Comments received on poems by poet2rhyme4tommorrow
An unexceptional turning point in our marriage...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite the poem. Enjoyed it immensely. A serious write, but written with some tongue-in-cheek levity. This drew me in and kept me reading to the very end. Well done! 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 17:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite the poem. Enjoyed it immensely. A serious write, but written with some tongue-in-cheek levity. This drew me in and kept me reading to the very end. Well done! 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 17:38
An unexceptional turning point in our marriage...
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale too common to be taken lightly and to funny to be taken seriously a fun read
April 27th, 2025 14:33
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale too common to be taken lightly and to funny to be taken seriously a fun read
April 27th, 2025 14:33
And still his death haunts webbed wide world post American Civil War
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of history mixed with other thoughts in this poem. I see a metaphor as well, but then I do in most things. A very nice write
April 14th, 2025 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of history mixed with other thoughts in this poem. I see a metaphor as well, but then I do in most things. A very nice write
April 14th, 2025 16:31
Galore of buzzfeeding, needling and scamming female hustlers...
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale. Scammers I have met a few in the mail, phone, and texts but only once fell victim years ago to a financial fiasco. Taught me a lesson that was more valuable and unless they get far better at their trade will never happen again.
April 13th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale. Scammers I have met a few in the mail, phone, and texts but only once fell victim years ago to a financial fiasco. Taught me a lesson that was more valuable and unless they get far better at their trade will never happen again.
April 13th, 2025 04:20
April 9th, 2025 birthday poem for dearly departed papa
Cheeky Missy said:
Ye is plural.
April 9th, 2025 13:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Ye is plural.
April 9th, 2025 13:37
The downplayed hazard of swallowing vitamins a -z
sorenbarrett said:
Wow look what the vitamins have done. Irregular growth poetic spin, a tongue that speaks in metaphor. I wonder if the FDA has approved this poem, oh yea vitamins they don\'t control. What a splendid analogy and the flow of verse is like digestive juices that take it to its end. Loved it
April 7th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wow look what the vitamins have done. Irregular growth poetic spin, a tongue that speaks in metaphor. I wonder if the FDA has approved this poem, oh yea vitamins they don\'t control. What a splendid analogy and the flow of verse is like digestive juices that take it to its end. Loved it
April 7th, 2025 07:02
Fate decreed sexting/texting while married abominable
sorenbarrett said:
The question is where does one draw the line? if one takes it to the limit and says infidelity is any thought impure then we are all guilty and there is no one to judge, if we say anything goes then again the question is mute A fun poem with many ingenious lines of word play.
April 5th, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
The question is where does one draw the line? if one takes it to the limit and says infidelity is any thought impure then we are all guilty and there is no one to judge, if we say anything goes then again the question is mute A fun poem with many ingenious lines of word play.
April 5th, 2025 05:26
Betrayal (guilty as charged)...
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of several disjointed thoughts as they would race through my mind connected with a central theme of questioning life and its meaning. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of several disjointed thoughts as they would race through my mind connected with a central theme of questioning life and its meaning. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 16:06
Bad ass beauty brought bedlam, and begat bastard child...
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
March 31st, 2025 20:26
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
March 31st, 2025 20:26
Bad ass beauty brought bedlam, and begat bastard child...
sorenbarrett said:
When hormones rush emotions gush they say and this poem is full of both. Quaint language pervades in this knights and damsels in distress poem. Fun read
March 31st, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
When hormones rush emotions gush they say and this poem is full of both. Quaint language pervades in this knights and damsels in distress poem. Fun read
March 31st, 2025 10:57
Doing absolute zero endeavors
sorenbarrett said:
An anxious tale of fear for future. Too often such fear pervades our lives now controlled by government agencies and where weather was the primary threat in the past now it is agencies that have the decision to change our lives. A most intricate and involved write as is the process and anxiety. Well done
March 29th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
An anxious tale of fear for future. Too often such fear pervades our lives now controlled by government agencies and where weather was the primary threat in the past now it is agencies that have the decision to change our lives. A most intricate and involved write as is the process and anxiety. Well done
March 29th, 2025 04:22
Scrounging for boogers wrought my damn nostrils nearly to bust
sorenbarrett said:
Humor in its grossest form, a gag that did not get much applause but rather convulsive stomach shakes. A poor retch that has memories of such occurrences causing convulsive gastro contractions leaking boogers less desirable cousin vomit know as puke for short. I don\'t know what else to say and am left speechless.
March 27th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
Humor in its grossest form, a gag that did not get much applause but rather convulsive stomach shakes. A poor retch that has memories of such occurrences causing convulsive gastro contractions leaking boogers less desirable cousin vomit know as puke for short. I don\'t know what else to say and am left speechless.
March 27th, 2025 10:48
How one twenty first century married mortal male (me - Matthew Scott Harris)...
sorenbarrett said:
This seemed another journey for Ulysses through time and space and somehow I lost track of Circe. Fun read
March 25th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
This seemed another journey for Ulysses through time and space and somehow I lost track of Circe. Fun read
March 25th, 2025 03:58
How one twenty first century married mortal male (me - Matthew Scott Harris)...
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious, Sir.
March 25th, 2025 03:19
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious, Sir.
March 25th, 2025 03:19
Overrun by stuffed subdued teddy bears...
sorenbarrett said:
A stew of different images. Vegetables and meats of different types thrown into this work and blended together as they cook until done. Very nice
March 23rd, 2025 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
A stew of different images. Vegetables and meats of different types thrown into this work and blended together as they cook until done. Very nice
March 23rd, 2025 14:40
Spring (also known as vernal) equinox arrives March 20th, 2025
sorenbarrett said:
Lunar it is. They say shoot for the moon and indeed this one does. A fanciful ramble over the lunar surface. Well done
March 20th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Lunar it is. They say shoot for the moon and indeed this one does. A fanciful ramble over the lunar surface. Well done
March 20th, 2025 04:17
Blandishments eroded invaluable necessary viz life savings of mine videre licet alms
sorenbarrett said:
Many metaphors here as well as pop references such as music. Lovely
March 19th, 2025 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
Many metaphors here as well as pop references such as music. Lovely
March 19th, 2025 11:02
Putin non gmo gluten free cheese on the ritz as a celiac to follow
sorenbarrett said:
Given the date of manufacture, are you not sure that this should be past pull date? lol Quite the string of combinations in this poem combined with numerous food products it makes for quite a recipe.
March 18th, 2025 17:09
sorenbarrett said:
Given the date of manufacture, are you not sure that this should be past pull date? lol Quite the string of combinations in this poem combined with numerous food products it makes for quite a recipe.
March 18th, 2025 17:09
Beware bloody hyperbolic contents incorporated to embody rage against the machine
sorenbarrett said:
From now till then this poem goes over events and everything from music to the economy with some degree of nostalgia and cynicism. Quite well spoken
March 16th, 2025 18:40
sorenbarrett said:
From now till then this poem goes over events and everything from music to the economy with some degree of nostalgia and cynicism. Quite well spoken
March 16th, 2025 18:40
Lost libido as rez erected cockamamie Shtrungool haint no prickly fallacy
sorenbarrett said:
Tricky Dicky was what we called Nixon. The president was a Dick. A interesting poem
March 14th, 2025 18:58
sorenbarrett said:
Tricky Dicky was what we called Nixon. The president was a Dick. A interesting poem
March 14th, 2025 18:58
Texting and sexting as therapy
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read about something so popular. Thought provoking
March 12th, 2025 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read about something so popular. Thought provoking
March 12th, 2025 15:55
Ordinary married sexagenarian mortal fêted as savior incarnate...
Poetic Licence said:
Have we gone mad or has the world gone mad, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 12:52
Poetic Licence said:
Have we gone mad or has the world gone mad, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 12:52
Ordinary married sexagenarian mortal fêted as savior incarnate...
sorenbarrett said:
Times have changed and one has to adapt. A fun poem about keeping one\'s sanity in an insane world.
March 11th, 2025 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
Times have changed and one has to adapt. A fun poem about keeping one\'s sanity in an insane world.
March 11th, 2025 12:07
The nanosecond bad a** to risk romance
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic cybersex. A most unique write.
March 10th, 2025 15:45
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic cybersex. A most unique write.
March 10th, 2025 15:45
More habit forming than any drug or liquor
Poetic Licence said:
A multitude of images as you read and a raft of thoughts and questions come to mind, very creative and well written write, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:16
Poetic Licence said:
A multitude of images as you read and a raft of thoughts and questions come to mind, very creative and well written write, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:16
More habit forming than any drug or liquor
RSM0812 said:
Bumping uglies along the nethermost is the story of my life. This poem says so many things. Really well thought out and written. Great work.
March 9th, 2025 16:31
RSM0812 said:
Bumping uglies along the nethermost is the story of my life. This poem says so many things. Really well thought out and written. Great work.
March 9th, 2025 16:31
More habit forming than any drug or liquor
sorenbarrett said:
A diversity of images fill this poem with numerous thoughts and questions
March 9th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
A diversity of images fill this poem with numerous thoughts and questions
March 9th, 2025 16:20
major storm on the horizon reported from the \"Fo\'c\'sle\"
Poetic Licence said:
A thousand images and meanings to this very creative write, enjoyed the read
March 8th, 2025 03:08
Poetic Licence said:
A thousand images and meanings to this very creative write, enjoyed the read
March 8th, 2025 03:08
major storm on the horizon reported from the \"Fo\'c\'sle\"
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem flows onward with much energy. Very good
March 7th, 2025 19:19
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem flows onward with much energy. Very good
March 7th, 2025 19:19
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