Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
RESIST
Neville said:
Sound advice .. and from a sociological perspective, purposefully & poetically splendid too 😎👍
November 16th, 2024 02:54
Neville said:
Sound advice .. and from a sociological perspective, purposefully & poetically splendid too 😎👍
November 16th, 2024 02:54
HATE
Bigguy said:
There is an intensity here, but I feel like you could sharpen it further. Perhaps instead of \"Humans\" you could write about the reader? Just a thought, well done!
November 16th, 2024 01:53
Bigguy said:
There is an intensity here, but I feel like you could sharpen it further. Perhaps instead of \"Humans\" you could write about the reader? Just a thought, well done!
November 16th, 2024 01:53
RESIST
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Tristan that will definitely do for a start.👍
November 15th, 2024 23:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Tristan that will definitely do for a start.👍
November 15th, 2024 23:31
HATE
Thad Wilk said:
Great Acrostic and
warning too!! 😮
Artfully expressed
a superb read thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 14th, 2024 18:03
Thad Wilk said:
Great Acrostic and
warning too!! 😮
Artfully expressed
a superb read thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 14th, 2024 18:03
HATE
Doggerel Dave said:
Obviously bad when it is as all encompassing as that, but selective hate has its place as well as love and happiness and so on..
Warning well posted however.
November 14th, 2024 16:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Obviously bad when it is as all encompassing as that, but selective hate has its place as well as love and happiness and so on..
Warning well posted however.
November 14th, 2024 16:36
HATE
sorenbarrett said:
He is a two edged sword that cuts both ways. Period. Anger likewise can burn the hand of the one that holds it, as well as to whom it is directed well written.
November 14th, 2024 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
He is a two edged sword that cuts both ways. Period. Anger likewise can burn the hand of the one that holds it, as well as to whom it is directed well written.
November 14th, 2024 14:30
HATE
NinjaGirl said:
hate is something that will destroy the hater more than whom they hate
November 14th, 2024 12:50
NinjaGirl said:
hate is something that will destroy the hater more than whom they hate
November 14th, 2024 12:50
HATE
orchidee said:
I hate to say, as one said somewhere on several poems (not on this site!) and incurred poet\'s wrath: \'I don\'t much care for this poem\'. It wouldn\'t be so bad if he said it just on one or two poems, but no, it was on several poets poems.
November 14th, 2024 09:48
orchidee said:
I hate to say, as one said somewhere on several poems (not on this site!) and incurred poet\'s wrath: \'I don\'t much care for this poem\'. It wouldn\'t be so bad if he said it just on one or two poems, but no, it was on several poets poems.
November 14th, 2024 09:48
HATE
Neville said:
Fuck that\'s the most offensive four letter word known to mankind in my humble opinion .. but a brilliant acronym & acrostic all rolled into one .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 08:56
Neville said:
Fuck that\'s the most offensive four letter word known to mankind in my humble opinion .. but a brilliant acronym & acrostic all rolled into one .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 08:56
HATE
Cassie58 said:
A powerful illustration to accompany your acrostic. Such a destructive emotion. Well penned brevity.
November 14th, 2024 08:03
Cassie58 said:
A powerful illustration to accompany your acrostic. Such a destructive emotion. Well penned brevity.
November 14th, 2024 08:03
Through a Window Darkly
Cassie58 said:
Superbly written. Dark and heavy. Relatable to many who have experienced the black hole of depression. Well done Tristan.
November 14th, 2024 07:47
Cassie58 said:
Superbly written. Dark and heavy. Relatable to many who have experienced the black hole of depression. Well done Tristan.
November 14th, 2024 07:47
FEAR
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, \"...fear hath torment--\" of which I know too keenly well. If only--ah. Lovely in charming brevity with superb poignancy and great imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, \"...fear hath torment--\" of which I know too keenly well. If only--ah. Lovely in charming brevity with superb poignancy and great imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:18
Through a Window Darkly
Neville said:
This can not have been easy to write surely .. so many exceptional turns of phrase it would be nigh on impossible to single each one out and place them in any preferred or chronological order .. the black dog becomes a paler genus but we all see beneath the grim façade .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 02:09
Neville said:
This can not have been easy to write surely .. so many exceptional turns of phrase it would be nigh on impossible to single each one out and place them in any preferred or chronological order .. the black dog becomes a paler genus but we all see beneath the grim façade .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 02:09
Through a Window Darkly
Cheeky Missy said:
I stumbled after the resonating lines took an unexpected turn, leaving me at the crossroads looking after the speaker who disappeared in the murkier fog. Excellently rendered with a deeply haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:00
Cheeky Missy said:
I stumbled after the resonating lines took an unexpected turn, leaving me at the crossroads looking after the speaker who disappeared in the murkier fog. Excellently rendered with a deeply haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:00
Through a Window Darkly
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
What a powerful and captivating
and emotional write on the
feelings and emotions depression
any person can be trapped in! 😢
Awesomazing imagery and
word choices, brilliantly composed!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 13th, 2024 23:35
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
What a powerful and captivating
and emotional write on the
feelings and emotions depression
any person can be trapped in! 😢
Awesomazing imagery and
word choices, brilliantly composed!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 13th, 2024 23:35
Through a Window Darkly
sorenbarrett said:
Depression rides a gray horse. This poem speaks darkly and in somber tones.
November 13th, 2024 21:42
sorenbarrett said:
Depression rides a gray horse. This poem speaks darkly and in somber tones.
November 13th, 2024 21:42
Through a Window Darkly
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious, i would say \'Good write, putrid one\'! (yuk. lol).
November 13th, 2024 10:54
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious, i would say \'Good write, putrid one\'! (yuk. lol).
November 13th, 2024 10:54
Through a Window Darkly
2781 said:
\'Death and life are in the power of the tongue:
November 13th, 2024 09:50
2781 said:
\'Death and life are in the power of the tongue:
November 13th, 2024 09:50
FEAR
NinjaGirl said:
I do think you\'re fond of spelling, (: I quite like this series and hope it brings many to thought.
November 12th, 2024 19:25
NinjaGirl said:
I do think you\'re fond of spelling, (: I quite like this series and hope it brings many to thought.
November 12th, 2024 19:25
FEAR
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A terrorIFIC Acrostic,
sCaRY great imagery!! 😱
Two thumbs up,
If I had three hands
I\'d give you three!! 🥇
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 12th, 2024 14:52
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A terrorIFIC Acrostic,
sCaRY great imagery!! 😱
Two thumbs up,
If I had three hands
I\'d give you three!! 🥇
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 12th, 2024 14:52
FEAR
orchidee said:
That you there in that pic? Yep, it\'s fairly scary! lol.
November 12th, 2024 10:27
orchidee said:
That you there in that pic? Yep, it\'s fairly scary! lol.
November 12th, 2024 10:27
FEAR
sorenbarrett said:
A great acrostic that warns us to not become what we fear then we would have to live with italways
November 12th, 2024 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
A great acrostic that warns us to not become what we fear then we would have to live with italways
November 12th, 2024 10:10
FEAR
2781 said:
There is no fear in love; but perfect love casts out fear:
Unfortunately for many they never get to hear!
November 12th, 2024 08:49
2781 said:
There is no fear in love; but perfect love casts out fear:
Unfortunately for many they never get to hear!
November 12th, 2024 08:49
FEAR
arqios said:
Scary indeed. There was this book on the net about an experiment in a jail with guards and inmates studying how good people become bad!
November 12th, 2024 07:30
arqios said:
Scary indeed. There was this book on the net about an experiment in a jail with guards and inmates studying how good people become bad!
November 12th, 2024 07:30
SLAVERY
Neville said:
an excellent choice of vocabulary to describe certain recent events and probable perceived future eventualities .. me ma told me to never wish my time away but I so hope the next 4 years go by quick .. am so glad we appear to be on the same side Tristan .. Neville 👍
November 12th, 2024 00:19
Neville said:
an excellent choice of vocabulary to describe certain recent events and probable perceived future eventualities .. me ma told me to never wish my time away but I so hope the next 4 years go by quick .. am so glad we appear to be on the same side Tristan .. Neville 👍
November 12th, 2024 00:19
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