Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
orchidee said:

A fine write M.

March 21st, 2020 02:48

THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
dusk arising said:

Ha! Maybe if you drank a certain liquid you, easel pallet and all, would sway just like the sea.

March 21st, 2020 01:36

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FredPeyer said:

You must have been thinking of me when you wrote that first one!
The second one is so true, and the third one I wouldn\'t know wearing slippers and t-shirts all the time.

March 20th, 2020 21:29

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Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - - love your funny couplets - - more please dear fashionista.

March 20th, 2020 16:47

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Mike ~ Last day @ Work today ~ Virus dont inspirus ! Love the Silly Wet ~ she leaves much to the imagination ! Because we have cancelled the oft castigated GCSES & A-Levels ~ I should warn we are now grading all coarse work ~ including couplets !

GRADINGS (A la GCSE English) I am an infernal examiner !

1. A fitting *Ode to a Unidexter* ~ Grade B
2. A good Mantra for Teens ~ Grade B
3. Excellent use of Rhyme ~ Grade A

I have used tte old gradings which made more sense !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™

March 20th, 2020 12:27

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dusk arising said:

A ploughman who severed one arm
wore it round his neck iike a charm

Farmers wife said he was no use
he suffered so much abuse

he set up his home where once he would furrow
lived with three rabbits in a well comfy burrow

Enjoyed your three gems today.... thought i\'d break a few rules and maybe raise a smile above.

March 20th, 2020 10:36

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orchidee said:

Good writes and pic M.
How are Miss Berles and Co. coping at this time? Is there a ration on syllables? Are they on top of the situation?!

March 20th, 2020 02:54

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Goldfinch60 said:

Did the leg fit properly?
Sometimes the heart is right
I was a dedicated follower of fashion in the 1970s now in my real 70s I wear what is comfortable.
Three good ones Michael.

Andy

March 20th, 2020 02:18

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Morning Uncle Mike - Evening Clinic today so time to post a Poem (Education ! Education ! Education !) a comment on the latest victim of the Arch-Virus - COVID 19. I am a qualified ACTUPUNCTURIST - and (at the point of puncture) I supply it free on the NHS ! HEDGEPIGS are not the most Hygienic of critters but I liked the concept. Brian & I have been accused of writing *Boring & Factual Poems sans Emotion* so it is just as well we have some MSN Clowns & Jokers to balance the Odds ! Love the visual (poppy seed heads) so few lines - so much meaning !

Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™

March 19th, 2020 06:06

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dusk arising said:

oh no panic buying of hedgehog food and toothpaste..... you never see them at the dentissts do u.

love your fun piece today sir

March 19th, 2020 03:48

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orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write M.

March 19th, 2020 03:15

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Poetic Dan said:

Fantastic stuff as ever!

March 19th, 2020 03:14

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Goldfinch60 said:

OUCH!!

Andy

March 19th, 2020 02:13

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun writes Michael.

Andy

March 18th, 2020 16:33

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Gut Mitwoch Onkel Andy - Angela here - On the road later as a peripatetic Physio ! Love the FLAMINGOS my fave bird ! Love couplets - short & sometime sweet !
1. Bon mot ! I know many people that suffer from PCPD - I cure it with acupuncture - the bigger the ego - the bigger the needle. So PRENEZ GARDE ! Im on my rounds !
2. Elephants of my acqaintance do it by phone - a Trunk Call !

Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’œ
Fly the Flag in the face of COVID 19 !
Please check *POETICIAN*

March 18th, 2020 04:53

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Saxon Crow said:

Lol - Tried talking to talk talk?

March 18th, 2020 03:50

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orchidee said:

Good writes and pic M. lol.

March 18th, 2020 02:54

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dusk arising said:

Funny and clever... i hate you.

March 18th, 2020 02:05

EATING CURRY
dusk arising said:

And those hygene rules are a right flippin caper,
I wanna eat my chips out of last weeks newspaper.

Authentic restaurants serve on a leaf too.

March 17th, 2020 13:15

EATING CURRY
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

That\'s not good for our culture,,,We the people of Assam(India) never accept this tradition ...I think hands are the most useful tool in such cases ,given to us by the Creator .

March 17th, 2020 11:50

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Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Absolutely,,In today\'s epoch,,fork becomes human hands !!

March 17th, 2020 11:13

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Michael and so true, I have always used a fork and a spoon.

Andy

March 17th, 2020 03:29

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orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic M. How does Miss Berles eat hers?

March 17th, 2020 02:54

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Saxon Crow said:

If you\'re really authentic youd use your hands!

March 17th, 2020 02:47

LIMERICK No 66
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks UNCLE MIKE for an excellent PEN & INK sketch of a Rural Scene. Your Limerick paints an equally beatiful but much more private scene !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿค๐Ÿงก
Please check *COVID 19* ~ Thanks !

March 16th, 2020 17:40

LIMERICK No 66
Fay Slimm. said:

Love your limericks -- your wit is something I would love to even a tiny wee bit of...................... great stuff

March 16th, 2020 17:34

LIMERICK No 66
Poetic Dan said:

Fantastic!

March 16th, 2020 03:23

LIMERICK No 66
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Michael.

March 16th, 2020 03:13

LIMERICK No 66
orchidee said:

Oops lol. A \'Carry On\' film had a gal in a very short skirt. One said\' Your skirt goes up to your..... then someone else interrupted him!
Miss Berles have short skirts?

March 16th, 2020 02:49

LIMERICK No 66
dusk arising said:

A lithe and long legged lassie
definitely one you\'d call classy
with a smile on her lip
and a saucey wee quip
ya might even say she was sassy

I like to read your limericks each morning, they get my juices flowing and rarely can i resist composing one on the spot which i also enjoy immensely.

March 16th, 2020 01:42



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