Comments received on poems by poet2rhyme4tommorrow
Draconian measures promise to hobble future SEPTA transit riders
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of life for the senior citizen. Nicely done
July 2nd, 2025 17:52
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of life for the senior citizen. Nicely done
July 2nd, 2025 17:52
July first two thousand and twenty five...
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale of peace in the beginning and woe as it progresses. Well done
June 30th, 2025 14:58
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale of peace in the beginning and woe as it progresses. Well done
June 30th, 2025 14:58
Pulchritudinous virtual crime pulled off without a cocked hitch
sorenbarrett said:
The hardships of modern day living encapsulated in this poem. Fun to read
June 29th, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
The hardships of modern day living encapsulated in this poem. Fun to read
June 29th, 2025 16:06
Poetic vignette
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid imagination, or maybe not if things continue to escalate, left me breathless. Looking for a place to stop and rest I found none and was carried on like a fart in the wind. (I\'s an old fart so I can say that) Splendid imagery painted a devastated tapestry. A fun read.
June 28th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid imagination, or maybe not if things continue to escalate, left me breathless. Looking for a place to stop and rest I found none and was carried on like a fart in the wind. (I\'s an old fart so I can say that) Splendid imagery painted a devastated tapestry. A fun read.
June 28th, 2025 09:22
Though an atheist..
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that that begins by asking the reader to join bits and pieces which latter are presented in the body of this poem. It culminates in death and ashes spread to the four winds. Well done
June 27th, 2025 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that that begins by asking the reader to join bits and pieces which latter are presented in the body of this poem. It culminates in death and ashes spread to the four winds. Well done
June 27th, 2025 08:01
Donning rubber gloves, the wife does washing of clothes and dishes...
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of division of labor, relationships as they age and aging itself. A fun read that is all too familiar. Well written with a seasoning of humor. Well done
June 26th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of division of labor, relationships as they age and aging itself. A fun read that is all too familiar. Well written with a seasoning of humor. Well done
June 26th, 2025 04:41
I cracked on the central air-conditioning on Juneteenth 2025...
Tony36 said:
Great write
June 23rd, 2025 20:36
Tony36 said:
Great write
June 23rd, 2025 20:36
I cracked on the central air-conditioning on Juneteenth 2025...
sorenbarrett said:
How hard it will be for us to accommodate the green needs of the planet when we are so accustomed to comfort. A fun read that makes its point. Well done
June 23rd, 2025 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
How hard it will be for us to accommodate the green needs of the planet when we are so accustomed to comfort. A fun read that makes its point. Well done
June 23rd, 2025 14:40
Gonifs and gossips revisited
sorenbarrett said:
People the worst type of pests. Good write
June 22nd, 2025 16:50
sorenbarrett said:
People the worst type of pests. Good write
June 22nd, 2025 16:50
Summer Solstice 2025
sorenbarrett said:
There are many ways to see the world from different planes and perspectives from science to myths and religion. Very nice
June 20th, 2025 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
There are many ways to see the world from different planes and perspectives from science to myths and religion. Very nice
June 20th, 2025 14:19
Remembering the frantic little boy with strawberry blond hair who didn\'t say boo
sorenbarrett said:
From education to science and the moral aspects of it. A most interesting write
June 19th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
From education to science and the moral aspects of it. A most interesting write
June 19th, 2025 08:25
Within the threescore and six orbitz that span my lifetime...
sorenbarrett said:
Changes satirized and technology noted in this poem of a mad world. Well done
June 17th, 2025 16:00
sorenbarrett said:
Changes satirized and technology noted in this poem of a mad world. Well done
June 17th, 2025 16:00
I possess an unusual knack for making women bristle
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read of a bachelor without luck in love. Well written.
June 11th, 2025 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read of a bachelor without luck in love. Well written.
June 11th, 2025 14:43
Over our collective figurative eyes commander in chief pulls wool...
Tony36 said:
Powerful
June 10th, 2025 10:28
Tony36 said:
Powerful
June 10th, 2025 10:28
Over our collective figurative eyes commander in chief pulls wool...
sorenbarrett said:
Greed and power in the hands of a fool are indeed the devil\'s tool. A strong opinion voiced in this poem that resonates powerfully
June 10th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
Greed and power in the hands of a fool are indeed the devil\'s tool. A strong opinion voiced in this poem that resonates powerfully
June 10th, 2025 07:28
Yours truly like most every hominid linkedin...
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be a bell curve of horniness across age spans peaking in most in the late teens and early twenties and dropping off in most as they age past fifty. It pleasantly accompanies ones ability to perform but for some on the outer fringes of this curve there may be a discordance of ability to perform and desire that causes friction lighting fires where there is no fuel available to burn. A fun read for a guy that shares as much DNA with a chimpanzee as with his ancient ancestors.
June 8th, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be a bell curve of horniness across age spans peaking in most in the late teens and early twenties and dropping off in most as they age past fifty. It pleasantly accompanies ones ability to perform but for some on the outer fringes of this curve there may be a discordance of ability to perform and desire that causes friction lighting fires where there is no fuel available to burn. A fun read for a guy that shares as much DNA with a chimpanzee as with his ancient ancestors.
June 8th, 2025 10:05
Incessant flagellation no longer torments nor assails psyche of mine...
sorenbarrett said:
I, my son and many others have had similar banking experiences making me quite sympathetic. I lost more money taking an hour off work to go talk to the bank manager and demand reimbursement of fees and penalties loosing more than recovered but doing it out of principle. A most entertaining work.
June 6th, 2025 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
I, my son and many others have had similar banking experiences making me quite sympathetic. I lost more money taking an hour off work to go talk to the bank manager and demand reimbursement of fees and penalties loosing more than recovered but doing it out of principle. A most entertaining work.
June 6th, 2025 19:21
Aspiration towards elusive apotheosis of enlightenment...
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with many thoughts and images. Kept the mind running.
June 3rd, 2025 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with many thoughts and images. Kept the mind running.
June 3rd, 2025 16:47
After the wife made a suggestion about what to write about...
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting meld of old with new and fable either way. A most mind provoking read
May 31st, 2025 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting meld of old with new and fable either way. A most mind provoking read
May 31st, 2025 13:19
Harried Harris heir still feels horrid courtesy heist he doth declare...
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the journey and day. A most fun read.
May 29th, 2025 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the journey and day. A most fun read.
May 29th, 2025 13:41
As an underdog given a short leash on life
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the self description. Now that we got the introduction out of the way we are ready for the story. A most self disclosing and brave beginning. Well done
May 26th, 2025 18:25
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the self description. Now that we got the introduction out of the way we are ready for the story. A most self disclosing and brave beginning. Well done
May 26th, 2025 18:25
Sexually explicit meme more real day
sorenbarrett said:
A nearly exhaustive set of metaphors of sensual and sexual expression. Well done
May 25th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
A nearly exhaustive set of metaphors of sensual and sexual expression. Well done
May 25th, 2025 15:31
A senior moment experienced by this drip...
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of the letters REM in spellings and the allusion to dreams. This read did seem dream like. Nice
May 23rd, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of the letters REM in spellings and the allusion to dreams. This read did seem dream like. Nice
May 23rd, 2025 11:51
As an easy pushover and soft touch lamenting my demise
sorenbarrett said:
Humorous but metaphorical as well. Like a dream this poem poses feelings of helplessness and victimization in a bizarre world. Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Humorous but metaphorical as well. Like a dream this poem poses feelings of helplessness and victimization in a bizarre world. Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 08:34
Impossible mission for systematization to be wrung out of entropy
sorenbarrett said:
Daily escapades flow from this poem in a sense a poetic diary of thoughts and actions nicely said
May 21st, 2025 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
Daily escapades flow from this poem in a sense a poetic diary of thoughts and actions nicely said
May 21st, 2025 07:41
Excellent marksmen/women set his/her sites...
sorenbarrett said:
Scams and rip offs fill the world now days. Aggravating and upsetting. Well written
May 19th, 2025 16:41
sorenbarrett said:
Scams and rip offs fill the world now days. Aggravating and upsetting. Well written
May 19th, 2025 16:41
endless leisure hours as distorted time stretch before me...
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting series of rambles that takes to the end of a statement by Winston Churchill
May 14th, 2025 18:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting series of rambles that takes to the end of a statement by Winston Churchill
May 14th, 2025 18:34
Irrational exuberance at respite from reading...
sorenbarrett said:
Too many symbols to mention in this ramble through the mind. Entertaining.
May 13th, 2025 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
Too many symbols to mention in this ramble through the mind. Entertaining.
May 13th, 2025 12:17
Rebellious nonestablishmentarian Pennsylvania Yankee...
sorenbarrett said:
History full of past abominations it is up to us to make sure we don\'t relive those mistakes. Good write
May 10th, 2025 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
History full of past abominations it is up to us to make sure we don\'t relive those mistakes. Good write
May 10th, 2025 11:44
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