Comments received on poems by elsiewarrenswords
Spring
dusk arising said:
You capture so much here of the daily joys springtime can bring into our lives. A pleasure to read. Sadly I shan\'t see much of this years springtime wonderland thanks to lockdown... i wrote about that today, please take a peep.
April 23rd, 2020 04:34
dusk arising said:
You capture so much here of the daily joys springtime can bring into our lives. A pleasure to read. Sadly I shan\'t see much of this years springtime wonderland thanks to lockdown... i wrote about that today, please take a peep.
April 23rd, 2020 04:34
Friday May 5th 2017
dusk arising said:
Nice one! But lets see what life has done for your expression in the intervening years. Life and loves are such great teachers for the poetic mind.
Look forward to more of yours on mps.
March 26th, 2020 03:52
dusk arising said:
Nice one! But lets see what life has done for your expression in the intervening years. Life and loves are such great teachers for the poetic mind.
Look forward to more of yours on mps.
March 26th, 2020 03:52
Friday May 5th 2017
FredPeyer said:
Elsie, you came back with a bang! Very nicely written! You may ponder the past, I ponder your poem.
March 25th, 2020 13:32
FredPeyer said:
Elsie, you came back with a bang! Very nicely written! You may ponder the past, I ponder your poem.
March 25th, 2020 13:32
Lasted a second but reeling for days
willyweed said:
sounds like someone is in Love. nice write, write on ! ww
March 22nd, 2017 15:04
willyweed said:
sounds like someone is in Love. nice write, write on ! ww
March 22nd, 2017 15:04
Bitter love
kevin browne said:
it\' a very difficult task indeed when dealing with the issues of losing something you love dearly. I have witnessed many people who have treated there partners badly and unfairly and take them for granted without even taking a moment to stop to think how you would feel when they arn\'t around anymore. you will find, even if some people can\'t admit it, but the pain can become unbearable and all you wan\'t is for that person to come back. remember, it\'s always a good reminded to hold close to your heart the ones you love and the things you have. thank you for raising this emotion. a good concise poem.
March 22nd, 2017 10:23
kevin browne said:
it\' a very difficult task indeed when dealing with the issues of losing something you love dearly. I have witnessed many people who have treated there partners badly and unfairly and take them for granted without even taking a moment to stop to think how you would feel when they arn\'t around anymore. you will find, even if some people can\'t admit it, but the pain can become unbearable and all you wan\'t is for that person to come back. remember, it\'s always a good reminded to hold close to your heart the ones you love and the things you have. thank you for raising this emotion. a good concise poem.
March 22nd, 2017 10:23
Flowers
clark_taylor said:
I honestly loved this. I don\'t usually tend to comment on poems but they way you describe heartbreak and the way you create the image of repair with sun and water is just beautiful and creative. I really loved this. :)
March 14th, 2017 15:27
clark_taylor said:
I honestly loved this. I don\'t usually tend to comment on poems but they way you describe heartbreak and the way you create the image of repair with sun and water is just beautiful and creative. I really loved this. :)
March 14th, 2017 15:27
Me and you
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you and me,what kind of life would it be,if there were no you and me..
January 16th, 2017 14:24
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you and me,what kind of life would it be,if there were no you and me..
January 16th, 2017 14:24
Stored small caverns
WriteBeLight said:
I think it is because of texting...haha. I like the idea behind your poem. Merry Christmas!
December 22nd, 2016 16:53
WriteBeLight said:
I think it is because of texting...haha. I like the idea behind your poem. Merry Christmas!
December 22nd, 2016 16:53
Pickle parade
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ELSIE ~ My experience is that WRITING POETRY is always CATHARTIC ~ and it makes you feel better as well ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 21st, 2016 18:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ELSIE ~ My experience is that WRITING POETRY is always CATHARTIC ~ and it makes you feel better as well ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 21st, 2016 18:15
Pickle parade
Tony36 said:
I find writing very healthy when life kicks you down. Great write
December 21st, 2016 12:47
Tony36 said:
I find writing very healthy when life kicks you down. Great write
December 21st, 2016 12:47
Pickle parade
WriteBeLight said:
Put it down on paper! Like the idea of your poem...:)
December 21st, 2016 06:50
WriteBeLight said:
Put it down on paper! Like the idea of your poem...:)
December 21st, 2016 06:50
Bitter love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ELSIE ~ As we get older (I\'m 33 and still single) we all get a taste of LOVE TURNED BITTER. What makes it worse (as your poem says) is that it was so so good ~ before it all turned so so sour. Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 20th, 2016 08:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ELSIE ~ As we get older (I\'m 33 and still single) we all get a taste of LOVE TURNED BITTER. What makes it worse (as your poem says) is that it was so so good ~ before it all turned so so sour. Hugs ~ BRIAN
December 20th, 2016 08:42
Bitter love
WriteBeLight said:
Very descriptive and I am sorry that the person in the poem was treated like that. Cruel and bitter love expressed well.
December 20th, 2016 05:33
WriteBeLight said:
Very descriptive and I am sorry that the person in the poem was treated like that. Cruel and bitter love expressed well.
December 20th, 2016 05:33
Him
Christina8 said:
Beautifully written poem but such a sad ending. Great job though!
December 19th, 2016 21:34
Christina8 said:
Beautifully written poem but such a sad ending. Great job though!
December 19th, 2016 21:34
Leaves of depression
Gothic_Girl said:
amazing good job i just hope you feel better
November 27th, 2016 01:38
Gothic_Girl said:
amazing good job i just hope you feel better
November 27th, 2016 01:38
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