Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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dusk arising said:

You have to be well oiled to slide down a lamppost these days. For what resides at its base? how oft has it been christened/claimed/marked out by a passing canine or maybe one could encounter one of our growing homeless community using the lamplight to read yesterdays Telegraph.
Shall we have a glut of prawns post brexit?

February 1st, 2019 16:03

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dusk arising said:

You have to be well oiled to slide down a lamppost these days. For what resides at its base? how oft has it been christened/claimed/marked out by a passing canine or maybe one could encounter one of our growing homeless community using the lamplight to read yesterdays Telegraph.
Shall we have a glut of prawns post brexit?

February 1st, 2019 14:08

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Orchidee suggests HAIKU about Naked Prawn should be 18 ?

Lamposts are one of Natures great blessings ~ Amen

Thanks for sharing & caring. ~ I have a new Windscreen Cover featuring Penguins ~ great characters ! Love & Bicuits ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

February 1st, 2019 11:54

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orchidee said:

Ooh an extra \'T\', yes? That mean \'time for tea now\'? How much are \'T\'s these days to use errantly?

February 1st, 2019 07:44

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Neville said:

there is a fine line between good and great both on the brush & the pen, not to forget the palate... I love prawns and have slid down many a fine lamp post in me time... a stroke of near genius, methinks.. N

February 1st, 2019 04:21

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orchidee said:

Fine writes and pic M.

February 1st, 2019 04:03

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Neville said:

extraordinarily well stated .. nice painting too..... N

January 31st, 2019 13:07

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Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Appreciable!!!!

January 31st, 2019 12:17

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing TIO MIKE : Lauras St Rocco sounds like the Patron St of Rock & Roll ! Love Water Colours always a Dreamy Quality !
\"Do you know any lawful impediment why this man may not be joined to this Woman ? Speak now or forever hold your piece\" I hate this bit of the Marriage Ceremony : In case a skeleton pops out of the cupboard ! Keeping my fingers crossed for my Wedding to Brian : AMEN ! Thanks for sharing :
Love in the MUSE : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check my POEM & FUSION : Thanks !

January 31st, 2019 04:33

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Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Great painting and write!
Regarding the painting,
if I cover the structure on the left and the one on the right with just the center one remaining , it reminds me of the main piazza in my Italian hometown! The center structure being the main church...St. Rocco’s Church...the patron saint of the town!

~Laura~


January 31st, 2019 04:10

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dusk arising said:

Where do those dreams go to? They were so splendid, they can\'t just disappear. I can\'t even remember them. All i recall is the euphoria.

January 31st, 2019 02:47

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Was the impediment anything swoony?! Will Fido bark at it?

January 31st, 2019 02:45

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Goldfinch60 said:

Sometimes the realisation of our lives lead to sad consequences.

Love the artwork.

January 31st, 2019 02:08

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psychofemale said:

well written, good stuff

January 30th, 2019 18:37

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Andrew Charles Forrest said:

A woeful tale poignant and respectfully told Michael, Beautiful write

January 30th, 2019 14:10

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orchidee said:

Burlington Bertie got any gold? I\'m sure there\'s some in Burlington Shopping Arcade in London. Very posh. you can even have your shoes cleaned by a valet sort of person - for a price!

January 30th, 2019 12:55

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dusk arising said:

Love the way you took my imagination and wove a mystery of lost imaginings, half touched victories and sorrow as i read on.

Got a headache now, ... dunno what it was all about really but it was a damned good read.

January 30th, 2019 12:15

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Neville said:

thoroughly enjoyed , a cracking poem without a shadow of a doubt... N

January 30th, 2019 10:55

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Fay Slimm. said:

Wonderful metaphors used in this intriguing write Michael - loved every line. - -and wow - that watercolour is so expertly brushed in too.

January 30th, 2019 08:05

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kevin browne said:

What a wonderful tale to write, and I hope you wipe away the blood from those wet atones.

January 30th, 2019 07:00

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sylviasearcher said:

So many layers to this.
I was drawn to the title as I was writing about a spix macaw and the golden branches it would perch upon.

January 30th, 2019 04:11

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orchidee said:

Yes, a golden write and pic Michael.

January 30th, 2019 03:03

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Goldfinch60 said:

That gold may not glisten on the hand but it certainly glistens within your words Michael.

January 30th, 2019 01:58

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dusk arising said:

A great jazz musician said that he lived for his mistakes. When i\'m soloing and make a mistake i have to recover which i can do but.... that mistake made me go places i would never have thought about going. I created music beyond my creative mind.
Does this happen to you with your painting?


January 29th, 2019 18:28

I CREATE
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Poetry is in your DNA and painting is its shadow.. Excellent!!

January 29th, 2019 16:02

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE for a very creative Picture & Poem. My studies tell me that \"A Creative Mind ameliorates you whole Being : Amen\" I am always reading : writing : singing : playing (piano) and learning from nature & Experience & even from Books & the Media : BRIAN is the same : ALWAYS STAY CREATIVE !
Love through the Arts : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
PLEASE ADD A poem to our NEW FUSION : HOLIDAY PLANS 2019 ? Thanks A & B !

January 29th, 2019 04:56

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orchidee said:

Happy Cob-berling!

January 29th, 2019 04:16

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Goldfinch60 said:

Your creations are as wonderful as ever Michael.

I would be interested to see the completed artwork.

January 29th, 2019 03:24

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orchidee said:

A good write Michael. What\'s Miss Berles created lately?

January 29th, 2019 02:54

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Fay Slimm. said:

A cascade of poetic wisdom again from your witty imagination my friend. - - a great play on words.

January 28th, 2019 18:21



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