Comments received on poems by Somerica



Yea what about love
LittleGift said:

So much love and heartache in this piece. I hope Hafsa sees it too! A great piece of writing

March 17th, 2018 19:35

Yea what about love
tepo said:

Absorbing read
A bit of the if only about it
Well written
Hope hafsa sees it


March 17th, 2018 17:23

Trumped Nation
OUTBACK said:

THE SOLUTION* = ? [ WALL* TRUMP* - OFF ]* ! & HAVE HIM* - FUND* IT * !

January 25th, 2018 14:57

Trumped Nation
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, all should be treated equally.

January 25th, 2018 09:01

Trumped Nation
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 25th, 2018 08:02

The story of me
SunSearcher said:

Love it!
~SS

November 22nd, 2017 09:19

Can you hint?
poetboy5454 said:

All very true, nothing will change until all illusions are wiped away and people began to care about other humans, whether next to them or halfway around the world.

September 9th, 2017 10:34

Adam to the eve
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 16th, 2017 13:17

I think therefore I know
OUTBACK said:

GOOD POST HERE !

August 3rd, 2017 06:37

I think therefore I know
OUTBACK said:

THE MYTHOLOGY* OF AUTHORITY* ABSOLUTE or OTHERWISE* - IS THE PROPAGANDIZED* POSITION -ASSUMED* BY THE DEPENDENCY* ORIENTED MIND OF A HUMANITY * IN (SELF DINIAL)* & FOREVER IN SEARCH* OF AN ABSOLUTE SALVATIONAL* STATE OF BEING* ( IMMORTAL )* ! THE { ANTS )* WORK SO HARD FOR THEIR QUEEN* ( AUTHORITY )* IN THE (HOPE)* TO ATTAIN SUCH* !

August 3rd, 2017 06:37

Later nor grater
burning-embers said:

In a city that is lost you will be taking the role as mayor eh? Interesting ambition...... elected mayor by lost votes....

July 16th, 2017 16:43

Later nor grater
onepauly said:

absolutely one of the best poems I\'ve read in awhile. keep writing.

July 16th, 2017 12:18

Unsaved time
burning-embers said:

I love it, full of contradictions. Like a jigsaw puzzle in a plain box.

July 13th, 2017 10:48

Who I was!
Heather T said:

So sorry for the loss. Lovely tribute.

June 25th, 2017 22:07

Who I was!
malubotelho said:

Love the way you write. Great poetry. Thanks.

June 25th, 2017 20:21

O Ramadan
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and the last two lines are so true.

June 13th, 2017 00:59

Limitless
Sammertheone said:

Speechless, very strong. No human is perfect. No one has the right to judge yet it never fails. Very well written.

May 31st, 2017 21:43

??????
alanis98 said:

Lovely poem I to believe in God and I believe he\'s watching what we are all doing he knows when we have sinned and when we have praised him.

May 25th, 2017 17:04

See me now.
alanis98 said:

A beautiful poem.
Your so right I have always thought why should I bring another person on to this world when there are so many children who need love and care. This poem definitely makes me greatfull for the family I do have

May 25th, 2017 17:01

Think on it
ShannonXx said:

Amazing poem

May 25th, 2017 10:49

Think on it
alanis98 said:

Beautiful

May 25th, 2017 10:40

See me now.
Silverlining7 said:

This strikes right to the heart. Definitely makes me pause for a second and be grateful for the family and homelife that I have. Great writing and expression.

May 19th, 2017 02:25

See me now.
Gary Edward Geraci said:

The hopeful resolution to an unspeakable tragedy as described by your pen, the loss of one\'s world - the loss of one\'s parents - exists: an adoptive family. Thank you for using style (format) and verse to convey these important truths.

May 17th, 2017 23:00

See me now.
WriteBeLight said:

Very poignant Somerica.

May 17th, 2017 11:41

See me now.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

May 17th, 2017 10:15

Answer me now
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 12th, 2017 12:56

Speak this words
Aamina said:

I like it! Really different to anything I would be able to create

April 6th, 2017 09:28

Speak this words
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

April 6th, 2017 08:57

Makeup is a sin
whisperingquill said:

So true mask upon mask upon deceit that lies within you nailed it remarkable write

April 1st, 2017 16:01

??????
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 31st, 2017 10:49

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