Comments received on poems by poet2rhyme4tommorrow



Wonderment at existence – mine
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

December 26th, 2023 11:21

FROM SANTA CLAUS XMAS 2011
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

December 23rd, 2023 17:18

An anticlimactic sexual event...
Bobby O said:

You can write and express with style but maybe enlist a trusted friend for advice when choosing the next topic??

December 15th, 2023 20:36

One generic baby boomer, (a garden variety sexagenarian)...
Thomas W Case said:

Very well crafted.

December 7th, 2023 18:20

prevaricated mildly graphic blurb
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

December 3rd, 2023 17:09

Prune juice as effective emetic
Thomas W Case said:

Funny stuff.

November 23rd, 2023 13:21

Still smarting from stupid scamming fraudsters...
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

November 21st, 2023 18:25

Nope! I haint gonna crack\'n on the heat... just yet
Trix said:

I just love it haha🤣

November 20th, 2023 14:38

Nope! I haint gonna crack\'n on the heat... just yet
Thomas W Case said:

Well crafted.

November 20th, 2023 14:36

Thanksgiving gobbledygook
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

November 17th, 2023 22:16

The bane of a cold sore inside my mouth
Thomas W Case said:

Creative and informative.

November 8th, 2023 20:52

Richard Mcgeehan Poem
Ma5on said:

Damn I\'ve missed you and your chuckle-vision poetry.

Clever, witty and genius to boot!

You m,ay not be everybody\'s cup of tea, so I\'ll share a coffee with ya instead.

Keep \'em comin\'

regards

M (no idea why I thought it ok to drop the TH & G)

November 6th, 2023 14:38

Daylight Savings Time Ends – November 5th 2023 means...
orchidee said:

We were dicombobulated, etc, etc a week ago in UK, with that 25 hour day!

November 5th, 2023 04:32

Gloriously luxuriating in eternal sleep
Thomas W Case said:

Very well crafted.

October 26th, 2023 14:34

Hostages kidnapped: casualties of war
Thomas W Case said:

powerful

October 21st, 2023 16:39

Encomium for cumulative collection of trash
L. B. Mek said:

ok cherished poet, please
a little less detail
or a lot more warning..
first stanza almost have me vomit
me breaky
what have I ever done to you...!
lmao
thanks for sharing

October 9th, 2023 03:10

Dynamic reef flexion within the restless Earth
Jowi said:

That\'s geography ♥

September 28th, 2023 10:46

Figurative paralysis laid waste body electric of mine
Bobby O said:

It’s so long

September 10th, 2023 09:41

Red hot chili pepper poker face...
Bobby O said:

I got lost it started with a path I could follow but just past halfway I felt unaware.

September 10th, 2023 02:23

MINDFULNESS = PSYCHIC SURVIVAL.
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
so much fun, thank you
for sharing your genius with us
typing away in our tents
lol
\'noah matter this totally tubular stranger\'

\'perhaps on account oof a cerebral dent
though many respondents rage\'

\'impacting his/her employment
ending result they/them live in a tent.

This poet knows a mew lion
ranges of feline artful dodging cat skills,\'

\'Sanguine at one hundred minus thirty six, or two squared
+ three squared + four squared + five squared + square root of one hundred =
an apt and pithy phrase
to matt\'s matrix labyrinth
best characterized as a twisted maze\'

\'Keep on dreaming cyber buddy, an anonymous reader might think, telepathically\'

\'The vague nebulous barely perceptible kernel
of a fictional account per my own conjured up vision
(as pertains to what might comprise
a companionable buddy to me) could conceivable materialize
into an actual
arch de triumphant revelation\'

\'If hedging bets with yours truly being a reincarnated union soldier of yore,\'

\'I know best to tamp down any precipitous illusions of grandeur, but would let the natural course of familiarity usher the chap a roan of sacredness\'

\'So, now with a zing
or an unexpected
gold plated invitation after yodeling
hoop ye kin be a yang 2 me yin\'

September 8th, 2023 05:35

Fretfully aching to feel fit as a fiddle
L. B. Mek said:

lol

September 1st, 2023 04:34

ARGH! NO MORE MEDICARE!
orchidee said:

Oh no, if I see that funeral advert on TV once more.....!

August 26th, 2023 12:25

ARGH! NO MORE MEDICARE!
2781 said:

It\'s their system.

August 26th, 2023 09:21

Shame and guilt sabotaged mine healthy growth...
Parisab said:

Complex in objection and acceptance…Thank you for writing a very personal poem reflective of our times of nothing being predictable or stable…

August 19th, 2023 22:02

Natural soporific narcotic
Bobby O said:

I really like this piece, as soon I felt like it was my MAIDEN VOYAGE I knew I could go for MILES quickly realizing that
IM INTO SOMETHING GOOD!

knew it couldn’t be just a one night stand…slowly entered the
EYE OF THE HURRICANE

August 14th, 2023 13:26

Once again besieged by fruit flies
Bobby O said:

I guess the write is good but the topic chased me away

August 13th, 2023 07:49

The broken piggy bank
Parisab said:

I’ve been keeping my piggy bank under my mattress, for the same exacting brilliant poem such as yours!

August 10th, 2023 11:24

Wordsmith theoretician postulates kooky equation
L. B. Mek said:

Genius!
\'with the plot of Iago
in my version starring
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
as none other than Othello
punch drunk as Judy
falling down laughing,
roistering, yammering hysterically
and rolling with a stoned Rockafellow,
whose role as a convincing fall guy
convincingly contradicted himself
as an above board underfellow.\'

July 21st, 2023 04:52

Chicanery grabbed lustfully repeatedly - yup!
2781 said:

Hard to like. These people do themselves no favour.
\"So the last will be first, and the first will be last.\"

July 16th, 2023 09:16

Overzealousness and assiduousness...
L. B. Mek said:

\'computer viruses, malware, et cetera,\'
the cruel forever targeting the vulnerable
my father is scared to touch a computer
they\'re all putrid maggots
wish we could just go and stomp them all out

July 10th, 2023 04:48



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