Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE ARTISTS DILEMMA
dusk arising said:
Ha! Maybe if you drank a certain liquid you, easel pallet and all, would sway just like the sea.
March 21st, 2020 01:36
dusk arising said:
Ha! Maybe if you drank a certain liquid you, easel pallet and all, would sway just like the sea.
March 21st, 2020 01:36
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FredPeyer said:
You must have been thinking of me when you wrote that first one!
The second one is so true, and the third one I wouldn\'t know wearing slippers and t-shirts all the time.
March 20th, 2020 21:29
FredPeyer said:
You must have been thinking of me when you wrote that first one!
The second one is so true, and the third one I wouldn\'t know wearing slippers and t-shirts all the time.
March 20th, 2020 21:29
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Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - love your funny couplets - - more please dear fashionista.
March 20th, 2020 16:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - love your funny couplets - - more please dear fashionista.
March 20th, 2020 16:47
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Mike ~ Last day @ Work today ~ Virus dont inspirus ! Love the Silly Wet ~ she leaves much to the imagination ! Because we have cancelled the oft castigated GCSES & A-Levels ~ I should warn we are now grading all coarse work ~ including couplets !
GRADINGS (A la GCSE English) I am an infernal examiner !
1. A fitting *Ode to a Unidexter* ~ Grade B
2. A good Mantra for Teens ~ Grade B
3. Excellent use of Rhyme ~ Grade A
I have used tte old gradings which made more sense !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐งก๐ค๐
March 20th, 2020 12:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Uncle Mike ~ Last day @ Work today ~ Virus dont inspirus ! Love the Silly Wet ~ she leaves much to the imagination ! Because we have cancelled the oft castigated GCSES & A-Levels ~ I should warn we are now grading all coarse work ~ including couplets !
GRADINGS (A la GCSE English) I am an infernal examiner !
1. A fitting *Ode to a Unidexter* ~ Grade B
2. A good Mantra for Teens ~ Grade B
3. Excellent use of Rhyme ~ Grade A
I have used tte old gradings which made more sense !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐งก๐ค๐
March 20th, 2020 12:27
3 MORE COUPLETS
dusk arising said:
A ploughman who severed one arm
wore it round his neck iike a charm
Farmers wife said he was no use
he suffered so much abuse
he set up his home where once he would furrow
lived with three rabbits in a well comfy burrow
Enjoyed your three gems today.... thought i\'d break a few rules and maybe raise a smile above.
March 20th, 2020 10:36
dusk arising said:
A ploughman who severed one arm
wore it round his neck iike a charm
Farmers wife said he was no use
he suffered so much abuse
he set up his home where once he would furrow
lived with three rabbits in a well comfy burrow
Enjoyed your three gems today.... thought i\'d break a few rules and maybe raise a smile above.
March 20th, 2020 10:36
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orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
How are Miss Berles and Co. coping at this time? Is there a ration on syllables? Are they on top of the situation?!
March 20th, 2020 02:54
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
How are Miss Berles and Co. coping at this time? Is there a ration on syllables? Are they on top of the situation?!
March 20th, 2020 02:54
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Goldfinch60 said:
Did the leg fit properly?
Sometimes the heart is right
I was a dedicated follower of fashion in the 1970s now in my real 70s I wear what is comfortable.
Three good ones Michael.
Andy
March 20th, 2020 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Did the leg fit properly?
Sometimes the heart is right
I was a dedicated follower of fashion in the 1970s now in my real 70s I wear what is comfortable.
Three good ones Michael.
Andy
March 20th, 2020 02:18
NEEDLES
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Uncle Mike - Evening Clinic today so time to post a Poem (Education ! Education ! Education !) a comment on the latest victim of the Arch-Virus - COVID 19. I am a qualified ACTUPUNCTURIST - and (at the point of puncture) I supply it free on the NHS ! HEDGEPIGS are not the most Hygienic of critters but I liked the concept. Brian & I have been accused of writing *Boring & Factual Poems sans Emotion* so it is just as well we have some MSN Clowns & Jokers to balance the Odds ! Love the visual (poppy seed heads) so few lines - so much meaning !
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ๐งก๐ค๐
March 19th, 2020 06:06
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Uncle Mike - Evening Clinic today so time to post a Poem (Education ! Education ! Education !) a comment on the latest victim of the Arch-Virus - COVID 19. I am a qualified ACTUPUNCTURIST - and (at the point of puncture) I supply it free on the NHS ! HEDGEPIGS are not the most Hygienic of critters but I liked the concept. Brian & I have been accused of writing *Boring & Factual Poems sans Emotion* so it is just as well we have some MSN Clowns & Jokers to balance the Odds ! Love the visual (poppy seed heads) so few lines - so much meaning !
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ๐งก๐ค๐
March 19th, 2020 06:06
NEEDLES
dusk arising said:
oh no panic buying of hedgehog food and toothpaste..... you never see them at the dentissts do u.
love your fun piece today sir
March 19th, 2020 03:48
dusk arising said:
oh no panic buying of hedgehog food and toothpaste..... you never see them at the dentissts do u.
love your fun piece today sir
March 19th, 2020 03:48
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Gut Mitwoch Onkel Andy - Angela here - On the road later as a peripatetic Physio ! Love the FLAMINGOS my fave bird ! Love couplets - short & sometime sweet !
1. Bon mot ! I know many people that suffer from PCPD - I cure it with acupuncture - the bigger the ego - the bigger the needle. So PRENEZ GARDE ! Im on my rounds !
2. Elephants of my acqaintance do it by phone - a Trunk Call !
Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA ๐งก๐ค๐
Fly the Flag in the face of COVID 19 !
Please check *POETICIAN*
March 18th, 2020 04:53
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Gut Mitwoch Onkel Andy - Angela here - On the road later as a peripatetic Physio ! Love the FLAMINGOS my fave bird ! Love couplets - short & sometime sweet !
1. Bon mot ! I know many people that suffer from PCPD - I cure it with acupuncture - the bigger the ego - the bigger the needle. So PRENEZ GARDE ! Im on my rounds !
2. Elephants of my acqaintance do it by phone - a Trunk Call !
Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA ๐งก๐ค๐
Fly the Flag in the face of COVID 19 !
Please check *POETICIAN*
March 18th, 2020 04:53
EATING CURRY
dusk arising said:
And those hygene rules are a right flippin caper,
I wanna eat my chips out of last weeks newspaper.
Authentic restaurants serve on a leaf too.
March 17th, 2020 13:15
dusk arising said:
And those hygene rules are a right flippin caper,
I wanna eat my chips out of last weeks newspaper.
Authentic restaurants serve on a leaf too.
March 17th, 2020 13:15
EATING CURRY
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
That\'s not good for our culture,,,We the people of Assam(India) never accept this tradition ...I think hands are the most useful tool in such cases ,given to us by the Creator .
March 17th, 2020 11:50
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
That\'s not good for our culture,,,We the people of Assam(India) never accept this tradition ...I think hands are the most useful tool in such cases ,given to us by the Creator .
March 17th, 2020 11:50
EATING CURRY
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Absolutely,,In today\'s epoch,,fork becomes human hands !!
March 17th, 2020 11:13
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Absolutely,,In today\'s epoch,,fork becomes human hands !!
March 17th, 2020 11:13
EATING CURRY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and so true, I have always used a fork and a spoon.
Andy
March 17th, 2020 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and so true, I have always used a fork and a spoon.
Andy
March 17th, 2020 03:29
EATING CURRY
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M. How does Miss Berles eat hers?
March 17th, 2020 02:54
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M. How does Miss Berles eat hers?
March 17th, 2020 02:54
EATING CURRY
Saxon Crow said:
If you\'re really authentic youd use your hands!
March 17th, 2020 02:47
Saxon Crow said:
If you\'re really authentic youd use your hands!
March 17th, 2020 02:47
LIMERICK No 66
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks UNCLE MIKE for an excellent PEN & INK sketch of a Rural Scene. Your Limerick paints an equally beatiful but much more private scene !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ๐งก๐ค๐๐ค๐งก
Please check *COVID 19* ~ Thanks !
March 16th, 2020 17:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks UNCLE MIKE for an excellent PEN & INK sketch of a Rural Scene. Your Limerick paints an equally beatiful but much more private scene !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ๐งก๐ค๐๐ค๐งก
Please check *COVID 19* ~ Thanks !
March 16th, 2020 17:40
LIMERICK No 66
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your limericks -- your wit is something I would love to even a tiny wee bit of...................... great stuff
March 16th, 2020 17:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your limericks -- your wit is something I would love to even a tiny wee bit of...................... great stuff
March 16th, 2020 17:34
LIMERICK No 66
orchidee said:
Oops lol. A \'Carry On\' film had a gal in a very short skirt. One said\' Your skirt goes up to your..... then someone else interrupted him!
Miss Berles have short skirts?
March 16th, 2020 02:49
orchidee said:
Oops lol. A \'Carry On\' film had a gal in a very short skirt. One said\' Your skirt goes up to your..... then someone else interrupted him!
Miss Berles have short skirts?
March 16th, 2020 02:49
LIMERICK No 66
dusk arising said:
A lithe and long legged lassie
definitely one you\'d call classy
with a smile on her lip
and a saucey wee quip
ya might even say she was sassy
I like to read your limericks each morning, they get my juices flowing and rarely can i resist composing one on the spot which i also enjoy immensely.
March 16th, 2020 01:42
dusk arising said:
A lithe and long legged lassie
definitely one you\'d call classy
with a smile on her lip
and a saucey wee quip
ya might even say she was sassy
I like to read your limericks each morning, they get my juices flowing and rarely can i resist composing one on the spot which i also enjoy immensely.
March 16th, 2020 01:42
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