Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
B of E #17: when she walked it was a saunter
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful. May the night last forever.
February 25th, 2018 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful. May the night last forever.
February 25th, 2018 02:26
B of E #16: the man who knew
Laura🌻 said:
Frank!
A great write!
I know he’ll eventually open that envelope! He’s putting it off for as long as he can. Perhaps it’s wishful thinking that if he doesn’t open it, it won’t be real! As I said, wishful thinking! I enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 10:14
Laura🌻 said:
Frank!
A great write!
I know he’ll eventually open that envelope! He’s putting it off for as long as he can. Perhaps it’s wishful thinking that if he doesn’t open it, it won’t be real! As I said, wishful thinking! I enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 10:14
B of E #16: the man who knew
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write Frank, he knows but doesn\'t want to accept it.
February 23rd, 2018 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write Frank, he knows but doesn\'t want to accept it.
February 23rd, 2018 02:07
B of E #15: untitled - a
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
In retrospect, perhaps the opportunity should’ve been seized. Now we’ll never know. Hindsight is 20/20...so they say!
A fine write my friend!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 02:51
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
In retrospect, perhaps the opportunity should’ve been seized. Now we’ll never know. Hindsight is 20/20...so they say!
A fine write my friend!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 02:51
B of E #15: untitled - a
themerrypapist said:
\"I work my way to nighttime and I wonder.\" Very nice.
February 22nd, 2018 00:22
themerrypapist said:
\"I work my way to nighttime and I wonder.\" Very nice.
February 22nd, 2018 00:22
B of E #14: a pride in hands
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
A fine write with a great
question that’s not easy
to answer! What would
I do? I’m not sure! It’s
complex! Not a simple
solution to such a difficult
situation! A thought
provoking read my
friend!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 01:26
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
A fine write with a great
question that’s not easy
to answer! What would
I do? I’m not sure! It’s
complex! Not a simple
solution to such a difficult
situation! A thought
provoking read my
friend!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 01:26
B of E #13: learning to twirl
Lorna said:
My guy - who never danced - had a bit too much one night and got caught up in some disco music - gyrating away for all he was worth with his face lit up and shouting \"I get it! I finally get it!\"....... it was never to be forgotten by me - never saw him so happy! (He forgot in the morning though)..........
February 20th, 2018 11:18
Lorna said:
My guy - who never danced - had a bit too much one night and got caught up in some disco music - gyrating away for all he was worth with his face lit up and shouting \"I get it! I finally get it!\"....... it was never to be forgotten by me - never saw him so happy! (He forgot in the morning though)..........
February 20th, 2018 11:18
B of E #13: learning to twirl
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
I don’t twirl as fast as
I used to, but I still give
it a spin once in a while
when my spirit moves
me to do so!
Is that your voice on
SoundCloud?
Very pleasant!
~Laura~
February 20th, 2018 02:42
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
I don’t twirl as fast as
I used to, but I still give
it a spin once in a while
when my spirit moves
me to do so!
Is that your voice on
SoundCloud?
Very pleasant!
~Laura~
February 20th, 2018 02:42
B of E #13: learning to twirl
Goldfinch60 said:
My dancing days are over but I did try to make an idiot of myself back in the day.
February 20th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
My dancing days are over but I did try to make an idiot of myself back in the day.
February 20th, 2018 01:43
B of E #12: lights out
Its Raskolnikov said:
One of your best! I really like it, good job Frank. Sehr gut, mein Freund!
February 19th, 2018 11:29
Its Raskolnikov said:
One of your best! I really like it, good job Frank. Sehr gut, mein Freund!
February 19th, 2018 11:29
B of E #12: lights out
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
An absolutely exquisite
write! I can see and feel
exactly what’s happening!
So vivid, delicate, and
beautiful! An awesome
write! It was a pleasure
reading it! Thank you for
sharing your talents!
~Laura~
February 19th, 2018 04:02
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
An absolutely exquisite
write! I can see and feel
exactly what’s happening!
So vivid, delicate, and
beautiful! An awesome
write! It was a pleasure
reading it! Thank you for
sharing your talents!
~Laura~
February 19th, 2018 04:02
B of E #12: lights out
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, the normality of being together in bed is so reassuring.
February 19th, 2018 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, the normality of being together in bed is so reassuring.
February 19th, 2018 01:39
B 0f E #11: a thickening gloom
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very disturbing indeed though. Good write!
February 18th, 2018 15:20
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very disturbing indeed though. Good write!
February 18th, 2018 15:20
B 0f E #11: a thickening gloom
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
After having read this
write a few times, I still
cannot make up my mind
of what the relationship
between the boy and the
man is. An open ended
interpretation by the reader!
An excellent thought
provoking write!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 08:22
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
After having read this
write a few times, I still
cannot make up my mind
of what the relationship
between the boy and the
man is. An open ended
interpretation by the reader!
An excellent thought
provoking write!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 08:22
B 0f E #11: a thickening gloom
Lorna said:
Disturbing...... was the father simply being the father and this was soooo misinterpreted - or was he preying. Mixed up world today.
February 18th, 2018 06:49
Lorna said:
Disturbing...... was the father simply being the father and this was soooo misinterpreted - or was he preying. Mixed up world today.
February 18th, 2018 06:49
B 0f E #11: a thickening gloom
Goldfinch60 said:
This one got to me, I read tragedy into this.
February 18th, 2018 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
This one got to me, I read tragedy into this.
February 18th, 2018 02:18
B of E #10: decisive uncertainty
Goldfinch60 said:
\'Decisive uncertainty\' rules.
February 17th, 2018 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
\'Decisive uncertainty\' rules.
February 17th, 2018 01:44
B of E #9: watching the thread
Goldfinch60 said:
Those unexpected photos can really surprise us.
February 16th, 2018 03:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Those unexpected photos can really surprise us.
February 16th, 2018 03:43
B of E #8: special occasion
FredPeyer said:
I just love your book of evenings, Frank. This one starts out with the typical commute home, then gets into some romantic dinner, leading up to you know what, only to be cut short by that great last stanza.
You are a great story teller!
February 15th, 2018 15:41
FredPeyer said:
I just love your book of evenings, Frank. This one starts out with the typical commute home, then gets into some romantic dinner, leading up to you know what, only to be cut short by that great last stanza.
You are a great story teller!
February 15th, 2018 15:41
B of E #8: special occasion
Goldfinch60 said:
The romantic side comes out at last.
February 15th, 2018 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
The romantic side comes out at last.
February 15th, 2018 02:24
B of E #7: digging water and kissing clouds
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
An awesome write!
Truly captivating!
~Laura~
February 14th, 2018 19:07
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
An awesome write!
Truly captivating!
~Laura~
February 14th, 2018 19:07
B of E #7: digging water and kissing clouds
FredPeyer said:
Your mind and imagination are amazing, Frank. The whole poem is just incredible, but that last stanza is magic.
February 14th, 2018 15:23
FredPeyer said:
Your mind and imagination are amazing, Frank. The whole poem is just incredible, but that last stanza is magic.
February 14th, 2018 15:23
B of E #7: digging water and kissing clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing as ever Frank.
February 14th, 2018 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing as ever Frank.
February 14th, 2018 01:56
B of E #6: the long night
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
Those kinds of nights can be very long! May be painfully sad, but have to be endured! Emotionally draining!!
A fine write my friend!
Well done!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 05:42
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
Those kinds of nights can be very long! May be painfully sad, but have to be endured! Emotionally draining!!
A fine write my friend!
Well done!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 05:42
B of E #5: shhh crazy
Laura🌻 said:
Hmmm...crazy...heh! Another great one! Eager for the next posting!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:58
Laura🌻 said:
Hmmm...crazy...heh! Another great one! Eager for the next posting!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:58
B of E #5: shhh crazy
Goldfinch60 said:
Crazy. Good write and once more I am intrigued.
February 12th, 2018 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Crazy. Good write and once more I am intrigued.
February 12th, 2018 02:29
B of E #4: a day away from friday
Laura🌻 said:
Wow! She was a busy lady!
Always looked forward to
those Fridays! I can certainly relate!
Loved it!
~Laura~
February 11th, 2018 19:37
Laura🌻 said:
Wow! She was a busy lady!
Always looked forward to
those Fridays! I can certainly relate!
Loved it!
~Laura~
February 11th, 2018 19:37
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