Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
TOLD ONCE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the FUNGI ! Love the poem ! You know how much we love FORM~REVERSE POETRY and have published many ~ usually as a DIAMOND or a DIABLO. Quie correctly you have NOT repeated the middle line ! We would have preferred a ONE letter ~ TWO letter ~ THREE letter ~ START & FINISH ~ Which would have resulted in a cooler shape ~ BUT ~ the final three lines (in my suggestion) are a little ORCHIDEEAN !
I DO SAY ONCE ~~~~~ MIDDLE LINE ~~~~~ ONCE SAY DO I
I hope that suggestion makes sense ~ no obligation to use it !
Blessing & Peace & Good MUSE !
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
We do appreciate that the FIBONCCI sequence is SYLLABLE LED 1/1/2/3/5/8 AND NOT WORD (letter)LED ! SO IF YOU ARE STICKING WITH A CLASSICAL FIB # Our suggestion is NOT viable. A Reverse FIB does NOT give an elegant shape DIAMOND or DIABLO or HOUR GLASS etc - Like Word (letter led) Reverse Poems do - OK - Love A & B !
January 9th, 2020 11:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the FUNGI ! Love the poem ! You know how much we love FORM~REVERSE POETRY and have published many ~ usually as a DIAMOND or a DIABLO. Quie correctly you have NOT repeated the middle line ! We would have preferred a ONE letter ~ TWO letter ~ THREE letter ~ START & FINISH ~ Which would have resulted in a cooler shape ~ BUT ~ the final three lines (in my suggestion) are a little ORCHIDEEAN !
I DO SAY ONCE ~~~~~ MIDDLE LINE ~~~~~ ONCE SAY DO I
I hope that suggestion makes sense ~ no obligation to use it !
Blessing & Peace & Good MUSE !
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
We do appreciate that the FIBONCCI sequence is SYLLABLE LED 1/1/2/3/5/8 AND NOT WORD (letter)LED ! SO IF YOU ARE STICKING WITH A CLASSICAL FIB # Our suggestion is NOT viable. A Reverse FIB does NOT give an elegant shape DIAMOND or DIABLO or HOUR GLASS etc - Like Word (letter led) Reverse Poems do - OK - Love A & B !
January 9th, 2020 11:03
TOLD ONCE
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Thanks for this good write.
Keep writing FineB
January 9th, 2020 09:08
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Thanks for this good write.
Keep writing FineB
January 9th, 2020 09:08
TOLD ONCE
Fay Slimm. said:
Well it reads spot on to me - thanks Michael - intriguing and atmospheric each line and looks so attractive too
January 9th, 2020 03:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Well it reads spot on to me - thanks Michael - intriguing and atmospheric each line and looks so attractive too
January 9th, 2020 03:55
TOLD ONCE
orchidee said:
Well, I can\'t improve on it! I would dread doing a hymn-poem like this. Metre all over the place!
Miss Berles will count the syllables!
January 9th, 2020 02:41
orchidee said:
Well, I can\'t improve on it! I would dread doing a hymn-poem like this. Metre all over the place!
Miss Berles will count the syllables!
January 9th, 2020 02:41
THREE 575s
Fay Slimm. said:
You have such a way with the 575 -style my friend - three wise haikus to ponder and as for the charcoal work - - - - beautifully mysterious.
January 7th, 2020 03:42
Fay Slimm. said:
You have such a way with the 575 -style my friend - three wise haikus to ponder and as for the charcoal work - - - - beautifully mysterious.
January 7th, 2020 03:42
THREE 575s
myself and me said:
The paint is a little bit heavy for me. The poem win today.
January 6th, 2020 15:13
myself and me said:
The paint is a little bit heavy for me. The poem win today.
January 6th, 2020 15:13
THREE 575s
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Thank you for that powerful and haunting write and complimented by hauntingly beautiful picture.
Keeo writing FineB
January 6th, 2020 08:36
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Thank you for that powerful and haunting write and complimented by hauntingly beautiful picture.
Keeo writing FineB
January 6th, 2020 08:36
THREE 575s
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Uncle Mike - Love the Painting & the HAIKU ! Both a bit Melancholy is that your MOOD for January 2020 ? In our Poem today we are seeing 2020 as a year of Opportunity & Fulfilment. Perhaps it can be both ? Liverpool Supporters today are rejoicing by their Reserve Team winning through a Dream Goal by a TEENAGER - While BRIAN has the grumps at EVERTONS missed chances to topple the MIGHTY REDS ! One game two opposite outcomes for the Fans ! I pretend to be upset but I dare*nt tell BRIAN - Im a closet admirer of CLOUGH & L*V*R*O*L !
Every Blessing & Peace for YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 6th, 2020 04:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Hi Uncle Mike - Love the Painting & the HAIKU ! Both a bit Melancholy is that your MOOD for January 2020 ? In our Poem today we are seeing 2020 as a year of Opportunity & Fulfilment. Perhaps it can be both ? Liverpool Supporters today are rejoicing by their Reserve Team winning through a Dream Goal by a TEENAGER - While BRIAN has the grumps at EVERTONS missed chances to topple the MIGHTY REDS ! One game two opposite outcomes for the Fans ! I pretend to be upset but I dare*nt tell BRIAN - Im a closet admirer of CLOUGH & L*V*R*O*L !
Every Blessing & Peace for YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 6th, 2020 04:50
THREE 575s
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good 575s Michael.
Fabulously intriguing artwork.
January 6th, 2020 03:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good 575s Michael.
Fabulously intriguing artwork.
January 6th, 2020 03:03
THREE 575s
dusk arising said:
Three beauties today ME.
I\'m intrigued, how do you get \'other\' colours or hues into a charcoal piece. Other than the black of the charcoal and the paper colour. Regardless of method, the effect is very pleasing and affords the piece more depth.
January 6th, 2020 02:56
dusk arising said:
Three beauties today ME.
I\'m intrigued, how do you get \'other\' colours or hues into a charcoal piece. Other than the black of the charcoal and the paper colour. Regardless of method, the effect is very pleasing and affords the piece more depth.
January 6th, 2020 02:56
575s - ANOTHER BATCH (1)
FineB said:
Hello Michael
Hauntingly vivid.
A great write.
The picture is stunning in a spooky way.
Keep writing FineB
January 5th, 2020 03:30
FineB said:
Hello Michael
Hauntingly vivid.
A great write.
The picture is stunning in a spooky way.
Keep writing FineB
January 5th, 2020 03:30
575s - ANOTHER BATCH (1)
dusk arising said:
Moonlight in churchyards brings back many memories. Including the one in Nottingham where famously satanic practices were afoot... i knew this place though my activities there were only devilish.
Thanks for the memory jog.
Yep, in the concise poetic picture u paint here, there is certainly ghostly wakefulness.
Super picture of subtle colours.
January 4th, 2020 10:20
dusk arising said:
Moonlight in churchyards brings back many memories. Including the one in Nottingham where famously satanic practices were afoot... i knew this place though my activities there were only devilish.
Thanks for the memory jog.
Yep, in the concise poetic picture u paint here, there is certainly ghostly wakefulness.
Super picture of subtle colours.
January 4th, 2020 10:20
POETRY
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING MON ONCLE MICHAEL *Now the day is Over* is an apt title for your abstract Sunset ! We love the POEM ! Poetry is very elusive to define but Yours ........
A thought that transports the mind
Captured before its forgotten
....... Is very apt ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to You and Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 3rd, 2020 15:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING MON ONCLE MICHAEL *Now the day is Over* is an apt title for your abstract Sunset ! We love the POEM ! Poetry is very elusive to define but Yours ........
A thought that transports the mind
Captured before its forgotten
....... Is very apt ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to You and Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
January 3rd, 2020 15:55
POETRY
myself and me said:
\"A thought that transports the mind,
captured before it’s forgotten.\"
You captured my mind, I shall tell you before I forget. Simply love the color of the paint.
January 3rd, 2020 12:45
myself and me said:
\"A thought that transports the mind,
captured before it’s forgotten.\"
You captured my mind, I shall tell you before I forget. Simply love the color of the paint.
January 3rd, 2020 12:45
POETRY
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A wonderful write and you have captured the essence of poetry with a beautiful sunset in the background.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 05:39
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A wonderful write and you have captured the essence of poetry with a beautiful sunset in the background.
Keep writing FineB
January 3rd, 2020 05:39
POETRY
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - spot on Michael. A superb definition of how to write poetry in these four lines.
January 3rd, 2020 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - spot on Michael. A superb definition of how to write poetry in these four lines.
January 3rd, 2020 04:19
POETRY
Nicholas Browning said:
I remember this from the fusion. Glad to see it given more justice.
January 3rd, 2020 03:03
Nicholas Browning said:
I remember this from the fusion. Glad to see it given more justice.
January 3rd, 2020 03:03
POETRY
orchidee said:
I sublimely define this as a good write and pic M. You seen any Berles lately?!
January 3rd, 2020 02:57
orchidee said:
I sublimely define this as a good write and pic M. You seen any Berles lately?!
January 3rd, 2020 02:57
HELD BY ALL
Fay Slimm. said:
A secret beam from this intriguing read really lights up my evening - great stuff again Mike.......
January 2nd, 2020 14:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A secret beam from this intriguing read really lights up my evening - great stuff again Mike.......
January 2nd, 2020 14:37
A RESOLUTION
myself and me said:
Happy New Year! A wonderful painting for the start of the year.
January 2nd, 2020 12:28
myself and me said:
Happy New Year! A wonderful painting for the start of the year.
January 2nd, 2020 12:28
A RESOLUTION
FineB said:
Hello Michael!
That was a lovely write!
Keep the resolution and don\'t give up!
All the best for a New Wonderful Year of writing!
Keep writing FineB
January 2nd, 2020 11:24
FineB said:
Hello Michael!
That was a lovely write!
Keep the resolution and don\'t give up!
All the best for a New Wonderful Year of writing!
Keep writing FineB
January 2nd, 2020 11:24
HELD BY ALL
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ GOOD AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ! Love the Seascape ~ very cool. We do have to *Let our Little Light Shine* but the emphasis should be on the LITTLE not the LIGHT ! Thnaks for caring
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 2nd, 2020 08:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ GOOD AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ! Love the Seascape ~ very cool. We do have to *Let our Little Light Shine* but the emphasis should be on the LITTLE not the LIGHT ! Thnaks for caring
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 2nd, 2020 08:16
HELD BY ALL
orchidee said:
A sensitive write and pic M.
It\'s true. I can think of folk like this. I suppose if we continually seek to see our own light, we just go on an ego trip.
Not that we\'re doormats, rubbishing ourselves, nor letting others rubbish us - but qualities of meekness, lowliness, self-effacement. etc.
Bit deep this - got headache now, this time of morning, thinking that out! I know a person or two - Remarka Berle, and Hum Berle. You know them? And does Hum pong?! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 03:05
orchidee said:
A sensitive write and pic M.
It\'s true. I can think of folk like this. I suppose if we continually seek to see our own light, we just go on an ego trip.
Not that we\'re doormats, rubbishing ourselves, nor letting others rubbish us - but qualities of meekness, lowliness, self-effacement. etc.
Bit deep this - got headache now, this time of morning, thinking that out! I know a person or two - Remarka Berle, and Hum Berle. You know them? And does Hum pong?! lol.
January 2nd, 2020 03:05
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