Comments received on poems by Naeners
“love”
L. B. Mek said:
emotive words,
you\'ve inked your suffering, so vivid
thank you! for the bravery you demonstrate
in sharing your words,
I\'m sorry
for the pain you went through,
that inspired them
November 29th, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
emotive words,
you\'ve inked your suffering, so vivid
thank you! for the bravery you demonstrate
in sharing your words,
I\'m sorry
for the pain you went through,
that inspired them
November 29th, 2021 04:59
Bitch Like You
Leisa Niamh said:
You know what they say.... you need to love yourself before you can love others. You sound so full of hate and have written a powerful poem, but I hope you have room for love too.
November 11th, 2018 03:27
Leisa Niamh said:
You know what they say.... you need to love yourself before you can love others. You sound so full of hate and have written a powerful poem, but I hope you have room for love too.
November 11th, 2018 03:27
Lovely Smiles
marijoy said:
I like very much your poem. Nice rhyme too. Soft reading but full of content.
October 19th, 2018 12:27
marijoy said:
I like very much your poem. Nice rhyme too. Soft reading but full of content.
October 19th, 2018 12:27
Thinking Like Children Do
misskay said:
I enjoyed reading this truthful piece.
August 18th, 2018 04:33
misskay said:
I enjoyed reading this truthful piece.
August 18th, 2018 04:33
Grief
Brittany Jo said:
So much emotion in this short poem. This is so well written
August 9th, 2018 00:02
Brittany Jo said:
So much emotion in this short poem. This is so well written
August 9th, 2018 00:02
Funny
Crystal Hope said:
Totally understand this. I face the same but in writing you tell your feelings and embrace them.
August 8th, 2018 16:54
Crystal Hope said:
Totally understand this. I face the same but in writing you tell your feelings and embrace them.
August 8th, 2018 16:54
Black Waves
chana said:
Wow. Just a lot to take in to such peaceful death . Well written
August 2nd, 2018 23:11
chana said:
Wow. Just a lot to take in to such peaceful death . Well written
August 2nd, 2018 23:11
Black Waves
HangingbyaHalo said:
I like this. Simple but paints a picture. Good write.
August 2nd, 2018 18:34
HangingbyaHalo said:
I like this. Simple but paints a picture. Good write.
August 2nd, 2018 18:34
Sunset Blush
Heartwriter said:
I enjoyed it. Short and sweet. Good one! Keep writing.
July 25th, 2018 14:45
Heartwriter said:
I enjoyed it. Short and sweet. Good one! Keep writing.
July 25th, 2018 14:45
More
Goldfinch60 said:
That door will only hold you back if you do not open it. Open the door and your life will be there waiting for you to walk along its path.
July 25th, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That door will only hold you back if you do not open it. Open the door and your life will be there waiting for you to walk along its path.
July 25th, 2018 01:10
More
unfinishedepiphany27 said:
I really love this poem, it\'s short yet powerful and I\'m a fan. Personally, I really relate to this poem just because of where I\'m at in life, and I\'m happy I stumbled across it.
July 24th, 2018 18:48
unfinishedepiphany27 said:
I really love this poem, it\'s short yet powerful and I\'m a fan. Personally, I really relate to this poem just because of where I\'m at in life, and I\'m happy I stumbled across it.
July 24th, 2018 18:48
Don\'t Make Me Go Home
Goldfinch60 said:
Treasure each moment, they will not come back.
July 23rd, 2018 23:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Treasure each moment, they will not come back.
July 23rd, 2018 23:52
Maybe
dusk arising said:
This piece is very well written. I like concise works, such as yours, for they are more powerful and thought provoking. Each reader will form their own mental picture so lengthy detailed work becomes unnecessary.
Staying behind the gate to produce work of such excellence is to be applauded. However, venturing out into our beautiful world is encouraged, if only for the purpose of expanding ones experiences and therefore provide more scope for future writings.
Excellent - more please.
July 18th, 2018 05:37
dusk arising said:
This piece is very well written. I like concise works, such as yours, for they are more powerful and thought provoking. Each reader will form their own mental picture so lengthy detailed work becomes unnecessary.
Staying behind the gate to produce work of such excellence is to be applauded. However, venturing out into our beautiful world is encouraged, if only for the purpose of expanding ones experiences and therefore provide more scope for future writings.
Excellent - more please.
July 18th, 2018 05:37
Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
I think that the structure of this is very good but the idea of staying locked away is so very sad, you are young and in my many years of living I know that the world outside is a wondrous place to explore. Life is outside of the box that you seem to want to stay in. Go ahead and open the door.
July 18th, 2018 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I think that the structure of this is very good but the idea of staying locked away is so very sad, you are young and in my many years of living I know that the world outside is a wondrous place to explore. Life is outside of the box that you seem to want to stay in. Go ahead and open the door.
July 18th, 2018 00:51
Monsters
dusk arising said:
I like your style in writing this piece. Though it reads as very negative, in fact the closing line is a very positive statement revealing you are not reveling in the company of these negative demons as so many seem to.
\'Out demons, out!\'
We all have our demons which come calling. I think a lot of us reveal them in MPS too.
July 5th, 2018 15:59
dusk arising said:
I like your style in writing this piece. Though it reads as very negative, in fact the closing line is a very positive statement revealing you are not reveling in the company of these negative demons as so many seem to.
\'Out demons, out!\'
We all have our demons which come calling. I think a lot of us reveal them in MPS too.
July 5th, 2018 15:59
Numb
onepauly said:
experiment with your emotions.
not to strong at first.
together you will find yourself.
April 30th, 2018 23:15
onepauly said:
experiment with your emotions.
not to strong at first.
together you will find yourself.
April 30th, 2018 23:15
It Seems
onepauly said:
upstream is where the power is.
keep writing and you\'ll find it. I\'m sure.
April 23rd, 2018 21:56
onepauly said:
upstream is where the power is.
keep writing and you\'ll find it. I\'m sure.
April 23rd, 2018 21:56
Splat
Karoline said:
This is fantastic! Really hits you hard when you read it x
April 3rd, 2018 01:40
Karoline said:
This is fantastic! Really hits you hard when you read it x
April 3rd, 2018 01:40
Depression is my Friend
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I can understand depression, and even some other illnesses or ailments becoming \'friends\'. We can get used to them.
But best to be rid of that \'dark monster\' on your back I think.
March 26th, 2018 04:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I can understand depression, and even some other illnesses or ailments becoming \'friends\'. We can get used to them.
But best to be rid of that \'dark monster\' on your back I think.
March 26th, 2018 04:29
Universe
Caring dove said:
how can we enjoy life when we are in pain .. this is something i struggle with .. its hard to truly live life when we are struggling inside.. anyhow .. this is good :-)
March 23rd, 2018 03:43
Caring dove said:
how can we enjoy life when we are in pain .. this is something i struggle with .. its hard to truly live life when we are struggling inside.. anyhow .. this is good :-)
March 23rd, 2018 03:43
I don\'t want to be here anymore
Caring dove said:
its very difficult to hear people arguing/ fighting .. i can feel the pain in this , and the desperate need to escape this
March 23rd, 2018 03:40
Caring dove said:
its very difficult to hear people arguing/ fighting .. i can feel the pain in this , and the desperate need to escape this
March 23rd, 2018 03:40
Kill the Rainbows
Caring dove said:
i really like this , the wording , the expression but for some reason im struggling to understand what its about ??
March 23rd, 2018 03:25
Caring dove said:
i really like this , the wording , the expression but for some reason im struggling to understand what its about ??
March 23rd, 2018 03:25
Traumatized
Caring dove said:
i can relate to feeling traumatised. you expressed this well . a good piece of writing
March 23rd, 2018 02:53
Caring dove said:
i can relate to feeling traumatised. you expressed this well . a good piece of writing
March 23rd, 2018 02:53
Anxiety Is
TrystanBehm said:
I really like this. I associate with it deeply. I often wish anxiety had a \"mute\" button. Great job articulating what many of us feel, but can\'t express.
January 25th, 2018 09:38
TrystanBehm said:
I really like this. I associate with it deeply. I often wish anxiety had a \"mute\" button. Great job articulating what many of us feel, but can\'t express.
January 25th, 2018 09:38
Empty Now
Caring dove said:
despite it being around \'\' emptiness \'\' it has a nice flow and a nice beat to this , when i read it along it sounds kind of a bit song like . .unless this is just how i am reading it .. i think , maybe if you add a few extra lines or added words or more description to how your heart feels,but its short and sweet and you convery how empty yuo feel
January 24th, 2018 02:07
Caring dove said:
despite it being around \'\' emptiness \'\' it has a nice flow and a nice beat to this , when i read it along it sounds kind of a bit song like . .unless this is just how i am reading it .. i think , maybe if you add a few extra lines or added words or more description to how your heart feels,but its short and sweet and you convery how empty yuo feel
January 24th, 2018 02:07
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