Comments received on poems by berdnt_victoria
What Happened?
Christina8 said:
This is a good poem, and you\'ll find that young girl someday. :-)
January 18th, 2017 14:03
Christina8 said:
This is a good poem, and you\'ll find that young girl someday. :-)
January 18th, 2017 14:03
What Happened?
WriteBeLight said:
The young girl is always there and you will find her again. It is unfortunate that abuse, etc. can change such a sweet soul. But, you have the strength as a strong young woman to keep ahold of the young girl\'s hand. Great job on your poem :)
January 18th, 2017 09:50
WriteBeLight said:
The young girl is always there and you will find her again. It is unfortunate that abuse, etc. can change such a sweet soul. But, you have the strength as a strong young woman to keep ahold of the young girl\'s hand. Great job on your poem :)
January 18th, 2017 09:50
What Happened?
Tris Eaton said:
While this is quite dark, it is a very good write. And I think that some people could relate to it all too much. It\'s nice to see people actually write things like this because some are too scared of being judged for it. Again, amazing write.
January 18th, 2017 09:25
Tris Eaton said:
While this is quite dark, it is a very good write. And I think that some people could relate to it all too much. It\'s nice to see people actually write things like this because some are too scared of being judged for it. Again, amazing write.
January 18th, 2017 09:25
Feel Alive Again
Terry dailey said:
Good write. I experiemced this very thing with my own daughter. I walked through each word written. To cut a wrist is a slash of a soul. Releasing pain on drops of of blood instead of tears. Now my daughter lives a new dream of life ... VICTORIA living through a nightmare with such a great poem to bring here has brought life to many. A true poet envokes emotion you have done this true poet.....GOOD JOB
January 17th, 2017 00:58
Terry dailey said:
Good write. I experiemced this very thing with my own daughter. I walked through each word written. To cut a wrist is a slash of a soul. Releasing pain on drops of of blood instead of tears. Now my daughter lives a new dream of life ... VICTORIA living through a nightmare with such a great poem to bring here has brought life to many. A true poet envokes emotion you have done this true poet.....GOOD JOB
January 17th, 2017 00:58
Feel Alive Again
My_Brain said:
This poem gave me the feels. I hope you know that you are a very good poet and you have lots of people that really enjoy reading your poems everyday. And your not alone in this world, I\'ve felt the way your feeling to and there is a way out. I\'m here if you need to talk! great poem! ~Bella
January 16th, 2017 13:23
My_Brain said:
This poem gave me the feels. I hope you know that you are a very good poet and you have lots of people that really enjoy reading your poems everyday. And your not alone in this world, I\'ve felt the way your feeling to and there is a way out. I\'m here if you need to talk! great poem! ~Bella
January 16th, 2017 13:23
Feel Alive Again
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing VICTORIA ~ a chilling poem but in my experience it has a ring of truth. I have known several people who in the end killed themselves (in a variety of ways) ~ JUST TO FEEL ALIVE ! Take care ~ thinking of you 24/7 ~ BRIAN
January 16th, 2017 12:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing VICTORIA ~ a chilling poem but in my experience it has a ring of truth. I have known several people who in the end killed themselves (in a variety of ways) ~ JUST TO FEEL ALIVE ! Take care ~ thinking of you 24/7 ~ BRIAN
January 16th, 2017 12:35
She Does Not Fear Death
neharocks said:
I just loved your poem. I have become your fan.
January 14th, 2017 01:03
neharocks said:
I just loved your poem. I have become your fan.
January 14th, 2017 01:03
World Of Lies
neharocks said:
It\'s really beautiful poem. Overflow of powerful feelings. Loved it
January 14th, 2017 01:02
neharocks said:
It\'s really beautiful poem. Overflow of powerful feelings. Loved it
January 14th, 2017 01:02
World Of Lies
My_Brain said:
Wow! Very powerful poem! I hope your doing okay.
January 13th, 2017 18:44
My_Brain said:
Wow! Very powerful poem! I hope your doing okay.
January 13th, 2017 18:44
World Of Lies
WriteBeLight said:
Great poem although very difficult topic. You did a great job with the message. But, hold on and keep writing to get the feelings down on paper. It helps.
January 13th, 2017 12:33
WriteBeLight said:
Great poem although very difficult topic. You did a great job with the message. But, hold on and keep writing to get the feelings down on paper. It helps.
January 13th, 2017 12:33
World Of Lies
Phoenix8523 said:
When we\'re too tired to fight. I tried this path more than twice and my daughter\'s a recovering cutter. This is when we need to hunker down and ride it out, nothing lasts forever. So sad, but very well written! -- phoenix
January 13th, 2017 11:56
Phoenix8523 said:
When we\'re too tired to fight. I tried this path more than twice and my daughter\'s a recovering cutter. This is when we need to hunker down and ride it out, nothing lasts forever. So sad, but very well written! -- phoenix
January 13th, 2017 11:56
Silent Screams
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW VIVTORIA ~ This is a scary poem ~ because the SCREAMS are internal and not external ! Sometimes when I try to escape he status quo ~ My Friends say ~ you can\'t run away because the problem is you. This i feel is the crux of this poem also. Thanks for sharing ~ Your understanding Friend ~ BRIAN
January 12th, 2017 16:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW VIVTORIA ~ This is a scary poem ~ because the SCREAMS are internal and not external ! Sometimes when I try to escape he status quo ~ My Friends say ~ you can\'t run away because the problem is you. This i feel is the crux of this poem also. Thanks for sharing ~ Your understanding Friend ~ BRIAN
January 12th, 2017 16:17
Silent Screams
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant poem. I think the troubled mind in the poem should always try to find someone to scream to and get those feelings out. I scream to my writing skills. You did well with this. I felt the frustration and pain :)
January 12th, 2017 12:43
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant poem. I think the troubled mind in the poem should always try to find someone to scream to and get those feelings out. I scream to my writing skills. You did well with this. I felt the frustration and pain :)
January 12th, 2017 12:43
Memories
willyweed said:
besides the girl talk, this is well crafted. I like it. ww
January 11th, 2017 23:08
willyweed said:
besides the girl talk, this is well crafted. I like it. ww
January 11th, 2017 23:08
Memories
My_Brain said:
Nice job! I have had that happen to me like three times. It sucks. But it makes great poems.
January 11th, 2017 15:03
My_Brain said:
Nice job! I have had that happen to me like three times. It sucks. But it makes great poems.
January 11th, 2017 15:03
Memories
Hopey_xx said:
Love it... This has happened to me too. When a friend changes, and acts like the good memories never happened, its hard. Great poem though!
January 11th, 2017 12:19
Hopey_xx said:
Love it... This has happened to me too. When a friend changes, and acts like the good memories never happened, its hard. Great poem though!
January 11th, 2017 12:19
One Step Closer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a very challenging and poignant poem VICTORIA. I have lost Friends & Relations ~ through suicide and an unforeseen accident ~ some under 30 and it is very hard to bear. As your elegant poem suggests ~ I will never forget them ~ but I do regret the fact that thy are no longer HERE WITH ME ! That is the tragedy especially of SUICIDE. In the UK we have suicide counselling through the Samaritans and Friends of mine ~ who are Samaritans have succeeded in bringing many back from the brink. Thanks for sharing ~ every Blessing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
January 10th, 2017 12:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a very challenging and poignant poem VICTORIA. I have lost Friends & Relations ~ through suicide and an unforeseen accident ~ some under 30 and it is very hard to bear. As your elegant poem suggests ~ I will never forget them ~ but I do regret the fact that thy are no longer HERE WITH ME ! That is the tragedy especially of SUICIDE. In the UK we have suicide counselling through the Samaritans and Friends of mine ~ who are Samaritans have succeeded in bringing many back from the brink. Thanks for sharing ~ every Blessing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
January 10th, 2017 12:04
Black And Blue
My_Brain said:
wow! That brought tears so my eyes. Very emotional read. Great job!
January 9th, 2017 11:53
My_Brain said:
wow! That brought tears so my eyes. Very emotional read. Great job!
January 9th, 2017 11:53
Broken Promises
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you VICTORIA for sharing anither poem with us from your broken but resolute heart. It made me sad because all Men are not like that ! If a make a promise to my current GF I keep it and I respect her trust in me. Men don\'t always realise the damage they do by treating their promises lightly ~ but thy also underestimates the POWER of a LADY to say \"enough is enough\" and to walk away with her head held high as you have done. Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Yoiurs BRIAN.
January 4th, 2017 17:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you VICTORIA for sharing anither poem with us from your broken but resolute heart. It made me sad because all Men are not like that ! If a make a promise to my current GF I keep it and I respect her trust in me. Men don\'t always realise the damage they do by treating their promises lightly ~ but thy also underestimates the POWER of a LADY to say \"enough is enough\" and to walk away with her head held high as you have done. Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Yoiurs BRIAN.
January 4th, 2017 17:12
Broken Promises
Christina8 said:
Great poem and good for you for not shedding any more tears over him! -Christina
January 4th, 2017 12:23
Christina8 said:
Great poem and good for you for not shedding any more tears over him! -Christina
January 4th, 2017 12:23
You Wonder Why
Christina8 said:
This is a well written but SAD poem. I just feel for you. I hope it helps to write, and I hope you\'ll write more and stay with us. Thanks for sharing your poem.--Christina
January 3rd, 2017 19:32
Christina8 said:
This is a well written but SAD poem. I just feel for you. I hope it helps to write, and I hope you\'ll write more and stay with us. Thanks for sharing your poem.--Christina
January 3rd, 2017 19:32
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