Comments received on poems by HalcyonHusky
Money Isn\'t Evil
Aamina said:
Good point and nice poem. We just need something to blame
April 11th, 2017 10:04
Aamina said:
Good point and nice poem. We just need something to blame
April 11th, 2017 10:04
Realistic Love
Garry said:
Very nicely written . Good rythm and flow. Lovely message
April 6th, 2017 08:15
Garry said:
Very nicely written . Good rythm and flow. Lovely message
April 6th, 2017 08:15
Bedtime Musings
Garry said:
No worries about the ending. Every one sbould have got it. Great end to a poem with some lovely phrases. Well done.
April 5th, 2017 15:55
Garry said:
No worries about the ending. Every one sbould have got it. Great end to a poem with some lovely phrases. Well done.
April 5th, 2017 15:55
Problem-solving
Goldfinch60 said:
Just relax and move onto something else, the solution will come in time.
April 4th, 2017 12:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Just relax and move onto something else, the solution will come in time.
April 4th, 2017 12:39
Haiku Blues #1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks I love pithy Haiku ~ 15 syllables says a thousand words ! Please check my poems ~ BRIAN (UK)
February 14th, 2017 08:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks I love pithy Haiku ~ 15 syllables says a thousand words ! Please check my poems ~ BRIAN (UK)
February 14th, 2017 08:33
Grocery Cashier
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. Nice rhyme and rhythm. I like your advice to never work in sales! Don\'t worry. I wont!
February 5th, 2017 14:29
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. Nice rhyme and rhythm. I like your advice to never work in sales! Don\'t worry. I wont!
February 5th, 2017 14:29
Grocery Cashier
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HUSKY ~ Working in a Retail Store is never easy ~ the only advantage ~ Working in the COOP in the UK (for a while) I got 10% discount on my Grocery bill and any damaged packets or tins for 25% ! I never went hungry ! We don\'t have JANUARY SALES in retail FOOD in the UK ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
February 5th, 2017 12:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HUSKY ~ Working in a Retail Store is never easy ~ the only advantage ~ Working in the COOP in the UK (for a while) I got 10% discount on my Grocery bill and any damaged packets or tins for 25% ! I never went hungry ! We don\'t have JANUARY SALES in retail FOOD in the UK ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
February 5th, 2017 12:35
Coffee House Thoughts
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great relevant write HH I liked it... You can\'t choose your family but you can choose your friends... More please
January 30th, 2017 03:09
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great relevant write HH I liked it... You can\'t choose your family but you can choose your friends... More please
January 30th, 2017 03:09
Coffee House Thoughts
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HUSKY ~ Thanks for your first poem which I found challenging ! It is elegantly written with consistent rhyme (ababcc pattern) and rhythm. The subject is disturbing because it touches on what is happening today in the USA and elsewhere. ISTANZA 1. World in devastation (true !) but all of wearing fake smiles and pretending TRUMPISM & BREXIT never happened ! S 2. Pretending all is OK and turning a blind eye ! S 3. Many families are split on these issues which (in my mind) is a major problem and cause for grief & social unrest ! S 4. Because we see the problems and are concerned for the future ~ we are out of synch with \"normality\" and a down town Chicago Restaurant Booth becomes the loneliest and scariest place in the World ~ OMG ~ Your poem is almost the plot for a Horror Moovie ! Thanks for scaring BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
January 29th, 2017 18:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HUSKY ~ Thanks for your first poem which I found challenging ! It is elegantly written with consistent rhyme (ababcc pattern) and rhythm. The subject is disturbing because it touches on what is happening today in the USA and elsewhere. ISTANZA 1. World in devastation (true !) but all of wearing fake smiles and pretending TRUMPISM & BREXIT never happened ! S 2. Pretending all is OK and turning a blind eye ! S 3. Many families are split on these issues which (in my mind) is a major problem and cause for grief & social unrest ! S 4. Because we see the problems and are concerned for the future ~ we are out of synch with \"normality\" and a down town Chicago Restaurant Booth becomes the loneliest and scariest place in the World ~ OMG ~ Your poem is almost the plot for a Horror Moovie ! Thanks for scaring BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
January 29th, 2017 18:49
