Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



MY OWN EMISSARY
dusk arising said:

Aren\'t we all, unless we are easily led.
What a shame we have nothing in writing from god. It\'s all man made clap trap fed into us as kids accompanied by \'fear of god\'. Some never recover, obviously they\'re not their own emissary.

February 26th, 2019 04:38

MY OWN EMISSARY
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. Emissary - is there three of you again - Me, Myself, and I? I\'ve started that nonsense again! lol.

February 26th, 2019 03:03

MY OWN EMISSARY
Goldfinch60 said:

We all find our own emissary within us Michael, I know mine is there and always will be.

Good Cartoon.

February 26th, 2019 01:58

THE LADY AND HER DOG
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for Sharing UNCLE MIKE ! It is true that people grow more and more like their Pets ~ visually & habitually ! I hope the LADY carries TWO poop packets ! Love the ART is that ORCHIDEEEEE ?
Blessings & Love ~ through Poetry
Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡

February 25th, 2019 17:41

THE LADY AND HER DOG
orchidee said:

Coooeee! The evening gone yet?! I\'ve gone to bed.....

February 25th, 2019 16:16

LAST NIGHT
Suresh said:

So few lines to express
Both in words and art
- my favorite medium as well
Enjoyed it

February 25th, 2019 12:27

THE LADY AND HER DOG
Neville said:

tis funny what gets the ink flowing... tis funny full stop... thank you Michael I needed a good chuckle , cheers... N

February 25th, 2019 08:43

THE LADY AND HER DOG
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A great poem really funny. I liked it.

Keep writing Fine B

February 25th, 2019 05:29

THE LADY AND HER DOG
dusk arising said:

Really funny piece today. So many snooty ladies with their lapdogs roam our land. I shall never regard them in the same way again.

Interesting to read your comments on use of rhyme. My feelings exactly.

February 25th, 2019 04:59

THE LADY AND HER DOG
Fay Slimm. said:

Super cartoon here Michael - a smile too at your well rhymed first smile of my day.

February 25th, 2019 03:51

THE LADY AND HER DOG
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

He’s a rhymer and lyricist
A versifier, elegist
One whom makes a religion
Of metrical composition
His 575’s makes you LOL
But damn it the man can draw as well
I’m sure there’s two of him
YES!... aha! It’s a swindle
Oh well never mind...
May his art never dwindle!

Thanks for the first laugh of he day again Michael

February 25th, 2019 03:27

THE LADY AND HER DOG
orchidee said:

Oh lol, swoon! That\'s me then, as one of the Choir. But I never joined Choir. I preferred paying up when the \'hat\' came round! (Did I?).
One church got too keen - two \'hats\' in one service, i.e. two rounds of collections in same service. That\'s going over the top.

February 25th, 2019 03:21

THE LADY AND HER DOG
Goldfinch60 said:

Great write Michael.

In our Church the Choir have a collection plate of their own and I am normally the one that takes it to the alter.

February 25th, 2019 01:20

LAST NIGHT
orchidee said:

You seen Burlington Bertie - Or Berlington? Is he Miss Berles\' partner?

February 24th, 2019 13:41

LAST NIGHT
dusk arising said:

What had been in the can? Was it a ring pull or just another leg pull?

Nice light read.

February 24th, 2019 12:21

LAST NIGHT
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Good thing I heard my ‘windows rattle’...I was awakened from a nightmare! I woke up out of breath because I had been frantically looking for a duffle bag filled with money that I had misplaced! Thank goodness it was only a dream!

Great write!
I like the drawing!
If you draw it again,
perhaps less
“eye shadow”!

Have a great Sunday!

~Laura~

February 24th, 2019 06:09

LAST NIGHT
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great imagery Michael
both the picture ans the poem


February 24th, 2019 05:07

LAST NIGHT
Neville said:

am not sure what to expect from you this mane Michael.. I was not expecting this... reeds almost like two poems (excuse the pun).. for some reason I have a Japanese painting forming behind my closed eyelids ... rather zen like in content, if not in form.. enjoyed tho... N

February 24th, 2019 05:05

LAST NIGHT
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE : I Love MINIMLIST drawings ! Initially I saw it as a FLEA escaping from the hair and sliding down her NOSE : The denoument is in the eye of the beholder ! Love the POEM we do hear subliminally in our sleep : expecially the bloop-bleep of a tapping drip !
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check my PEACE POEM : Thanks A !

February 24th, 2019 03:50

LAST NIGHT
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Miss Berles do any painting?

February 24th, 2019 03:01

LAST NIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful minimalist artwork Michael, really like this.

February 24th, 2019 01:20

LAST NIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:

The mystery of hearing these things in your sleep, are you sure it wasn\'t a dream. Good one Michael.

February 24th, 2019 01:19

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Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Love the Elephant!

The first haiku made me laugh!
The second one not so much!
( I volunteer at a rehab facility and see the effects of addiction!)

~Laura~



February 23rd, 2019 15:20

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Neville said:

unfortunately, even here in what we consider to be a first world country, life is cheap.. you need to find a new dealer Michael.. and a new wrist watch too maybe... N

February 23rd, 2019 10:15

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FineB said:

Hello Michael,

Thank you for this poignant and good write.

Life is precious and priceless sadly drugs do have a very expensive price attached and a tragic one.

Keep writing FineB.

February 23rd, 2019 05:10

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the minimillist ELI ! Bit like the Cheshire Cat : soon just the trip of his tunk ! Love the Haiku !
Just as important to keep ones watch ticking as ones Heart.
Yes its the price that keeps me drug free. In NZ to get a HIGH one just has to breath in (not @ POOY NOOY to much H2S) and look around !
Love in the MEWS : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check todays POEM it includes Scotlands favourite Painting bought for £8200 in 1952 now worth millions !

February 23rd, 2019 05:06

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Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I thought The Elephant looked familiar I\'m sure he winked at me but that might have been the cheap drugs...

Morning smiles gratefully received well done again Michael

February 23rd, 2019 03:17

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orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Miss Berles said to me - Do a minimalist poem - we\'re in short supply of syllables. Used up 99% of them by saying \'minimalist\'.

February 23rd, 2019 02:48

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Goldfinch60 said:

Two more good ones Michael.

February 23rd, 2019 01:22

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Michael Edwards said:

Second version of the elephant having reduced the linework to a minimum .

February 23rd, 2019 01:12



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