Comments received on poems by P.H.Rose



My wife...
WriteBeLight said:

So sweetly put!

December 18th, 2016 08:46

Depression
myinnervoice said:

I think most people think that just because your smiling your not in pain, and i think thats the hardest part. It\'s so ingrained to act in such a way, but secretly you hope someone can see the sadness in your eyes. maybe then you\'ll be a little less alone. Beautiful and honest. Thank you.

December 17th, 2016 03:43

Power to change...
Augustus said:

Been there. Enjoyed.

December 16th, 2016 13:06

Power to change...
Christina8 said:

I think this is an an excellent poem. I wonder if there are a lot of people who wonder \"what if\" this or that. It\'s a great poem and I just know your wife and kids are lucky to have you. Merry Christmas!

December 16th, 2016 12:34

Power to change...
WriteBeLight said:

Very precious thoughts in your poem. Like it very much.

December 16th, 2016 06:31

A walk back from the pub (Bar)
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 15th, 2016 09:11

A walk back from the pub (Bar)
notapoet said:

Love this! Awesome FUN AND WITTY write PHR... and I like the translation at the end for us yanks :)

December 15th, 2016 08:59

A walk back from the pub (Bar)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GREAT SEASONAL POEM PHR ! One all of us Guys can emphasise with ~ especially fertilising the Tree ! Make sure you\'re not in Michigan ~ your pecker will drop off with Frost Bite ! I always choose GF\'s who drink in moderation ~ then I can drink and they can drive. Although I am warned that when you get married ALL WIVES are driven to drink and consequently unable to drive you home from the PUB ! Yours BRIAN

December 15th, 2016 04:43

my wife\'s shopping day...
Christina8 said:

All of us say \"I\'ll only be ten minutes dear.\" You men are saints! Very well written poem!

December 14th, 2016 14:15

my wife\'s shopping day...
Tony36 said:

Love this poem

December 14th, 2016 13:19

my wife\'s shopping day...
SharonMoemise said:

Great poem. Lots of humor in it, I could read on and on. Great job

December 14th, 2016 10:19

my wife\'s shopping day...
gelyn said:

hi,

I\'m laughing while reading this.. you almost loss your temper here.

the lines that mark on me are htese

Just at the breaking point of no return,
you walk from shop ,with a bag laden arm.
With a smile as wide as our river\'s estuary,
You\'ve finally bough clothes as Is your destiny..


well done

Gel


December 14th, 2016 09:21

my wife\'s shopping day...
WriteBeLight said:

I understand your impatience in this piece. We have all been there! HA HA

December 14th, 2016 06:53

The first 17 years on the 13th......
Augustus said:

Nicely done. Very interesting story.

December 13th, 2016 19:48

The first 17 years on the 13th......
Tony36 said:

Awesome write, very much enjoyed reading it

December 13th, 2016 10:17

The first 17 years on the 13th......
WriteBeLight said:

Unbelievable! Bummer! Great poem, though...:)

December 13th, 2016 05:58

The first 17 years on the 13th......
Christina8 said:

What a wonderful poem. Interesting story!

December 13th, 2016 05:38

Depression
Liam Lawless said:

This is an amazing poem so well written and very true for a lot of poeple. Well done.

December 12th, 2016 16:56

Depression
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 12th, 2016 08:01

Depression
WriteBeLight said:

Great job and to the point. Some days, like today for me, I would just like to stay home. Weather is bad. But, I will grab my coffee and head out as always, with a smile, hoping my mood will improve.

December 12th, 2016 06:30

Getting old
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 11th, 2016 10:28

Getting old
WriteBeLight said:

Very cute and great point! Wish we could stop the progression of age, but we cannot...:)

December 11th, 2016 08:19

Getting old
SabreLi said:

I like the realism in this one; many will relate because age is not the only reason that our refectuons can become unrecognisable. Well written! Xx

December 11th, 2016 07:55

Henry Smithfield. The fisherman
Augustus said:

We have the shrimp boats in Louisiana. Nicely done. PS check first word.

December 10th, 2016 23:18

Henry Smithfield. The fisherman
Tony36 said:

I used to live on the East coast. Reminded me of those days, great write

December 10th, 2016 18:44

Henry Smithfield. The fisherman
Christina8 said:

Fantastic poem! Very descriptive. Enjoyed reading!

December 10th, 2016 11:04

Henry Smithfield. The fisherman
WriteBeLight said:

I agree. I could see the horizon meet the water and his leathery face. Nice work!

December 10th, 2016 07:16

A Lost soul.....
Christina8 said:

Thanks for sharing such a great poem! I loved it! Even though it was sad...

December 9th, 2016 14:25

A Lost soul.....
WriteBeLight said:

Very descriptive, as always! Very well done!

December 9th, 2016 06:38

Mr Wong\'s kitchen
Augustus said:

I believe we all have a Mr. Wong in our city today. I can picture you outside as you describe. Nicely done.

December 8th, 2016 16:40



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