Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Resolution
NafisaSB said:
exactly - what now - let us hope things will improve - 2024 has shown us enough things to worry about
January 11th, 2025 01:36
NafisaSB said:
exactly - what now - let us hope things will improve - 2024 has shown us enough things to worry about
January 11th, 2025 01:36
Grass
Thad Wilk said:
We are all flesh
and temporal
like grass
it\'s true!!
An outstanding
write and
thought provoking too!! 🤩
Thanks for sharing my friend!🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 10th, 2025 23:01
Thad Wilk said:
We are all flesh
and temporal
like grass
it\'s true!!
An outstanding
write and
thought provoking too!! 🤩
Thanks for sharing my friend!🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 10th, 2025 23:01
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
Kevin Hulme said:
For me Poets are People who hang their Washing (Hopes , Fears, Dreams and Loves) on the Line for the Neighbours to Mull over. A very rewarding read.
All the Best.
January 10th, 2025 21:36
Kevin Hulme said:
For me Poets are People who hang their Washing (Hopes , Fears, Dreams and Loves) on the Line for the Neighbours to Mull over. A very rewarding read.
All the Best.
January 10th, 2025 21:36
rejected
vicecream said:
i think so many people view “ friendship” as means to an end- they lose sight of the fact that sharing yourself with another is valuable in its own right
January 10th, 2025 19:02
vicecream said:
i think so many people view “ friendship” as means to an end- they lose sight of the fact that sharing yourself with another is valuable in its own right
January 10th, 2025 19:02
Grass
Poetic Licence said:
Reminding us that we and all around us is temporary, a very interesting and enjoyable read, have a great weekend
January 10th, 2025 13:13
Poetic Licence said:
Reminding us that we and all around us is temporary, a very interesting and enjoyable read, have a great weekend
January 10th, 2025 13:13
Grass
Cheeky Missy said:
You have been reading too much of aka Orchidee [Steven], it appears by this! Lovely and too timely! Thank you very much for sharing. Rendered to effect with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you again.
January 10th, 2025 13:10
Cheeky Missy said:
You have been reading too much of aka Orchidee [Steven], it appears by this! Lovely and too timely! Thank you very much for sharing. Rendered to effect with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you again.
January 10th, 2025 13:10
Grass
Demar Desu said:
“surely the people are grass”…. Nice line I agree… clay and star dust too. How mystical humanity is.
January 10th, 2025 12:49
Demar Desu said:
“surely the people are grass”…. Nice line I agree… clay and star dust too. How mystical humanity is.
January 10th, 2025 12:49
Grass
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is we are all temporal and our time is short. Well written with a great flow.
January 10th, 2025 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is we are all temporal and our time is short. Well written with a great flow.
January 10th, 2025 11:14
Grass
arqios said:
A truly compelling read - a response quite King Jamesian! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 10th, 2025 09:24
arqios said:
A truly compelling read - a response quite King Jamesian! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 10th, 2025 09:24
Twenty-Five
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
A fantabulous poem
and Monorhyme
I must say!! 💯👌
Brilliantly composed
In every way! 🙏
Thanks for sharing
really made my day!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 9th, 2025 22:35
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
A fantabulous poem
and Monorhyme
I must say!! 💯👌
Brilliantly composed
In every way! 🙏
Thanks for sharing
really made my day!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 9th, 2025 22:35
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Kevin Hulme said:
A wonderful treat indeed.
Nice poem.
January 9th, 2025 20:13
Kevin Hulme said:
A wonderful treat indeed.
Nice poem.
January 9th, 2025 20:13
Twenty-Five
Mutley Ravishes said:
If only I knew then what I....! How I have wished to go back somedays and start again. Then I remembered a priest saying how about this deal? You can go back, but on one condition. You have to live the exact same life again. I think I\'d lose my mind!
Now I feel a rhyme coming on. Great write, Tristan.
January 9th, 2025 18:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
If only I knew then what I....! How I have wished to go back somedays and start again. Then I remembered a priest saying how about this deal? You can go back, but on one condition. You have to live the exact same life again. I think I\'d lose my mind!
Now I feel a rhyme coming on. Great write, Tristan.
January 9th, 2025 18:24
Twenty-Five
arqios said:
You’ve done the monorhyme justice! And definitely took ownership of Alexandrine 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 17:24
arqios said:
You’ve done the monorhyme justice! And definitely took ownership of Alexandrine 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 17:24
Twenty-Five
Poetic Licence said:
The things we did not understand or achieve in our younger days, and how we even as we enter older years still be looking to understand that. Enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 12:12
Poetic Licence said:
The things we did not understand or achieve in our younger days, and how we even as we enter older years still be looking to understand that. Enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 12:12
Twenty-Five
sorenbarrett said:
Musings of the past? The what ifs in life and the what is. To find a word that one as enough options for rhyme on to finish each line with the same is difficult at best and I have tried some in the past myself. Nicely done
January 9th, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Musings of the past? The what ifs in life and the what is. To find a word that one as enough options for rhyme on to finish each line with the same is difficult at best and I have tried some in the past myself. Nicely done
January 9th, 2025 10:05
between
NinjaGirl said:
i really really like this poem, and it really seems that the between changes. sometimes the line between everything and nothing is blurred, and the two worlds seem more like one. have you ever felt absolutely nothing and everything at the same time? and what boundaries are there between the seen and unseen? is wind really all that different from fog?
January 8th, 2025 19:54
NinjaGirl said:
i really really like this poem, and it really seems that the between changes. sometimes the line between everything and nothing is blurred, and the two worlds seem more like one. have you ever felt absolutely nothing and everything at the same time? and what boundaries are there between the seen and unseen? is wind really all that different from fog?
January 8th, 2025 19:54
between
Thad Wilk said:
Another poetic
masterpiece
superbly penned my friend!! 🤩
Captivating and thought
provoking throughout and
I totally enjoyed the read indeed!!🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 8th, 2025 18:32
Thad Wilk said:
Another poetic
masterpiece
superbly penned my friend!! 🤩
Captivating and thought
provoking throughout and
I totally enjoyed the read indeed!!🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 8th, 2025 18:32
between
Teddy.15 said:
This is really stunning filled with reflection and emotion. 🌹
January 8th, 2025 12:21
Teddy.15 said:
This is really stunning filled with reflection and emotion. 🌹
January 8th, 2025 12:21
between
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed reading this puzzle, i have read it 3 times and i am still not sure if i would say nothing or everything to all. Great Poem
January 8th, 2025 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed reading this puzzle, i have read it 3 times and i am still not sure if i would say nothing or everything to all. Great Poem
January 8th, 2025 10:38
between
orchidee said:
There will be serious tut-tuttings in some places, if there is even a whiff of anyone saying \'Wooh!\' or \'Yeah!\' at the end of any particularly joyful hymn or song. And don\'t dare cough or sneeze once during the sermon! lol. I saw the latter as a notice in a convent-cum-church, adding \'sneezing loudly can distract from silent worship\' Doh!
January 8th, 2025 09:44
orchidee said:
There will be serious tut-tuttings in some places, if there is even a whiff of anyone saying \'Wooh!\' or \'Yeah!\' at the end of any particularly joyful hymn or song. And don\'t dare cough or sneeze once during the sermon! lol. I saw the latter as a notice in a convent-cum-church, adding \'sneezing loudly can distract from silent worship\' Doh!
January 8th, 2025 09:44
between
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan you have grown very philisophical and versed it in beautiful poetry. So many of these questions the difference between brilliant and insane, our catigorization in which one must be one or another. I see the world without categories. So there is no distance between. A most beautiful write
January 8th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan you have grown very philisophical and versed it in beautiful poetry. So many of these questions the difference between brilliant and insane, our catigorization in which one must be one or another. I see the world without categories. So there is no distance between. A most beautiful write
January 8th, 2025 09:26
Final Retreat
Demar Desu said:
Do you ever do spoken word poetry? I feel like this would be amazing to hear, just as it’s amazing to read
January 7th, 2025 21:43
Demar Desu said:
Do you ever do spoken word poetry? I feel like this would be amazing to hear, just as it’s amazing to read
January 7th, 2025 21:43
Final Retreat
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😳
What an awesomazing poem,
strong feelings and message.
Poetic perfection, a fight
between dark 🌑 and light! 🦇
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 20:40
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😳
What an awesomazing poem,
strong feelings and message.
Poetic perfection, a fight
between dark 🌑 and light! 🦇
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 20:40
rejected
Dan Williams said:
You maybe need to rethink your definition of friendship, eh?
January 7th, 2025 20:33
Dan Williams said:
You maybe need to rethink your definition of friendship, eh?
January 7th, 2025 20:33
Final Retreat
Mutley Ravishes said:
I read somewhere that the \"law\" is, one must go down before one can rise!
January 7th, 2025 18:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
I read somewhere that the \"law\" is, one must go down before one can rise!
January 7th, 2025 18:40
Final Retreat
NinjaGirl said:
Very beautiful poem, it\'s hard to step into the light when it\'s not what we\'re used to. you know, the light always eats the darkness though, darkness cannot overtake light, not unless you surrender
January 7th, 2025 12:08
NinjaGirl said:
Very beautiful poem, it\'s hard to step into the light when it\'s not what we\'re used to. you know, the light always eats the darkness though, darkness cannot overtake light, not unless you surrender
January 7th, 2025 12:08
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