Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE LADY AND HER DOG
orchidee said:
Oh lol, swoon! That\'s me then, as one of the Choir. But I never joined Choir. I preferred paying up when the \'hat\' came round! (Did I?).
One church got too keen - two \'hats\' in one service, i.e. two rounds of collections in same service. That\'s going over the top.
February 25th, 2019 03:21
orchidee said:
Oh lol, swoon! That\'s me then, as one of the Choir. But I never joined Choir. I preferred paying up when the \'hat\' came round! (Did I?).
One church got too keen - two \'hats\' in one service, i.e. two rounds of collections in same service. That\'s going over the top.
February 25th, 2019 03:21
THE LADY AND HER DOG
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Michael.
In our Church the Choir have a collection plate of their own and I am normally the one that takes it to the alter.
February 25th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Michael.
In our Church the Choir have a collection plate of their own and I am normally the one that takes it to the alter.
February 25th, 2019 01:20
LAST NIGHT
orchidee said:
You seen Burlington Bertie - Or Berlington? Is he Miss Berles\' partner?
February 24th, 2019 13:41
orchidee said:
You seen Burlington Bertie - Or Berlington? Is he Miss Berles\' partner?
February 24th, 2019 13:41
LAST NIGHT
dusk arising said:
What had been in the can? Was it a ring pull or just another leg pull?
Nice light read.
February 24th, 2019 12:21
dusk arising said:
What had been in the can? Was it a ring pull or just another leg pull?
Nice light read.
February 24th, 2019 12:21
LAST NIGHT
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Good thing I heard my ‘windows rattle’...I was awakened from a nightmare! I woke up out of breath because I had been frantically looking for a duffle bag filled with money that I had misplaced! Thank goodness it was only a dream!
Great write!
I like the drawing!
If you draw it again,
perhaps less
“eye shadow”!
Have a great Sunday!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2019 06:09
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Good thing I heard my ‘windows rattle’...I was awakened from a nightmare! I woke up out of breath because I had been frantically looking for a duffle bag filled with money that I had misplaced! Thank goodness it was only a dream!
Great write!
I like the drawing!
If you draw it again,
perhaps less
“eye shadow”!
Have a great Sunday!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2019 06:09
LAST NIGHT
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great imagery Michael
both the picture ans the poem
February 24th, 2019 05:07
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great imagery Michael
both the picture ans the poem
February 24th, 2019 05:07
LAST NIGHT
Neville said:
am not sure what to expect from you this mane Michael.. I was not expecting this... reeds almost like two poems (excuse the pun).. for some reason I have a Japanese painting forming behind my closed eyelids ... rather zen like in content, if not in form.. enjoyed tho... N
February 24th, 2019 05:05
Neville said:
am not sure what to expect from you this mane Michael.. I was not expecting this... reeds almost like two poems (excuse the pun).. for some reason I have a Japanese painting forming behind my closed eyelids ... rather zen like in content, if not in form.. enjoyed tho... N
February 24th, 2019 05:05
LAST NIGHT
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE : I Love MINIMLIST drawings ! Initially I saw it as a FLEA escaping from the hair and sliding down her NOSE : The denoument is in the eye of the beholder ! Love the POEM we do hear subliminally in our sleep : expecially the bloop-bleep of a tapping drip !
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check my PEACE POEM : Thanks A !
February 24th, 2019 03:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE : I Love MINIMLIST drawings ! Initially I saw it as a FLEA escaping from the hair and sliding down her NOSE : The denoument is in the eye of the beholder ! Love the POEM we do hear subliminally in our sleep : expecially the bloop-bleep of a tapping drip !
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check my PEACE POEM : Thanks A !
February 24th, 2019 03:50
LAST NIGHT
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Miss Berles do any painting?
February 24th, 2019 03:01
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Miss Berles do any painting?
February 24th, 2019 03:01
LAST NIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful minimalist artwork Michael, really like this.
February 24th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful minimalist artwork Michael, really like this.
February 24th, 2019 01:20
LAST NIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:
The mystery of hearing these things in your sleep, are you sure it wasn\'t a dream. Good one Michael.
February 24th, 2019 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The mystery of hearing these things in your sleep, are you sure it wasn\'t a dream. Good one Michael.
February 24th, 2019 01:19
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Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the Elephant!
The first haiku made me laugh!
The second one not so much!
( I volunteer at a rehab facility and see the effects of addiction!)
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2019 15:20
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the Elephant!
The first haiku made me laugh!
The second one not so much!
( I volunteer at a rehab facility and see the effects of addiction!)
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2019 15:20
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Neville said:
unfortunately, even here in what we consider to be a first world country, life is cheap.. you need to find a new dealer Michael.. and a new wrist watch too maybe... N
February 23rd, 2019 10:15
Neville said:
unfortunately, even here in what we consider to be a first world country, life is cheap.. you need to find a new dealer Michael.. and a new wrist watch too maybe... N
February 23rd, 2019 10:15
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FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Thank you for this poignant and good write.
Life is precious and priceless sadly drugs do have a very expensive price attached and a tragic one.
Keep writing FineB.
February 23rd, 2019 05:10
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Thank you for this poignant and good write.
Life is precious and priceless sadly drugs do have a very expensive price attached and a tragic one.
Keep writing FineB.
February 23rd, 2019 05:10
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the minimillist ELI ! Bit like the Cheshire Cat : soon just the trip of his tunk ! Love the Haiku !
Just as important to keep ones watch ticking as ones Heart.
Yes its the price that keeps me drug free. In NZ to get a HIGH one just has to breath in (not @ POOY NOOY to much H2S) and look around !
Love in the MEWS : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check todays POEM it includes Scotlands favourite Painting bought for £8200 in 1952 now worth millions !
February 23rd, 2019 05:06
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the minimillist ELI ! Bit like the Cheshire Cat : soon just the trip of his tunk ! Love the Haiku !
Just as important to keep ones watch ticking as ones Heart.
Yes its the price that keeps me drug free. In NZ to get a HIGH one just has to breath in (not @ POOY NOOY to much H2S) and look around !
Love in the MEWS : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check todays POEM it includes Scotlands favourite Painting bought for £8200 in 1952 now worth millions !
February 23rd, 2019 05:06
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I thought The Elephant looked familiar I\'m sure he winked at me but that might have been the cheap drugs...
Morning smiles gratefully received well done again Michael
February 23rd, 2019 03:17
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I thought The Elephant looked familiar I\'m sure he winked at me but that might have been the cheap drugs...
Morning smiles gratefully received well done again Michael
February 23rd, 2019 03:17
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles said to me - Do a minimalist poem - we\'re in short supply of syllables. Used up 99% of them by saying \'minimalist\'.
February 23rd, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles said to me - Do a minimalist poem - we\'re in short supply of syllables. Used up 99% of them by saying \'minimalist\'.
February 23rd, 2019 02:48
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Michael Edwards said:
Second version of the elephant having reduced the linework to a minimum .
February 23rd, 2019 01:12
Michael Edwards said:
Second version of the elephant having reduced the linework to a minimum .
February 23rd, 2019 01:12
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS NOS ONCLE MIKE ! Love the androgenous sillhoette !
No 1. You cant improve on nature ~ ask Dolly Parton !
No 2. Flat pack = Plat flack !
Thanks for sharing ~
Mas manana por favor ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 22nd, 2019 12:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS NOS ONCLE MIKE ! Love the androgenous sillhoette !
No 1. You cant improve on nature ~ ask Dolly Parton !
No 2. Flat pack = Plat flack !
Thanks for sharing ~
Mas manana por favor ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 22nd, 2019 12:18
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Fay Slimm. said:
Oh MIchael -- that flt-pack haiku had me nodding my head in agreement and as for vanity-surgery - well those who have too much cash find it useful perhaps - - methinks the inside core of the heart never needs beauty treatment from any other than self.
February 22nd, 2019 11:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh MIchael -- that flt-pack haiku had me nodding my head in agreement and as for vanity-surgery - well those who have too much cash find it useful perhaps - - methinks the inside core of the heart never needs beauty treatment from any other than self.
February 22nd, 2019 11:17
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Suresh said:
Plastic Surgery- vanity, unless as you say warranted
Flat pack furniture gives a commoner a sense of completion
Enjoyed
February 22nd, 2019 10:40
Suresh said:
Plastic Surgery- vanity, unless as you say warranted
Flat pack furniture gives a commoner a sense of completion
Enjoyed
February 22nd, 2019 10:40
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dusk arising said:
LOL @ gobbledegook instructions. I bought a set of timer plug ins on ebay... instructions the size of two postage stamps... hi-res scan and enlargement sorted it
Plastic surgery? I think i\'lll just stay ugly rather than uglier..
February 22nd, 2019 07:10
dusk arising said:
LOL @ gobbledegook instructions. I bought a set of timer plug ins on ebay... instructions the size of two postage stamps... hi-res scan and enlargement sorted it
Plastic surgery? I think i\'lll just stay ugly rather than uglier..
February 22nd, 2019 07:10
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Neville said:
welcome back... a couple of good uns I see to celebrate with , cheers.... N
February 22nd, 2019 06:28
Neville said:
welcome back... a couple of good uns I see to celebrate with , cheers.... N
February 22nd, 2019 06:28
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Michael
I do feel the second one
I winced at the first
Sorry could ressist the 575 response
Welcome back!
February 22nd, 2019 03:32
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Michael
I do feel the second one
I winced at the first
Sorry could ressist the 575 response
Welcome back!
February 22nd, 2019 03:32
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orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I thought you was stuck in that building yesterday - the \'Fire Doors - Keep Closed\' one?! Did Miss Berles hear the fire alarm and rescue you? Excuse me while I be sick - saw KK, Kim Kardashian, worse than KP, in a pic. Some would say swoony pic. I just retched!
February 22nd, 2019 03:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I thought you was stuck in that building yesterday - the \'Fire Doors - Keep Closed\' one?! Did Miss Berles hear the fire alarm and rescue you? Excuse me while I be sick - saw KK, Kim Kardashian, worse than KP, in a pic. Some would say swoony pic. I just retched!
February 22nd, 2019 03:09
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sylviasearcher said:
Oh I have to confess how I secretly love making flat pack furniture!
It’s because I got a D in craft at school.
It’s a bit like building Lego.
Awesome.
(That’s a quote from the Lego Movie- awesome)!
February 22nd, 2019 02:36
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I have to confess how I secretly love making flat pack furniture!
It’s because I got a D in craft at school.
It’s a bit like building Lego.
Awesome.
(That’s a quote from the Lego Movie- awesome)!
February 22nd, 2019 02:36
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Goldfinch60 said:
Glad all is fine.
1. Don\'t understand why people have
plastic surgery unless there is a health problem.
2. My one claim to fame in my family is that I have never been to IKEA!
Two more good ones Michael.
February 22nd, 2019 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Glad all is fine.
1. Don\'t understand why people have
plastic surgery unless there is a health problem.
2. My one claim to fame in my family is that I have never been to IKEA!
Two more good ones Michael.
February 22nd, 2019 02:07
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Michael Edwards said:
Apologies for not posting or commenting yesterday - a busy day - anyway I\'m back today.
February 22nd, 2019 01:25
Michael Edwards said:
Apologies for not posting or commenting yesterday - a busy day - anyway I\'m back today.
February 22nd, 2019 01:25
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the mimimalist sketch almost LOWERY !
No 1. Avoid at all costs : give you the VIND ~ makes you go to the LOO !
No 2. A lady would never do that : always a spare pair in my handbag !
Thanks for caring & sharing :
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 20th, 2019 17:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the mimimalist sketch almost LOWERY !
No 1. Avoid at all costs : give you the VIND ~ makes you go to the LOO !
No 2. A lady would never do that : always a spare pair in my handbag !
Thanks for caring & sharing :
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
February 20th, 2019 17:46
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