020 13:51
Neville said:
Ah but it will, just you wait and see... you are not the only one who feels frustrated by all that’s going on... I suspect most folk are eager for a return to a sense of increased normality... In the meantime I enjoyed my introduction to your writing... Stay safe n well,
Neville 👍
September 29th, 2020 13:51
At sea
vanabba3 said:
Well, I am left to guess what happened to the ship to make it sink? It is short, and leaves the reader guessing...or this is a symbolic short poem to reflect a sinking feeling the author is trying to depict... Nice!
October 11th, 2016 21:17
vanabba3 said:
Well, I am left to guess what happened to the ship to make it sink? It is short, and leaves the reader guessing...or this is a symbolic short poem to reflect a sinking feeling the author is trying to depict... Nice!
October 11th, 2016 21:17
At sea
Summersounds68 said:
I can picture the mighty sea engulfing the entire ship and its crew. An adventuresome poem for sure. ~ Sonia
October 10th, 2016 10:45
Summersounds68 said:
I can picture the mighty sea engulfing the entire ship and its crew. An adventuresome poem for sure. ~ Sonia
October 10th, 2016 10:45
To Wear a Smile
Augustus said:
This is the life of a cutter. Interesting to cut on the chest. I love the way feelings or lack there of are described. Nicely crafted.
October 8th, 2016 22:12
Augustus said:
This is the life of a cutter. Interesting to cut on the chest. I love the way feelings or lack there of are described. Nicely crafted.
October 8th, 2016 22:12
To Wear a Smile
vanabba3 said:
Wow! I have never understood this concept of cutting oneself, but I know it is very common. I actually know a couple of people who used to do this, and I can't seem to wrap my head around why and how this effective... I would rather have a very strong drink myself... However, this poem is dark and puts the reader to guess what is making this person hurt so much... Great Job!!!
October 8th, 2016 19:31
vanabba3 said:
Wow! I have never understood this concept of cutting oneself, but I know it is very common. I actually know a couple of people who used to do this, and I can't seem to wrap my head around why and how this effective... I would rather have a very strong drink myself... However, this poem is dark and puts the reader to guess what is making this person hurt so much... Great Job!!!
October 8th, 2016 19:31
Crisis
vanabba3 said:
Wow! and I thought I wrote about the darkness... You have this character, (hopefully not you) in such a trapped downward spiral from everything and everyone around him, I can actually feel the pain as I read...
October 7th, 2016 20:53
vanabba3 said:
Wow! and I thought I wrote about the darkness... You have this character, (hopefully not you) in such a trapped downward spiral from everything and everyone around him, I can actually feel the pain as I read...
October 7th, 2016 20:53
Crisis
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS WHIM ~ for a very elegantly written poem pulsating with rhythm and very clever rhyme ! The contents however is less sparkling ! The poem describes a downward descent for helpless.to breathles and finally "The time is now ~ I'm ready to end this" Hope your depression stops short at that. I've had a busy week ~ but it's now FRIDAY (5pm and i'm home) so the cloud has lifted ! LET THE WEEKEND BEGIN ! (Hope that lifts you up !) Yours BRIAN
October 7th, 2016 10:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS WHIM ~ for a very elegantly written poem pulsating with rhythm and very clever rhyme ! The contents however is less sparkling ! The poem describes a downward descent for helpless.to breathles and finally "The time is now ~ I'm ready to end this" Hope your depression stops short at that. I've had a busy week ~ but it's now FRIDAY (5pm and i'm home) so the cloud has lifted ! LET THE WEEKEND BEGIN ! (Hope that lifts you up !) Yours BRIAN
October 7th, 2016 10:42
Crisis
WriteBeLight said:
In review of this piece, I feel what you are going through, alone and stuck in a situation of which you have no power over. I like that you got right to the point. Excellent!
October 7th, 2016 09:03
WriteBeLight said:
In review of this piece, I feel what you are going through, alone and stuck in a situation of which you have no power over. I like that you got right to the point. Excellent!
October 7th, 2016 09:03
Crisis
Augustus said:
I am no expert, but you poem reads effortlessly and beautifully. The message is clear that outwardly you appear o.k., but inside you are in overwhelmed with turmoil and depressed. I love "my beaten soul shakes and cowers."
October 7th, 2016 08:56
Augustus said:
I am no expert, but you poem reads effortlessly and beautifully. The message is clear that outwardly you appear o.k., but inside you are in overwhelmed with turmoil and depressed. I love "my beaten soul shakes and cowers."
October 7th, 2016 08:56
The Captive
Jeff said:
This is a great poem...very well written...excellent job
October 6th, 2016 04:02
Jeff said:
This is a great poem...very well written...excellent job
October 6th, 2016 04:02
The Captive
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks you for a very beautifully penned first poem with a very enigmatic message ~ loved it ! Especially the last crushing verse !
A life without mercy ~ A husband of hate ~ She was never worthy ~ Of a better fate ! Yours BRIAN Please check my poems ~ THANKS B
October 5th, 2016 11:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks you for a very beautifully penned first poem with a very enigmatic message ~ loved it ! Especially the last crushing verse !
A life without mercy ~ A husband of hate ~ She was never worthy ~ Of a better fate ! Yours BRIAN Please check my poems ~ THANKS B
October 5th, 2016 11:34
