Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Heart Disease
Poetic Licence said:
If someone cannot be fully committed or give their whole heart to something or someone, it is better off leaving alone. enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 02:43
Poetic Licence said:
If someone cannot be fully committed or give their whole heart to something or someone, it is better off leaving alone. enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 02:43
Heart Disease
Michael Edwards said:
In simple terms if its worth doing its worth doing well - your super shorty captures this with elegance.
February 3rd, 2025 02:23
Michael Edwards said:
In simple terms if its worth doing its worth doing well - your super shorty captures this with elegance.
February 3rd, 2025 02:23
Midwinter Vacation
arqios said:
Oh nice! Somewhere warm or somewhere snowy… it shall be revealed whence thou returneth… Have a good one!
February 3rd, 2025 01:25
arqios said:
Oh nice! Somewhere warm or somewhere snowy… it shall be revealed whence thou returneth… Have a good one!
February 3rd, 2025 01:25
Heart Disease
orchidee said:
Doh! if there\'s deep meanings in poems, I often don\'t get their meaning and may put my big foot in it! Or maybe, as you say, poems can be open to different interpretations.
February 2nd, 2025 14:48
orchidee said:
Doh! if there\'s deep meanings in poems, I often don\'t get their meaning and may put my big foot in it! Or maybe, as you say, poems can be open to different interpretations.
February 2nd, 2025 14:48
Heart Disease
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! How charmingly rendered in dearest Will\'s inimitable fashion, laced with such tantalizing intrigue to captivate, its haunting poignancy nearly culls swooning. La dee! Superb! Applicable on multiple points, this is too good and expertly crafted. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 2nd, 2025 12:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! How charmingly rendered in dearest Will\'s inimitable fashion, laced with such tantalizing intrigue to captivate, its haunting poignancy nearly culls swooning. La dee! Superb! Applicable on multiple points, this is too good and expertly crafted. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 2nd, 2025 12:31
Heart Disease
Cassie58 said:
Hello Tristen. A nicely penned brevity here with layers. This is how I interpreted your words. Put your heart and soul into everything you do to reap the full benefits. Anything less, particularly when it comes to love is going to give you heart ache. Heart disease is a common complaint these days. Hope your Sunday is going well. Another fine write from your talented pen.
February 2nd, 2025 11:59
Cassie58 said:
Hello Tristen. A nicely penned brevity here with layers. This is how I interpreted your words. Put your heart and soul into everything you do to reap the full benefits. Anything less, particularly when it comes to love is going to give you heart ache. Heart disease is a common complaint these days. Hope your Sunday is going well. Another fine write from your talented pen.
February 2nd, 2025 11:59
rejected
across_world_with_u said:
When we just don’t fit! It’s not that we don’t we are just in the wrong puzzle box…❤️
February 2nd, 2025 08:55
across_world_with_u said:
When we just don’t fit! It’s not that we don’t we are just in the wrong puzzle box…❤️
February 2nd, 2025 08:55
Heart Disease
sorenbarrett said:
Here the metaphor comes through strong and clear. One\'s heart should always be in the dance just as in music or any art.
February 2nd, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
Here the metaphor comes through strong and clear. One\'s heart should always be in the dance just as in music or any art.
February 2nd, 2025 07:47
The Man I Cannot Hear
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, the melencholia is palpable. Superb work.
February 1st, 2025 21:22
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, the melencholia is palpable. Superb work.
February 1st, 2025 21:22
The Man I Cannot Hear
Neville said:
You are really on form and without doubt, a much braver man than me Tristan .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:06
Neville said:
You are really on form and without doubt, a much braver man than me Tristan .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:06
The Man I Cannot Hear
orchidee said:
A fictional write? Good to see some more of the \'old RC\'. Aghh, not Roman Catholics, but Revelatory Cascades!
February 1st, 2025 11:58
orchidee said:
A fictional write? Good to see some more of the \'old RC\'. Aghh, not Roman Catholics, but Revelatory Cascades!
February 1st, 2025 11:58
The Man I Cannot Hear
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reminded me a the swing of a church bell. As it swings silently in form it can be heard underneath in the words of the poem. Very createive
February 1st, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reminded me a the swing of a church bell. As it swings silently in form it can be heard underneath in the words of the poem. Very createive
February 1st, 2025 09:46
The Withered Garden
arqios said:
Now this brings me way back. Love poems that are able to transport the reader every which way! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 09:02
arqios said:
Now this brings me way back. Love poems that are able to transport the reader every which way! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 09:02
You
Cheeky Missy said:
Whomever inspired this pretty number sounds like a number of individuals who recklessly abandon others to the edge of life, aptly conveyed as lacking any concern for the same. Beautifully rendered with a painfully haunting poignancy. Too many should resonate with this.
January 31st, 2025 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Whomever inspired this pretty number sounds like a number of individuals who recklessly abandon others to the edge of life, aptly conveyed as lacking any concern for the same. Beautifully rendered with a painfully haunting poignancy. Too many should resonate with this.
January 31st, 2025 18:58
Echoes of Inevitability
Cheeky Missy said:
If I said simply, Genesis 3, would it really matter? It\'s a reality fewer realize than aught, since the end is hauntingly coldly eerie when you mistakenly believed you couldn\'t be so alone. Years ago it dawned on me that there\'d be none to advocate for me to the LORD, only Himself. And the reality which pans itself out even now is so devoid of close companions, I find Job\'s words too aprops, \"...Thou hast made desolate all my company--\" (Job 16:7b) Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a superbly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 17:58
Cheeky Missy said:
If I said simply, Genesis 3, would it really matter? It\'s a reality fewer realize than aught, since the end is hauntingly coldly eerie when you mistakenly believed you couldn\'t be so alone. Years ago it dawned on me that there\'d be none to advocate for me to the LORD, only Himself. And the reality which pans itself out even now is so devoid of close companions, I find Job\'s words too aprops, \"...Thou hast made desolate all my company--\" (Job 16:7b) Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a superbly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 17:58
1933/2016/2024
arqios said:
I liked how the years are used to mark points in history like coordinates, very effective there , T👍🏻🙏🏻✌🏼
January 31st, 2025 12:49
arqios said:
I liked how the years are used to mark points in history like coordinates, very effective there , T👍🏻🙏🏻✌🏼
January 31st, 2025 12:49
1933/2016/2024
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful statement and one i totally agree with, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:38
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful statement and one i totally agree with, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:38
1933/2016/2024
sorenbarrett said:
I see what you mean in the similarity of our writes today and hear you well. Powerfully written.
January 31st, 2025 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
I see what you mean in the similarity of our writes today and hear you well. Powerfully written.
January 31st, 2025 09:12
Would It Be?
Tom Dylan said:
Hmmm... a thought-provoking piece. A fine write. Nicely done.
January 31st, 2025 08:35
Tom Dylan said:
Hmmm... a thought-provoking piece. A fine write. Nicely done.
January 31st, 2025 08:35
Would It Be?
arqios said:
It does make one wonder. Almost like the chicken or the egg scenario 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 08:18
arqios said:
It does make one wonder. Almost like the chicken or the egg scenario 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 08:18
Would It Be?
Dan Williams said:
The answer to this is, I think, everything that lives must die. We can accept that and reach some level or contentment or struggle flutily against it. Well said.
January 31st, 2025 00:00
Dan Williams said:
The answer to this is, I think, everything that lives must die. We can accept that and reach some level or contentment or struggle flutily against it. Well said.
January 31st, 2025 00:00
Would It Be?
NinjaGirl said:
to live, to love, to long, to lose ...concern yourself not with what was or what will be... you\'re alive, quite the miracle itself. you have already been born, might as well have fun with it
January 30th, 2025 16:09
NinjaGirl said:
to live, to love, to long, to lose ...concern yourself not with what was or what will be... you\'re alive, quite the miracle itself. you have already been born, might as well have fun with it
January 30th, 2025 16:09
Would It Be?
Poetic Licence said:
Well where would you start, so many equations. For me i survived but i would not want to do it again, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 12:11
Poetic Licence said:
Well where would you start, so many equations. For me i survived but i would not want to do it again, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 12:11
Would It Be?
Cheeky Missy said:
Depends on what follows, I say. If nothing at all, I\'ve nary use for existing. If what the Scriptures promise, then everything is worth the prize. But enough of me. Charmingly rendered in tantalizing brevity with an almost sneakily haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 12:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Depends on what follows, I say. If nothing at all, I\'ve nary use for existing. If what the Scriptures promise, then everything is worth the prize. But enough of me. Charmingly rendered in tantalizing brevity with an almost sneakily haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 12:06
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