Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



DROLL COUPLETS (6)
sylviasearcher said:

Well mine speak all day ?!

August 14th, 2019 01:59

DROLL COUPLETS (6)
orchidee said:

Oops! Bit swoony poem. It\'s the booze \'talking\', makes us say mad things. It\'s OK - I\'m on hand to add water to it!

August 14th, 2019 01:44

DROLL COUPLETS (6)
Goldfinch60 said:

As long as they don\'t speak out loud and you are the only one who can hear them it is OK.

August 14th, 2019 01:42

DROLL COUPLETS (5)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA BACK ! Missed your droll comments ! Like all Men : I suspect you didnt read the instructions !A couple of couplets to help you remember !

BUM FODDER (Toilet Paper) is Fo\' de BUM

TOILET BRUSH is Fo\' de BOWL not de BOWEL : OK !

Love & Peace to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

August 13th, 2019 15:51

DROLL COUPLETS (5)
Christina8 said:

I love your humorous writes!! Ha ha And reading your replies and answers is a hoot too!

August 13th, 2019 12:51

DROLL COUPLETS (5)
dusk arising said:

But so useful for dislodging pieces of nut stuck between the molars.



August 13th, 2019 04:34

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Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Excellent! Oooh I\'m with Andy OUCH!

I do not own a handkerchief
Snot should be binned, is my belief

August 13th, 2019 03:47

DROLL COUPLETS (5)
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - - from where in your talented mind go these droll couplets appear is my question dear Michael .... you are a such a unique word-smith - thanks for another chuckle this read has given my day.

August 13th, 2019 03:14

DROLL COUPLETS (5)
orchidee said:

Oh lol, fine write and pic M.
I saw \'Dragons Den\'. An invention of a small loo brush placed inside the actual loo, for, erm, convenience (what else?!). It didn\'t get any funding though. Aww.
You seen Lou Berles?

August 13th, 2019 01:41

DROLL COUPLETS (5)
Goldfinch60 said:

OUCH!!!

August 13th, 2019 01:07

DROLL COUPLETS (4)
Suresh said:

People die, debts don\'t
So poor people suffer while they are living and it doesn\'t stop there either.
I don\'t understand the purpose of occupying land after death!
Good piece and no, I don\'t want to start another war!!!!!

August 12th, 2019 10:03

DROLL COUPLETS (4)
orchidee said:

Yes, got an old tea chest ready? Is it the Co-op Funeral Service for you? Do Poundland do them for £1?!

August 12th, 2019 01:30

DROLL COUPLETS (4)
Michael Edwards said:

It wasn\'t the cough that carried him off, but the coffin they carried him off in


August 12th, 2019 00:26

DROLL COUPLETS (4)
Christina8 said:

I\'m so young I haven\'t made enough money to die yet!! DA\'s comments were hilarious!! Very good couplet Michael, always a conversation starter!

August 12th, 2019 00:21

DROLL COUPLETS (4)
Goldfinch60 said:

The costs are increasing all the time,
I am wondering if I can afford to die!

(Not my problem though, the kids can just chuck me in My River).

August 12th, 2019 00:18

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dusk arising said:

Wrap my body in a carpet roll
and bury me deep
in a 6ft hole

Dontcha spend no money to see me off
told ya what would kill me
was this tickling cough

Why does it have to be so expensive to die? I honestly want a cardboard box or similar and a hole if i can (nutrients back to mother earth) or burn me if its cheaper.

You hit the nail for us older fogies today.

August 12th, 2019 00:16

FULL CIRCLE
Suresh said:

A scene straight out of a thousand movies, but your pen paints a real scene

August 11th, 2019 11:55

THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Suresh said:

No matter how passionate but ...
- when one first awakes
- after a smoke
- a garlic or whatever
and so many more

I gotta go hygienic

..but passion is passion, it makes us all sub-human

Really enjoyed the reality

August 11th, 2019 11:50

FULL CIRCLE
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

The true circular economy very well expressed Michael.
The backbone of this wonderful country of ours... gone but NOT forgotten

August 11th, 2019 08:50

FULL CIRCLE
dusk arising said:

Always ruunin ooutta bread me mam was..... an \'ovis dun\'t taste like it uused tu neevah!

Took me back to living in the mining community of Nottinghamshire..... pit head baths/showers saved the tin bath regeime but the houses were there with smokey chimneys and stained brick.

Well written compact story within a poem taking many a reader straight along memory lane.

August 11th, 2019 05:06

FULL CIRCLE
Fay Slimm. said:

Full circle indeed Mike - - your flow of atmosphere shows there was and is no ending to the rigid requirements of living with miners.

August 11th, 2019 03:11

FULL CIRCLE
Neville said:

fine words painted on the page and as well as being beautiful, Lowery sprang to mind.... Neville

August 11th, 2019 02:09

FULL CIRCLE
Goldfinch60 said:

I was taken right into that place and that time Michael.

August 11th, 2019 01:17

FULL CIRCLE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Is Miss Berles going round in circles?!

August 11th, 2019 01:17

THE DREAM - THE REALITY
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A lovely write.

Good stuff.

Keep writing
FineB

August 10th, 2019 09:23

THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

I guess now you’re having lunch...
and from what I read,
PASSION fruit is on your menu!
Enjoy!
I certainly enjoyed reading your penned words...
with a smile! 😊

The colorful flowers in your garden are amazing!

Have a wonderful weekend!

~Laura~


August 10th, 2019 06:36

THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Neville said:


many a true word written in jest eh friend...... tis a damn good un this un....

Neville :)

August 10th, 2019 05:10

THE DREAM - THE REALITY
dusk arising said:

Age brings the humour of accepting fallibility though passion will still reign.
Or is that rain?

August 10th, 2019 02:52

THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Fay Slimm. said:

Best laugh of my morning so far Michael ................ so is the reality.

August 10th, 2019 02:16

THE DREAM - THE REALITY
orchidee said:

Doh! I was about to swoon, then the second verse came along! lol.
A ghastly thing is, e.g. \'An affair in Eastenders\' is advertised. Just don\'t let us see any details - no bed scenes - *shudders in horror*.

August 10th, 2019 01:41



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