Comments received on poems by Mello
See me now.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The hopeful resolution to an unspeakable tragedy as described by your pen, the loss of one\'s world - the loss of one\'s parents - exists: an adoptive family. Thank you for using style (format) and verse to convey these important truths.
May 17th, 2017 23:00
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The hopeful resolution to an unspeakable tragedy as described by your pen, the loss of one\'s world - the loss of one\'s parents - exists: an adoptive family. Thank you for using style (format) and verse to convey these important truths.
May 17th, 2017 23:00
Makeup is a sin
whisperingquill said:
So true mask upon mask upon deceit that lies within you nailed it remarkable write
April 1st, 2017 16:01
whisperingquill said:
So true mask upon mask upon deceit that lies within you nailed it remarkable write
April 1st, 2017 16:01
No voice to ask for help.
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i get what your sayin money controles everything nowadays but i\'d rather be holdin hands with my girl then anything
March 28th, 2017 22:27
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i get what your sayin money controles everything nowadays but i\'d rather be holdin hands with my girl then anything
March 28th, 2017 22:27
No voice to ask for help.
WriteBeLight said:
A piece filled with integrity. You nailed it with the line about the devil and the snake. It is all about appearances.
March 28th, 2017 18:16
WriteBeLight said:
A piece filled with integrity. You nailed it with the line about the devil and the snake. It is all about appearances.
March 28th, 2017 18:16
Makeup is a sin
WriteBeLight said:
I agree with your poem and comment. And, some women have to get up so early to put their FACE on. Sunshine and fresh air are the best thing as long as you protect your skin from too many of the harmful rays. Great job somerica!
March 18th, 2017 07:16
WriteBeLight said:
I agree with your poem and comment. And, some women have to get up so early to put their FACE on. Sunshine and fresh air are the best thing as long as you protect your skin from too many of the harmful rays. Great job somerica!
March 18th, 2017 07:16
Makeup is a sin
Jooles said:
Love this. It\'s true....I hand on heart don\'t wear make up in day to day life and this is seen as unusual and not the norm. It\'s quite sad
March 18th, 2017 04:10
Jooles said:
Love this. It\'s true....I hand on heart don\'t wear make up in day to day life and this is seen as unusual and not the norm. It\'s quite sad
March 18th, 2017 04:10
Makeup is a sin
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is within.
Many, many years ago there was a colleague who always wore a lot of make up, one day she came into work without her makeup on and we barely recognised her.
March 18th, 2017 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is within.
Many, many years ago there was a colleague who always wore a lot of make up, one day she came into work without her makeup on and we barely recognised her.
March 18th, 2017 01:50
I see as you see but what?
WriteBeLight said:
Everyday is a new chance to change, improve, and be grateful. Great questions somerica.
February 28th, 2017 05:04
WriteBeLight said:
Everyday is a new chance to change, improve, and be grateful. Great questions somerica.
February 28th, 2017 05:04
I see as you see but what?
Goldfinch60 said:
That beautiful day is full of light and we must always head towards the light. Good write.
February 28th, 2017 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That beautiful day is full of light and we must always head towards the light. Good write.
February 28th, 2017 01:22
I see as you see but what?
willyweed said:
what you write about is what I call looking right pass the truth, most find it easier to deal with life like that. And much safer for many more wonderful truth here Bravo WW
February 27th, 2017 22:58
willyweed said:
what you write about is what I call looking right pass the truth, most find it easier to deal with life like that. And much safer for many more wonderful truth here Bravo WW
February 27th, 2017 22:58
I see as you see but what?
Augustus said:
Yes , we do need more attention to the questions you pose. Nicely done.
February 27th, 2017 22:54
Augustus said:
Yes , we do need more attention to the questions you pose. Nicely done.
February 27th, 2017 22:54
Something for the soul...
RAJ NANDY said:
A reflective poem! Socrates and his pupil Plato had emphasised that the Athenians ( Greeks in general) must take good care of their soul to become a good human being! Thanks for sharing! - Raj, New Delhi.
February 10th, 2017 22:43
RAJ NANDY said:
A reflective poem! Socrates and his pupil Plato had emphasised that the Athenians ( Greeks in general) must take good care of their soul to become a good human being! Thanks for sharing! - Raj, New Delhi.
February 10th, 2017 22:43
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