Comments received on poems by P.H.Rose



fulfilled or failure...??
janetaylor said:

incredibly thought provoking art! and from reading your bio and knowing that your children/grandchildren mean so much to you ~ i am confident on the question of fulfilled or failure that you are definitely the former and not the latter. a job well done!

January 25th, 2017 17:04

Grief.....
Sefrin said:

What an astonishing read. This can truly touch any heart. Your words shine in a weary time.

January 21st, 2017 15:58

Ellis lapage the female mouse detective and part time opera singer..
Christina8 said:

Awesome! Your grandkids are so lucky! like WBL said, something to cherish, for sure! Great job on this--Christina

January 21st, 2017 10:35

Ellis lapage the female mouse detective and part time opera singer..
Michael Edwards said:

Great one - so uplifting.

January 21st, 2017 10:24

Ellis lapage the female mouse detective and part time opera singer..
Augustus said:

I bet your grand kids love you. Great story line.

January 21st, 2017 10:16

Ellis lapage the female mouse detective and part time opera singer..
Aa Harvey said:

:) Nice poem that made me smile. It\'s a good story too.

January 21st, 2017 10:01


Ellis lapage the female mouse detective and part time opera singer..
Shakerite said:

Quite an imagination . You should consider publishing

January 21st, 2017 08:34

Ellis lapage the female mouse detective and part time opera singer..
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha...
Thank you WBL
I\'m trying to get
My niece to draw
Some illustrations
For me..

January 21st, 2017 06:53

Ellis lapage the female mouse detective and part time opera singer..
WriteBeLight said:

Wonderful! Bravoooooo! I am clapping my hands as I type. The kids will cherish this!

January 21st, 2017 06:50

Grief.....
Christina8 said:

This is a wonderful write and I know it sure fits into my life. Stunning tribute--I know you didn\'t know the woman, but it hit a chord. Thanks for sharing!

January 20th, 2017 18:05

Grief.....
Shakerite said:

A fitting eulogy. Really felt the moment

January 20th, 2017 11:26

Grief.....
WriteBeLight said:

A poem of perfection about a difficult time. So sorry about the news, though. :(


January 20th, 2017 06:32

Grief.....
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FRIEND ~ love your eulogy on GRIEF ~ I have faced \"Death of a Loved One\" many times and your words mirror my thoughts ~ Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN. Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B

January 20th, 2017 06:15

Grief.....
Michael Edwards said:

And exactly as they came is just perfect.

January 20th, 2017 02:31

Doubt
Christina8 said:

Great rhyming poem. Such a great topic to talk about because I think a lot of us have that darn parrot on our shoulders as poets. Thank you so much for this brilliant write! I loved it!

January 19th, 2017 14:58

Doubt
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 19th, 2017 14:24

Doubt
Augustus said:

Remarkable. I like this a lot. I too have that disquieting thought more often than I like.

January 19th, 2017 11:13

Doubt
WriteBeLight said:

Do not listen to Doubt! Great job and I do not doubt that at all! :)


January 19th, 2017 10:11

Doubt
notapoet said:

Awesome write P.H.R. this one hit home, I too have the parrot perched on my shoulder at times but now I make sure he sits on the right one because i\'m half deaf in my right ear...I agree with Kat, a great poem from a great poet!

January 19th, 2017 08:57

Doubt
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for reminding us FRIEND ~ that there are people and circumstances that make us doubt our abilities ~ such things a dangerous ! I hope the Parrot perishes ~ we need your MUSE on fire ~ Your BRIAN

January 19th, 2017 08:35

Doubt
Michael Edwards said:

Brilliant PH - also love the reference to the parrot on the shoulder - a useful euphemism I might use.

January 19th, 2017 07:49

Doubt
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - this is truly showing Doubt the door for it can effect all writers at times - an inspiring read

January 19th, 2017 04:33

My Wonderful..... Selfish....Dad...
Christina8 said:

Great poem! Unfortunately I feel your pain. I would rather have no dad than the DONOR that I have. He doesn\'t call or write. I wonder how a man can do without his kids and grandkids like that. I think forgiveness is key. Like I said, great poem!

January 18th, 2017 13:42

My Wonderful..... Selfish....Dad...
P.H.Rose said:

Thank you WBL..
I have gotten better
With age.. but sometimes
When sat alone I
Get very angry
I would do without
Breath before my kids
And grandchildren
I cannot understand
Anyone that wouldn\'t

January 18th, 2017 12:39

My Wonderful..... Selfish....Dad...
WriteBeLight said:

Great job and ending. But, sorry that happened and you feel that way. I can relate, and have sometimes felt angry. But, I am fortunate as time has healed me. Hope you can heal too!

January 18th, 2017 12:33

fulfilled or failure...??
Michael Edwards said:

Superbly expressed - enjoyed this poem no end.

January 18th, 2017 01:05

fulfilled or failure...??
Christina8 said:

I agree with WBL. I think we all have these questions. Well done! Christina

January 17th, 2017 20:44

fulfilled or failure...??
Augustus said:

I have the same questions. Nicely done.

January 17th, 2017 20:28

fulfilled or failure...??
WriteBeLight said:

Very thoughtful questions. Your writing is time well spent, that is for sure :)

January 17th, 2017 19:21



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