Comments received on poems by berdnt_victoria



She Does Not Fear Death
SilentLaugh said:

I love your poem! SO awesome! I want to know if you want to read my new poem TIME TICKS.

December 20th, 2016 12:46

Babygirl
Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome write

December 9th, 2016 14:46

Babygirl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS VICTORIA ~ A perfect poem but bursting with PATHOS. My heart cries for each BABY GIRL born into my extended FAMILY ~ there have been TWO this year and another one due in FEBRUARY, They are all perfect BUT even in Democracies like the UK and the USA ~ Females are still more prey to Pedophiles and with a President-elect like TRUMP even more so ! We all need to cherish and protect all our BABY GIRLS ~ AMEN Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 9th, 2016 12:39

Babygirl
WriteBeLight said:

Very encouraging poem!

December 9th, 2016 12:36

Dead and Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhhhh VICTORIA ~ Another poem where you remember your cuttings and the temporary release and relief they gave you f Yes ANGEL th e World is a hard place and when it treats us badly we all want to give in and quench our pain with blood letting or drugs or alcohol or even suicide ! I am thrilled the GIRL is happier now and I am praying that her pain really is ALL GONE ~ FOREVER ! Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 8th, 2016 14:25

Goodbye
Tony36 said:

Sad that anyone should do that to themselves. Great write

December 7th, 2016 14:09

Goodbye
WriteBeLight said:

Wow, not pretty. But, your poem was on point and smooth.

December 7th, 2016 12:20

OKAY!
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 6th, 2016 14:16

Past Me, Future Me
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 5th, 2016 14:43

Past Me, Future Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW VICTORIA ~ Thanks for sharing a challenging poem ~ we should all value the \"Skin we\'re in\" The PRESENT ME ! I love the present you because its the only one I know and you are LOVELY and a great poet ! The PAST YOU sounds lovely as well and the FUTURE YOU is what you make it ! I love your last stanza Live ~ Learn ~ Love ~ You all can do this ~ I know you can ~ Just believe in yourself ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 5th, 2016 12:35

I Walk Alone
SabreLi said:

What a great poem, even if the subject is sad. We must all learn to walk alone because not everybody that started with us will end with us. But from isolation can be birthed the greatest of love - for ourself. When the right people begin to walk with you they will be blown away by your strength, and you will have learned that you don\'t need to lean on anyone else xx

December 4th, 2016 14:36

I Walk Alone
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 2nd, 2016 15:00

I Walk Alone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhhh VICTORIA ~ It seems so so sad to me that a lovely Lady like you has to walk alone ~ no one to hold your hand ! I will hold your hand and walk with you ~ if you just answer one simple question ~ WHERE ARE YOU GOING ? Thanks for sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN

December 2nd, 2016 13:21

Mirror
Tony36 said:

Sad write, no one needs to do such things to themselves.

December 1st, 2016 14:20

Mirror
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

OMG VICTORIA ~ This poem starts so so sad and downbeat ~ I almost stopped reading to pray for you again ! But I\'m glad I didn\'t because you are saying all you need is love and belief ! I LOVE YOU ! I BELIEVE IN YOU !! So please put down the razor and let us all hug you back into LIFE ~ AMEN That\'s what we all want ~ The REAL YOU ~ The one we ALL LOVE ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX

December 1st, 2016 13:53

Mirror
willyweed said:

I am so glad you are coming out of the depression, and I would bet your Dad is overjoyed and proud about now! nice poem! ww

December 1st, 2016 13:20

Daddy Is Gone
Christina8 said:

Welcome to MPS. I\'m so sorry for your loss. Your poem is beautiful and I\'m sure he would have loved it.

November 30th, 2016 14:41

Daddy Is Gone
Tony36 said:

Welcome to MPS. Great write

November 30th, 2016 14:21

Daddy Is Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME VICTORIA ~ Thanks for your first poem. Beautifully written but a sad sad subject. You only have one DAD and as you say \"When he\'s gone ~ he\'s gone ! \" Six years is a long time ~ BUT ~ it doesn\'t get easier ~ I lost a BROTHER about five years ago but it was like yesterday. The BIBLE TEACHES that we will meet our loved ones again in Heaven and I\'m glad you have that hope. Your challenge now it to take care and grow up toi be the :LADY your Daddy would have wanted you to be ~ AMEN. Thinking of you ~ praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN

November 30th, 2016 12:18

Daddy Is Gone
Anonamus said:

Lovely poem. I\'m so sorry for what you\'ve been through. I\'m sure your dad would have loved this poem.

November 30th, 2016 12:07

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