Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
TWO FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha. I like that. I hope you decide to have a great day :)
January 14th, 2017 08:16
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha. I like that. I hope you decide to have a great day :)
January 14th, 2017 08:16
HER SON
Christina8 said:
A very good poem about mother and son. Absolutely loved it. Beautiful picture too!-Christina
January 13th, 2017 15:07
Christina8 said:
A very good poem about mother and son. Absolutely loved it. Beautiful picture too!-Christina
January 13th, 2017 15:07
HER SON
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the ABSTRACT but the poem is not abstract it is real life for so many WAR WIDOWS ! Unfortunately we treat murder on the Battlefield as DULCE T DECORUM EST (Swet and Beautiful) PRO PATRI MORI (To die for ones Country). The Widows bare the brunt and see the face of their Love in the eyes of their sons. Thanks for a very poignant poem. Please check mine ~ thanks BRIAN.
January 13th, 2017 08:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the ABSTRACT but the poem is not abstract it is real life for so many WAR WIDOWS ! Unfortunately we treat murder on the Battlefield as DULCE T DECORUM EST (Swet and Beautiful) PRO PATRI MORI (To die for ones Country). The Widows bare the brunt and see the face of their Love in the eyes of their sons. Thanks for a very poignant poem. Please check mine ~ thanks BRIAN.
January 13th, 2017 08:17
INCOMING TIDE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I love free verse poetry ~ it flows free ~ like the tide ! Love the visual too. I agree with your comment to PHR our communication is too trite and transient. I like to post Acrostics ~ Sonnets ~ HAIKU etc and do add a word of explanation. On FUSION I do encourage Members to submit HAIKU etc. Thanks for caring BRIAN Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
January 12th, 2017 07:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I love free verse poetry ~ it flows free ~ like the tide ! Love the visual too. I agree with your comment to PHR our communication is too trite and transient. I like to post Acrostics ~ Sonnets ~ HAIKU etc and do add a word of explanation. On FUSION I do encourage Members to submit HAIKU etc. Thanks for caring BRIAN Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
January 12th, 2017 07:25
INCOMING TIDE
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks PH.
So much poetry today is dominated by poems about \'me me me\' - you know what I mean: I feel sad, I\'m so hard done by, I\'ve lost my love, woe is me, etc etc. Don\'t get me wrong there\'s some great stuff out there but I much prefer poems that paint a picture and or tell a storey and or transport you to another place - or make you smile!!
You know it\'s a great shame this site doesn\'t have a forum to exchange ideas. there\'s some talent on this site and it would be great to exchange ideas, chat about thought processes and inspiration, different poetry forms and styles etc.
January 12th, 2017 04:53
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks PH.
So much poetry today is dominated by poems about \'me me me\' - you know what I mean: I feel sad, I\'m so hard done by, I\'ve lost my love, woe is me, etc etc. Don\'t get me wrong there\'s some great stuff out there but I much prefer poems that paint a picture and or tell a storey and or transport you to another place - or make you smile!!
You know it\'s a great shame this site doesn\'t have a forum to exchange ideas. there\'s some talent on this site and it would be great to exchange ideas, chat about thought processes and inspiration, different poetry forms and styles etc.
January 12th, 2017 04:53
INCOMING TIDE
P.H.Rose said:
I like both...
Sometimes
5 lines can
say more
Than 50....
January 12th, 2017 04:40
P.H.Rose said:
I like both...
Sometimes
5 lines can
say more
Than 50....
January 12th, 2017 04:40
NOT YET DEAD
Michael Edwards said:
Really appreciate your kind encouragement WBL and PH
January 11th, 2017 17:23
Michael Edwards said:
Really appreciate your kind encouragement WBL and PH
January 11th, 2017 17:23
NOT YET DEAD
P.H.Rose said:
One word.... superb
I love this poem..
Well done Michael..
January 11th, 2017 16:33
P.H.Rose said:
One word.... superb
I love this poem..
Well done Michael..
January 11th, 2017 16:33
NOT YET DEAD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I like a bit of HUMOUR to dispel the GLOOMER ! I always look at the obituries in the TIMES and If I\'m not in them ~ I know I\'m still alive ~ even though I\'m only ONE-THIRD through my life (33) I hope ! Love the drift wood sculpting ~ very popular on the South East Coast ~ Please check my SNOWDROPS POEM ~ Thanks BRIANt
January 11th, 2017 05:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I like a bit of HUMOUR to dispel the GLOOMER ! I always look at the obituries in the TIMES and If I\'m not in them ~ I know I\'m still alive ~ even though I\'m only ONE-THIRD through my life (33) I hope ! Love the drift wood sculpting ~ very popular on the South East Coast ~ Please check my SNOWDROPS POEM ~ Thanks BRIANt
January 11th, 2017 05:56
SHE WILL OVERCOME
P.H.Rose said:
Really very good
Michael I really
Enjoyed this one
Well done....
January 10th, 2017 20:35
P.H.Rose said:
Really very good
Michael I really
Enjoyed this one
Well done....
January 10th, 2017 20:35
SHE WILL OVERCOME
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks so much Tony, WW and Christina
January 10th, 2017 17:14
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks so much Tony, WW and Christina
January 10th, 2017 17:14
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