Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Prevarication Invites Animadversion Plus Aggravation
rew4er2nail said:
ah yee...thee format asper viewed here (my poetic side) turned the painstaking sentence format into utter goulash, where strings of words bunched together creating (nee compounding), an already Herculean task to interpret how thine philosophical musing took quite a few odd turns.
July 31st, 2018 15:20
rew4er2nail said:
ah yee...thee format asper viewed here (my poetic side) turned the painstaking sentence format into utter goulash, where strings of words bunched together creating (nee compounding), an already Herculean task to interpret how thine philosophical musing took quite a few odd turns.
July 31st, 2018 15:20
Prevarication Invites Animadversion Plus Aggravation
orchidee said:
Erm yes, all that too! Have to go over this with a magnifying glass. Not for the size of the text, but to look closely and understand it all!
July 31st, 2018 06:59
orchidee said:
Erm yes, all that too! Have to go over this with a magnifying glass. Not for the size of the text, but to look closely and understand it all!
July 31st, 2018 06:59
Prevarication Invites Animadversion Plus Aggravation
Jon Nakapalau said:
Very original!
July 30th, 2018 19:46
Jon Nakapalau said:
Very original!
July 30th, 2018 19:46
Father Daughter Rift Rivals Depth Of Mariana Trench
Blackhawkwings said:
Different, surely a poet\'s poem, a interesting tell. Very interesting.
July 10th, 2018 20:22
Blackhawkwings said:
Different, surely a poet\'s poem, a interesting tell. Very interesting.
July 10th, 2018 20:22
No Room For Gallows Humor
Alex Kay said:
Wow. This is powerful stuff, this. And I love, love, love the formatting, everything becoming more chaotic and choppy, words being stretched across lines, madness and pain and confusion swirling together. Also, I learned about Anthony Bourdain\'s passing from this poem as well, so thank you for informing me.
It\'s all so sad. The only silver lining is that those who were in pain are no longer in pain...with the unfortunate side effect of casting their friends and loved ones into fresh pain they had never expected. :/
And I do concur with your opinion. The Internet, for all its benefits, seems to be more of a scourge and a curse than a boon. It may heighten awareness about suicide but usually does little to help...and often compounds the problem and the pain.
June 9th, 2018 13:28
Alex Kay said:
Wow. This is powerful stuff, this. And I love, love, love the formatting, everything becoming more chaotic and choppy, words being stretched across lines, madness and pain and confusion swirling together. Also, I learned about Anthony Bourdain\'s passing from this poem as well, so thank you for informing me.
It\'s all so sad. The only silver lining is that those who were in pain are no longer in pain...with the unfortunate side effect of casting their friends and loved ones into fresh pain they had never expected. :/
And I do concur with your opinion. The Internet, for all its benefits, seems to be more of a scourge and a curse than a boon. It may heighten awareness about suicide but usually does little to help...and often compounds the problem and the pain.
June 9th, 2018 13:28
irritable bowel syndrome exacerbated courtesy of prunes
orchidee said:
Has put me off me food now, all this detail! heehee. I\'m on me way to ya with some syrup of figs!
April 28th, 2018 10:12
orchidee said:
Has put me off me food now, all this detail! heehee. I\'m on me way to ya with some syrup of figs!
April 28th, 2018 10:12
irritable bowel syndrome exacerbated courtesy of prunes
onepauly said:
excuse me. I\'ve got to take a poop.
April 27th, 2018 18:40
onepauly said:
excuse me. I\'ve got to take a poop.
April 27th, 2018 18:40
An Accursed Abominable Deadly Epidemic
danasaur said:
My School was shot up a few years ago, and in the past 4 weeks we\'ve had 6 threats. This is very needed.
April 22nd, 2018 22:50
danasaur said:
My School was shot up a few years ago, and in the past 4 weeks we\'ve had 6 threats. This is very needed.
April 22nd, 2018 22:50
ignoble harness gummed facebook ethics:
RiverJordan said:
You make it look easy 👌
April 12th, 2018 05:03
RiverJordan said:
You make it look easy 👌
April 12th, 2018 05:03
ignoble harness gummed facebook ethics:
Daveyboyz said:
Floccinaucinihilipilification of your verbosity would be erroneous. A stimulating read :-)
April 12th, 2018 04:01
Daveyboyz said:
Floccinaucinihilipilification of your verbosity would be erroneous. A stimulating read :-)
April 12th, 2018 04:01
ignoble harness gummed facebook ethics:
Nicholas Browning said:
Sweet mother of nouns and adjectives. Chaos is refreshing.
April 12th, 2018 03:11
Nicholas Browning said:
Sweet mother of nouns and adjectives. Chaos is refreshing.
April 12th, 2018 03:11
Byte Size Food Begets Best Benefits
Aislinn Wilson said:
One of the most worthwhile reads of the day
April 11th, 2018 14:23
Aislinn Wilson said:
One of the most worthwhile reads of the day
April 11th, 2018 14:23
Bleached Blonde Bombshell Babe
Daveyboyz said:
Lol, some women get this a lot... many men are unable to resist their tried and tested techniques... if you are low status they cry \"unwanted attention, harassment\" but if you are a prince among men you are most welcome. Interesting how you broke your words up, a good write.
April 9th, 2018 05:53
Daveyboyz said:
Lol, some women get this a lot... many men are unable to resist their tried and tested techniques... if you are low status they cry \"unwanted attention, harassment\" but if you are a prince among men you are most welcome. Interesting how you broke your words up, a good write.
April 9th, 2018 05:53
traduce tis trademark Trump\'s traitorous...
Lorna said:
I don\'t like him either.........
March 24th, 2018 04:48
Lorna said:
I don\'t like him either.........
March 24th, 2018 04:48
Here...here...please define quantum mechanics
Lorna said:
You just made quantum physics a whole lot harder!!!! And it was indecipherable in the first place!
February 16th, 2018 04:54
Lorna said:
You just made quantum physics a whole lot harder!!!! And it was indecipherable in the first place!
February 16th, 2018 04:54
Struggle to write right!
Moom said:
Oh my god your writing is like a fine wine. Scrumptious!
February 4th, 2018 04:57
Moom said:
Oh my god your writing is like a fine wine. Scrumptious!
February 4th, 2018 04:57
Yikes, I got man boobs!
poelove said:
haha, all over the place
change my name to Chester\'
another thought provoking write adequate for todays society..
December 30th, 2017 08:02
poelove said:
haha, all over the place
change my name to Chester\'
another thought provoking write adequate for todays society..
December 30th, 2017 08:02
Biological clock patented before Seth Thomas Design
poelove said:
wow, thouroghly enjoyed this write.
i am new to this site and have been looking for someone who isnt caught up in writing amatuer angst driven drivel..loved your outside the box thinking and \'best words in thier best place tinkering\'..you are the first person, out of days of perusing this format that i actually had to look up a word for its definition (i appreciate that type of writing as it increases my my own knowledge) the
word was fecund and its usage was excellent...also I love long poetry and i would guess that in this world of the abrupt minded this would explain why you have no comments on this write...shame I hesitate to put longer writes on this site for that reason. perhaps you can direct me to others on this site of like mindedness? Also loved the final verse-
December 30th, 2017 07:45
poelove said:
wow, thouroghly enjoyed this write.
i am new to this site and have been looking for someone who isnt caught up in writing amatuer angst driven drivel..loved your outside the box thinking and \'best words in thier best place tinkering\'..you are the first person, out of days of perusing this format that i actually had to look up a word for its definition (i appreciate that type of writing as it increases my my own knowledge) the
word was fecund and its usage was excellent...also I love long poetry and i would guess that in this world of the abrupt minded this would explain why you have no comments on this write...shame I hesitate to put longer writes on this site for that reason. perhaps you can direct me to others on this site of like mindedness? Also loved the final verse-
December 30th, 2017 07:45
my muttering kant
deepthoughts said:
Well, it seems like you put a lot of work into this, but..... I have no idea what it says.
December 9th, 2017 00:54
deepthoughts said:
Well, it seems like you put a lot of work into this, but..... I have no idea what it says.
December 9th, 2017 00:54
wallet blues
Allysnewworld said:
I appreciate the different approach you have taken... not sure I understand it yet but its interesting!
November 20th, 2017 14:55
Allysnewworld said:
I appreciate the different approach you have taken... not sure I understand it yet but its interesting!
November 20th, 2017 14:55
The pleasure of sleep
Carmine Branco said:
Excellent. Such mastery of words. Perfect like a painting.
October 27th, 2017 19:36
Carmine Branco said:
Excellent. Such mastery of words. Perfect like a painting.
October 27th, 2017 19:36
Email To Republican Bob Corker
FredPeyer said:
Wow, you really gave it to him! Good job!
October 10th, 2017 02:58
FredPeyer said:
Wow, you really gave it to him! Good job!
October 10th, 2017 02:58
Loose Stools
Night Owl said:
You certainly are a master of words- Emptying out in print - Holy shite... very clever write!
August 12th, 2017 03:45
Night Owl said:
You certainly are a master of words- Emptying out in print - Holy shite... very clever write!
August 12th, 2017 03:45
Loose Stools
orchidee said:
Erm, I had a feeling you weren\'t gonna talk about chairs in this poem, when I saw it marked 18+ (stools, that is). Swoon! heehee.
August 12th, 2017 02:06
orchidee said:
Erm, I had a feeling you weren\'t gonna talk about chairs in this poem, when I saw it marked 18+ (stools, that is). Swoon! heehee.
August 12th, 2017 02:06
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