Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A KNOBBLY BONE
Neville said:
Bril sir Michael and nowt less than...
dry cleaning bill in the post...
October 4th, 2019 05:46
Neville said:
Bril sir Michael and nowt less than...
dry cleaning bill in the post...
October 4th, 2019 05:46
A KNOBBLY BONE
FredPeyer said:
What I need is a knobbly brain so the ideas don\'t fall off!
October 4th, 2019 01:45
FredPeyer said:
What I need is a knobbly brain so the ideas don\'t fall off!
October 4th, 2019 01:45
A KNOBBLY BONE
dusk arising said:
Tell me about it! Everyday i have a battery powered 24/7 drug injector system hanging off a smooth shoulder (plugged into my arm).... very frustrating.
A knobbly bone would be welcome.
October 4th, 2019 01:17
dusk arising said:
Tell me about it! Everyday i have a battery powered 24/7 drug injector system hanging off a smooth shoulder (plugged into my arm).... very frustrating.
A knobbly bone would be welcome.
October 4th, 2019 01:17
A KNOBBLY BONE
Goldfinch60 said:
\"ATTENSHUN!!,
GET THOSE SHOULDERS BACK
DO NOT SLUMP
STRAIGHT SHOULDERS
DO NOT NEED A LUMP!!\"
October 4th, 2019 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
\"ATTENSHUN!!,
GET THOSE SHOULDERS BACK
DO NOT SLUMP
STRAIGHT SHOULDERS
DO NOT NEED A LUMP!!\"
October 4th, 2019 00:51
UNDER THE WEATHER?
Neville said:
you almost made me clear out both ends simultaneously.. cheers Michael
very nearly in fact.. N
October 3rd, 2019 13:16
Neville said:
you almost made me clear out both ends simultaneously.. cheers Michael
very nearly in fact.. N
October 3rd, 2019 13:16
UNDER THE WEATHER?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN here ! I get the message ~ it calls for a Shubber Reat ! Love the Flowers ~ Pink always makes me long fo ANGELA ! Shes fast asleep right now (Almost 2am Friday ! )
Please check todays POEM *Discovering a New Cave* and our Latest Fusion *National Ode Day* any Style ~ any Subject ~ OK !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 3rd, 2019 08:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN here ! I get the message ~ it calls for a Shubber Reat ! Love the Flowers ~ Pink always makes me long fo ANGELA ! Shes fast asleep right now (Almost 2am Friday ! )
Please check todays POEM *Discovering a New Cave* and our Latest Fusion *National Ode Day* any Style ~ any Subject ~ OK !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 3rd, 2019 08:49
UNDER THE WEATHER?
Christina8 said:
You make me LOL!! love these little writes!!
October 3rd, 2019 06:25
Christina8 said:
You make me LOL!! love these little writes!!
October 3rd, 2019 06:25
UNDER THE WEATHER?
dusk arising said:
Or they\'ll do just what it says on the tin!
Good laugh with my first read today.
October 3rd, 2019 02:27
dusk arising said:
Or they\'ll do just what it says on the tin!
Good laugh with my first read today.
October 3rd, 2019 02:27
UNDER THE WEATHER?
Goldfinch60 said:
Another laugh Michael, thank you so much.
October 3rd, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Another laugh Michael, thank you so much.
October 3rd, 2019 01:44
WHY?
Clara said:
Oh, I was not expecting this from the first line. I actually laughed out loud at my desk at work. Excellent!
October 1st, 2019 06:42
Clara said:
Oh, I was not expecting this from the first line. I actually laughed out loud at my desk at work. Excellent!
October 1st, 2019 06:42
WHY?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Sleeping NAKED on a JUMBO JET
Flying NUDO as nature intended
OK from the back (my buttocks are set)
But NOT THE FRONT ~ with my JOYSTICK extended !
Very DROLL Uncle Mike ~ Too much exposure on a Pubic Flight is a Dangerous Thing ! Youve been watching too many James Bond Films again ! Gives a MAN ideas beyond his destination ! Love the NAKED DAISIES !
BLESSINGS to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY !
October 1st, 2019 04:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Sleeping NAKED on a JUMBO JET
Flying NUDO as nature intended
OK from the back (my buttocks are set)
But NOT THE FRONT ~ with my JOYSTICK extended !
Very DROLL Uncle Mike ~ Too much exposure on a Pubic Flight is a Dangerous Thing ! Youve been watching too many James Bond Films again ! Gives a MAN ideas beyond his destination ! Love the NAKED DAISIES !
BLESSINGS to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY !
October 1st, 2019 04:51
WHY?
dusk arising said:
All eyes popped
what a an amazine scene
they began to shove and barge
for the strangest vision
his fuselage
October 1st, 2019 03:41
dusk arising said:
All eyes popped
what a an amazine scene
they began to shove and barge
for the strangest vision
his fuselage
October 1st, 2019 03:41
WHY?
orchidee said:
Oh lol, swoon! How does Miss Berles sleep? And how would we know?!
October 1st, 2019 01:50
orchidee said:
Oh lol, swoon! How does Miss Berles sleep? And how would we know?!
October 1st, 2019 01:50
DEFINITIONS
dusk arising said:
Invent a handy pocket tape measure encapsulating your points and you\'ll make an absolute..... erm, invention i guess.
September 30th, 2019 14:00
dusk arising said:
Invent a handy pocket tape measure encapsulating your points and you\'ll make an absolute..... erm, invention i guess.
September 30th, 2019 14:00
DEFINITIONS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ! As you know I try to use Accepted Descriptive Poetic Language when refering to my own *CLASSICAL POETRY* and I encourage ANGELA to do likewise ! You are older than both of us together so I have copied your POEM to make (doubly ) sure we are right in future ~ AMEN ! Love the IRIS !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check Angelas
MY OCTOBER BLUES !
PS For us any Poem with
14 lines is a SONNET ~ OK !
September 30th, 2019 09:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ! As you know I try to use Accepted Descriptive Poetic Language when refering to my own *CLASSICAL POETRY* and I encourage ANGELA to do likewise ! You are older than both of us together so I have copied your POEM to make (doubly ) sure we are right in future ~ AMEN ! Love the IRIS !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check Angelas
MY OCTOBER BLUES !
PS For us any Poem with
14 lines is a SONNET ~ OK !
September 30th, 2019 09:40
DEFINITIONS
orchidee said:
I dunno if I did find out exactly about them iambic pentameters. I may have been using them without knowing it!
A metre - 39 inches!
September 30th, 2019 01:43
orchidee said:
I dunno if I did find out exactly about them iambic pentameters. I may have been using them without knowing it!
A metre - 39 inches!
September 30th, 2019 01:43
THE END YEARS
marijoy said:
Oh that sweet and secure love that only maturity can bring us. A safe and divine place. Lovely words Michael.
September 26th, 2019 21:13
marijoy said:
Oh that sweet and secure love that only maturity can bring us. A safe and divine place. Lovely words Michael.
September 26th, 2019 21:13
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