Comments received on poems by ANGELA & BRIAN



WOODMAN SPARE THAT TREE ~ FOR ME ~ A BALLAD !
Fay Slimm. said:

With you all the way to protect these glorious trees dear duo.

August 19th, 2019 09:50

WOODMAN SPARE THAT TREE ~ FOR ME ~ A BALLAD !
dusk arising said:

They used to fell oak trees to build warships... I even heard a story that the New Forest in U.K. was planted for that purpose.
Nowadays of course we have many green issues in our hearts and i will stand with you to protect an oak tree.
Beyond this my recent \'pure as driven\' takes in the issue of protecting our wonderful planet, our home, from the everyday abuse of the mindless.

Excellent poetry from you with a noble theme.

August 19th, 2019 09:32

THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM !
Goldfinch60 said:

My God is there but it is now not the god that Christianity says is so good and helps all. Been there but that god does not help Joyce or me find a better place for her to be. All her long life she has praised and prayed to the Christian god but all that happens is she is pulled into the world of dementia which is so awful, she has never done wrong, helped everybody and this ******* dementia is how she is rewarded!!

August 19th, 2019 00:47

THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM !
Christina8 said:

Blessings to you both on this wonderful sunday afternoon!!

August 18th, 2019 11:12

OUR LEISURE TIME ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET !
Seek said:

Your compassion and empathy for the less fortunate is moving. Nice write!

August 18th, 2019 09:37

THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM !
dusk arising said:

Ouch! at using the possessive term \'our\' god. God is god period and nobodies possession singular or plural. God is not a choice.

God is with us all for ever though there are those who it appears wish to use gods name to proclaim a \'holier than thou\' presence among us by spouting quasi religious mumbo-jumbo on MPS. Jesus was \'of the people, for the people\' to use a modern day phrase not an elitist.

Could not find the word \'phantoum\' in any online dictionary.

August 18th, 2019 09:14

THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
FineB said:

Hello Angela,

An excellent write and overview of your interesting life.

Keep writing
FineB

August 18th, 2019 08:45

THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM !
orchidee said:

You knew I\'d like this, I say, you knew I\'d like it.... Note the repetition here! heehee.

August 18th, 2019 07:58

THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM !
Fay Slimm. said:

Worthy of praise indeed is our wonderful Creator............. thank you for this lovely reminder dear duo.

August 18th, 2019 04:13

THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM !
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Blessings for this sunday to you both a Great write
My good is a god in his & her own way
I believe undeniably in him and her

August 18th, 2019 03:46

OUR LEISURE TIME ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET !
Goldfinch60 said:

In my 47 years and one month of my working life I only worked so that I could enjoy my leisure time outside work and now retirement is mine life is wonderful.

August 18th, 2019 00:42

OUR LEISURE TIME ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET !
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GRACIAS ANGELITA MIA Y MUY PRECIOSA ! A me gusta tua poema acrostica muy buen. I am pleased you can enjoy your favorite Sport Sailing ~ every Month of the Year in Auckland. As you know we have excellent opportunities to sail on the Essex Coast (without buying a Yatch) but only March to November ! Maybe when we start our Family ~ we will have to emigtare to Auckland for a THOUSAND reasons.! Its a pity youll be back in Essex just as the sailing Season ends ~ thats fate ! When I encouraged you to go to NZ I knew it was the best place in the WORLD for Sport & Leisure. ! The KIWIS are a hard nut to crack @ any Sport. My NZ Friends all tell me *You make a very good KIWI !*

La Mia Angelita ~ Perfecta
Muchos Abrazos y Besos
y siempre Todo de Mi AMOR !
Tu Oso Grande ~ BRIAN !
๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™

August 17th, 2019 16:18

OUR LEISURE TIME ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET !
Christina8 said:

You are very lucky that you get to go sailing...I remember when I used to have access to a yacht and I would go fishing a lot....miss those days!

August 17th, 2019 11:38

OUR LEISURE TIME ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET !
orchidee said:

Oohh, I got me yacht in the UK - or barge - at the bottom of me garden. Me home backs on to a Canal. Well, I know a friend whose home does so. Erm, it\'s rather a disused Canal now though. I think they do paid barge tours though.

August 17th, 2019 01:28

OUR LEISURE TIME ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET !
ForeverJesus7 said:

I would like to go sailing someday. It looks really fun. ...then again so did white water rafting and that did not go so well for me. Still, you live, and you learn. It is good to sometimes try new things.
Persistence is key

August 17th, 2019 01:08

THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Christina8 said:

This pairs brians write earlier in the week well......blessings to you and brian!

August 16th, 2019 17:19

THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Suresh said:

So that\'s almost 1/3 of your life, and a I\'m sure is only a scratch on the surface. I can just imagine the wonders that await you going forward.
LOLuck



August 16th, 2019 15:25

THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
ForeverJesus7 said:

This is a nice piece that you had written. I enjoyed reading it.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key

August 16th, 2019 13:31

THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Fay Slimm. said:

And what an adventurous life it has been so far my friend - - loved the confession of so many shoes and their prices - can beat you at that but am not spilling beans - - ha - - an exciting read Angela and thank you for sharing your well written life-sonnet.

August 16th, 2019 09:09

THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Goldfinch60 said:

Same reply as yesterday

1. I have lived a lifetime of fulfilment.

August 16th, 2019 02:14

THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
orchidee said:

A fine write B&A.

August 16th, 2019 01:56

MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Christina8 said:

I echo Nevilles\' response.....many more septembers to you...

August 15th, 2019 11:07

MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Fay Slimm. said:

Glad you life in numbers Brian has given you times when you felt very blessed - - more adventures for which to get ready and wishing you many exciting years yet.

August 15th, 2019 08:23

MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA BRIAN - OSO GRANDE MIO ! Gracias por esta Sonetta ! Im posting mine tomorrow - I guess we will have 1. 7. 8. 10. & 12. in common ! Please check tomorrow !

Muchos Abrazos y Besos y Todo de Mi Amor
Tua Amorata - ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

August 15th, 2019 04:24

MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Neville said:

May you have many more Septembers... N

August 15th, 2019 02:08

MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Michael Edwards said:

A great little number Brian.

August 15th, 2019 01:40

MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
orchidee said:

A fine write B&A.
1 - the number of times Fido has barked! 1 thousand, that is!

August 15th, 2019 01:26

MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET !
Goldfinch60 said:

1. I have lived a lifetime of fulfilment.

August 15th, 2019 01:22

NO SILVER MEDALS IN LIFE & LOVE ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 5 3 SONNET
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA ANGELA ~ MI AMORATA ~ BUENAS NOCHES ! Gracias por esta Poema ! I agree its always sad to come second in any situation ~ where there is only ONE PRIZE. Thanks for adding my Experience when we appointed *TWO for the Price of ONE* and the Marriage that resulted ~ I should be a MATCHMAKER !

Abrazos y Besos y Todo de Mi Amor !
Tu Amorato ~ Oso Grande ~ BRIAN
๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿ’™


August 15th, 2019 00:38

NO SILVER MEDALS IN LIFE & LOVE ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 5 3 SONNET
ForeverJesus7 said:

No silver medals in life... It is good to hear from you again. I had taken a short break from my poetic side.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key

Your brother in Christ,
Dion Phillips Crown


August 14th, 2019 22:17



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