Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
dusk arising said:
\'everyone\'s gone to the moon
\'
\\remember that song by johnathin king back in the 60\'s. Your piece today brought it to mind.
A delightfully sombre mental picture arose.
February 3rd, 2020 03:06
dusk arising said:
\'everyone\'s gone to the moon
\'
\\remember that song by johnathin king back in the 60\'s. Your piece today brought it to mind.
A delightfully sombre mental picture arose.
February 3rd, 2020 03:06
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
Adam Shirley said:
What descriptive choice of words Michael, I truly imagined the beautiful scenery of your poem. Wonderful use of imagery, I truly enjoyed it.
February 3rd, 2020 02:49
Adam Shirley said:
What descriptive choice of words Michael, I truly imagined the beautiful scenery of your poem. Wonderful use of imagery, I truly enjoyed it.
February 3rd, 2020 02:49
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write and pic M. I was on a country walk - trees were bare. Then it occurred to me - of course they are, it\'s Winter. Doh! Though relatively mild day.
How\'s that itching? Does Miss Berles suffer from it too, or has she got fleas?
February 3rd, 2020 02:44
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write and pic M. I was on a country walk - trees were bare. Then it occurred to me - of course they are, it\'s Winter. Doh! Though relatively mild day.
How\'s that itching? Does Miss Berles suffer from it too, or has she got fleas?
February 3rd, 2020 02:44
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Michael.
As for the art work it is stunning, I just sighed when I saw it, it is so meaningful - I love it.
Thank you for sharing it.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Michael.
As for the art work it is stunning, I just sighed when I saw it, it is so meaningful - I love it.
Thank you for sharing it.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 02:14
NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a fine first read of the day Michael. Must save to read again and again.
Kind regards, Alan
February 3rd, 2020 02:12
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a fine first read of the day Michael. Must save to read again and again.
Kind regards, Alan
February 3rd, 2020 02:12
TRAIN JOURNEY: 1st February 2020
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A good write.
Even though I work for the Department for Transport I wont be travelling this month on the train.
Keep writing FineB
February 1st, 2020 11:49
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A good write.
Even though I work for the Department for Transport I wont be travelling this month on the train.
Keep writing FineB
February 1st, 2020 11:49
TRAIN JOURNEY: 1st February 2020
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela Here - Just having Coffee & Shortbread with Brian before SHOPPING ~ AMEN ! Love the painting - Scotish Lowlands in Winter ? Brian & I always take the TRAIN up to the SMOKE. We never worry about the time because it is normally Pleasure not Business. I was raised in London but would hate to have to commute every day ! It sure doesnt take a Month to travel to March (Norfolk) from Essex ! Not even by ANGLIA !
Blessings & Peace - to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
Please check *BEYOND THE SUNSET* Thanks A !
February 1st, 2020 05:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela Here - Just having Coffee & Shortbread with Brian before SHOPPING ~ AMEN ! Love the painting - Scotish Lowlands in Winter ? Brian & I always take the TRAIN up to the SMOKE. We never worry about the time because it is normally Pleasure not Business. I was raised in London but would hate to have to commute every day ! It sure doesnt take a Month to travel to March (Norfolk) from Essex ! Not even by ANGLIA !
Blessings & Peace - to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
Please check *BEYOND THE SUNSET* Thanks A !
February 1st, 2020 05:31
TRAIN JOURNEY: 1st February 2020
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write and pic M. Was Miss Berles on same train as you?!
February 1st, 2020 02:54
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write and pic M. Was Miss Berles on same train as you?!
February 1st, 2020 02:54
TRAIN JOURNEY: 1st February 2020
Goldfinch60 said:
I am always early - it gets very lonely being punctual!
LOve the artwork, similar to others I have liked.
Andy
February 1st, 2020 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
I am always early - it gets very lonely being punctual!
LOve the artwork, similar to others I have liked.
Andy
February 1st, 2020 02:24
STAGES OF LIFE
Fay Slimm. said:
So apt to describe the fact that minds change as years fly by my friend. Dementia may threaten yet like you dear Michael I try to live one day at a time.
January 29th, 2020 17:51
Fay Slimm. said:
So apt to describe the fact that minds change as years fly by my friend. Dementia may threaten yet like you dear Michael I try to live one day at a time.
January 29th, 2020 17:51
STAGES OF LIFE
dusk arising said:
Very clever and thought provoking.
Less is more.
January 29th, 2020 10:01
dusk arising said:
Very clever and thought provoking.
Less is more.
January 29th, 2020 10:01
STAGES OF LIFE
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A good write and thought provoking.
What do we really want out of life?
What do we really need.
Keep writing FineB
January 29th, 2020 06:45
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
A good write and thought provoking.
What do we really want out of life?
What do we really need.
Keep writing FineB
January 29th, 2020 06:45
STAGES OF LIFE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BUENAS DIAS TIO MIKE ! Love the picture ~ reminds me of Friends of OURS (Owen & Blodwyn) who always have their SHEEP DOG (also called Fido !) sleeping between them in their bed ! They put Him in the kennels on a Friday Night so Fred gets his conjugal rights ! Love the Poem ~ it has multiresponsitivity. My answer would be *A Bottle of Single Malt when Hogmany is still a Year awa* !*
January 29th, 2020 02:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BUENAS DIAS TIO MIKE ! Love the picture ~ reminds me of Friends of OURS (Owen & Blodwyn) who always have their SHEEP DOG (also called Fido !) sleeping between them in their bed ! They put Him in the kennels on a Friday Night so Fred gets his conjugal rights ! Love the Poem ~ it has multiresponsitivity. My answer would be *A Bottle of Single Malt when Hogmany is still a Year awa* !*
January 29th, 2020 02:27
STAGES OF LIFE
Goldfinch60 said:
Those wants and needs can so so intriguing but so anonymous.
Andy
January 29th, 2020 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those wants and needs can so so intriguing but so anonymous.
Andy
January 29th, 2020 02:14
STAGES OF LIFE
Adam Shirley said:
I love the title, and the poem itself is thought provoking. You definitely have me thinking, a fine piece written.
January 29th, 2020 01:27
Adam Shirley said:
I love the title, and the poem itself is thought provoking. You definitely have me thinking, a fine piece written.
January 29th, 2020 01:27
EMPTY BOTTLE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Uncle Mike ! Glass & Ceramics are acceptable waste but such materials are outnumbered 1000 to ONE by non-biodegradable plastic waste cause *DEATH on the NILE* etc etc. Great Peom & Painting ~ Thanks for sharing ~ please check HOLOCAUST ~ thanks.
Blessings for You & Yours
Love A & B 🧡💙🧡
Please add a Stanza to our FUSION ~ Thanks !
MAJOR HISTORICAL SCIENTIFIC ACHIEVEMNETS
January 28th, 2020 05:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Uncle Mike ! Glass & Ceramics are acceptable waste but such materials are outnumbered 1000 to ONE by non-biodegradable plastic waste cause *DEATH on the NILE* etc etc. Great Peom & Painting ~ Thanks for sharing ~ please check HOLOCAUST ~ thanks.
Blessings for You & Yours
Love A & B 🧡💙🧡
Please add a Stanza to our FUSION ~ Thanks !
MAJOR HISTORICAL SCIENTIFIC ACHIEVEMNETS
January 28th, 2020 05:20
EMPTY BOTTLE
dusk arising said:
Whatsum? Flotsum, got some!
Nice play with words ME
January 28th, 2020 04:33
dusk arising said:
Whatsum? Flotsum, got some!
Nice play with words ME
January 28th, 2020 04:33
THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (7)
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A great write!
Be unpredictable and an original!
Keep writing FineB
January 26th, 2020 15:20
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A great write!
Be unpredictable and an original!
Keep writing FineB
January 26th, 2020 15:20
WHERE NO ROSES GROW
dusk arising said:
Well created air of gloom and doom persists until those final lines of mystery.
One to tickle the grey matter here i think.
January 24th, 2020 11:48
dusk arising said:
Well created air of gloom and doom persists until those final lines of mystery.
One to tickle the grey matter here i think.
January 24th, 2020 11:48
WHERE NO ROSES GROW
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRAIN HERE ! Being a FROSTOPHILE I take the picture to be a Rose Bush in deep Winter ~ which complements the Title. I have seen similar in Mums garden !
The Poem ? Less flippant than of late Master Mike !
V1. A bleak - lampless - roseless Street - WW1. ?
V2. No Hope - naked stones - chruning heels - WW2. ?
v3. Writhing bodies - fettred pride - shades of grey - WW3 ?
Nil desperandum - carborundum !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
January 24th, 2020 10:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRAIN HERE ! Being a FROSTOPHILE I take the picture to be a Rose Bush in deep Winter ~ which complements the Title. I have seen similar in Mums garden !
The Poem ? Less flippant than of late Master Mike !
V1. A bleak - lampless - roseless Street - WW1. ?
V2. No Hope - naked stones - chruning heels - WW2. ?
v3. Writhing bodies - fettred pride - shades of grey - WW3 ?
Nil desperandum - carborundum !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
January 24th, 2020 10:29
WHERE NO ROSES GROW
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a very special piece I think Michael, and one which I\'d like to save. I wonder if it\'s a picture inspired poem or a poem inspired picture..... must really be a dark place though if no roses grow there ~ even a red rose grows wild in Spanish Harlem.
Kind regards, Alan
January 24th, 2020 09:40
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a very special piece I think Michael, and one which I\'d like to save. I wonder if it\'s a picture inspired poem or a poem inspired picture..... must really be a dark place though if no roses grow there ~ even a red rose grows wild in Spanish Harlem.
Kind regards, Alan
January 24th, 2020 09:40
WHERE NO ROSES GROW
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Ahh, is that the Club that Miss Berles goes to, that you\'re writing about? What\'s she up to there?! lol.
January 24th, 2020 03:01
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M.
Ahh, is that the Club that Miss Berles goes to, that you\'re writing about? What\'s she up to there?! lol.
January 24th, 2020 03:01
WHERE NO ROSES GROW
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness is there
But our knowledge will tell us
The darkness will subside,
The light will be back in our lives,
And the roses will grow.
Good words Michael and another super artwork, similar to others I have seen in the past.
Andy
January 24th, 2020 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness is there
But our knowledge will tell us
The darkness will subside,
The light will be back in our lives,
And the roses will grow.
Good words Michael and another super artwork, similar to others I have seen in the past.
Andy
January 24th, 2020 02:10
HE
dusk arising said:
Seeing that title HE took me straight back to childhood vision of the top shelf HE magazine where we first sniggered and tittered over nudity..... funnily enough one or two pictures within did make us weak at the knees and short of breath too.
As a sufferer of arthritis in my knees im sympathetic to anyone in the same boat. I remember mum telling me that growing old was all about putting up with aches and pains,,,, she was right.
January 23rd, 2020 05:09
dusk arising said:
Seeing that title HE took me straight back to childhood vision of the top shelf HE magazine where we first sniggered and tittered over nudity..... funnily enough one or two pictures within did make us weak at the knees and short of breath too.
As a sufferer of arthritis in my knees im sympathetic to anyone in the same boat. I remember mum telling me that growing old was all about putting up with aches and pains,,,, she was right.
January 23rd, 2020 05:09
HE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle Mike ~ nice to have you back and your Magic Brush ~ AWESOME ! The moral of your MANTRA is *HE who tries too HARD ~ inevitably falls ~ flat on his FACE !* In my experience Ladies know when to stop ! ! !
Blessings & peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGEL 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 23rd, 2020 04:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle Mike ~ nice to have you back and your Magic Brush ~ AWESOME ! The moral of your MANTRA is *HE who tries too HARD ~ inevitably falls ~ flat on his FACE !* In my experience Ladies know when to stop ! ! !
Blessings & peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGEL 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 23rd, 2020 04:51
HE
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - I did much the same as Andy as your amazingly colourful art-work took my breath away- - - - I like the intrigue in your few lines however Mike and maybe a sequel will follow ?
January 23rd, 2020 03:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - I did much the same as Andy as your amazingly colourful art-work took my breath away- - - - I like the intrigue in your few lines however Mike and maybe a sequel will follow ?
January 23rd, 2020 03:34
HE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. He (or She) who must be obeyed - Mr & Mrs Berles?!
January 23rd, 2020 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. He (or She) who must be obeyed - Mr & Mrs Berles?!
January 23rd, 2020 02:52
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