Winter solstice 2020 in Northern Hemisphere
L. B. Mek said:

an enthralling read of what is a didactic write,
worth reading a few times to grasp at the complexities woven within its references, sadly I\'m too ignorant of the necessary fundamentals to understand it all:
\'who govern Geico and Nationwide
renown companies insuring property on hillside
made of ticky tack
indirectly, fuelled, impacted, and launched
segregation and next of kin apartheid.\'
but these words of Capitalism\'s universal disregard - to all things: deemed as \'unworthy\', I can relate to easily,
erm is it ok if I wish you \'Happy Holidays\'?
stay safe


December 22nd, 2020 06:02

Marital covenant chaste away errant infidelity
Doggerel Dave said:

Anyone there in a happy spot? :-)
Dave

December 17th, 2020 01:02

Throbbing sentimental pangs trigger nostalgic memories of yesteryear
L. B. Mek said:

\'Risk averse demeanor
kept me hermetically sealed
against positive growth experiences
and (bully me)
not sequestered nor singled
out as token scapegoat,
whereby (wherein) psyche
relentlessly, quintessentially,
and painfully assaulted.\'
as bravely revealing and impassioned your work may be, you\'ve still managed to give it an element of fun, like you\'re inviting us to be included in a sarcastically interpreted self-introspection - session, especially your witty guidance (notes),
I just hope you get as much enjoyment from penning such a wonderful write, as you\'ve gifted us by sharing your work,
great read (quick access to a dictionary made compulsory for us mere mortals though, go easy on us) lol

December 15th, 2020 05:04

Throbbing sentimental pangs trigger nostalgic memories of yesteryear
Trenz Pruca said:

Strong emotions. Thank you...

December 14th, 2020 12:54

Rather than crank up the heat...
Jerry Reynolds said:

Stay safe

December 10th, 2020 15:45

Deep within throes of writer\'s block cerebral cortex feels frozen to the core
RDS said:

A good bouncy read about some of the unreasonable ways of the world and some harsh realities rew4er2nail. Thanks for sharing it and stay creative.
J

November 30th, 2020 15:45

Gibbering jabbering gibberish haint no recipe to sound glib
RDS said:

Haha now I doubt you adlibbed that! Fantastic mix of English through the ages and, forsooth, well made.

November 20th, 2020 19:24

Number forty six - White House occupant re: guarding President elect Joe Biden
Syd said:

Great poem. I wholeheartedly agree with it\'s message. Finally America has come to its senses.

- Syd

November 10th, 2020 20:31

Number forty six - White House occupant re: guarding President elect Joe Biden
Doggerel Dave said:

Surreal but vivid - message comes through loud and clear.
And I like it.
Regards Dave

November 9th, 2020 20:11

Inevitable demise courtesy grim reaper
Lorna said:

I have to say this is so intriguing..... I tangled my way through and am happy I did....... clever.

October 1st, 2020 00:34

Still binge reading Bertrand Russell.. September 8th, 2020
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

My dad used to read Russell and you wrote him and his work a fine eloquent epic tribute. Your word choice is admirable. I esp liked the stanza where you say books bring you delight. Kudos!!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

September 10th, 2020 14:36

Pronounced side effect upon my dreams... courtesy Fluoxetine hydrochloride
Crowns4Christ said:

the side effects is why my dr changed me to wellbutrin xl much better.consider asking about switching

September 5th, 2020 15:57

Aye passively plead death to please release me from agonizing clutches
L. B. Mek said:

Full of ambition, wit and with highly invocative cultural references dripping from every verse.
A credible, amalgamation of
the dramatic despair in Allan Poe\'s \'The Raven\'
and modernity\'s dismissive mindset to death, voiced eloquently in Emily Dickinson\'s \'Because I could not stop for death\'

A somewhat testing, but ultimately rewarding read. Thank you for sharing

July 18th, 2020 04:19

Podcast lesson (re)learned today...
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A super poem epic and I enjoyed it , related to it a bit because I love watching the equine, the feline on YouTube videos. Kudos for this muse.

Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

May 8th, 2020 09:43

Pitching electioneering, albeit Democratic ticket...
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good eveing Stuart ! What happened in Pennsylvania in 2016 to allow Trump to win their 20 Electoral Votes by 0.72% 44,292 votes out of nearly 6 million ? Did Hillary take it for granted She would win after BILL had won it twice in 1992 & 1996 ? It was expected to Vote Democrat in 2016. Do you think TRUMP can win it again in November ? God forbid ! He hasn*t been a good President but the Democrats seem disunited with to two Seniors (77 & 78) as front runners. You want somebody Young & Male like JFK or OBAMA to have a chance of trumping TRUMP ! Unfortunately AMERICA sometimes gets the PRESIDENT it deserves ! BILL had his shortcomings but he got the ECONOMY RIGHT (Its also smiling on Businessman Trump). I like BILL and met him in Little Rock in 2004 ~ Maybe Hillary should have run then instead of JOHN KERRY. Hillary won the Popular vote in 2016 but lost some States (Like Pennsylvania) narrowly. In the end its Electrol College Votes that count. I am UK Labour (Socialist) so I would have voted for Hillary ! Boris Johnson (SON OF TRUMP) won a big majority (over 80 seats) in the 2019 UK Election because Jeremy Corbyn was too Left Wing and also People didnt think he would make a good PM. Labour (Socialist) are now selecting a New Leader ! The next General Election in the UK will be in 2024. I want the DEMOCRATS to win in November but personally I think BIDEN (77) & SANDERS (78) are too old and yesterdays MEN. I feel Hillary had more CHUTZPAH than either of them ~ but (alas) too much baggage. I am a student of 20th Century American History and was born in LIVERPOOL the 51st State !

Every Blessing for November
We are praying TRUMP will be defeated ~ AMEN !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💜

March 5th, 2020 20:25