Comments received on poems by ANGELA & BRIAN
COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A PANTOUM
Nafis Light said:
It\'s cool, it\'s nice, and it\'s great.
Pantoum...that\'s a word I didn\'t hear a for long time.
Never heard of it being verbally mentioned...but I do remember studying it.
Back then, I was really into poetry and spent time reading and experimenting on the different types of poetry (classical and invented) on shadowpoetry.
The website has explanation and examples.
That\'s where I first found out about Pantoum.
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/pantoum.html
August 26th, 2019 04:40
Nafis Light said:
It\'s cool, it\'s nice, and it\'s great.
Pantoum...that\'s a word I didn\'t hear a for long time.
Never heard of it being verbally mentioned...but I do remember studying it.
Back then, I was really into poetry and spent time reading and experimenting on the different types of poetry (classical and invented) on shadowpoetry.
The website has explanation and examples.
That\'s where I first found out about Pantoum.
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/pantoum.html
August 26th, 2019 04:40
COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A PANTOUM
orchidee said:
A true wrote B&A. I got no blessings to count with Fido always barking though! heehee. It\'s not his fault - people should mark poems 18+ where need be!
A reading and talking dog? I could make millions with him.
August 26th, 2019 02:33
orchidee said:
A true wrote B&A. I got no blessings to count with Fido always barking though! heehee. It\'s not his fault - people should mark poems 18+ where need be!
A reading and talking dog? I could make millions with him.
August 26th, 2019 02:33
OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES ~ SONG FOR SUNDAY
Goldfinch60 said:
His love was for us all.
August 25th, 2019 23:51
Goldfinch60 said:
His love was for us all.
August 25th, 2019 23:51
OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES ~ SONG FOR SUNDAY
Laura🌻 said:
Cari amici Angela e Brian,
Una bella poesia per questa Domenica! Mille Grazie!
I agree with DA...
‘What’s not to love about a man of love.’
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 11:06
Laura🌻 said:
Cari amici Angela e Brian,
Una bella poesia per questa Domenica! Mille Grazie!
I agree with DA...
‘What’s not to love about a man of love.’
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 11:06
OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES ~ SONG FOR SUNDAY
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. I knows you - you two got your ivory palaces too, on some secret island?! What\'s that? All contributions gratefully received for their upkeep, you say, from us?! (that\'ll be Joe Muggins, not Joe Bloggs).heehee.
August 25th, 2019 07:31
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. I knows you - you two got your ivory palaces too, on some secret island?! What\'s that? All contributions gratefully received for their upkeep, you say, from us?! (that\'ll be Joe Muggins, not Joe Bloggs).heehee.
August 25th, 2019 07:31
OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES ~ SONG FOR SUNDAY
dusk arising said:
Whats not to love about a man of love.
August 25th, 2019 04:04
dusk arising said:
Whats not to love about a man of love.
August 25th, 2019 04:04
HAIL SMILING MORN 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM
Laura🌻 said:
Cari Amici Angela e Brian,
Una bella poesia e foto dedicata al Buon Giorno!
This reminded me of the song, “Oh, What A Beautiful Morning”!
A fine write which I enjoyed reading!
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 22:54
Laura🌻 said:
Cari Amici Angela e Brian,
Una bella poesia e foto dedicata al Buon Giorno!
This reminded me of the song, “Oh, What A Beautiful Morning”!
A fine write which I enjoyed reading!
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 22:54
HAIL SMILING MORN 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM
Christina8 said:
Well done Angela! And beautiful picture too!
August 24th, 2019 21:10
Christina8 said:
Well done Angela! And beautiful picture too!
August 24th, 2019 21:10
HAIL SMILING MORN 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM
orchidee said:
I thought there was a hailstorm! Woof, no, says Fido. I not quite got the theme of the poem. lol.
August 24th, 2019 12:52
orchidee said:
I thought there was a hailstorm! Woof, no, says Fido. I not quite got the theme of the poem. lol.
August 24th, 2019 12:52
HAIL SMILING MORN 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM
Suresh said:
You have given tribute to Fay, who in turn has prosed a poem on dawn today.
Your words so poetically beckons, as hers so romantically welcome DAWN
August 24th, 2019 10:22
Suresh said:
You have given tribute to Fay, who in turn has prosed a poem on dawn today.
Your words so poetically beckons, as hers so romantically welcome DAWN
August 24th, 2019 10:22
HAIL SMILING MORN 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes hail smiling morn as I do every day.
August 24th, 2019 03:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes hail smiling morn as I do every day.
August 24th, 2019 03:34
HAIL SMILING MORN 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful tribute to dawn and in archaic it reads even better.............. so pleased my little effort inspired your pen to praise Nature\'s fresh face and thank you for sharing your New Zealand morning dear Angela.............. x
August 24th, 2019 01:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful tribute to dawn and in archaic it reads even better.............. so pleased my little effort inspired your pen to praise Nature\'s fresh face and thank you for sharing your New Zealand morning dear Angela.............. x
August 24th, 2019 01:54
HAIL SMILING MORN 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. Fido is all prim and proper. He doesn\'t know if they would say \'Hooray\'! He says it might be too \'common\'! Heehee. We\'ll say/sing it anyway. Quiet now Fido! lol. He\'s a spoilsport!
August 24th, 2019 01:16
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. Fido is all prim and proper. He doesn\'t know if they would say \'Hooray\'! He says it might be too \'common\'! Heehee. We\'ll say/sing it anyway. Quiet now Fido! lol. He\'s a spoilsport!
August 24th, 2019 01:16
HOMESICK ON HOLIDAY ? ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD
Goldfinch60 said:
We too used to go with the flow and enjoyed each moment we were away.
August 24th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
We too used to go with the flow and enjoyed each moment we were away.
August 24th, 2019 00:57
HOMESICK ON HOLIDAY ? ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD
Fay Slimm. said:
An interesting read which outlines the various reasons for missing what we leave behind - vacations are not always up to expectations but as for New Zealand - well it is on my list........ lots of duo-huggles from Fay xxxx
August 23rd, 2019 13:09
Fay Slimm. said:
An interesting read which outlines the various reasons for missing what we leave behind - vacations are not always up to expectations but as for New Zealand - well it is on my list........ lots of duo-huggles from Fay xxxx
August 23rd, 2019 13:09
HOMESICK ON HOLIDAY ? ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD
dusk arising said:
TBH i never ever had that desire to travel abroad. I went to cyprus once because a woiman was so keen to go there...hated it... place was like bournemouth, countryside was like a desert with hills, there was no tidal deifference to speak of...basically hated it. I know NZ is a beautiful place, esp the south island but i have no desire to go there. No criticism of those who do want to travel the world, it\'s just not my bag. I love Wales, Scotland and England and in no particular order. Each has its beautiful places and at least i speak the lingo fluently.
Travel broadens the mind?. My mind is pretty broad anyway.
See what you did with your piece today? Inspiring writing from you.
August 23rd, 2019 12:58
dusk arising said:
TBH i never ever had that desire to travel abroad. I went to cyprus once because a woiman was so keen to go there...hated it... place was like bournemouth, countryside was like a desert with hills, there was no tidal deifference to speak of...basically hated it. I know NZ is a beautiful place, esp the south island but i have no desire to go there. No criticism of those who do want to travel the world, it\'s just not my bag. I love Wales, Scotland and England and in no particular order. Each has its beautiful places and at least i speak the lingo fluently.
Travel broadens the mind?. My mind is pretty broad anyway.
See what you did with your piece today? Inspiring writing from you.
August 23rd, 2019 12:58
HOMESICK ON HOLIDAY ? ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. We can\'t forget Aunt Nelly! Worth cutting our hols short for that! lol.
August 23rd, 2019 10:09
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. We can\'t forget Aunt Nelly! Worth cutting our hols short for that! lol.
August 23rd, 2019 10:09
TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM !
Silkseduction said:
Beautifully composed- I wish you both the best!
-Lauren xx
August 22nd, 2019 14:42
Silkseduction said:
Beautifully composed- I wish you both the best!
-Lauren xx
August 22nd, 2019 14:42
POLLUTION SOLUTION ? UR ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN INTERNAL RHYMING POEM !
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the same issue all the time, the people with the power and the money can cure the problem but will not do so as it may cost them something.
August 22nd, 2019 14:34
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the same issue all the time, the people with the power and the money can cure the problem but will not do so as it may cost them something.
August 22nd, 2019 14:34
POLLUTION SOLUTION ? UR ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN INTERNAL RHYMING POEM !
Fay Slimm. said:
I second your mission to clean up this planet and action now is needed by all.............. thanks for this great solution to mess and I support your theme of making a difference.
August 22nd, 2019 13:40
Fay Slimm. said:
I second your mission to clean up this planet and action now is needed by all.............. thanks for this great solution to mess and I support your theme of making a difference.
August 22nd, 2019 13:40
POLLUTION SOLUTION ? UR ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN INTERNAL RHYMING POEM !
dusk arising said:
Great theme! Hopefully the more of us to post about environmental issues, the more positive actions we shall see by individuals.
Individuals are important. Individuals taking a personal stand are important. Many individuals make a \'whole\'.
Totally supportive!
August 22nd, 2019 04:41
dusk arising said:
Great theme! Hopefully the more of us to post about environmental issues, the more positive actions we shall see by individuals.
Individuals are important. Individuals taking a personal stand are important. Many individuals make a \'whole\'.
Totally supportive!
August 22nd, 2019 04:41
TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM !
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write. October (great month) is not long away, only 936 days.
August 22nd, 2019 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write. October (great month) is not long away, only 936 days.
August 22nd, 2019 00:58
TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM !
ForeverJesus7 said:
I have to be honest with you. I did not read the poem. My eyes kept being drawn to the optical illusion of the hour glass that your writing formed. This was a great piece.
Persistence is key
August 21st, 2019 23:37
ForeverJesus7 said:
I have to be honest with you. I did not read the poem. My eyes kept being drawn to the optical illusion of the hour glass that your writing formed. This was a great piece.
Persistence is key
August 21st, 2019 23:37
TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM !
orchidee said:
If time goes quickly when one is enjoying oneself - don\'t listen to my singing, or time will go even slower! heehee.
August 21st, 2019 09:20
orchidee said:
If time goes quickly when one is enjoying oneself - don\'t listen to my singing, or time will go even slower! heehee.
August 21st, 2019 09:20
TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM !
Fay Slimm. said:
I am sure you are both counting those minutes dear Brian - - a fine form and style in this poetic expression of the slowness of time.
August 21st, 2019 08:20
Fay Slimm. said:
I am sure you are both counting those minutes dear Brian - - a fine form and style in this poetic expression of the slowness of time.
August 21st, 2019 08:20
TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM !
dusk arising said:
Thats a clever piece today.
May the sands of time run true for you two and bring you the finest of rewards.
August 21st, 2019 04:47
dusk arising said:
Thats a clever piece today.
May the sands of time run true for you two and bring you the finest of rewards.
August 21st, 2019 04:47
SOCIALIST STATE ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to work for the MOD as an analytical chemist, I worked in the laboratory in Chatham Dockyard. If a tourist passed the dockyard they would often ask the Dockyard Police on the gates:
\"How many people work in there?\"
the normal answer was:
\"Oh, about half of them!\"
When I worked there it was over 5000.
August 21st, 2019 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to work for the MOD as an analytical chemist, I worked in the laboratory in Chatham Dockyard. If a tourist passed the dockyard they would often ask the Dockyard Police on the gates:
\"How many people work in there?\"
the normal answer was:
\"Oh, about half of them!\"
When I worked there it was over 5000.
August 21st, 2019 01:28
SOCIALIST STATE ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET
orchidee said:
An informative write B&A. My poem tomorrow may be in the shape of a banana, but don\'t ask me how! lol.
August 20th, 2019 10:55
orchidee said:
An informative write B&A. My poem tomorrow may be in the shape of a banana, but don\'t ask me how! lol.
August 20th, 2019 10:55
SOCIALIST STATE ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET
dusk arising said:
Nice to see U.K. described as a socialist state for once. It really pee\'s me off when ignorant young lefties describe U.K. as a capitalist state.
Your piece today is laid out like an educational chart which is both entertaining and clever.
August 20th, 2019 05:09
dusk arising said:
Nice to see U.K. described as a socialist state for once. It really pee\'s me off when ignorant young lefties describe U.K. as a capitalist state.
Your piece today is laid out like an educational chart which is both entertaining and clever.
August 20th, 2019 05:09
WOODMAN SPARE THAT TREE ~ FOR ME ~ A BALLAD !
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. They\'ll come and take me away though, if I start worrying about poor old trees left outdoors over chilly nights. We can\'t bring them indoors lol. Well, only bonsai trees.
August 19th, 2019 11:12
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. They\'ll come and take me away though, if I start worrying about poor old trees left outdoors over chilly nights. We can\'t bring them indoors lol. Well, only bonsai trees.
August 19th, 2019 11:12
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