Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
S\'more sprawling poppycock
L. B. Mek said:
\'figurative slate
lame resultant impasse I narrate
experiencing disappointment
earlier spurt of balderdash,
gibberish, rubbish... which I hate
yet must suffice impossible mission
to complete satisfactory poem does agitate.\'
well, then dear poet - next time, just finish your write later, no such thing as time constraints within poetry\'s sea of limitless creativity, lol
and lock, stock and \'two smoking\' barrels, is one of my fav\'s, so you get immense kudos for finding a fit for that mouthful in your rhyming flow
March 15th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'figurative slate
lame resultant impasse I narrate
experiencing disappointment
earlier spurt of balderdash,
gibberish, rubbish... which I hate
yet must suffice impossible mission
to complete satisfactory poem does agitate.\'
well, then dear poet - next time, just finish your write later, no such thing as time constraints within poetry\'s sea of limitless creativity, lol
and lock, stock and \'two smoking\' barrels, is one of my fav\'s, so you get immense kudos for finding a fit for that mouthful in your rhyming flow
March 15th, 2021 05:37
Argh Daylight Savings Time – March 14th, 2021
orchidee said:
It\'s two weeks later for us in the UK.
March 13th, 2021 02:56
orchidee said:
It\'s two weeks later for us in the UK.
March 13th, 2021 02:56
Revelations about Dad’s infamous midnight lectures... woke up courtesy therapy
L. B. Mek said:
\'telltale toxin did glow
yes dear reader cumulative wrath – hello
synopsis I invite thee to know
why self esteem within me so low
lackluster love life accentuated
cuz yours truly
never kissed under mistletoe\'..
seldom is our memory of childhood all rosy, but some have to endure a sharp incline on those first few steps upon life\'s uneven path
and often, with little guidance to help map survival\'s route to adulthoods, fruits..
a poignant and brave write, dear poet
showcasing your styles flexibility..
thank you for choosing to share your unquestionable talent with us
March 12th, 2021 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'telltale toxin did glow
yes dear reader cumulative wrath – hello
synopsis I invite thee to know
why self esteem within me so low
lackluster love life accentuated
cuz yours truly
never kissed under mistletoe\'..
seldom is our memory of childhood all rosy, but some have to endure a sharp incline on those first few steps upon life\'s uneven path
and often, with little guidance to help map survival\'s route to adulthoods, fruits..
a poignant and brave write, dear poet
showcasing your styles flexibility..
thank you for choosing to share your unquestionable talent with us
March 12th, 2021 06:44
Rental rebate plus affordable rent...
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of material, R.M.
March 9th, 2021 21:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of material, R.M.
March 9th, 2021 21:39
Bullseye! The frisky spouse accidentally and nearly blinded me
L. B. Mek said:
\'toward she, yours truly did marry,
I nearly subjected mine flesh to harakiri.\'
\'Within flash doggone mailer daemon
(inside me noggin) became docile as a whelp.\'
\'nsync with mine jammed cognitive gear
linkedin with rational thinking\'
\'prompting rhetorical question pertaining
to trying circumstances human err
well I could (lamely) blame outburst
on prominent solar flare\'..
seriously, if Hollywood could convince someone with your scalpel-sharp wit to write comedies,
they wouldn\'t need to combine the word with other genres (dramedy, romcom etc)..
hilarious! and a meaningful lesson for all married men
March 9th, 2021 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'toward she, yours truly did marry,
I nearly subjected mine flesh to harakiri.\'
\'Within flash doggone mailer daemon
(inside me noggin) became docile as a whelp.\'
\'nsync with mine jammed cognitive gear
linkedin with rational thinking\'
\'prompting rhetorical question pertaining
to trying circumstances human err
well I could (lamely) blame outburst
on prominent solar flare\'..
seriously, if Hollywood could convince someone with your scalpel-sharp wit to write comedies,
they wouldn\'t need to combine the word with other genres (dramedy, romcom etc)..
hilarious! and a meaningful lesson for all married men
March 9th, 2021 06:46
Personal productivity measured courtesy...
L. B. Mek said:
a time for everything, if - we\'re granted the luck of a fulfilling life, even a time for muscles to ease their tensioned existence, see
every marathon has its lulls dear poet:
\'feels glum,
cuz I would qualify
mine existence as humdrum
hence quite envious at well deserved income\'
March 8th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
a time for everything, if - we\'re granted the luck of a fulfilling life, even a time for muscles to ease their tensioned existence, see
every marathon has its lulls dear poet:
\'feels glum,
cuz I would qualify
mine existence as humdrum
hence quite envious at well deserved income\'
March 8th, 2021 05:06
Schlerotic schlemiel schleps...and says Shalom...
Jerry Reynolds said:
Puzzling write long read, R4.
March 6th, 2021 17:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
Puzzling write long read, R4.
March 6th, 2021 17:38
Ephemeral online moment...
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yours truly plagiarizes himself with zeal
courtesy mental cogs and rusty wheel,
thus no literary crime committed to steel
I broadcast material shown thru rickety
black and white Roman Times newsreel\'..
zeal, steel, newsreel: a stanza crafted by poetic genius! in my humble opinion dear poet,
another great read!
March 5th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yours truly plagiarizes himself with zeal
courtesy mental cogs and rusty wheel,
thus no literary crime committed to steel
I broadcast material shown thru rickety
black and white Roman Times newsreel\'..
zeal, steel, newsreel: a stanza crafted by poetic genius! in my humble opinion dear poet,
another great read!
March 5th, 2021 04:36
After our outing at Liberty Ministries
L. B. Mek said:
\'and absorbed daily dose of Vitamin D
while secretly ensconced
within favorite nook\'
\'the majority years, sans this prolific
recalcitrant scrivener lived
in various and sundry abode\'
\'who entered and did break on thru
doors of fame and fortune
becoming out of this world legendary
rock and roll icon,\'..
a themed write of gateways to subtle gifts, hidden within reverie\'s dreams,
yours, your book author\'s and my feeble role as the consuming reader of your immersive words..
exemplifying literature\'s capacity to surpass those boundaries of society, distance or even time, itself..
a wonderful write, in my humble opinion dear poet
March 4th, 2021 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'and absorbed daily dose of Vitamin D
while secretly ensconced
within favorite nook\'
\'the majority years, sans this prolific
recalcitrant scrivener lived
in various and sundry abode\'
\'who entered and did break on thru
doors of fame and fortune
becoming out of this world legendary
rock and roll icon,\'..
a themed write of gateways to subtle gifts, hidden within reverie\'s dreams,
yours, your book author\'s and my feeble role as the consuming reader of your immersive words..
exemplifying literature\'s capacity to surpass those boundaries of society, distance or even time, itself..
a wonderful write, in my humble opinion dear poet
March 4th, 2021 06:12
Friendly pirate wannabe flies his Jolly Roger...
L. B. Mek said:
such an immersive read, had me googling words every other line lol, but well worth the effort in my humble opinion..
oh and \'dogsend\'
is my kinda genius, forgive me but I\'m gonna have to borrow that one, dear poet
March 4th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
such an immersive read, had me googling words every other line lol, but well worth the effort in my humble opinion..
oh and \'dogsend\'
is my kinda genius, forgive me but I\'m gonna have to borrow that one, dear poet
March 4th, 2021 04:30
Greetings from Schwenksville, Pennsylvania today March 1st, 2021
L. B. Mek said:
\'analogous to catacomb
amid Highland Manor Apartments
I dwell - our livingsocial hole in the wall
among grateful dead residents
facility likened to metaphorical tomb
each stone individually moved one at a time
courtesy hearty and hale archeologists
resident to *Qom\'..
fantastic utilisation of imagery and simile\'s, with metaphorical symbolism pushed to its extreme..
\'yours truly deserted and he gypped
thee while crawling
across Sahara during nighttime
dehydration subsequently
found me tight lipped
I called Uber, but could not get a lyft.\'
simply, hilarious!
March 2nd, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'analogous to catacomb
amid Highland Manor Apartments
I dwell - our livingsocial hole in the wall
among grateful dead residents
facility likened to metaphorical tomb
each stone individually moved one at a time
courtesy hearty and hale archeologists
resident to *Qom\'..
fantastic utilisation of imagery and simile\'s, with metaphorical symbolism pushed to its extreme..
\'yours truly deserted and he gypped
thee while crawling
across Sahara during nighttime
dehydration subsequently
found me tight lipped
I called Uber, but could not get a lyft.\'
simply, hilarious!
March 2nd, 2021 05:15
Severely withdrawn as a doggone lad...
L. B. Mek said:
or simply read first few chapters of Proust\'s: \'In Search of Lost Time\', that will soon have you snoring an accompaniment to your ballad of dreams..
stay strong dear Poet, early days yet - stamina is an essential element to our survival of such ordeal\'s,
thanks for sharing
March 1st, 2021 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
or simply read first few chapters of Proust\'s: \'In Search of Lost Time\', that will soon have you snoring an accompaniment to your ballad of dreams..
stay strong dear Poet, early days yet - stamina is an essential element to our survival of such ordeal\'s,
thanks for sharing
March 1st, 2021 04:52
Grim reaper scion donned as nodule on lung...
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry to read, I imagine your sister will need those close to her at this turbulent time, I pray she can recover..
continuing our everyday routines/actions is a healthy way to try and cope, especially if instead of escape you\'re attempting to confront and contemplate those raw feeling\'s you\'re experiencing,
stay strong: if not for you, then for her
February 26th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry to read, I imagine your sister will need those close to her at this turbulent time, I pray she can recover..
continuing our everyday routines/actions is a healthy way to try and cope, especially if instead of escape you\'re attempting to confront and contemplate those raw feeling\'s you\'re experiencing,
stay strong: if not for you, then for her
February 26th, 2021 06:08
Grim reaper scion donned as nodule on lung...
AwHec8 said:
Most don\'t know or understand the plight of someone who has trouble breathing a common type breath. To gasp for oxygen like you can\'t catch your first breath much less get your second wind. Reading this caused a pause in myself to feel that gasping breath, as I have so many times before. Don
February 25th, 2021 20:16
AwHec8 said:
Most don\'t know or understand the plight of someone who has trouble breathing a common type breath. To gasp for oxygen like you can\'t catch your first breath much less get your second wind. Reading this caused a pause in myself to feel that gasping breath, as I have so many times before. Don
February 25th, 2021 20:16
I experience inappetence, yet nevertheless hunger for victuals
L. B. Mek said:
worth reading just to help my vocabulary grow, however slowly..
\'quixotic\' a read, this definitely ain\'t! lol
February 25th, 2021 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
worth reading just to help my vocabulary grow, however slowly..
\'quixotic\' a read, this definitely ain\'t! lol
February 25th, 2021 05:54
The missus brings me high test coffee...
L. B. Mek said:
fun read, really enjoy how your write\'s just plunge-in shoes first, and we readers are left dog paddling your inked rivers of insightful musings lol
\'testosterone
bin laden well nigh
erupting pistol
(stay man)\'
February 23rd, 2021 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
fun read, really enjoy how your write\'s just plunge-in shoes first, and we readers are left dog paddling your inked rivers of insightful musings lol
\'testosterone
bin laden well nigh
erupting pistol
(stay man)\'
February 23rd, 2021 04:47
Good news came my way today February 21, 2021 courtesy late father
L. B. Mek said:
\'divided three ways
bequeathed to yours truly
and my two non-twisted sisters.\'
\'a financial life raft
I will devotedly and blessedly cling.\'
\'Figurative dark shadow ameliorate
I must, cuz unpaid charges create
unnecessary uneasiness and emasculate
like invisible fetters tellingly generate
principal abuzz with interest initiate
tingling goosebumps think back,
when Iraq invaded Kuwait.\'..
congratulations, firstly on having \'non\' twisted sisters: that\'s more unlikely that the windfall you celebrate, or else like most you would\'ve been rhyming about a court case.. (poor Spinoza) lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing enjoy your good \'fortune\'
February 22nd, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'divided three ways
bequeathed to yours truly
and my two non-twisted sisters.\'
\'a financial life raft
I will devotedly and blessedly cling.\'
\'Figurative dark shadow ameliorate
I must, cuz unpaid charges create
unnecessary uneasiness and emasculate
like invisible fetters tellingly generate
principal abuzz with interest initiate
tingling goosebumps think back,
when Iraq invaded Kuwait.\'..
congratulations, firstly on having \'non\' twisted sisters: that\'s more unlikely that the windfall you celebrate, or else like most you would\'ve been rhyming about a court case.. (poor Spinoza) lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing enjoy your good \'fortune\'
February 22nd, 2021 06:16
Anticlimactic mood after February 18th, 2021 snow storm subsided
L. B. Mek said:
\'coaxing poem into existence
unsure how literary endeavor
(mine) will thrive
amidst well suited
panoply of prolific writers,
whose unseen fingers
hop lightly and gracefully
across qwerty computer keyboard
akin to heavy armed soldiers
with fearlessness and deliberation
heading off to war to acquire poetic license.\'
forget mere \'thrive\', you sir: soar unmasking lanes we never knew existed, with that unique style and your insistence to breathe art into life\'s everyday - dreary!
I for one, look forward to your next share dear poet, every time
February 19th, 2021 06:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'coaxing poem into existence
unsure how literary endeavor
(mine) will thrive
amidst well suited
panoply of prolific writers,
whose unseen fingers
hop lightly and gracefully
across qwerty computer keyboard
akin to heavy armed soldiers
with fearlessness and deliberation
heading off to war to acquire poetic license.\'
forget mere \'thrive\', you sir: soar unmasking lanes we never knew existed, with that unique style and your insistence to breathe art into life\'s everyday - dreary!
I for one, look forward to your next share dear poet, every time
February 19th, 2021 06:24
Late morning today (February 17, 2021)
L. B. Mek said:
you must be such a great conversationalist..
as dry as it can get and yet, a warming depiction of realism
yes, truly - imbued within your words is the art: to living!
thank you for sharing:
\'both of us essentially undertook round trip
to Schwenksville and back
without rhyme nor reason.
Subsequently, an idea dawned\'
behold dear poet:
\'your reason - in rhyme, no less\'...
February 18th, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
you must be such a great conversationalist..
as dry as it can get and yet, a warming depiction of realism
yes, truly - imbued within your words is the art: to living!
thank you for sharing:
\'both of us essentially undertook round trip
to Schwenksville and back
without rhyme nor reason.
Subsequently, an idea dawned\'
behold dear poet:
\'your reason - in rhyme, no less\'...
February 18th, 2021 06:16
Valentine\'s Day 2021
L. B. Mek said:
so good, your write\'s never fail to bring back childhood\'s carefree self-indulgent \'all teeth n gums\', foolish grins...
thank you for choosing to share your brilliance dear Poet
February 15th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
so good, your write\'s never fail to bring back childhood\'s carefree self-indulgent \'all teeth n gums\', foolish grins...
thank you for choosing to share your brilliance dear Poet
February 15th, 2021 05:47
Valentine\'s Day 2021
Doggerel Dave said:
:-) I dunno what else to say - \'cept I enjoyed it...
February 14th, 2021 19:04
Doggerel Dave said:
:-) I dunno what else to say - \'cept I enjoyed it...
February 14th, 2021 19:04
How convenient slated to receive second dose... COVID-19 February 13th, 2021
L. B. Mek said:
we need a genius calibre word for witty, cause \'sharp\': just aint gona be enough....:
\'No qualm regarding being vaccinated
though yours truly NOT panic stricken
succumbing to aforementioned disease.
Although gaseous and prone to combust
heed words of caution lest ye turn to dust
on par with thermonuclear explosion gust
no guarantee insured courtesy Healthtrust
will keep ye intact not transformed into krust\'
February 12th, 2021 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
we need a genius calibre word for witty, cause \'sharp\': just aint gona be enough....:
\'No qualm regarding being vaccinated
though yours truly NOT panic stricken
succumbing to aforementioned disease.
Although gaseous and prone to combust
heed words of caution lest ye turn to dust
on par with thermonuclear explosion gust
no guarantee insured courtesy Healthtrust
will keep ye intact not transformed into krust\'
February 12th, 2021 07:01
Watching toilet bowl lv highlight of snowy February 7th, 2021
L. B. Mek said:
that second stanza had me grinning like a fool...
thanks for sharing a very revealing yet witty read, dear Poet
\'Yours truly risk averse
which characteristic,
I declare constitutes curse
thus isolation found me sprawled out
upon wuthering heights
against regular diet of diatribes
delivered carte blanche
with expletive filled verse\'
February 9th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
that second stanza had me grinning like a fool...
thanks for sharing a very revealing yet witty read, dear Poet
\'Yours truly risk averse
which characteristic,
I declare constitutes curse
thus isolation found me sprawled out
upon wuthering heights
against regular diet of diatribes
delivered carte blanche
with expletive filled verse\'
February 9th, 2021 04:45
Watching toilet bowl lv highlight of snowy February 7th, 2021
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing inconvenient about finding a public convenience when we need one!
February 8th, 2021 02:46
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing inconvenient about finding a public convenience when we need one!
February 8th, 2021 02:46
Hanging pictures today February 5th, 2021 with the missus...
FredPeyer said:
Truly enjoyed your poem r42n, made me smile. You do have a way with words! But you kind of wandered off from hanging that picture. Having three grown kids and six grand-kids I am with you on the \'dad role\'. By the way, getting back to that picture, did you ever get it up there, and is it straight?
February 5th, 2021 19:05
FredPeyer said:
Truly enjoyed your poem r42n, made me smile. You do have a way with words! But you kind of wandered off from hanging that picture. Having three grown kids and six grand-kids I am with you on the \'dad role\'. By the way, getting back to that picture, did you ever get it up there, and is it straight?
February 5th, 2021 19:05
February fourth nineteen ninety nine...
L. B. Mek said:
congratulations
to you and your child
at this landmark celebration year
of Twenty Two...
\'Tethered to umbilical cord
analogous to astronaut
linkedin to mother ship
bobbing and weaving
once forced out the womb
thru metaphorical fjord
inconsolable offspring crying,
no matter papa implored
though nonreligious, nevertheless
ofttimes paradoxically invoking lord.\'
you\'re such a talented wordsmith,
thank you for sharing dear Poet
February 5th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
congratulations
to you and your child
at this landmark celebration year
of Twenty Two...
\'Tethered to umbilical cord
analogous to astronaut
linkedin to mother ship
bobbing and weaving
once forced out the womb
thru metaphorical fjord
inconsolable offspring crying,
no matter papa implored
though nonreligious, nevertheless
ofttimes paradoxically invoking lord.\'
you\'re such a talented wordsmith,
thank you for sharing dear Poet
February 5th, 2021 05:44
Hey Mitch McConnell... about all this talk (I hear) about indefatigable (Phila/ Philly-buster)
rew4er2nail said:
wow! just the mere knowledge you perused one or more of my poems (though no commentary left) uplifts my spirits at the notions we became linkedin ro our respective spirits. thus, thank you for merely being alive unwittingly to kickstart momentary euphoric state of consciousness.
January 25th, 2021 12:37
rew4er2nail said:
wow! just the mere knowledge you perused one or more of my poems (though no commentary left) uplifts my spirits at the notions we became linkedin ro our respective spirits. thus, thank you for merely being alive unwittingly to kickstart momentary euphoric state of consciousness.
January 25th, 2021 12:37
Goodbye and good riddance former ersatz trumpeting president
L. B. Mek said:
I like your subtle title,
in this world of fence seating conformity, it reads refreshingly bold and straight-to-the-point: brevity, I think they call it, lol
January 22nd, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
I like your subtle title,
in this world of fence seating conformity, it reads refreshingly bold and straight-to-the-point: brevity, I think they call it, lol
January 22nd, 2021 05:53
Goodbye and good riddance former ersatz trumpeting president
FredPeyer said:
All I can say is good riddance. Not to your poem, I like that one, but to the yellow haired one.
January 21st, 2021 22:22
FredPeyer said:
All I can say is good riddance. Not to your poem, I like that one, but to the yellow haired one.
January 21st, 2021 22:22
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