Comments received on poems by Naeners
Fucking Douche
FredPeyer said:
Well, Naeners, I am sure there are guys like that. And for these guys your poem is perfect.
I like your writing style, love your rhyming. Your comment about 18+ is just great!
As an old guy, a grandfather actually, I think it is great that young people like you do feel like this. Tell em girl! You are NOT a sex object, you are a smart, kind of sassy mouthed ( :-) ) young woman and a good writer!
October 26th, 2017 04:17
FredPeyer said:
Well, Naeners, I am sure there are guys like that. And for these guys your poem is perfect.
I like your writing style, love your rhyming. Your comment about 18+ is just great!
As an old guy, a grandfather actually, I think it is great that young people like you do feel like this. Tell em girl! You are NOT a sex object, you are a smart, kind of sassy mouthed ( :-) ) young woman and a good writer!
October 26th, 2017 04:17
Say Something
Michael Edwards said:
No need to apologise about it\'s length - it\'s quality that counts and this has it. It\'s a super piece of work. The only thing I\'d do with it if it were mine would be to add a bit of punctuation and in doing so do away with some of the capitals. However this is a personal matter and other poets may well disagree.
October 22nd, 2017 00:52
Michael Edwards said:
No need to apologise about it\'s length - it\'s quality that counts and this has it. It\'s a super piece of work. The only thing I\'d do with it if it were mine would be to add a bit of punctuation and in doing so do away with some of the capitals. However this is a personal matter and other poets may well disagree.
October 22nd, 2017 00:52
I Can\'t Get Out Of Bed Today
hellion77 said:
Loved the part about eating, really hit home! Great job on this one, it was really to the point.
October 21st, 2017 10:58
hellion77 said:
Loved the part about eating, really hit home! Great job on this one, it was really to the point.
October 21st, 2017 10:58
I Can\'t Get Out Of Bed Today
myself and me said:
I feel your suffer as a victim of depression. If you can\'t then don\'t.
Well expressed.
August 28th, 2017 20:45
myself and me said:
I feel your suffer as a victim of depression. If you can\'t then don\'t.
Well expressed.
August 28th, 2017 20:45
Liar
Bibbeck said:
I know where you\'re coming from in these words (did it over many years of childhood). You write well. More concerned over your profile comment though - what you write is not cr*p; how can it be when it comes from you, reflecting your feelings, thoughts, and emotions. I always found it easier to put on a smile, to pretend I was o.k. until I realised that I was lying to myself and was unhappy because I was doing all to please everyone else. Take a deep breath and be proud to be yourself. With a heart as good as yours, you will always have friends and respect.
August 23rd, 2017 15:35
Bibbeck said:
I know where you\'re coming from in these words (did it over many years of childhood). You write well. More concerned over your profile comment though - what you write is not cr*p; how can it be when it comes from you, reflecting your feelings, thoughts, and emotions. I always found it easier to put on a smile, to pretend I was o.k. until I realised that I was lying to myself and was unhappy because I was doing all to please everyone else. Take a deep breath and be proud to be yourself. With a heart as good as yours, you will always have friends and respect.
August 23rd, 2017 15:35
Liar
Mugsdaddy said:
It\'s sad so many people feel like this you definitely nailed it. Excellent write.
August 23rd, 2017 07:29
Mugsdaddy said:
It\'s sad so many people feel like this you definitely nailed it. Excellent write.
August 23rd, 2017 07:29
Waiting For Okay
Augustus said:
I believe it is a perfect little poem. It is consistent with a theme of how you feel after what appears to be an abusive relationship. There is brevity, not boring the reader with a treatise on abuse. There are several phrases that rhyme. Carefull with spelling of too (too bad). You don\'t have to capitalize the first word of each phrase. Leaving out periods at the end of short phrases is pleasing to the eye as you did and avoids cclitter. I love this poem.
May 28th, 2017 11:41
Augustus said:
I believe it is a perfect little poem. It is consistent with a theme of how you feel after what appears to be an abusive relationship. There is brevity, not boring the reader with a treatise on abuse. There are several phrases that rhyme. Carefull with spelling of too (too bad). You don\'t have to capitalize the first word of each phrase. Leaving out periods at the end of short phrases is pleasing to the eye as you did and avoids cclitter. I love this poem.
May 28th, 2017 11:41
Closing Gate
Rajkumar said:
Life is what we decide..Fate just reply to our decision..
May 11th, 2017 03:05
Rajkumar said:
Life is what we decide..Fate just reply to our decision..
May 11th, 2017 03:05
All Over
Garry said:
I enjoyed it. Love the ending especially. Short and sweet. Well done.
May 6th, 2017 04:28
Garry said:
I enjoyed it. Love the ending especially. Short and sweet. Well done.
May 6th, 2017 04:28
We\'re Fucked
Garry said:
A bit scary if you ask me.. Like the last few lines; particularly vivid.
May 3rd, 2017 03:58
Garry said:
A bit scary if you ask me.. Like the last few lines; particularly vivid.
May 3rd, 2017 03:58
We\'re Fucked
orchidee said:
Ahh we can prob guess. I was gonna comment, but you\'ve used up all the \'F\'s. ooh!
May 2nd, 2017 08:50
orchidee said:
Ahh we can prob guess. I was gonna comment, but you\'ve used up all the \'F\'s. ooh!
May 2nd, 2017 08:50
Hypnotizing
orchidee said:
One sentence that comes to mind from the book, often when I hear the word \'hypnotize\' is: \'Do not allow yourself to be hypnotized by anyone for any reason whatsoever\'.
April 29th, 2017 13:03
orchidee said:
One sentence that comes to mind from the book, often when I hear the word \'hypnotize\' is: \'Do not allow yourself to be hypnotized by anyone for any reason whatsoever\'.
April 29th, 2017 13:03
Hypnotizing
orchidee said:
Good write as a poem. I read a book on anti-hypnotism ages ago. It put me off it ever since. It\'s coming under someone else\'s power and control - very dangerous, even if seemingly good intents.
April 29th, 2017 13:02
orchidee said:
Good write as a poem. I read a book on anti-hypnotism ages ago. It put me off it ever since. It\'s coming under someone else\'s power and control - very dangerous, even if seemingly good intents.
April 29th, 2017 13:02
Out of Sight
Angel Smileyface said:
nice write i would like to read a little more tho.
April 29th, 2017 07:34
Angel Smileyface said:
nice write i would like to read a little more tho.
April 29th, 2017 07:34
I\'m Screwed
Garry said:
Short, vivid and powerful.
Short is good, i think. Poetry is using the right words in thd right order. Ifvyou do this you shouldn\'t need many.
April 21st, 2017 03:47
Garry said:
Short, vivid and powerful.
Short is good, i think. Poetry is using the right words in thd right order. Ifvyou do this you shouldn\'t need many.
April 21st, 2017 03:47
Death of Beauty
Garry said:
\"too much is left unsaid\".I think this is a beautiful phrase and conjures up lots of emotion. It is at the heart of lots of my poems. (\" the last goodbye\", \"you were and now you\'re not\" and several others) so it\'s an image that always means a lot to me.
April 19th, 2017 16:28
Garry said:
\"too much is left unsaid\".I think this is a beautiful phrase and conjures up lots of emotion. It is at the heart of lots of my poems. (\" the last goodbye\", \"you were and now you\'re not\" and several others) so it\'s an image that always means a lot to me.
April 19th, 2017 16:28
Bad World, Sad People
Goldfinch60 said:
Your world is what you make, if you go into the world with a positive attitude all is good. If you go with a negative attitude all is bad. Believe me I have seen both worlds and going with a positive mindset is glorious.
April 14th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Your world is what you make, if you go into the world with a positive attitude all is good. If you go with a negative attitude all is bad. Believe me I have seen both worlds and going with a positive mindset is glorious.
April 14th, 2017 00:50
Make It Better
willyweed said:
you seem to get better with each poem. write on ww
April 4th, 2017 20:04
willyweed said:
you seem to get better with each poem. write on ww
April 4th, 2017 20:04
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