Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Abhorrent vehement strife hijacking Homo sapiens
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve done it again - great stuff!
But how?
Regards
January 20th, 2021 18:12
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve done it again - great stuff!
But how?
Regards
January 20th, 2021 18:12
I thoroughly enjoy dialogue with continuity
L. B. Mek said:
a brilliant roller-coaster ride upon your stream of consciousness, it just needed to start with: \'dear Diary today I...\' lol
you have a brilliant mind and I thank you for sharing your scribbling talents with us mere more mortals dear sir,
\'... heavily shuns engaging in diatribe
loathes bombastic, egotistic,
imperialistic, narcissistic, terroristic...
zealot trumpeting art of the deal
if necessary even coaxing bribe.
I would be up to the task and not averse
to extemporize unless stage fright did curse
ambition to chat up intellectual conversation ...\'
January 19th, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
a brilliant roller-coaster ride upon your stream of consciousness, it just needed to start with: \'dear Diary today I...\' lol
you have a brilliant mind and I thank you for sharing your scribbling talents with us mere more mortals dear sir,
\'... heavily shuns engaging in diatribe
loathes bombastic, egotistic,
imperialistic, narcissistic, terroristic...
zealot trumpeting art of the deal
if necessary even coaxing bribe.
I would be up to the task and not averse
to extemporize unless stage fright did curse
ambition to chat up intellectual conversation ...\'
January 19th, 2021 05:20
The revered Reverend Martin Luther King Junior
orchidee said:
A fine write and remembrance R.
January 18th, 2021 03:23
orchidee said:
A fine write and remembrance R.
January 18th, 2021 03:23
Donald Trump must be permanently barred and furloughed from Whitehouse
L. B. Mek said:
\'that and another woman to bareback jump
disseminating gene pool –
Obama null lee birthing
more quackers and additionally doth hump
the mass media as some foolhardy charade
and caricature of a frazzled grump
this arboreal clothed ape
erecting taj mahal phallic symbol\'
this section reads disturbingly like a racist chauvinist tirade Trump may write himself, which would just be pathetic!
hope I\'m mistaken and exemplifying my vocabulary limitations or intellect in general, I hope...
January 11th, 2021 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'that and another woman to bareback jump
disseminating gene pool –
Obama null lee birthing
more quackers and additionally doth hump
the mass media as some foolhardy charade
and caricature of a frazzled grump
this arboreal clothed ape
erecting taj mahal phallic symbol\'
this section reads disturbingly like a racist chauvinist tirade Trump may write himself, which would just be pathetic!
hope I\'m mistaken and exemplifying my vocabulary limitations or intellect in general, I hope...
January 11th, 2021 06:14
Premature irrelevance of Donald Trump?
orchidee said:
He\'s got to go. It\'s a last evil attempt by him to get back in power.
January 7th, 2021 03:10
orchidee said:
He\'s got to go. It\'s a last evil attempt by him to get back in power.
January 7th, 2021 03:10
Premature irrelevance of Donald Trump?
dusk arising said:
And not a mention of the cool dignity of the profound speech by your president elect Biden. Showing his mettle as a true believer in democracy.
January 6th, 2021 19:25
dusk arising said:
And not a mention of the cool dignity of the profound speech by your president elect Biden. Showing his mettle as a true believer in democracy.
January 6th, 2021 19:25
“Auld Lang Syne” - the most-sung New Year\'s Eve song
L. B. Mek said:
Burn\'s is one of my all time favourites, contrast between that burly proud Scot with earth under his nails and those tender - empathetic words inked from his fingers,
is what makes Poetry so unique in all of literature to me,
that you can have all the \'culture\' and \'learned\' facts to-hand and go through life without penning a single word of \'meaningful\' poetry and yet, someone who can barely spell their own name: can phonetically weave words of pure life-affirming Poetic insight, is such a unique aspect of life...
(or that\'s my understanding of why Burn\'s \'chose\' to write in his proud Scottish tongue, adding all that \'context\' to insure his write\'s are distinguished and cherished as much today, as they were when he first decided to share them)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686
December 29th, 2020 06:19
L. B. Mek said:
Burn\'s is one of my all time favourites, contrast between that burly proud Scot with earth under his nails and those tender - empathetic words inked from his fingers,
is what makes Poetry so unique in all of literature to me,
that you can have all the \'culture\' and \'learned\' facts to-hand and go through life without penning a single word of \'meaningful\' poetry and yet, someone who can barely spell their own name: can phonetically weave words of pure life-affirming Poetic insight, is such a unique aspect of life...
(or that\'s my understanding of why Burn\'s \'chose\' to write in his proud Scottish tongue, adding all that \'context\' to insure his write\'s are distinguished and cherished as much today, as they were when he first decided to share them)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686
December 29th, 2020 06:19
“Auld Lang Syne” - the most-sung New Year\'s Eve song
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I learned to sing that song (along with others by Robert Burns) from my mother (1906-81), who I think learned it from her mother. Scots have told me that my heavy Scots burr sounds archaic today.
December 28th, 2020 20:01
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I learned to sing that song (along with others by Robert Burns) from my mother (1906-81), who I think learned it from her mother. Scots have told me that my heavy Scots burr sounds archaic today.
December 28th, 2020 20:01
“Auld Lang Syne” - the most-sung New Year\'s Eve song
Jerry Reynolds said:
:-) Happy New Year
December 28th, 2020 17:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
:-) Happy New Year
December 28th, 2020 17:42
No longer hungering for an appetite
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Happy New Year
December 27th, 2020 16:24
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Happy New Year
December 27th, 2020 16:24
Thursday, December 31, 2020 signals conclusion of latest leap year
Jerry Reynolds said:
This will end. Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2020 13:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
This will end. Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2020 13:38
I crown the missus \"champ impractical joker\"
L. B. Mek said:
\'these words zealously, randomly, haphazardly
scattered across screen willy nilly I spew
trying to coerce coalescence of continuity
yet additionally trying to weave events
earlier today December 22nd, I review,
whereby yours truly while waiting in a queue\'
while I can\'t grasp all the details you crammed into this \'fun-tabulous\' write, I can testify to its melodically delectable \'lol\' - qualities, what a fun read at this challenging time of all-things serious and dreary,
Happy Holidays and thanks for sharing, my regards to your \'muse\'
December 24th, 2020 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'these words zealously, randomly, haphazardly
scattered across screen willy nilly I spew
trying to coerce coalescence of continuity
yet additionally trying to weave events
earlier today December 22nd, I review,
whereby yours truly while waiting in a queue\'
while I can\'t grasp all the details you crammed into this \'fun-tabulous\' write, I can testify to its melodically delectable \'lol\' - qualities, what a fun read at this challenging time of all-things serious and dreary,
Happy Holidays and thanks for sharing, my regards to your \'muse\'
December 24th, 2020 05:08
Winter solstice 2020 in Northern Hemisphere
L. B. Mek said:
an enthralling read of what is a didactic write,
worth reading a few times to grasp at the complexities woven within its references, sadly I\'m too ignorant of the necessary fundamentals to understand it all:
\'who govern Geico and Nationwide
renown companies insuring property on hillside
made of ticky tack
indirectly, fuelled, impacted, and launched
segregation and next of kin apartheid.\'
but these words of Capitalism\'s universal disregard - to all things: deemed as \'unworthy\', I can relate to easily,
erm is it ok if I wish you \'Happy Holidays\'?
stay safe
December 22nd, 2020 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
an enthralling read of what is a didactic write,
worth reading a few times to grasp at the complexities woven within its references, sadly I\'m too ignorant of the necessary fundamentals to understand it all:
\'who govern Geico and Nationwide
renown companies insuring property on hillside
made of ticky tack
indirectly, fuelled, impacted, and launched
segregation and next of kin apartheid.\'
but these words of Capitalism\'s universal disregard - to all things: deemed as \'unworthy\', I can relate to easily,
erm is it ok if I wish you \'Happy Holidays\'?
stay safe
December 22nd, 2020 06:02
Winter solstice 2020 in Northern Hemisphere
orchidee said:
Doh! One year I missed it. It fell a day earlier on Dec 20th! lol.
I never knew so much happened in a Solstice. Well, I know now!
December 22nd, 2020 02:55
orchidee said:
Doh! One year I missed it. It fell a day earlier on Dec 20th! lol.
I never knew so much happened in a Solstice. Well, I know now!
December 22nd, 2020 02:55
Marital covenant chaste away errant infidelity
Doggerel Dave said:
Anyone there in a happy spot? :-)
Dave
December 17th, 2020 01:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Anyone there in a happy spot? :-)
Dave
December 17th, 2020 01:02
Marital covenant chaste away errant infidelity
jarcher54 said:
Goodness! I forgive you --I think! (-:
December 16th, 2020 22:59
jarcher54 said:
Goodness! I forgive you --I think! (-:
December 16th, 2020 22:59
Throbbing sentimental pangs trigger nostalgic memories of yesteryear
L. B. Mek said:
\'Risk averse demeanor
kept me hermetically sealed
against positive growth experiences
and (bully me)
not sequestered nor singled
out as token scapegoat,
whereby (wherein) psyche
relentlessly, quintessentially,
and painfully assaulted.\'
as bravely revealing and impassioned your work may be, you\'ve still managed to give it an element of fun, like you\'re inviting us to be included in a sarcastically interpreted self-introspection - session, especially your witty guidance (notes),
I just hope you get as much enjoyment from penning such a wonderful write, as you\'ve gifted us by sharing your work,
great read (quick access to a dictionary made compulsory for us mere mortals though, go easy on us) lol
December 15th, 2020 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Risk averse demeanor
kept me hermetically sealed
against positive growth experiences
and (bully me)
not sequestered nor singled
out as token scapegoat,
whereby (wherein) psyche
relentlessly, quintessentially,
and painfully assaulted.\'
as bravely revealing and impassioned your work may be, you\'ve still managed to give it an element of fun, like you\'re inviting us to be included in a sarcastically interpreted self-introspection - session, especially your witty guidance (notes),
I just hope you get as much enjoyment from penning such a wonderful write, as you\'ve gifted us by sharing your work,
great read (quick access to a dictionary made compulsory for us mere mortals though, go easy on us) lol
December 15th, 2020 05:04
Throbbing sentimental pangs trigger nostalgic memories of yesteryear
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of material. I liked it.
December 14th, 2020 14:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of material. I liked it.
December 14th, 2020 14:43
Throbbing sentimental pangs trigger nostalgic memories of yesteryear
Trenz Pruca said:
Strong emotions. Thank you...
December 14th, 2020 12:54
Trenz Pruca said:
Strong emotions. Thank you...
December 14th, 2020 12:54
Rather than crank up the heat...
dusk arising said:
Hmmm those Btu\'s are a thing of the past in Britain since sometime back in the 1970\'s. Well i guess as the nation who invented the Btu we have to keep up with the times. Hey, on this side of the pond we actually have leaders who accept global warming is a fact rather than claim to know more about it than the scientists do like Mr Trumpet does.
The English language word dusk does not mean sunset. Look it up on google, i did and couldn\'t find anywhere that agreed with you.
December 10th, 2020 16:27
dusk arising said:
Hmmm those Btu\'s are a thing of the past in Britain since sometime back in the 1970\'s. Well i guess as the nation who invented the Btu we have to keep up with the times. Hey, on this side of the pond we actually have leaders who accept global warming is a fact rather than claim to know more about it than the scientists do like Mr Trumpet does.
The English language word dusk does not mean sunset. Look it up on google, i did and couldn\'t find anywhere that agreed with you.
December 10th, 2020 16:27
I can sense your impatience...
Doggerel Dave said:
Still following.... Did you have to use my legs as a model in there? Bit unnecessary to embarass me like that. Almost managed to forget that Yoga class, and now you\'ve bought the trauma to the fore, it\'s back to counselling ...
Dave
December 9th, 2020 00:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Still following.... Did you have to use my legs as a model in there? Bit unnecessary to embarass me like that. Almost managed to forget that Yoga class, and now you\'ve bought the trauma to the fore, it\'s back to counselling ...
Dave
December 9th, 2020 00:02
Deep within throes of writer\'s block cerebral cortex feels frozen to the core
RDS said:
A good bouncy read about some of the unreasonable ways of the world and some harsh realities rew4er2nail. Thanks for sharing it and stay creative.
J
November 30th, 2020 15:45
RDS said:
A good bouncy read about some of the unreasonable ways of the world and some harsh realities rew4er2nail. Thanks for sharing it and stay creative.
J
November 30th, 2020 15:45
Impossible mission to identify mine heretically rooted hair issue
Doggerel Dave said:
Doggerel Dave
November 18th, 2020 03:46
I continue to enjoy what you do - even if sometimes I can\'t come to grips with the nuances. Different experience, language, culture I think.
What to do? Shut up, hang in there, just keep following...until...
Regards Dave
Above is cut and paste from previous comment previous entry.
Remains true, without amendment.
Regards again, Dave
November 25th, 2020 00:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Doggerel Dave
November 18th, 2020 03:46
I continue to enjoy what you do - even if sometimes I can\'t come to grips with the nuances. Different experience, language, culture I think.
What to do? Shut up, hang in there, just keep following...until...
Regards Dave
Above is cut and paste from previous comment previous entry.
Remains true, without amendment.
Regards again, Dave
November 25th, 2020 00:30
Gibbering jabbering gibberish haint no recipe to sound glib
RDS said:
Haha now I doubt you adlibbed that! Fantastic mix of English through the ages and, forsooth, well made.
November 20th, 2020 19:24
RDS said:
Haha now I doubt you adlibbed that! Fantastic mix of English through the ages and, forsooth, well made.
November 20th, 2020 19:24
Get that trumpeting miscreant yucca puck out of the White House
Doggerel Dave said:
I continue to enjoy what you do - even if sometimes I can\'t come to grips with the nuances. Different experience, language, culture I think.
What to do? Shut up, hang in there, just keep following...until...
Regards Dave
November 18th, 2020 03:46
Doggerel Dave said:
I continue to enjoy what you do - even if sometimes I can\'t come to grips with the nuances. Different experience, language, culture I think.
What to do? Shut up, hang in there, just keep following...until...
Regards Dave
November 18th, 2020 03:46
Number forty six - White House occupant re: guarding President elect Joe Biden
Syd said:
Great poem. I wholeheartedly agree with it\'s message. Finally America has come to its senses.
- Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:31
Syd said:
Great poem. I wholeheartedly agree with it\'s message. Finally America has come to its senses.
- Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:31
Number forty six - White House occupant re: guarding President elect Joe Biden
Syd said:
Great poem. I wholeheartedly agree with it\'s message. Finally America has come to its senses.
- Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:31
Syd said:
Great poem. I wholeheartedly agree with it\'s message. Finally America has come to its senses.
- Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:31
Number forty six - White House occupant re: guarding President elect Joe Biden
Doggerel Dave said:
Surreal but vivid - message comes through loud and clear.
And I like it.
Regards Dave
November 9th, 2020 20:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Surreal but vivid - message comes through loud and clear.
And I like it.
Regards Dave
November 9th, 2020 20:11
A hoodlum, (albeit respectable) in bedlam
Doggerel Dave said:
You cracked that one - summarised in three dimensions the knowledge we all should have of your current situation. I mourn in advance for the good people in America who , it would appear, are being beaten into an ever smaller minority.
November 2nd, 2020 22:25
Doggerel Dave said:
You cracked that one - summarised in three dimensions the knowledge we all should have of your current situation. I mourn in advance for the good people in America who , it would appear, are being beaten into an ever smaller minority.
November 2nd, 2020 22:25
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