Comments received on poems by Mello

True enemy of love
thinkerbell said:

Perfectly worded with great advice๐Ÿฅฐ

March 19th, 2023 07:12

Big rock in space
Aya Kadid said:

I absolutely love this piece, I\'m in awe. I think the moon is magical and not a night passes that I don\'t look at it and admire its beauty, your words captured its true essence, i haven\'t read a more beautifully written poem about the moon

March 13th, 2023 15:47

truth in the dark
2781 said:

Me two

March 3rd, 2023 08:16

truth in the dark
Christina8 said:

Very nice and very true poem, Dreamer! I enjoyed reading it.

March 3rd, 2023 07:52

Letter to God
Christina8 said:

I think this is a wonderfully written letter from the heart! I love how it rhymes and I just think you did a really good job with this!

February 24th, 2023 07:51

Letter to God
2781 said:

Blessed is the man....

February 24th, 2023 07:45

124 words 639 characters
LIZ said:

\"The more I truly understand, the less I say\" holds so much truth. Peace and quietness ๐Ÿ™

February 24th, 2023 07:15

124 words 639 characters
LIZ said:

\"The more I truly understand, the less I say\" holds so much truth. Peace and quietness ๐Ÿ™

February 24th, 2023 07:14

The power in powerlessness
Iva Hotko said:

To rise form one\'s misfortune with different eyes, kinder heart, and faith to carry the weight of the world on one\'s shoulders as if it was light as a feather is triumph over oneself, and the prejudice we were born into.
I so enjoyed your poem, thank you :-)

February 15th, 2023 04:04

The power in powerlessness
2781 said:

I would like to think that\'s a true story. I like it.

February 14th, 2023 23:36

Unity in Diversity
sorenbarrett said:

A beatiful message highlited with vivid imagry and a great metaphor. Nicely done

February 12th, 2023 08:16

The Beat๐ŸŽถ of life ๐Ÿ––๐Ÿป
Claudia Mortimer said:

Excellent, uplifting, happy and in the flow. Grate image too.

February 10th, 2023 15:16

The Beat๐ŸŽถ of life ๐Ÿ––๐Ÿป
L. B. Mek said:

\'A song of life, where I belong.\'
really well written
such a melodic flow, thanks for sharing

February 10th, 2023 06:42

Pleasure in pain
Christina8 said:

This is a great poem with a positive message. Awesome job!

February 9th, 2023 04:49

Living man vs dead man
2781 said:

\"Then shall the dust return to the earth as it was: and the spirit shall return unto God who gave it\".

February 8th, 2023 05:36

How to love
L. B. Mek said:

an intriguing analysis of love\'s various guises
thanks for choosing to share

August 23rd, 2021 04:58

How to love
The elder poet said:

Very well written. There\'s so many kinds of love . True love of course is the best as you stated. One sided love too . But you stay in that one side love because you don\'t want to lose it. You can not bear to lose that someone you love . You just want to stay near them at whatever cost. Thank you for sharing your work. Have a great week ahead.

August 22nd, 2021 17:59

Can you hint?
poetboy123 said:

All very true, nothing will change until all illusions are wiped away and people began to care about other humans, whether next to them or halfway around the world.

September 9th, 2017 10:34

Adam to the eve
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 16th, 2017 13:17

Later nor grater
burning-embers said:

In a city that is lost you will be taking the role as mayor eh? Interesting ambition...... elected mayor by lost votes....

July 16th, 2017 16:43

Later nor grater
onepauly said:

absolutely one of the best poems I\'ve read in awhile. keep writing.

July 16th, 2017 12:18

Unsaved time
burning-embers said:

I love it, full of contradictions. Like a jigsaw puzzle in a plain box.

July 13th, 2017 10:48

Who I was!
Heather T said:

So sorry for the loss. Lovely tribute.

June 25th, 2017 22:07

Who I was!
malubotelho said:

Love the way you write. Great poetry. Thanks.

June 25th, 2017 20:21

O Ramadan
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and the last two lines are so true.

June 13th, 2017 00:59

Sammertheone said:

Speechless, very strong. No human is perfect. No one has the right to judge yet it never fails. Very well written.

May 31st, 2017 21:43

See me now.
alanis98 said:

A beautiful poem.
Your so right I have always thought why should I bring another person on to this world when there are so many children who need love and care. This poem definitely makes me greatfull for the family I do have

May 25th, 2017 17:01

Think on it
ShannonXx said:

Amazing poem

May 25th, 2017 10:49

Think on it
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May 25th, 2017 10:40

See me now.
Silverlining7 said:

This strikes right to the heart. Definitely makes me pause for a second and be grateful for the family and homelife that I have. Great writing and expression.

May 19th, 2017 02:25

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