Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Inevitable demise courtesy grim reaper
Lorna said:
I have to say this is so intriguing..... I tangled my way through and am happy I did....... clever.
October 1st, 2020 00:34
Lorna said:
I have to say this is so intriguing..... I tangled my way through and am happy I did....... clever.
October 1st, 2020 00:34
Dereliction (possibly \"FAKE NEWS\") - read all about it!
Trenz Pruca said:
Good for you. I like it a lot.
September 26th, 2020 15:17
Trenz Pruca said:
Good for you. I like it a lot.
September 26th, 2020 15:17
Still binge reading Bertrand Russell.. September 8th, 2020
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
My dad used to read Russell and you wrote him and his work a fine eloquent epic tribute. Your word choice is admirable. I esp liked the stanza where you say books bring you delight. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 10th, 2020 14:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
My dad used to read Russell and you wrote him and his work a fine eloquent epic tribute. Your word choice is admirable. I esp liked the stanza where you say books bring you delight. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 10th, 2020 14:36
Still binge reading Bertrand Russell.. September 8th, 2020
L. B. Mek said:
Russell is a gem, personally I gravitate more to the smooth prose and sharp wit of Durant and Ariel,
I commend your dedication to creating such a lengthy piece, intertwining references for all the diverse topics you included
September 10th, 2020 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
Russell is a gem, personally I gravitate more to the smooth prose and sharp wit of Durant and Ariel,
I commend your dedication to creating such a lengthy piece, intertwining references for all the diverse topics you included
September 10th, 2020 03:20
Pronounced side effect upon my dreams... courtesy Fluoxetine hydrochloride
Crowns4Christ said:
the side effects is why my dr changed me to wellbutrin xl much better.consider asking about switching
September 5th, 2020 15:57
Crowns4Christ said:
the side effects is why my dr changed me to wellbutrin xl much better.consider asking about switching
September 5th, 2020 15:57
Hiroshima n Nagasaki – Seventy Five Years Since 1945
orchidee said:
Surely it was some height of evil, that man perpetrated against man. Bodies disappeared, their outlines burnt into the ground, through this hell-fire.
August 6th, 2020 01:39
orchidee said:
Surely it was some height of evil, that man perpetrated against man. Bodies disappeared, their outlines burnt into the ground, through this hell-fire.
August 6th, 2020 01:39
Aye passively plead death to please release me from agonizing clutches
L. B. Mek said:
Full of ambition, wit and with highly invocative cultural references dripping from every verse.
A credible, amalgamation of
the dramatic despair in Allan Poe\'s \'The Raven\'
and modernity\'s dismissive mindset to death, voiced eloquently in Emily Dickinson\'s \'Because I could not stop for death\'
A somewhat testing, but ultimately rewarding read. Thank you for sharing
July 18th, 2020 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
Full of ambition, wit and with highly invocative cultural references dripping from every verse.
A credible, amalgamation of
the dramatic despair in Allan Poe\'s \'The Raven\'
and modernity\'s dismissive mindset to death, voiced eloquently in Emily Dickinson\'s \'Because I could not stop for death\'
A somewhat testing, but ultimately rewarding read. Thank you for sharing
July 18th, 2020 04:19
Podcast lesson (re)learned today...
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A super poem epic and I enjoyed it , related to it a bit because I love watching the equine, the feline on YouTube videos. Kudos for this muse.
Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2020 09:43
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A super poem epic and I enjoyed it , related to it a bit because I love watching the equine, the feline on YouTube videos. Kudos for this muse.
Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2020 09:43
Coronavirus microbe (COVID-19)
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
WOW
This one really whacks ot out the ballpark..lol..I like it..its the 5g
March 16th, 2020 00:55
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
WOW
This one really whacks ot out the ballpark..lol..I like it..its the 5g
March 16th, 2020 00:55
Pitching electioneering, albeit Democratic ticket...
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good eveing Stuart ! What happened in Pennsylvania in 2016 to allow Trump to win their 20 Electoral Votes by 0.72% 44,292 votes out of nearly 6 million ? Did Hillary take it for granted She would win after BILL had won it twice in 1992 & 1996 ? It was expected to Vote Democrat in 2016. Do you think TRUMP can win it again in November ? God forbid ! He hasn*t been a good President but the Democrats seem disunited with to two Seniors (77 & 78) as front runners. You want somebody Young & Male like JFK or OBAMA to have a chance of trumping TRUMP ! Unfortunately AMERICA sometimes gets the PRESIDENT it deserves ! BILL had his shortcomings but he got the ECONOMY RIGHT (Its also smiling on Businessman Trump). I like BILL and met him in Little Rock in 2004 ~ Maybe Hillary should have run then instead of JOHN KERRY. Hillary won the Popular vote in 2016 but lost some States (Like Pennsylvania) narrowly. In the end its Electrol College Votes that count. I am UK Labour (Socialist) so I would have voted for Hillary ! Boris Johnson (SON OF TRUMP) won a big majority (over 80 seats) in the 2019 UK Election because Jeremy Corbyn was too Left Wing and also People didnt think he would make a good PM. Labour (Socialist) are now selecting a New Leader ! The next General Election in the UK will be in 2024. I want the DEMOCRATS to win in November but personally I think BIDEN (77) & SANDERS (78) are too old and yesterdays MEN. I feel Hillary had more CHUTZPAH than either of them ~ but (alas) too much baggage. I am a student of 20th Century American History and was born in LIVERPOOL the 51st State !
Every Blessing for November
We are praying TRUMP will be defeated ~ AMEN !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💜
March 5th, 2020 20:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good eveing Stuart ! What happened in Pennsylvania in 2016 to allow Trump to win their 20 Electoral Votes by 0.72% 44,292 votes out of nearly 6 million ? Did Hillary take it for granted She would win after BILL had won it twice in 1992 & 1996 ? It was expected to Vote Democrat in 2016. Do you think TRUMP can win it again in November ? God forbid ! He hasn*t been a good President but the Democrats seem disunited with to two Seniors (77 & 78) as front runners. You want somebody Young & Male like JFK or OBAMA to have a chance of trumping TRUMP ! Unfortunately AMERICA sometimes gets the PRESIDENT it deserves ! BILL had his shortcomings but he got the ECONOMY RIGHT (Its also smiling on Businessman Trump). I like BILL and met him in Little Rock in 2004 ~ Maybe Hillary should have run then instead of JOHN KERRY. Hillary won the Popular vote in 2016 but lost some States (Like Pennsylvania) narrowly. In the end its Electrol College Votes that count. I am UK Labour (Socialist) so I would have voted for Hillary ! Boris Johnson (SON OF TRUMP) won a big majority (over 80 seats) in the 2019 UK Election because Jeremy Corbyn was too Left Wing and also People didnt think he would make a good PM. Labour (Socialist) are now selecting a New Leader ! The next General Election in the UK will be in 2024. I want the DEMOCRATS to win in November but personally I think BIDEN (77) & SANDERS (78) are too old and yesterdays MEN. I feel Hillary had more CHUTZPAH than either of them ~ but (alas) too much baggage. I am a student of 20th Century American History and was born in LIVERPOOL the 51st State !
Every Blessing for November
We are praying TRUMP will be defeated ~ AMEN !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💜
March 5th, 2020 20:25
Rental rebate plus affordable rent...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! Loved it!
February 29th, 2020 00:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! Loved it!
February 29th, 2020 00:11
At any given moment countless thought processes
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow what an extraordinary muse and you have used many of the words I like to use but in a deeper abstract way. Kudos for this sublime poem.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 26th, 2020 23:16
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow what an extraordinary muse and you have used many of the words I like to use but in a deeper abstract way. Kudos for this sublime poem.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 26th, 2020 23:16
Elusive pursuit endeavoring to craft a great poem
dusk arising said:
Why not find something you want to say and say it in plain language, short and sweet. It beats waffling on for too long every time.
February 15th, 2020 05:04
dusk arising said:
Why not find something you want to say and say it in plain language, short and sweet. It beats waffling on for too long every time.
February 15th, 2020 05:04
Destiny doth accompany, deliver, inveigle America...
Seek said:
Politics, oh politics. The impeachment drama or circus -- depending on whose side one is on --- is now thankfully over. But for this reader, trials without witnesses are held in kangaroo courts. And partisan justice is injustice.
February 9th, 2020 08:37
Seek said:
Politics, oh politics. The impeachment drama or circus -- depending on whose side one is on --- is now thankfully over. But for this reader, trials without witnesses are held in kangaroo courts. And partisan justice is injustice.
February 9th, 2020 08:37
Humanity must hustle mach schnell -
Barry Hodges said:
Zu viele Wörter. Zu wenig Bedeutung.
Zu viel Alliteration ohne berechtigten Grund.
Es tut mir leid!
January 16th, 2020 12:57
Barry Hodges said:
Zu viele Wörter. Zu wenig Bedeutung.
Zu viel Alliteration ohne berechtigten Grund.
Es tut mir leid!
January 16th, 2020 12:57
Marvelous mitzvah \"munchkin\" minted
Barry Hodges said:
I didn\'t understand much of this, since so many references are to provincial American things. Maybe a few translations/footnotes would help.
January 16th, 2020 12:52
Barry Hodges said:
I didn\'t understand much of this, since so many references are to provincial American things. Maybe a few translations/footnotes would help.
January 16th, 2020 12:52
Goodbye and good riddance 2019
orchidee said:
Ahh, a \'bad-hair year for you then!? Doh!
December 25th, 2019 02:49
orchidee said:
Ahh, a \'bad-hair year for you then!? Doh!
December 25th, 2019 02:49
Winter solstice 2019 in Northern Hemisphere
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ BRIAN here ~ Thanks for posting an ENVIRONMENTAL Poem & mentioning GRETA ! I am an ENVIRONMENTALIST and we posted os Poem on GRETA (12 December) when She was named TIME PERSON OF 2019 ~ the youngest person to be so honoured ! I have visited Pennsylvania in the Summer but I guess she gets her fair share of Snow in the Winter ! Despite what President Trump may preach Global Warming is inceasing due to increase in Atmospheric CO2 due to Human Activity ~ from 250 ppm at the start of the Industrial Revolution to 415 ppm today. Due to this The tempertures in Australia is 50C (120+ F) hotter than Death Valley and the whole Country is on Fire ! Sea levels are rising Worldwide and Tornadoes & Hurricanes are more intensive and the melting of the ICE CAPS is irreverible in our lifetimes ! Greta & the striking School Kids could well be alive in 2100 ~ The population will be 15 billion ~ millions will be dying of heat & starvation ~ coastal areas will be inundated and the Climate will be much worse than today ~ tell TRUMP ~ It aint no Chinese Myth ! You touch on these catastrophies in the second half of your epic ! At 60 you dont have to worry much beyond 2050 (when conditions will be worse !) Im 36 so I expect to still be around in 2070 and anyone under 10 could well live into the 22nd century ~ this is why the KIDS (like Greta Thunberg) are REVOLTING ~ Thanks for scaring !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚
We are engaged Angela is 31.
December 21st, 2019 18:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ BRIAN here ~ Thanks for posting an ENVIRONMENTAL Poem & mentioning GRETA ! I am an ENVIRONMENTALIST and we posted os Poem on GRETA (12 December) when She was named TIME PERSON OF 2019 ~ the youngest person to be so honoured ! I have visited Pennsylvania in the Summer but I guess she gets her fair share of Snow in the Winter ! Despite what President Trump may preach Global Warming is inceasing due to increase in Atmospheric CO2 due to Human Activity ~ from 250 ppm at the start of the Industrial Revolution to 415 ppm today. Due to this The tempertures in Australia is 50C (120+ F) hotter than Death Valley and the whole Country is on Fire ! Sea levels are rising Worldwide and Tornadoes & Hurricanes are more intensive and the melting of the ICE CAPS is irreverible in our lifetimes ! Greta & the striking School Kids could well be alive in 2100 ~ The population will be 15 billion ~ millions will be dying of heat & starvation ~ coastal areas will be inundated and the Climate will be much worse than today ~ tell TRUMP ~ It aint no Chinese Myth ! You touch on these catastrophies in the second half of your epic ! At 60 you dont have to worry much beyond 2050 (when conditions will be worse !) Im 36 so I expect to still be around in 2070 and anyone under 10 could well live into the 22nd century ~ this is why the KIDS (like Greta Thunberg) are REVOLTING ~ Thanks for scaring !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚
We are engaged Angela is 31.
December 21st, 2019 18:39
Irrelevant boyhood arcane flotsam and jetsam...
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fantastic poem well humoured and rhymed super as well. Some lines made me giggle hard. Kudos.
Pls pleez do review /comment my newest poem too.
December 4th, 2019 09:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fantastic poem well humoured and rhymed super as well. Some lines made me giggle hard. Kudos.
Pls pleez do review /comment my newest poem too.
December 4th, 2019 09:36
Ice say... water we dew wing to planet Earth?
dusk arising said:
Point well made but in too many words.
The planet and life will survive thats for sure. But life will not be as we know it today and humans will have become extinct along with most other life forms if we continue this madness.
September 18th, 2019 23:47
dusk arising said:
Point well made but in too many words.
The planet and life will survive thats for sure. But life will not be as we know it today and humans will have become extinct along with most other life forms if we continue this madness.
September 18th, 2019 23:47
Shoot! Nothing like killing spree to bookend August 2019!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write rew4er2nail and so true (as thought by me in the UK)
September 1st, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write rew4er2nail and so true (as thought by me in the UK)
September 1st, 2019 02:00
Planting seeds of life - growing self awareness...
dusk arising said:
According to your profile page you do not read other poets work on here or make comments... why is that then?
July 28th, 2019 13:39
dusk arising said:
According to your profile page you do not read other poets work on here or make comments... why is that then?
July 28th, 2019 13:39
Former subjects of the crown
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks BROTHER for a great & heartfelt Tribute to Independence Day July 4 1776 ~ and to George Washington ~ First President of the United States of America and imortalised forever in Stone on Mount Rusmore ! It is also fitting that among the other three is the Great Statesman (and Third President) Thomas Jefferson ~ Who drafted the majority of the Declaration of Independence ! He is my Favorite of the 45 Presidents (to date !). My second would be FDR who served Three Terms because of his key role in WW2 !
Please check our tribute to the DECLARATION & JEFFERSON
Blessings ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
July 4th, 2019 19:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks BROTHER for a great & heartfelt Tribute to Independence Day July 4 1776 ~ and to George Washington ~ First President of the United States of America and imortalised forever in Stone on Mount Rusmore ! It is also fitting that among the other three is the Great Statesman (and Third President) Thomas Jefferson ~ Who drafted the majority of the Declaration of Independence ! He is my Favorite of the 45 Presidents (to date !). My second would be FDR who served Three Terms because of his key role in WW2 !
Please check our tribute to the DECLARATION & JEFFERSON
Blessings ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
July 4th, 2019 19:07
Open Arms Welcome Poetry Muse
dusk arising said:
Challenge you to say all that in five or six lines which would be a really punchy and powerful result.
May 19th, 2019 03:44
dusk arising said:
Challenge you to say all that in five or six lines which would be a really punchy and powerful result.
May 19th, 2019 03:44
Open Arms Welcome Poetry Muse
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of reasons for giving the Muse a big welcome - -and so eloquently presented too. Thank you for the reminder that our aim as poets should be to achieve a \"plethora of appealing material\" An inspiring first read of my day.
May 19th, 2019 03:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of reasons for giving the Muse a big welcome - -and so eloquently presented too. Thank you for the reminder that our aim as poets should be to achieve a \"plethora of appealing material\" An inspiring first read of my day.
May 19th, 2019 03:02
Unconditional Paternal Love Toward Shana Punim
dusk arising said:
Wow, stats on your profile show you don\'t read other peoples poetry on here.
April 13th, 2019 01:21
dusk arising said:
Wow, stats on your profile show you don\'t read other peoples poetry on here.
April 13th, 2019 01:21
Jist Oxen Ya To Bull Heaven Me - Yoke Hay
JB said:
Sorry, but what the hell does this say? I am in fact, an uncultured swine.
April 1st, 2019 09:42
JB said:
Sorry, but what the hell does this say? I am in fact, an uncultured swine.
April 1st, 2019 09:42
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