Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Crowing Time
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly written piece of poetry, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 5th, 2024 09:59
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly written piece of poetry, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 5th, 2024 09:59
Crowing Time
Neville said:
music does all that and more but what beggars belief is you still managed to squeeze a raven and so much darkness into such a small space .. bravo darkly ..
🖤🐦⬛
December 5th, 2024 09:13
Neville said:
music does all that and more but what beggars belief is you still managed to squeeze a raven and so much darkness into such a small space .. bravo darkly ..
🖤🐦⬛
December 5th, 2024 09:13
Crowing Time
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark passage with words of caution. It reads as a cloudy day under a sunny sky. Nicely worded.
December 5th, 2024 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark passage with words of caution. It reads as a cloudy day under a sunny sky. Nicely worded.
December 5th, 2024 08:34
Crowing Time
arqios said:
Your poem masterfully balances the tension between the healing power of music and the relentless presence of despair and death. Executed with suitable darkness!
December 5th, 2024 08:19
arqios said:
Your poem masterfully balances the tension between the healing power of music and the relentless presence of despair and death. Executed with suitable darkness!
December 5th, 2024 08:19
Numbers
Cheeky Missy said:
Math certainly was NOT my forté, yet geometry refusing my attempts, algebra seemed a nice place to hole up until trigonometry threw in the monkey wrench. Charmingly rendered with creative imagery and a macabre poignancy, thank you for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 23:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Math certainly was NOT my forté, yet geometry refusing my attempts, algebra seemed a nice place to hole up until trigonometry threw in the monkey wrench. Charmingly rendered with creative imagery and a macabre poignancy, thank you for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 23:47
Numbers
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😧
A very powerful and
captivating poem and
feelings penned!!🙏
Brilliantly composed,
much enjoyed my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:23
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😧
A very powerful and
captivating poem and
feelings penned!!🙏
Brilliantly composed,
much enjoyed my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:23
Numbers
Doggerel Dave said:
Plodding along and got here L8. Still better even this than 0.
Take care, Tristan!
December 4th, 2024 19:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Plodding along and got here L8. Still better even this than 0.
Take care, Tristan!
December 4th, 2024 19:22
Numbers
arqios said:
The w8 was inconsistent with a4mentioned spect8ors’ f8. Top r8ting 4 dis.
December 4th, 2024 17:05
arqios said:
The w8 was inconsistent with a4mentioned spect8ors’ f8. Top r8ting 4 dis.
December 4th, 2024 17:05
Numbers
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write Tristan.
a use of numbers I have not seen before...
much applause once again my friend.
December 4th, 2024 13:24
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write Tristan.
a use of numbers I have not seen before...
much applause once again my friend.
December 4th, 2024 13:24
Numbers
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of numbers in this piece. 2 begin with it was gr8.
December 4th, 2024 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of numbers in this piece. 2 begin with it was gr8.
December 4th, 2024 12:57
Numbers
Neville said:
I am a man who much prefers letters but appreciate numbers also have a place in this increasingly crazy world of ours .. and you have certainly made good use of a few of them well here my friend .. 10/10 .. Neville 👍
December 4th, 2024 12:08
Neville said:
I am a man who much prefers letters but appreciate numbers also have a place in this increasingly crazy world of ours .. and you have certainly made good use of a few of them well here my friend .. 10/10 .. Neville 👍
December 4th, 2024 12:08
Numbers
Poetic Licence said:
For me a very enjoyable read if a little bit confusing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 11:40
Poetic Licence said:
For me a very enjoyable read if a little bit confusing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 11:40
Numbers
orchidee said:
This is like a hybrid of my FFF poem and the New Testament book of Revelation - numbers in there - 666, etc, many of them symbolic.
December 4th, 2024 09:37
orchidee said:
This is like a hybrid of my FFF poem and the New Testament book of Revelation - numbers in there - 666, etc, many of them symbolic.
December 4th, 2024 09:37
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
Neville said:
How extraordinarily noir .. and likewise enjoyed .. Neville
December 4th, 2024 02:06
Neville said:
How extraordinarily noir .. and likewise enjoyed .. Neville
December 4th, 2024 02:06
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
FrasMac said:
Oh, I can so relate to these emotions. Really well expressed and without any pretence or complications. Well played on the form too!
December 3rd, 2024 13:38
FrasMac said:
Oh, I can so relate to these emotions. Really well expressed and without any pretence or complications. Well played on the form too!
December 3rd, 2024 13:38
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
Poetic Licence said:
Well written, takes you on a little journey a lot of people have travelled, enjoyed the read.
December 3rd, 2024 10:47
Poetic Licence said:
Well written, takes you on a little journey a lot of people have travelled, enjoyed the read.
December 3rd, 2024 10:47
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
sorenbarrett said:
A read on the darker side it seems to have a feel of Gothic to it. That’s OK though I like cloudy days from time to time. Written with great imagery and a sense of pathos.
December 3rd, 2024 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
A read on the darker side it seems to have a feel of Gothic to it. That’s OK though I like cloudy days from time to time. Written with great imagery and a sense of pathos.
December 3rd, 2024 10:32
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we can’t find happiness even if we want to feel that way . Sounds like the state of mind and environment isn’t helping. I guess we can be stuck with how we feel ,sometimes
December 3rd, 2024 09:43
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we can’t find happiness even if we want to feel that way . Sounds like the state of mind and environment isn’t helping. I guess we can be stuck with how we feel ,sometimes
December 3rd, 2024 09:43
Cryogenic Catharsis
orchidee said:
You tried that cryogenic therapy - a tub at about a million degrees below freezing? Well, up about -200C really.
Yes - barber-surgeons in days of old. Were people there just for a haircut? Their red and white poles are ominous. The red is for.....argh!
December 3rd, 2024 03:14
orchidee said:
You tried that cryogenic therapy - a tub at about a million degrees below freezing? Well, up about -200C really.
Yes - barber-surgeons in days of old. Were people there just for a haircut? Their red and white poles are ominous. The red is for.....argh!
December 3rd, 2024 03:14
Cryogenic Catharsis
arqios said:
As long as they are red dancing shoes, however ill-fitting they may be, more dancing we will see!
December 2nd, 2024 22:53
arqios said:
As long as they are red dancing shoes, however ill-fitting they may be, more dancing we will see!
December 2nd, 2024 22:53
Cryogenic Catharsis
NinjaGirl said:
isn\'t it difficult to speak when it feels like a knife is in your throat? how long will the roses remain rotting... release is relief.
December 2nd, 2024 20:42
NinjaGirl said:
isn\'t it difficult to speak when it feels like a knife is in your throat? how long will the roses remain rotting... release is relief.
December 2nd, 2024 20:42
Cryogenic Catharsis
sorenbarrett said:
Bleeding is cathartic seems like a term used in the days when they did bleeding as a surgical procedure. A most interesting poem, full of introjections. Cryogenics do they still do that?
December 2nd, 2024 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
Bleeding is cathartic seems like a term used in the days when they did bleeding as a surgical procedure. A most interesting poem, full of introjections. Cryogenics do they still do that?
December 2nd, 2024 20:24
Hourglass
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
A wonderful shape poem,
captivating and
thought provoking must say!! 🤔
The older I get time just
seems to quickly slip away!!¿
Much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 2nd, 2024 15:06
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
A wonderful shape poem,
captivating and
thought provoking must say!! 🤔
The older I get time just
seems to quickly slip away!!¿
Much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 2nd, 2024 15:06
Hourglass
Cassie58 said:
Shape poetry. A double helping of creativity Tristan. Time - a Grand Canyon or a speck of sand. Love the imagery that comes to mind here. For me, it is speeding up as the sand shifts through the hour glass timer. When young, the days seemed endless. Wonderful write. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2024 07:28
Cassie58 said:
Shape poetry. A double helping of creativity Tristan. Time - a Grand Canyon or a speck of sand. Love the imagery that comes to mind here. For me, it is speeding up as the sand shifts through the hour glass timer. When young, the days seemed endless. Wonderful write. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2024 07:28
Hourglass
Teddy.15 said:
And in hourglass form this is superb dear Tristan I seem to have my own love affair with time, it\'s a truly fascinating theme. Beautifully done. 🌹 ⏳🌹
December 2nd, 2024 01:42
Teddy.15 said:
And in hourglass form this is superb dear Tristan I seem to have my own love affair with time, it\'s a truly fascinating theme. Beautifully done. 🌹 ⏳🌹
December 2nd, 2024 01:42
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