Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



SCRATCH IT ?
Neville said:

where there\'s a will, there\'s a way..
and
where there\'s a whole, there\'s a wayward soul, with a pen and a brush and a.........

January 11th, 2019 06:43

SCRATCH IT ?
orchidee said:

Oh lol M. And now a refined version. Sings: \'There\'s a hole in my bucket\'.

January 11th, 2019 02:53

SCRATCH IT ?
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Michael, my first laugh of the day.

January 11th, 2019 01:53

SIMPLE CHORDS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ A fine poem exaling the MUSIC & DANCE of Nature. Please check my University Poem and the Wiffenpoof Song ~ Yours as always BRIAN !

January 10th, 2019 10:00

SIMPLE CHORDS
Fay Slimm. said:

Lovely this delicate introduction to a tale which could have an interesting sequel - - great read again Mike.

January 10th, 2019 04:49

SIMPLE CHORDS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Yep, no use being too cryptic, or no one knows what we\'re on about - including ourselves maybe!
Is this \'Me, Myself, I, or Miss Berles\' writing this poem?

January 10th, 2019 02:43

SIMPLE CHORDS
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful, dancing to Nature\'s Symphony is glorious.

January 10th, 2019 02:36

WINTER CLOSES (1)
Aislinn Wilson said:

Reminds me of Bonnie Dobson and Vashti Bunyan in the best of ways.

January 9th, 2019 13:09

WINTER CLOSES (2)
Aislinn Wilson said:

Stunning. Am I to assume that is your artistic work as well? It\'s beautiful.

January 9th, 2019 13:07

NO MORE A DREAMER
Aislinn Wilson said:

Hauntingly tragic but important and inspiring nonetheless. I\'m forever a fan of your ability to conjure emotion with so few words. It\'s good to be back and see poems such as these, especially from you.

January 9th, 2019 10:34

NO MORE A DREAMER
Neville said:

is this a tragedy, wimsey or a comedy by any chance... enjoyed tho and that watercolour is summat else... N

January 9th, 2019 09:00

NO MORE A DREAMER
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Very DROLL UNCLE MIKE ! JUST HAVING AN EARLY LUNCH ~ Hairdressing Science @ 1 pm ~ Never a dull moment ! Love the ABSTRCT with the transient water colour ! We are all dreamers and Ive dived ino some murky waters in my time ~ like the Leeds Liverpool canal and survived (after a stomch pump !) Yours as aways BRIAN !

January 9th, 2019 06:40

NO MORE A DREAMER
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Miss Berles dived in?!

January 9th, 2019 03:15

NO MORE A DREAMER
Goldfinch60 said:

He will be with the moon that he captured.

January 9th, 2019 02:53

NO MORE A DREAMER
sylviasearcher said:

I love this for lots of different reasons. It reminds me of the protaginist in my book and of the dichotomy of dreaming.

January 9th, 2019 02:39

WINTER CLOSES (2)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Evening greetings MICHAEL ~ Thanks for sharing A Haunting Poem of a bygone Age and a complementary Painting. I live in tree rich part of Essex and the fallen leaves reveal a very different vista through the bared branches ! I love each Season equally so I welcome and love each Seasonal ODE as it drips from your Quill. I am posting YESTERDAY tomorrow ~ please look out for it ~ Your Friend in Verse ~ BRIAN

January 8th, 2019 15:19

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sylviasearcher said:

Beautiful imagery, both in your word picture visual art work.

There is a mellowness about them that makes me think of the images stirred by Ode To Autumn.

Winter becomes beautiful, gentle, inevitable and its end springs hope and life

January 8th, 2019 04:26

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orchidee said:

A fine write again Michael. You enjoying those extra minutes of lighter evenings now? You spending them all at once?
I remember that extra second we had one year. I did a million things in that one second. ooh!

January 8th, 2019 02:59

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Goldfinch60 said:

This is a very good write Michael but somehow to me the first one is more \'punchy\'.

Fabulous artwork.

January 8th, 2019 01:37

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Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

A few words certainly deliver a huge message! A fine write which I enjoyed reading!

Love the painting. It reminds me of people walking on the boardwalk in Atlantic City, N.J., approaching the casino at the end of the boardwalk!

~Laura~

January 8th, 2019 00:47

WINTER CLOSES (1)
psychofemale said:

this was lovely.

January 7th, 2019 21:58

WINTER CLOSES (1)
dusk arising said:

All change here. The Global Warming express now arriving on all platforms will be calling at a garden near you in due course. First class accommodation will be available to the rear of the journey where denial is rife.

January 7th, 2019 13:43

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orchidee said:

Yes, finished that thorn poem. How\'s the evening?! I\'m doing half a poem - a Po.

January 7th, 2019 11:51

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MICHAEL ~ I have said elsewhwere that a 7 line Poem is perfection ! The only proviso is the skill to encompass ones subject in a SON (Half a SONNET !). You have done that ! It is complemented (in a subtle way) by the painting.
Thanks for sharing ~ Love & Blessings ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check Angelas POEM ~ HERBS & SPICES ~ Thanks !

January 7th, 2019 10:42

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Fay Slimm. said:

An engaging short anthem to winter\'s closure - - another gem of a picture too Michael - thanks for sharing both word and graphic.

January 7th, 2019 05:00

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Goldfinch60 said:

This is fine Michael, sometimes fewer words can be more powerful.

January 7th, 2019 03:37

WINTER CLOSES (1)
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. I could be shorter (am I 7 foot tall?). In me poems I mean, but I tend to go on a bit at times.
Some old hymns went on for 30 verses. The longest hymn has 158 or so verses. There\'s a thought. *Gets out pencil to write.....*



January 7th, 2019 02:53

TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS
Christina8 said:

Wow, I can\'t believe you remembered all that! Sounds hilarious to me!!!

January 6th, 2019 19:17

TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS
orchidee said:

How\'s that evening going? You gone to Lidl or Aldi shopping this evening? Well, maybe not Sunday evening.

January 6th, 2019 11:50

TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS
dusk arising said:

Customer announcement - to avoid a parking penalty charge dont forget to enter your vehicle reg no on leaving the store otherwise you will be hunted down and forced into a local courthouse (Aldi worcester city branch)... have a nice day.
Lidl Blackpole branch- for your convenience all self service tills have been closed.
We are delighted to announced an extra ten minutes shopping every third Tuesday in the month now that we have completely abandoned staff training.

January 6th, 2019 06:36



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