Comments received on poems by Ashley
Pain
Emi said:
This is really beautiful - I quite enjoyed it, though it was also quite sad. Very well written. :)
March 3rd, 2011 17:41
Emi said:
This is really beautiful - I quite enjoyed it, though it was also quite sad. Very well written. :)
March 3rd, 2011 17:41
Pain
Cheeky Missy said:
Apt depiction of your intense desire and suffering....but you should never use the Lord's name like you did in the second line. It's miserable how deeply we can fall in love, be so hatefully used and deceived, continue loving regardless, and yet, frankly such low fellows are not even worth it.
February 23rd, 2011 23:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Apt depiction of your intense desire and suffering....but you should never use the Lord's name like you did in the second line. It's miserable how deeply we can fall in love, be so hatefully used and deceived, continue loving regardless, and yet, frankly such low fellows are not even worth it.
February 23rd, 2011 23:52
Despair
Cheeky Missy said:
Very well-written, depicting rather poignantly the very real despair and heartache. You expressed it so perfectly, all the swirling, tormenting thoughts, from admitting it was doomed, to denying it should be, to being unable to live without, thus despairing....Excellent!!! Bittersweetly beautiful!
February 8th, 2011 21:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Very well-written, depicting rather poignantly the very real despair and heartache. You expressed it so perfectly, all the swirling, tormenting thoughts, from admitting it was doomed, to denying it should be, to being unable to live without, thus despairing....Excellent!!! Bittersweetly beautiful!
February 8th, 2011 21:24
Despair
Emi said:
So sad. :( Beautifully written - I love the emotion you put into it! I love it!
February 7th, 2011 20:09
Emi said:
So sad. :( Beautifully written - I love the emotion you put into it! I love it!
February 7th, 2011 20:09
Despair
StormyDay said:
Beautiful, sad, and well written. I like your style.
February 7th, 2011 15:48
StormyDay said:
Beautiful, sad, and well written. I like your style.
February 7th, 2011 15:48
Tears
Ashley said:
Yes unfortunantly the eyes are a problem when you try to hide the pain.
February 3rd, 2011 13:09
Ashley said:
Yes unfortunantly the eyes are a problem when you try to hide the pain.
February 3rd, 2011 13:09
Tears
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently expressed, beautiful depiction of the heartache! You remind me of when my last boyfriend broke up with me...doing it over the phone, I had the luxury of crying unknown. But your situation is worse, for you are interacting while drowning, hiding behind a smiling mask.....! How very frustrating, and almost hopeless...you've expressed it so VERY well.
February 3rd, 2011 12:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently expressed, beautiful depiction of the heartache! You remind me of when my last boyfriend broke up with me...doing it over the phone, I had the luxury of crying unknown. But your situation is worse, for you are interacting while drowning, hiding behind a smiling mask.....! How very frustrating, and almost hopeless...you've expressed it so VERY well.
February 3rd, 2011 12:09
Tears
Emi said:
This is really sad. :( I know how that feels... :( Very beautifully written. I love it. :)
February 3rd, 2011 10:25
Emi said:
This is really sad. :( I know how that feels... :( Very beautifully written. I love it. :)
February 3rd, 2011 10:25
