Comments received on poems by Somerica



No voice to ask for help.
SorrowfullyHappy said:

i get what your sayin money controles everything nowadays but i\'d rather be holdin hands with my girl then anything

March 28th, 2017 22:27

No voice to ask for help.
OUTBACK said:

OH YEA ! GOOD OLE $$$$$ THE PRIVATELY PRINTED* FIAT SHIT THAT CREATES DEBT & RULES THE WORLD ! THE BANKERS* EXIST BECAUSE OF THE GREED ! THE GREED & DEPENDENCY OF THE POLITICIAN : THE CELEBERTY & THE VANITY OF POWER & CONTROL ! [ EXPLOITING ]* OVER OTHERS ! THE SET UP* ENDS UP BEING THAT UNLESS ONE PAYS RENT* TO EXIST ON THIS PLANET : THOSE WHOM SO CREATE THE $$$ OUT OF NOTHING : CHARGE DEBT INTEREST* ON IT : WILL SIMPLY MURDER * TO HAVE ITS WAY & GET THE POINT ACROSS OF WTF* IS IN CONTROL ! PRETTY PATHETIC : UHA ! TAXES : INFLATION & DEBT = [ SLAVERY ] !

March 28th, 2017 19:59

No voice to ask for help.
WriteBeLight said:

A piece filled with integrity. You nailed it with the line about the devil and the snake. It is all about appearances.

March 28th, 2017 18:16

No voice to ask for help.
Discreation said:

Spicyyyyyy

March 28th, 2017 17:48

Shared but not heard.
WriteBeLight said:

Very thought provoking, and well written.

March 27th, 2017 02:06

Music and poetry it\'s different art.
brandon k f said:

Awesome stuff, sir. I dig it

March 25th, 2017 19:54

Makeup is a sin
WriteBeLight said:

I agree with your poem and comment. And, some women have to get up so early to put their FACE on. Sunshine and fresh air are the best thing as long as you protect your skin from too many of the harmful rays. Great job somerica!

March 18th, 2017 07:16

Makeup is a sin
Jooles said:

Love this. It\'s true....I hand on heart don\'t wear make up in day to day life and this is seen as unusual and not the norm. It\'s quite sad

March 18th, 2017 04:10

Makeup is a sin
Goldfinch60 said:

Beauty is within.
Many, many years ago there was a colleague who always wore a lot of make up, one day she came into work without her makeup on and we barely recognised her.

March 18th, 2017 01:50

Makeup is a sin
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

Very true..Nicely written....

March 17th, 2017 23:15

I see as you see but what?
WriteBeLight said:

Everyday is a new chance to change, improve, and be grateful. Great questions somerica.

February 28th, 2017 05:04

I see as you see but what?
Goldfinch60 said:

That beautiful day is full of light and we must always head towards the light. Good write.

February 28th, 2017 01:22

I see as you see but what?
willyweed said:

what you write about is what I call looking right pass the truth, most find it easier to deal with life like that. And much safer for many more wonderful truth here Bravo WW

February 27th, 2017 22:58

I see as you see but what?
Augustus said:

Yes , we do need more attention to the questions you pose. Nicely done.

February 27th, 2017 22:54

free verse poetry unclassified
WriteBeLight said:

I feel your angst in this piece. Lots of great questions you are asking.

February 19th, 2017 06:27

Interview written as a poem
WriteBeLight said:

A great story.

February 12th, 2017 03:23

Interview written as a poem
RAJ NANDY said:

Loved the story composed in verse! It has a realist touch too! - Raj, New Delhi.


February 11th, 2017 22:48

Something for the soul...
WriteBeLight said:

Excellent message somerica!

February 11th, 2017 08:41

Something for the soul...
RAJ NANDY said:

A reflective poem! Socrates and his pupil Plato had emphasised that the Athenians ( Greeks in general) must take good care of their soul to become a good human being! Thanks for sharing! - Raj, New Delhi.

February 10th, 2017 22:43

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