Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



RETAIL CYCLE
Tony36 said:

Your words ring true great write

February 10th, 2017 08:40

RETAIL CYCLE
WriteBeLight said:

So true Michael. Very good write!

February 10th, 2017 06:37

TWO TRAMPS
MendedFences27 said:

Two mice who wouldn\'t pay the price.
Alone in the night, \'cause the price wasn\'t right.
Your poem was my chuckle for the day. Snows falling 1-2 ft., so I needed a laugh before facing it. Thanks for that. - Phil A.

February 9th, 2017 16:12

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Tony36 said:

Great write

February 9th, 2017 08:36

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WriteBeLight said:

Very sweet and cute both drawings and poem.

February 9th, 2017 07:14

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Christina8 said:

Amusing little mice and poem. I like very much!--Christina

February 9th, 2017 05:14

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL great poem and a classic cartoon of MUS MUSCULUS ! My ANCESTORS tell me that there was a time ~ that when the light (The SUN) went out ~ they went to bed ~ when the light came on again (The SUN) they got up and started work ! With artificial lighting the light never goes out ! BRIAN



February 9th, 2017 05:08

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Michael Edwards said:

Thanks Kat - yes thanks so much regarding your reply - I will get back to you later

February 9th, 2017 04:46

HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN
MendedFences27 said:

To me this feels like someone in remorse trying to cope and mend their ways. \"She lives,\' yet I question is this a person in truth? Well it\'s pretty surreal, but it makes one think, and reads smooth and flowing. Nice art. - Phil A.

February 8th, 2017 13:08

HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN
Christina8 said:

I love the watercolor! The poem evokes much thought (i see WBL already said that--well, I agree!) :-) Very well done!

February 8th, 2017 13:02

HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

February 8th, 2017 09:12

HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN
WriteBeLight said:

Invokes much thought Michael. Excellent watercolor.

February 8th, 2017 06:58

INSIDE OUTSIDE
MendedFences27 said:

Humor and art, Refreshing. Now a jumper, that\'s like a sweater, correct? Nice little village. - Phil A.

February 7th, 2017 15:52

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P.H.Rose said:

Brilliant Michael
This is so good.
I love it....
Can you do illustrations..?

February 7th, 2017 15:49

INSIDE OUTSIDE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHEAL ~ Great picture and a great comic poem ! I knew a man who wore a VEST to keep the coldness off his CHEST ~ Weather in the EAST\'s a BEAST so he went WEST ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN

February 7th, 2017 11:18

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WriteBeLight said:

Loved it. Painting too.

February 7th, 2017 09:12

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Tony36 said:

LOL! Love it, Awesome painting

February 7th, 2017 08:57

INSIDE OUTSIDE
willyweed said:

and the moral is he wanted to look skinning,. lovely picture Michael. you paint Michael WW

February 7th, 2017 02:54

NIGHT
MendedFences27 said:

This ia a beautiful description of night from a \"practised mind.\" Should that be \"contrasting\" in stanza 2? Your poem is pure poetry and great art. Please don\'t be offended by my dumb question.
I love your work. - Phil A.


February 6th, 2017 13:12

NIGHT
Tony36 said:

Amazingly awesome write

February 6th, 2017 09:49

NIGHT
WriteBeLight said:

Captured everything beautifully.

February 6th, 2017 09:01

NIGHT
Christina8 said:

This poem is just excellent! A pleasure to read! I really like the painting too. A masterpiece!

February 6th, 2017 08:03

NIGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for another excellent poem and complementary painting. Both are modern (free verse) but very meaningful ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my latest poem and fusion ~ Thanks B

February 6th, 2017 05:19

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MendedFences27 said:

Great painting. Here are my comments: 1)

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- Phil A.

February 5th, 2017 12:45

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Christina8 said:

Beautiful picture! I absolutely loved that fun poem!

February 5th, 2017 11:47

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Tony36 said:

LOL! Love it

February 5th, 2017 09:38

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rrodriguez said:

I went back to unsee the poem, but my eyes failed. I stick with the great intro and the amazing pic.

February 5th, 2017 08:11

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rrodriguez said:

Very clever the way you thought the poem out. Your painting is superb.

February 5th, 2017 08:08

THE GREAT UNREAD
WriteBeLight said:

Very cute Michael. Your painting feels like a sunny day. Wonderful colors!

February 5th, 2017 07:54

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ Love the poem and the PICTURE ! \"You say it best when you say nothing at all !\" Please check my Poem ~ BRIAN

February 5th, 2017 04:09



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