DOWN INNIT STREET
WriteBeLight said:

Ha Ha. That is great! I love that! Great artwork.

December 30th, 2016 08:36

AND NO ONE SITS AT TABLES
WriteBeLight said:

I love your line about the pine! Very nice!

December 29th, 2016 14:48

AND NO ONE SITS AT TABLES
willyweed said:

very well done Michael. great visuals! ww

December 29th, 2016 11:42

MY WIFE DOES ALL THE COOKING
willyweed said:

hey my wife told me I was supposed to do everything? light hearted and fun read much enjoyed! ww

December 28th, 2016 10:46

MY WIFE DOES ALL THE COOKING
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written

December 28th, 2016 09:23

A TROUBLED MAN
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks all for taking the trouble to comment - it is another of my more serious pieces - I also write lighter items so will post something a little less heavy tomorrow.

December 27th, 2016 15:47

A TROUBLED MAN
willyweed said:

smooth in sight and sound ww

December 27th, 2016 11:08

BETRAYAL
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Deep, intense and sublime abstract. Ends on soulful notes. Awesome poem indeed. Kudos.

U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.

December 3rd, 2016 02:20

BETRAYAL
Augustus said:

Seems to be part of a larger story. I like the imagery. Also you are quite the artist.

December 1st, 2016 22:46

A GRAIN OF SAND
SabreLi said:

Wow. I interpret this poem to be a story of a boy, radicalised, and therefore died on the inside long before he had even seen a battle. Very good piece; please post more xx

November 30th, 2016 15:50